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Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius: Big Brother
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I know that cliff hanger is kind of scary.
I'll have chapter 9 up soon.
Gretchen
I'll have chapter 9 up soon.
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Posted 16 June 2008 - 04:01 PM
Okay unfortunately i can't be on here that much longer cause I'm upset, but i will give you chapter 9 part 1. Just the first part.
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Jimmy went into school the next day. He couldn't wait to tell Carl and Sheen the names he and his family had picked out together. He saw them in the hallway, standing outside Ms. Fowl's room, talking. "Hey guys," Jimmy said. "Oh, hey Jimmy," Carl said. "Did you pick out names yet for your twin sisters ?" asked Sheen eagerly. "As a matter of fact, I did," said Jimmy. "What are their names?" Carl asked. "We're going to name them Elizabeth Katilda and Jillian Margaret," Jimmy said. "Cool," Sheen and Carl said together. Then Carl and Sheen went into the classroom while Jimmy got his stuff from his locker. Cindy saw him at his locker, and since she was so nice to him yesterday, she decided to be nice again. (More J/C people) "Hey, Jimmy," she said shyly. Jimmy looked up. "Oh, hey Cindy," he said. "Um, I heard you talking to Sheen and Carl, and I absolutely love the name you picked for your sister, Jillian Margaret. Really pretty," Cindy said. "Thanks, but you forgot Elizabeth Katilda, my other sister," Jimmy said. "Oh, you're going to have twin sisters?! Oh, my gosh, Jimmy, that's amazing." Cindy said. Jimmy smiled. "Thanks, Cindy," he said. "Do you know how lucky those girls will be to have an intellectual genius for a brother?" Cindy asked. "No, how lucky?" Jimmy asked. "Extremly lucky. As lucky as me when I'm around you," Cindy said. "Aww, thanks Cindy," Jimmy said. Then he grabbed her arm and pulled her into a hug. "Aww, thanks for the hug, Jimmy," Cindy said. "Well, I can do more then just a hug," Jimmy said. He reached down and kissed her hand lightly. "There, now are you even happier?" Jimmy asked. "Oh, yes, Jimmy. I really am," Cindy said. Then she reached down and kissed his hand in return. Jimmy blushed, but just before he could respond, he felt a tap on his shoulder. Jimmy turned around to see Betty Quinlin staring at him angrily. "Jimmy Neutron, what do you think you're doing? Kissing Cindy's hand? I thought you liked me!" she yelled angrily.
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Quote from chapter 9: "Aw, Mom. Don't you remember my theorum? Proving mathamatically I don't need a babysitter"-Jimmy Neutron
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Jimmy went into school the next day. He couldn't wait to tell Carl and Sheen the names he and his family had picked out together. He saw them in the hallway, standing outside Ms. Fowl's room, talking. "Hey guys," Jimmy said. "Oh, hey Jimmy," Carl said. "Did you pick out names yet for your twin sisters ?" asked Sheen eagerly. "As a matter of fact, I did," said Jimmy. "What are their names?" Carl asked. "We're going to name them Elizabeth Katilda and Jillian Margaret," Jimmy said. "Cool," Sheen and Carl said together. Then Carl and Sheen went into the classroom while Jimmy got his stuff from his locker. Cindy saw him at his locker, and since she was so nice to him yesterday, she decided to be nice again. (More J/C people) "Hey, Jimmy," she said shyly. Jimmy looked up. "Oh, hey Cindy," he said. "Um, I heard you talking to Sheen and Carl, and I absolutely love the name you picked for your sister, Jillian Margaret. Really pretty," Cindy said. "Thanks, but you forgot Elizabeth Katilda, my other sister," Jimmy said. "Oh, you're going to have twin sisters?! Oh, my gosh, Jimmy, that's amazing." Cindy said. Jimmy smiled. "Thanks, Cindy," he said. "Do you know how lucky those girls will be to have an intellectual genius for a brother?" Cindy asked. "No, how lucky?" Jimmy asked. "Extremly lucky. As lucky as me when I'm around you," Cindy said. "Aww, thanks Cindy," Jimmy said. Then he grabbed her arm and pulled her into a hug. "Aww, thanks for the hug, Jimmy," Cindy said. "Well, I can do more then just a hug," Jimmy said. He reached down and kissed her hand lightly. "There, now are you even happier?" Jimmy asked. "Oh, yes, Jimmy. I really am," Cindy said. Then she reached down and kissed his hand in return. Jimmy blushed, but just before he could respond, he felt a tap on his shoulder. Jimmy turned around to see Betty Quinlin staring at him angrily. "Jimmy Neutron, what do you think you're doing? Kissing Cindy's hand? I thought you liked me!" she yelled angrily.
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Quote from chapter 9: "Aw, Mom. Don't you remember my theorum? Proving mathamatically I don't need a babysitter"-Jimmy Neutron
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Posted 23 June 2008 - 10:16 PM
I normally post in red, but since red's one of the POV colors, I'm using yellow. Awesome job, coffeelover!!! I really enjoyed it so far!!!!! I can't WAIT to find out what happens next!! Betty sounds PRETTY mad! I wonder how Jimmy'll take it... Hmmm... :o
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Posted 24 June 2008 - 04:19 PM
Very good story Gretchen.
