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Yes, and you get to here more of how characters react to their surroundings. :D




:ph43r:

OOOH MEGAN. You mean "hear"? *Jabs Mikkii with a stick*

[.:!Gwen!:.]

--sings immaturely-- Grammar grump...





.:!Gwen!:.

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*Waves cane in Gwen's face*

Get off mah lawn you cuuuh-razy kid!

[.:!Gwen!:.]

xOOO

--runs behind a tree--







.:!Gwen!:.

[~~Megan~~]

*starts panicking* OMG!!!! I made a grammer mistake? No!!!! THAT CAN'T BE RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :onfire: :onfire: :onfire:

Oh, and don't poke me.




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[Mara=^.^=]

Yes, and you get to here more of how characters react to their surroundings. :D




:ph43r:

Actually, it's still pretty heavy on the dialogue. I enjoy dialogue ^_^

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[~~Megan~~]

I like dialogue too, especially in script format stories like yours, but when I write, I like a nice healthy balance of dialogue, thoughts/feelings, and descriptions. I'm not that good at it -_-


Ah, well! :D



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[Lily Knotwise]

Yaaaaaaaaaaay! Paragraph format!! I lovelovelove paragraph format! Don't get me wrong, your story is AWESOME as it is Mara, but it would multiply that awesome if it was in paragraph format! Wooh! --excited--

If you needed help translating your story into paragraphs, I could always help. I'm not expecting you to take me up on that offer, it IS your story, but I'm here if, by chance, you could use help on it. I have no plot making skills, but my writing is not too shabby. :lol: So yeah, my offer is there if you want it. ^_^

[~~Megan~~]

Meeeeeeeeeee tooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :kawaii: :kawaii: :kawaii:




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[girlgenius123]

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OH MY GOD. I was watching "Beach Party Mummy" and saw Libby kissing Carl on the cheek at the end! It was WEIRD!

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[.:!Gwen!:.]

WHAAAT?

When in the heck was that? :blink:






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[pixie_vortex]

i saw that 2! but i thought it was just my mind playing tricks on me! but now i know i'm not the only 1! yah! ^_^

[Hugh]

Watch a Libby/Carl fandom begin to spread!

...Not. No one likes poor Carl. ):

[pixie_vortex]

WHAAAT?

When in the heck was that? :blink:






.:!Gwen!:.

it was part when Mrs.Fowl said Extra Resses all these week! and it happen when they where all cheering

[JimmySpaz]

:blink: WOWSERS! I NEVER noticed THAT!

[girlgenius123]

Me neither. The first time I saw it, I was thinking, "That was a joke, right?" So I watched it again. Same thing happens. Then again. It happens.

C/L FOREVER! :lol:

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*Eyes begin to sizzle and fall out*

Edit: Nevermind, I know why she kissed him! It was because of Carl ratting them out about going to Egypt that they got extra recess! XD

[girlgenius123]

:lol:

I was wondering what you were going to say, Miss J/L Shipper. ;)

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I edited my above post. Check it out! *Does the IN YOUR FACE dance* :lol:

[JimmySpaz]

Wow that is scary...*checks schedule to see when it is on again*