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[Liziana]

-sigh- To much suspense... :wacko:

Well, actually, I have no idea. Ninjas will come flying from the ceiling? :ph43r: I dunno...

Click that button. :o

[Mara=^.^=]

You guys are no fun. **pout** It would have taken the same amount of effort to actually post something riveting. Oh well. Such is the life of an author, I suppose. It must be my job to dazzle. *.*

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[cancel_me]

Hey.

My Martians theory was totally riveting. D: ... Maybe. Kind of. Not really.

[Alex]

Hey.

My Martians theory was totally riveting. D: ... Maybe. Kind of. Not really.

:rolleyes:

[Liziana]

You guys are no fun. **pout** It would have taken the same amount of effort to actually post something riveting.

Well... It could happen! Maybe... :rolleyes:

[Lily Knotwise]

Krista, your theory won at life. Congratulations. XD

And hey... I can't think... That wasn't fair to ask me to predict... I think I'm going to bed now... I shall read this when I wake up! 'Cause seriously, I feel like I'm on some sort of illegal substance. I can't think straight. XD

[Mara=^.^=]

LOL. Lack of sleep IS an illegal substance. I'm doped up on it right now, as a matter of a fact. It's making it hard for me to concentrate on ANYTHING. GAH!!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[cancel_me]

D:

AWWW. Lily, you're leaving. AGAIN. Well, I hope to see you tomorrow. Have a nice sleep! ^^

Mara: LOL. I've been staying up all night for the past couple days. All it takes is some caffiene. xD

[Alex]

Cindy: Oh, post it! I want to prove how cool I am in the next chapter, Mara, or I'll smash you with this ship!

aeharding: <_< That wasn't me...

[Mara=^.^=]

OK, Cindy. You've convinced me. I didn't add in the illustrations yet, but Volume 4 is up!

Go read it everyone! And I expect a running commentary! ;)

I'll be posting some extras in the fanfics section, so make sure to check them out afterward!

:bff:

Three cheers for the long delayed, massively convoluted Volume 4!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
(oh, and please report typos/confusing parts so I can correct them)

[Alex]

OK, Cindy. You've convinced me. I didn't add in the illustrations yet, but Volume 4 is up!

Go read it everyone! And I expect a running commentary! ;)

I'll be posting some extras in the fanfics section, so make sure to check them out afterward!

:bff:

Three cheers for the long delayed, massively convoluted Volume 4!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
(oh, and please report typos/confusing parts so I can correct them)

Woohoo! You can bet I'll report errors!

And thanks, Cindy...

[Alex]

Error:

**He turns to face Carl, wiggling his fingers evilly**

[.:!Gwen!:.]

Okay, well, when Nav makes his first banter, he says something about AURORA being his "honey." I was like whoawhoawait.

Then again, Beautiful Gorgeous messes up her english and says: There’s to way we’re postponing it again.







.:!Gwen!:.

[.:!Gwen!:.]

"AURORA: I want to pause for a moment, to take a closer look at the details of this mission."

Unnecessary comma. D;







.:!Gwen!:.

[Mara=^.^=]

Error:

**He turns to face Carl, wiggling his fingers evilly**

What's wrong with "Evilly"? Isn't that a perfectly acceptable adverb? :huh:

Okay, well, when Nav makes his first banter, he says something about AURORA being his "honey." I was like whoawhoawait.

Then again, Beautiful Gorgeous messes up her english and says: There’s to way we’re postponing it again.

Ya, the first one isn't an error. He just likes to mess with Aurora. All the same, I changed it to "he beckons JOKINGLY at Aurora" to try to remedy the confusion.

The second one IS an error. Fixing...

"AURORA: I want to pause for a moment, to take a closer look at the details of this mission."

Unnecessary comma. D;

Oops that was supposed to be a dot dot dot. Fixing...

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[cancel_me]

Wow Mara. You left me hanging on a thread and now I feel like punching babies. I MUST HAVE VOLUME 5. This is like waiting for Harry Potter 7, except a zillion times worse because you left me on a dangerous cliff and I'm going to have to wait all over again. Please don't say you're going to delay V5. D:

P.S. Chapter 29... oh my GOD. Mara, you are amazing in every way shape and form. I could really see Aurora's person shining through her tough exterior, and... just... jeesh.

[Mara=^.^=]

Wow Mara. You left me hanging on a thread and now I feel like punching babies. I MUST HAVE VOLUME 5. This is like waiting for Harry Potter 7, except a zillion times worse because you left me on a dangerous cliff and I'm going to have to wait all over again. Please don't say you're going to delay V5. D:

P.S. Chapter 29... oh my GOD. Mara, you are amazing in every way shape and form. I could really see Aurora's person shining through her tough exterior, and... just... jeesh.

I'm NOT going to delay Volume 5, even if I have to post it in segments!

I knew you'd like chapter 29. *.* That kinda thing is right up your alley :D Ya, that was a REALLY hard chapter to write. I actually cried when I was doing it...a first for me. I just felt so bad for her...for all her losses. It was like all of the sudden she became human for the first time. An interesting chapter, all around.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Alex]

Wow Mara. You left me hanging on a thread and now I feel like punching babies. I MUST HAVE VOLUME 5. This is like waiting for Harry Potter 7, except a zillion times worse because you left me on a dangerous cliff and I'm going to have to wait all over again. Please don't say you're going to delay V5. D:

P.S. Chapter 29... oh my GOD. Mara, you are amazing in every way shape and form. I could really see Aurora's person shining through her tough exterior, and... just... jeesh.

I know... Wow! Good writing! :o

:huh: Dumb me. "Evilly" just doesn't seem spelled right... :rolleyes:

[Mara=^.^=]

Dang, I gotta go to bed. My Dad just came and wicked chewed me out for still being awake.

I'll be waiting to read all your comments in the morning. Thanks for your patience everyone! I know it wasn't easy!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
P.S. I'm dying to know what you all think of Nav. He SERIOUSLY cracks me up.

[Alex]

P.S. I'm dying to know what you all think of Nav. He SERIOUSLY cracks me up.

He... is... just... Eh, I can't find a word for him. He's every word! *.*