I remember reading this on nick.com, but I don't remember what happens in some parts. Please post soon.
ToKi
I remember reading this on nick.com, but I don't remember what happens in some parts. Please post soon.
ToKi
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Posted 25 June 2008 - 06:44 PM
Here's chapter 9 part 2.
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Jimmy looked kind of frightened by Betty's angry voice. "Betty, I was just being nice to Cindy because she was being nice to me," he said. "Oh, then why were you kissing her hand?" asked Betty. "Back off, Betty, I happen to like Jimmy and he happens to like me," Cindy said. "I knew it!" Betty said. "Betty, I still like you too. There's nothing wrong with liking two people," Jimmy said. Betty smiled at Jimmy. "Okay, Jimmy. I guess you're right. I guess i just got a little jealous. You can like Cindy and me together," she said. "See, that wasn't do hard to resolve now, was it?" Jimmy asked. "Nope, not at all," Betty said. "Well, I better get to class, so bye, Cindy and Jimmy." "Bye Betty," Jimmy said. "Bye Betty," Cindy said. Then she turned to Jimmy. "I'm glad that's solved." "Yep, now let's get to class," Jimmy said. Then they both went to class together.
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Yeah, that part is short.
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So I'll do 10 also.
Thanks, Gretchen
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Quote fro chapter 9: "Cindy, I'm a scientist, not a miracle worker."-Jimmy Neutron
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Jimmy looked kind of frightened by Betty's angry voice. "Betty, I was just being nice to Cindy because she was being nice to me," he said. "Oh, then why were you kissing her hand?" asked Betty. "Back off, Betty, I happen to like Jimmy and he happens to like me," Cindy said. "I knew it!" Betty said. "Betty, I still like you too. There's nothing wrong with liking two people," Jimmy said. Betty smiled at Jimmy. "Okay, Jimmy. I guess you're right. I guess i just got a little jealous. You can like Cindy and me together," she said. "See, that wasn't do hard to resolve now, was it?" Jimmy asked. "Nope, not at all," Betty said. "Well, I better get to class, so bye, Cindy and Jimmy." "Bye Betty," Jimmy said. "Bye Betty," Cindy said. Then she turned to Jimmy. "I'm glad that's solved." "Yep, now let's get to class," Jimmy said. Then they both went to class together.
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Yeah, that part is short.
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So I'll do 10 also.
Thanks, Gretchen
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Quote fro chapter 9: "Cindy, I'm a scientist, not a miracle worker."-Jimmy Neutron
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Chapter 10
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Cindy and I went into Mrs. Sippi's science class. Cindy and I sit next to each other in science class, which makes us lab partners. Usually when we do labs, we usually fight and don't usually get our work done, but since we have been getting along great, I decided today would be different. Cindy had apologized to me about how she was rude with her comment about having another Neutron in the world, and she had liked the names for my twin baby sisters. I knew when they were born, Cindy would be the first person I would have to see them. So Cindy and I were sitting down, and then Zoey and Julie Anna came in the room. "Oh my gosh, Julie Anna, your baby brother Jacob Nelly is so cute," Zoey said. "I told you he would be," Julie Anna said. Cindy and I both like Julie Anna and Zoey and we decide to congratulate her. "Hey Julie Anna. we're glad to hear you had a baby brother," I said. Julie Anna looke at me. "Oh, thank you Jimmy," she said. "Yeah congrats Julie Anna," Cindy said excitedly. "Thank you too, Cindy," Julie Anna said. Then Cindy said, "Jimmy's mom is having twin girls." Julie Anna and Zoey looked at me. "Really? Oh my gosh that's awesome, Jimmy!" Julie Anna said. "Yeah, what are their names?"
asked Zoey. "Elizabeth Katilda and Jillian Margaret," I said. "Those are cool names," Zoey said. "Yeah," Julie Anna said. Then Julie Anna and Zoey said good bye to Cindy and I, and we said good bye back. Then Cindy and I got out our stuff and got ready for class to start.
Mrs. Sippi came into the room. "Alright, students. It's lab day today. So open up your drawers and put on you glasses and take out your lab notebooks," she said. Cindy and I did exactly what Mrs. Sippi said. "Alright, when you are done get out a piece of paper and write down numbers 1 to 10. You are going to answer 10 questions about your experiment, and while you write down those questions, I'll get out the materials and the beakers," Mrs. Sippi said. Cindy and I copied down the questions from the board. We smiled at each other as we wrote them down. Finally, when everyone was done with the questions, we went to get our materials. 'This lab we will start today, and we will continue it when we come back from Christmas break," Mrs. Sippi said. That's when I realized, that today was the last day of school before vacation. Everyone cheered about that, but then we all had to calm down, so we could start our lab.
Cindy and I worked on the lab all the way through, and we actually didn't argue. I did one part of the lab, Cindy did the other. We worked pretty well together. We had good teamwork qualities. Since we're the smartess kids in the class, we finished our part of the lab first. We told Mrs. Sippi and she said. "Okay, now you two can put your experiment by the windowsill. That's where they'll stay during break. You guys can clean up, and then just wait for the bell to ring." We said okay and waited for everyone to finish. Soon everyone was done and then we gathered all our stuff ready to leave school for a whole week. (Science is our last period of the day.) When the last minute came, Mrs. Sippi said, "Enjoy your winter break everyone! Have a nice holiday and a happy New Year!" Then the bell rang. We all burst out of the classroom like a pack of ferociously wild pack of wolves and rushed out the door to buses, cause winter vacation was finally here!
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That's all three parts of chapter 10. See you soon.
Thanks,
Gretchen
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Quotes for chapter 10: "It's simple. I just reverse the polarity of the electron counter valences in the helmet and become smart all over again"-Jimmy Neutron
"And what are they doing here? The big one is odd, and the thin one is a weirdo"-Judy Neutron
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Cindy and I went into Mrs. Sippi's science class. Cindy and I sit next to each other in science class, which makes us lab partners. Usually when we do labs, we usually fight and don't usually get our work done, but since we have been getting along great, I decided today would be different. Cindy had apologized to me about how she was rude with her comment about having another Neutron in the world, and she had liked the names for my twin baby sisters. I knew when they were born, Cindy would be the first person I would have to see them. So Cindy and I were sitting down, and then Zoey and Julie Anna came in the room. "Oh my gosh, Julie Anna, your baby brother Jacob Nelly is so cute," Zoey said. "I told you he would be," Julie Anna said. Cindy and I both like Julie Anna and Zoey and we decide to congratulate her. "Hey Julie Anna. we're glad to hear you had a baby brother," I said. Julie Anna looke at me. "Oh, thank you Jimmy," she said. "Yeah congrats Julie Anna," Cindy said excitedly. "Thank you too, Cindy," Julie Anna said. Then Cindy said, "Jimmy's mom is having twin girls." Julie Anna and Zoey looked at me. "Really? Oh my gosh that's awesome, Jimmy!" Julie Anna said. "Yeah, what are their names?"
asked Zoey. "Elizabeth Katilda and Jillian Margaret," I said. "Those are cool names," Zoey said. "Yeah," Julie Anna said. Then Julie Anna and Zoey said good bye to Cindy and I, and we said good bye back. Then Cindy and I got out our stuff and got ready for class to start.
Mrs. Sippi came into the room. "Alright, students. It's lab day today. So open up your drawers and put on you glasses and take out your lab notebooks," she said. Cindy and I did exactly what Mrs. Sippi said. "Alright, when you are done get out a piece of paper and write down numbers 1 to 10. You are going to answer 10 questions about your experiment, and while you write down those questions, I'll get out the materials and the beakers," Mrs. Sippi said. Cindy and I copied down the questions from the board. We smiled at each other as we wrote them down. Finally, when everyone was done with the questions, we went to get our materials. 'This lab we will start today, and we will continue it when we come back from Christmas break," Mrs. Sippi said. That's when I realized, that today was the last day of school before vacation. Everyone cheered about that, but then we all had to calm down, so we could start our lab.
Cindy and I worked on the lab all the way through, and we actually didn't argue. I did one part of the lab, Cindy did the other. We worked pretty well together. We had good teamwork qualities. Since we're the smartess kids in the class, we finished our part of the lab first. We told Mrs. Sippi and she said. "Okay, now you two can put your experiment by the windowsill. That's where they'll stay during break. You guys can clean up, and then just wait for the bell to ring." We said okay and waited for everyone to finish. Soon everyone was done and then we gathered all our stuff ready to leave school for a whole week. (Science is our last period of the day.) When the last minute came, Mrs. Sippi said, "Enjoy your winter break everyone! Have a nice holiday and a happy New Year!" Then the bell rang. We all burst out of the classroom like a pack of ferociously wild pack of wolves and rushed out the door to buses, cause winter vacation was finally here!
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That's all three parts of chapter 10. See you soon.
Thanks,
Gretchen
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Quotes for chapter 10: "It's simple. I just reverse the polarity of the electron counter valences in the helmet and become smart all over again"-Jimmy Neutron
"And what are they doing here? The big one is odd, and the thin one is a weirdo"-Judy Neutron
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Once again, you've done it again!!!! Waaa-HOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Can't WAIT for Chapter 11!!!!! Absolutely FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!
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Ooo, suspense! I loved the almost-fight with Betty. Can't wait for more!
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Hey you guys. I'm leaving for vacation to Minnesota in about three hours.M
I'll be gone a whole week. So I'll return on July 6th.
So reply to my story while I'm gone.
Today, I'll give out three chapters 11, 12, and 13. Please reply.
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Here's chapitre onze (11 in French)
Saturday, December 24, Christmas Eve. One of the best days ever. I love Christmas, because then I get lots of presents. I was hanging up the stockings on the fireplace. My stocking is blue, and it says my name in gold. Judy's is red, Jimbo's is green, and Goddard's is yellow. For Christmas I want another duck for my collection. I know I have alot, but it would still be fun to have another one. "Hugh," Judy said shaking me out of my thoughts. "Yes?" I asked. "Hugh, where did you put Jimmy's Christmas present? I can't find it anywhere," Judy said. "Well, I'm sure it's around somewhere, Sugar Booger," I said. "Help me find it, we need it so we can put it in Jimmy's stocking,"Judy said. "Well, we'll find it," I said. Just then, Jimbo came downstairs. "Mom, Dad, I was thinking, I really don't want that many presents this year, because I already have beakers and test tubes from last Christmas that I still haven't used, so I don't want anymore of those, but clothes or books are fine," Jimbo said. Then he left the room. "Well, I guess we don't really need to find the present, Judy," I said, "because he said no more beakers and test tubes." "This isn't a beaker or a test tube,"Judy said, "this is something else." 'What?" I asked. Judy looked at me very secretively. "I'll tell you what it is very quietly, in case Jimmy is near," she said. She moved closer to me. "Well?" I asked. "Hugh, Jimmy will love this present," she said. "Well, I need to hear it, too," I said. "Okay, Jimmy's present is..."
"...a copy of Charles Darwin's book On the Origin of Species," Judy said. "What's so special about a book?" I asked. Judy looked surprised. "Hugh, Jimmy's been wanting this book ever since he was 7 years old, and I just found it for him. He'll be so surprised," Judy said. "Oh yea, I think I've heard Jimbo mention that before," I said. "So let's put it in his stocking, and he'll get it tomorrow," Judy said. So we wrapped the book up in wrapping paper and put it in his stocking. Then we finished putting up the last remaining Christmas items, then we went upstairs. Tomorrow was Christmas and I couldn't wait to see what kind of presents I got.
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That's chapter 11. I'm doing 12 and 13 today also.
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Quote for Chapter 11: "You mean your salami leg, their salami leg, his salami leg, or Carl's shoes"-Sheen Estavez
"Oh man, how am I suppose to tell them apart?"-Sheen Estavez from Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius, Big Brother
I'll be gone a whole week. So I'll return on July 6th.
So reply to my story while I'm gone.
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Here's chapitre onze (11 in French)
Saturday, December 24, Christmas Eve. One of the best days ever. I love Christmas, because then I get lots of presents. I was hanging up the stockings on the fireplace. My stocking is blue, and it says my name in gold. Judy's is red, Jimbo's is green, and Goddard's is yellow. For Christmas I want another duck for my collection. I know I have alot, but it would still be fun to have another one. "Hugh," Judy said shaking me out of my thoughts. "Yes?" I asked. "Hugh, where did you put Jimmy's Christmas present? I can't find it anywhere," Judy said. "Well, I'm sure it's around somewhere, Sugar Booger," I said. "Help me find it, we need it so we can put it in Jimmy's stocking,"Judy said. "Well, we'll find it," I said. Just then, Jimbo came downstairs. "Mom, Dad, I was thinking, I really don't want that many presents this year, because I already have beakers and test tubes from last Christmas that I still haven't used, so I don't want anymore of those, but clothes or books are fine," Jimbo said. Then he left the room. "Well, I guess we don't really need to find the present, Judy," I said, "because he said no more beakers and test tubes." "This isn't a beaker or a test tube,"Judy said, "this is something else." 'What?" I asked. Judy looked at me very secretively. "I'll tell you what it is very quietly, in case Jimmy is near," she said. She moved closer to me. "Well?" I asked. "Hugh, Jimmy will love this present," she said. "Well, I need to hear it, too," I said. "Okay, Jimmy's present is..."
"...a copy of Charles Darwin's book On the Origin of Species," Judy said. "What's so special about a book?" I asked. Judy looked surprised. "Hugh, Jimmy's been wanting this book ever since he was 7 years old, and I just found it for him. He'll be so surprised," Judy said. "Oh yea, I think I've heard Jimbo mention that before," I said. "So let's put it in his stocking, and he'll get it tomorrow," Judy said. So we wrapped the book up in wrapping paper and put it in his stocking. Then we finished putting up the last remaining Christmas items, then we went upstairs. Tomorrow was Christmas and I couldn't wait to see what kind of presents I got.
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That's chapter 11. I'm doing 12 and 13 today also.
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"Oh man, how am I suppose to tell them apart?"-Sheen Estavez from Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius, Big Brother
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Now heres's chapitre douze (12)
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Christmas Day. The day when families gather and see what they get for presents. That's just what me, Hugh, and Jimmy did as we went downstairs on Christmas morning and found all the gifts under the tree. "Wow, look at all the presnts," Hugh said. "Leaping leptons, there must be approximately 30 gifts here. 10 for each of us," Jimmy said. "So let's open them," I said. We went over to the tree and started opening presents. I got some new clothes, some new kitchen tuppleware, since my old ones were cracking. Some more knitting thread so if I wanted to knit some more things, and then some new cooking supplies. I like all my gifts. Hugh had received some more ducks, and some more tools for his workshop, and lots of other things. Jimmy received some new beakers, even though he didn't want any, he still liked them. He recieved some new clothes, and lots of other things. Then Jimmy opened up mine and Hugh's present. He saw the title "On the Origin of Species" on it. I looked at Jimmy's expression. "Whoah," he said. "You like it Jimmy," I asked, Jimmy looked at me. "Mom, I've been wanting this book since I was 7. And I got it. I can't wait to find out who got it for me," he said. Hugh and I looked at each other. "Jimmy," I said. "Your father and I got it for you."
Jimmy looked at us. "You got me this book?" he exclaimed. "Well, I got it. Your father just agreed with me that it was a good present," I said. Hugh nodded. "Your mother told me you wanted this book since you were 7, so I thought it was a good idea that she got it for you, he said. "Well, I'm very glad you guys got it. But where'd you find it?" Jimmy asked. "I bought it online on Amazon," I said. "Oh, that site has everything," Jimmy said. Then Jimmy, Hugh, and I all got dressed. We enjoyed our gifts very much.
Later that afternoon, we had our Christmas dinner with all our relatives. We had turkey, and stuffing, and peas, and cranberries. It was a delicious meal. Jimmy enjoyed telling his cousins about his new book he got. I helped my sister (A/N: I'm not sure if Judy has a sister, but I am making her have one.) Ginger with the carrot cake that we were going to have for dessert.
By the time we were done our meal, and everyone had gone home. We were full. It had been an exciting and delightful Christmas.
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That's chapter 12 aND NOW i JUST DO 13.
Enjoy.
Thanks, Gretchen
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Quotes for chapter 12: "Well, someone would have to have a photgraphic memory, and be able to memorize super fast."-Carl Wheezer
"All I have to do is make a new toy everyday for the rest of my life. Hey why did everybody stop dancing."-Hugh Neutron
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Christmas Day. The day when families gather and see what they get for presents. That's just what me, Hugh, and Jimmy did as we went downstairs on Christmas morning and found all the gifts under the tree. "Wow, look at all the presnts," Hugh said. "Leaping leptons, there must be approximately 30 gifts here. 10 for each of us," Jimmy said. "So let's open them," I said. We went over to the tree and started opening presents. I got some new clothes, some new kitchen tuppleware, since my old ones were cracking. Some more knitting thread so if I wanted to knit some more things, and then some new cooking supplies. I like all my gifts. Hugh had received some more ducks, and some more tools for his workshop, and lots of other things. Jimmy received some new beakers, even though he didn't want any, he still liked them. He recieved some new clothes, and lots of other things. Then Jimmy opened up mine and Hugh's present. He saw the title "On the Origin of Species" on it. I looked at Jimmy's expression. "Whoah," he said. "You like it Jimmy," I asked, Jimmy looked at me. "Mom, I've been wanting this book since I was 7. And I got it. I can't wait to find out who got it for me," he said. Hugh and I looked at each other. "Jimmy," I said. "Your father and I got it for you."
Jimmy looked at us. "You got me this book?" he exclaimed. "Well, I got it. Your father just agreed with me that it was a good present," I said. Hugh nodded. "Your mother told me you wanted this book since you were 7, so I thought it was a good idea that she got it for you, he said. "Well, I'm very glad you guys got it. But where'd you find it?" Jimmy asked. "I bought it online on Amazon," I said. "Oh, that site has everything," Jimmy said. Then Jimmy, Hugh, and I all got dressed. We enjoyed our gifts very much.
Later that afternoon, we had our Christmas dinner with all our relatives. We had turkey, and stuffing, and peas, and cranberries. It was a delicious meal. Jimmy enjoyed telling his cousins about his new book he got. I helped my sister (A/N: I'm not sure if Judy has a sister, but I am making her have one.) Ginger with the carrot cake that we were going to have for dessert.
By the time we were done our meal, and everyone had gone home. We were full. It had been an exciting and delightful Christmas.
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That's chapter 12 aND NOW i JUST DO 13.
Enjoy.
Thanks, Gretchen
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Quotes for chapter 12: "Well, someone would have to have a photgraphic memory, and be able to memorize super fast."-Carl Wheezer
"All I have to do is make a new toy everyday for the rest of my life. Hey why did everybody stop dancing."-Hugh Neutron
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Okay here's chapter 13. Now this is the new year chapter. And the new year for them in this story is 2007 because this chapter was posted on nick.com back in 2007, so I made it that year.
I'm not going to change it, I just wanted to tell you that. You'll see it in the chapter.
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Chapitre treize (13) pour mes amis.
December 31, at 11:45pm, it was 15 minutes away from being the new year of 2007. (A/N: I don't know what year the show actually takes place. So I'm making it this year.) Jimmy culdn't wait to celebrate it. He and his mom and dad had snacks out, and waiting to see the ball in Times Square drop. Then they would go outside and celebrate. Jimmy was eating a pizza roll, and his mom was eating mozzarella sticks. Hugh, on the other hand, was shining up his ducks to begin the new year. All of there Christmas presents were still sitting in a neat pile under the Christmas tree. Jimmy had started reading his "On the Origin of Species" book, and he was enjoying it. But he stopped because he knew New Years was coming. The clock turned to 11:50pm. Jimmy and his parents were getting excited. 'I wonder if Carl and Sheen are going to celebrate too,' Jimmy thought. Well, he would know if Carl was, since he lived right next door to him. He would even be able to see if Cindy was going to celebrate since she lived across from him. The next 10 minutes seemed to go by forever for the young genius. Then all of a sudden the clock said 11:59pm, and there was 20 sceonds left. Jimmy and his family started counting down with the people on the T.V. 'If only my sisters were born already to celebrate with us,' Jimmy thought as the 10 seconds came. 10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1! 12:00 am came, and the ball dropped. It was 2007! Jimmy and his family ran outside to celebrate!
They ran outside banging pots, and ringing bells. Carl was outside with his family, and he ran across the yard to Jimmy's house. "Happy New Year, Jimmy!." he said. "Happy New Year, Carl," Jimmy said. "I'm glad you were able to stay up." "Well, I didn't think I would. But I did." Carl said. Then he went back to his family. Then Jimmy looked across the street. Cindy wasn't outside. But there were lights on in her house. 'Maybe she doesn't celebrate New Years' Jimmy thought. The Goddard started barking too, because he was celebrating too. Finally Jimmy went back inside with his family, but before he could go in he heard Cindy calling him. Jimmy turned around. "Yes Cindy?" he asked. "Since it's New Years. Let's make a New Year's resolution," she said. "Like what?" Jimmy asked. "Well, we started being nice to each other. I think we should continue to be nice to each other. That way, we'll understand each other better," Cindy said. "Okay,"Jimmy said. "But we'll just be friends right?" "Yes, nothing else," Cindy said. "So, I'll see you when school starts again tomorrow," Jimmy said. "Yep," Cindy said. "And we can tell each other what we got for Christmas too," Jimmy said. Then Cindy said, "Jimmy, your sisters will be born this year too." Jimmy smiled. "Yeah, I know. And you'll be one of the first people to see them, "he said. "Thanks, Jimmy," Cindy said. Then they said good night and went in their houses. It was 10 minutes into the new year, and it was already starting off good.
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That's it for now.
Enjoy these three chapters and I'll see you on the 6th.
Maybe if I'm allowed to use my uncle's computer, I'll post from there, because that's why I'm going to Minnesota, to see my uncle, aunt and cousins that live there. I'll be there for the fourth of July So I wish everyone a happy fourth.
See you July 6th everyone. Please read and reply.
My mom, sisters, and I will have a great time!
I'll miss you all.
Gretchen
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Quotes for chapter 13: "If I'm correct. And I'm correct 89.23 percent of the time. My pants are going to control the other pants."Jimmy Neutron
"Carl gets a drum solo. I want a bass solo."-Sheen Estavez
I'm not going to change it, I just wanted to tell you that. You'll see it in the chapter.
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Chapitre treize (13) pour mes amis.
December 31, at 11:45pm, it was 15 minutes away from being the new year of 2007. (A/N: I don't know what year the show actually takes place. So I'm making it this year.) Jimmy culdn't wait to celebrate it. He and his mom and dad had snacks out, and waiting to see the ball in Times Square drop. Then they would go outside and celebrate. Jimmy was eating a pizza roll, and his mom was eating mozzarella sticks. Hugh, on the other hand, was shining up his ducks to begin the new year. All of there Christmas presents were still sitting in a neat pile under the Christmas tree. Jimmy had started reading his "On the Origin of Species" book, and he was enjoying it. But he stopped because he knew New Years was coming. The clock turned to 11:50pm. Jimmy and his parents were getting excited. 'I wonder if Carl and Sheen are going to celebrate too,' Jimmy thought. Well, he would know if Carl was, since he lived right next door to him. He would even be able to see if Cindy was going to celebrate since she lived across from him. The next 10 minutes seemed to go by forever for the young genius. Then all of a sudden the clock said 11:59pm, and there was 20 sceonds left. Jimmy and his family started counting down with the people on the T.V. 'If only my sisters were born already to celebrate with us,' Jimmy thought as the 10 seconds came. 10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1! 12:00 am came, and the ball dropped. It was 2007! Jimmy and his family ran outside to celebrate!
They ran outside banging pots, and ringing bells. Carl was outside with his family, and he ran across the yard to Jimmy's house. "Happy New Year, Jimmy!." he said. "Happy New Year, Carl," Jimmy said. "I'm glad you were able to stay up." "Well, I didn't think I would. But I did." Carl said. Then he went back to his family. Then Jimmy looked across the street. Cindy wasn't outside. But there were lights on in her house. 'Maybe she doesn't celebrate New Years' Jimmy thought. The Goddard started barking too, because he was celebrating too. Finally Jimmy went back inside with his family, but before he could go in he heard Cindy calling him. Jimmy turned around. "Yes Cindy?" he asked. "Since it's New Years. Let's make a New Year's resolution," she said. "Like what?" Jimmy asked. "Well, we started being nice to each other. I think we should continue to be nice to each other. That way, we'll understand each other better," Cindy said. "Okay,"Jimmy said. "But we'll just be friends right?" "Yes, nothing else," Cindy said. "So, I'll see you when school starts again tomorrow," Jimmy said. "Yep," Cindy said. "And we can tell each other what we got for Christmas too," Jimmy said. Then Cindy said, "Jimmy, your sisters will be born this year too." Jimmy smiled. "Yeah, I know. And you'll be one of the first people to see them, "he said. "Thanks, Jimmy," Cindy said. Then they said good night and went in their houses. It was 10 minutes into the new year, and it was already starting off good.
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That's it for now.
Enjoy these three chapters and I'll see you on the 6th.
Maybe if I'm allowed to use my uncle's computer, I'll post from there, because that's why I'm going to Minnesota, to see my uncle, aunt and cousins that live there. I'll be there for the fourth of July So I wish everyone a happy fourth.
See you July 6th everyone. Please read and reply.
My mom, sisters, and I will have a great time!
I'll miss you all.
Gretchen
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Quotes for chapter 13: "If I'm correct. And I'm correct 89.23 percent of the time. My pants are going to control the other pants."Jimmy Neutron
"Carl gets a drum solo. I want a bass solo."-Sheen Estavez
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Posted 01 July 2008 - 02:00 AM
Gretchen,
Wow, this story really is amazing.
From Christmas to jimmy and Cindy being friends in a new years resolution, this is very good.
Have fun on vacation and have a happy fourth of July.
See you when you get back,
ToKi
Wow, this story really is amazing.
From Christmas to jimmy and Cindy being friends in a new years resolution, this is very good.
Have fun on vacation and have a happy fourth of July.
See you when you get back,
ToKi
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Posted 02 July 2008 - 06:21 PM
Oh I wish you could go on while youre away.
I want more of this story.
ToKi
I want more of this story.
ToKi
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Nice chapters! Can't wait till you get back!
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Posted 06 July 2008 - 03:52 PM
Hey thanks for replying Beka and Toki.
I'll have a new chapter up soon.
Gretchen
I'll have a new chapter up soon.
Gretchen
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Posted 12 July 2008 - 07:28 PM
It's time for chapitre quatorze (14).
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The next day, I saw Sheen and Carl. They told me what they received for Christmas, and I told them what I got. Then they went to their class, so I told them I'd see them at lunch. I then went into English class, where everyone asked me how my Christmas was. They were all being nice to me because they knew I was going to be a big brother to twin girls. Then I sat down. Cindy came in and saw me. 'How's my "friend" today?" she asked. I looked at her. Something was bothering her. "I'm fine, Cindy. Are you?" She looked at me. "Yes, I am, Jinny," she said. Jinny? She called me Jinny? "Um, Cindy, you just called me Jinny," I said. "Oh, sorry, Jimmy," she said. Then she sat down. "Is everything okay, Cindy? I mean I thought you would be glad to see me. We made that resolution last night," I said. She looked up. "That's the problem Jimmy. I dont want to be just "friends". I want to be "best friends" and do everything together," Cindy said. "Okay," I said. Then Cindy became happy. "So how was you Christmas?" "Oh, fantastic," I said. "Yours?" "Mine was good, too,"Cindy said. Then Cindy and I had to stop talking because our English teacher came in the room, and we had to start our assignment. When English was done, Cindy and I smiled, hugged in friendship, and then walked to our separate classes. I would see her again in Science that afternoon.
That afternoon, Cindy and I saw each other in Science. We were going to finish the lab as Mrs. Sippi said we were going to do before Christmas break. So Cindy and i got our experiment that had been by the windowsill all Christmas long, and sat down. We waited for Mrs. Sippi to give the instructions for the next part of the lab. After she told us, we started to work together.
While we were working Cindy said to me, "I'm glad we are best friends." "Me too," I said. "Well, actually Libby's my best friend, but you know, you're my best guy friend," Cindy said. "I know. You're my best girl friend, because Carl and Sheen are my best friends," I said. Then we worked on the experiment some more. I felt like I was in my lab. I always do stuff like this in my lab, but only I was doing it with Cindy, my best girl friend. Soo, we were finished the lab. We finished it agin first of course, since we are the smartest kids in school. Then, we waited for everyone to get finished, then the bell rang at 3:15, and we all ran out of school for the day.
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That's chapter 14. Thanks for reading.
Thanks,
Gretchen
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Quotes for chapter 14: "You're going to the third nebula, where you'll be sold to local alien kids as toys."-Zix
"Timmy? I'm not Timmy. I'm Jimmy. Jimmy Neutron." -Jimmy Neutron
"I just want an average, plain, nothing special brain. Like you guys."-Jimmy Neutron
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The next day, I saw Sheen and Carl. They told me what they received for Christmas, and I told them what I got. Then they went to their class, so I told them I'd see them at lunch. I then went into English class, where everyone asked me how my Christmas was. They were all being nice to me because they knew I was going to be a big brother to twin girls. Then I sat down. Cindy came in and saw me. 'How's my "friend" today?" she asked. I looked at her. Something was bothering her. "I'm fine, Cindy. Are you?" She looked at me. "Yes, I am, Jinny," she said. Jinny? She called me Jinny? "Um, Cindy, you just called me Jinny," I said. "Oh, sorry, Jimmy," she said. Then she sat down. "Is everything okay, Cindy? I mean I thought you would be glad to see me. We made that resolution last night," I said. She looked up. "That's the problem Jimmy. I dont want to be just "friends". I want to be "best friends" and do everything together," Cindy said. "Okay," I said. Then Cindy became happy. "So how was you Christmas?" "Oh, fantastic," I said. "Yours?" "Mine was good, too,"Cindy said. Then Cindy and I had to stop talking because our English teacher came in the room, and we had to start our assignment. When English was done, Cindy and I smiled, hugged in friendship, and then walked to our separate classes. I would see her again in Science that afternoon.
That afternoon, Cindy and I saw each other in Science. We were going to finish the lab as Mrs. Sippi said we were going to do before Christmas break. So Cindy and i got our experiment that had been by the windowsill all Christmas long, and sat down. We waited for Mrs. Sippi to give the instructions for the next part of the lab. After she told us, we started to work together.
While we were working Cindy said to me, "I'm glad we are best friends." "Me too," I said. "Well, actually Libby's my best friend, but you know, you're my best guy friend," Cindy said. "I know. You're my best girl friend, because Carl and Sheen are my best friends," I said. Then we worked on the experiment some more. I felt like I was in my lab. I always do stuff like this in my lab, but only I was doing it with Cindy, my best girl friend. Soo, we were finished the lab. We finished it agin first of course, since we are the smartest kids in school. Then, we waited for everyone to get finished, then the bell rang at 3:15, and we all ran out of school for the day.
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That's chapter 14. Thanks for reading.
Thanks,
Gretchen
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Quotes for chapter 14: "You're going to the third nebula, where you'll be sold to local alien kids as toys."-Zix
"Timmy? I'm not Timmy. I'm Jimmy. Jimmy Neutron." -Jimmy Neutron
"I just want an average, plain, nothing special brain. Like you guys."-Jimmy Neutron
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Posted 14 July 2008 - 04:32 PM
Wow Gretchen, that was a great chapter.
Cindy called Jimmy "Jinny". i thought that was kind of weird.
But it was great.
When will the babies be born?
Your friend,
ToKi
Cindy called Jimmy "Jinny". i thought that was kind of weird.
But it was great.
When will the babies be born?
Your friend,
ToKi
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Posted 21 July 2008 - 06:51 PM
Hey thanks for replying to my story Athena and Toki.
To answer your question Toki, the babies will be born in chapter 20.
Enjoy chapitre quinze (15).
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February 14th. Valentine's Day, the day where everyone shows love and affection to everyone. That's what I was showing Judy. I had made her a Valentine card. "Oh Hugh, it's wonderful," Judy said. It was a beautiful card. I had worked hard on it. I had made one for Jimmy too, but I don't know where he was. Jimmy finally came downstairs. "Good morning Mom, and Dad," he said. "Jimbo. Where have you been?" I asked him. "Umm, Dad. I was asleep. My school has off on Valentine's Day. Remember?" he asked me. "Oh yeah," I said. Then Judy said, "Here, Hugh. Here's your card." I looked at Judy's card. "Thanks, Sugar Booger," I told her. Then Jimmy said, "I have Valentine's for you too." Then he handed a Valentine to me, and one to Judy too. We opened them. "Wow Jimmy, these are holographic cards," Judy said. "Yep, I made them on my computer," Jimmy said. I looked at my holographic Valentine. I wondered how Jimbo figured this stuff out. Having a genius for a son is not always easy.
"Jimbo, how did you make these Valnetines?" I asked him. "Oh, it was very simple, Dad. I made it on my computer." "But how? There's no hologrammy thingy on there," I said. "Dad, I can make it holographic because I know how to. It would be to complicated if I explained it accurately and explicitly to you," Jimbo said. I couldn't even say those words Jimbo just said. Accuaccountinly and explonsitly? "Jimbo, what were those words you said, Accuaccountinly and explonsitly?" "No Dad, accurately and expilicitly. It means clearly." "Oh," I said. Then I got what he was saying. He couldn't tell me how to make his hollohammy Valentine's because I wouldn't understand it. But that was okay. It was a wonderful card. I liked how the words "Happy Valnetine's Day, Dad" just jumped out at me. I would treaure Jimbo's card forvever. Even if I don't understand how he made it.
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That's the chapter. Hope you enjoyed it.
Gretchen
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Quote from chapter 15: "Good afternoon, my name is Pru fes sur Sheen. And I shall be learning you today." Sheen Estavez
To answer your question Toki, the babies will be born in chapter 20.
Enjoy chapitre quinze (15).
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February 14th. Valentine's Day, the day where everyone shows love and affection to everyone. That's what I was showing Judy. I had made her a Valentine card. "Oh Hugh, it's wonderful," Judy said. It was a beautiful card. I had worked hard on it. I had made one for Jimmy too, but I don't know where he was. Jimmy finally came downstairs. "Good morning Mom, and Dad," he said. "Jimbo. Where have you been?" I asked him. "Umm, Dad. I was asleep. My school has off on Valentine's Day. Remember?" he asked me. "Oh yeah," I said. Then Judy said, "Here, Hugh. Here's your card." I looked at Judy's card. "Thanks, Sugar Booger," I told her. Then Jimmy said, "I have Valentine's for you too." Then he handed a Valentine to me, and one to Judy too. We opened them. "Wow Jimmy, these are holographic cards," Judy said. "Yep, I made them on my computer," Jimmy said. I looked at my holographic Valentine. I wondered how Jimbo figured this stuff out. Having a genius for a son is not always easy.
"Jimbo, how did you make these Valnetines?" I asked him. "Oh, it was very simple, Dad. I made it on my computer." "But how? There's no hologrammy thingy on there," I said. "Dad, I can make it holographic because I know how to. It would be to complicated if I explained it accurately and explicitly to you," Jimbo said. I couldn't even say those words Jimbo just said. Accuaccountinly and explonsitly? "Jimbo, what were those words you said, Accuaccountinly and explonsitly?" "No Dad, accurately and expilicitly. It means clearly." "Oh," I said. Then I got what he was saying. He couldn't tell me how to make his hollohammy Valentine's because I wouldn't understand it. But that was okay. It was a wonderful card. I liked how the words "Happy Valnetine's Day, Dad" just jumped out at me. I would treaure Jimbo's card forvever. Even if I don't understand how he made it.
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That's the chapter. Hope you enjoyed it.
Gretchen
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Quote from chapter 15: "Good afternoon, my name is Pru fes sur Sheen. And I shall be learning you today." Sheen Estavez
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