Aw its so cute how excited Jimmy is for his new sisters
Jimmy is going to be such a sweet big brother ^_^
Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius: Big Brother
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:thumbsup: That was great! ^_^ i sense trouble coming with all Jimmy's new invites though :D Let's see what's Cindy gonna say about that! lolzOkay in Chapter 17, I skipped ahead a month. So now it's March in this chapter.
I'm writing this from my lap top in my house at the beach that we're staying in.
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Hey everyone! Here's chapter 18! Enjoy!
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Chapter 18 part 1: Jimmy's birthday, and his POV .
It was my birthday. Hurray! All of the people I invited were coming over. Cindy, Nick, Libby, Sheen, Carl, Butch, Brittany, and Betty. They were all going to come over. Carl came first since he's next door to me. "Hey, Carl." I said. "Hey Jim. Umm, I tried to get you a present, but I don't know what you like." he said.
"Well, I basically got every thing I want anyway. From Christmas and all." I said. I had been reading my Origin Of Species book by Charles Darwin that my parents got me for Christmas. It's pretty interesting. All about Darwin's theory of natural selection, but this is not about my book. This is about my 11th birthday party. March 14th.
Soon, Sheen came, followed by Butch and Brittany. Then Betty Quinlan came.
I was already to start my party when I realized something. Cindy and Libby never showed up.
Where could they be? I almost wanted to call Cindy, but then i had a party to do.
"Jimmy, Cindy's Mom just called. Cindy is at her Grandma's house, and it's far away from here. So she might be late. She just wanted to tell you that." Mom said. "Okay,"I felt relieved. "What about Libby?" "Oh, she's coming, too." Mom said.
So I continued my party. I took them to my lab and showed them my experiments.
"Wow, Jimmy, you make all these?" Betty asked.
"Yeah, he does. And they're cool. Okay.. I'm bored. Can we have cake now Jimmy?" Sheen asked. Typical Sheen.
"Sure," I said. "wait we need dinner, too." So while we were eating dinner, Cindy and Libby came. "Sorry we're late Jimmy. It's just that I had to wait for Cindy to come home, and then we had to get your presents. So happy birthday, Jimmy." Libby said. "Yes, happy birthday, Jimmy," Cindy said. Now that everyone was there. We ate dinner, played games. And then had cake. I opened up all my presents. Some of them didn't know what I liked so I just got cards, but I liked them anyway.
At the end of my party when everyone was going home, Cindy said, "I had a good time Jimmy." "Me too." I said. "Yep, and next month you'll be a big brother." "Yep," And then she kissed me on the cheek, and I kissed her back. That was the first kiss Cindy or any girl had given me, but that was what I wanted all along. To kiss Cindy, and her to kiss me back. What a perfect way to end my birthday.
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I hope you enjoy this.
Thanks,
Gretchen
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"This is my room now. Since my old room is inhabited by an immature beast."-Drake from Drake and Josh
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Chapter 18 part 1: Jimmy's birthday, and his POV .
It was my birthday. Hurray! All of the people I invited were coming over. Cindy, Nick, Libby, Sheen, Carl, Butch, Brittany, and Betty. They were all going to come over. Carl came first since he's next door to me. "Hey, Carl." I said. "Hey Jim. Umm, I tried to get you a present, but I don't know what you like." he said.
"Well, I basically got every thing I want anyway. From Christmas and all." I said. I had been reading my Origin Of Species book by Charles Darwin that my parents got me for Christmas. It's pretty interesting. All about Darwin's theory of natural selection, but this is not about my book. This is about my 11th birthday party. March 14th.
Soon, Sheen came, followed by Butch and Brittany. Then Betty Quinlan came.
I was already to start my party when I realized something. Cindy and Libby never showed up.
Where could they be? I almost wanted to call Cindy, but then i had a party to do.
"Jimmy, Cindy's Mom just called. Cindy is at her Grandma's house, and it's far away from here. So she might be late. She just wanted to tell you that." Mom said. "Okay,"I felt relieved. "What about Libby?" "Oh, she's coming, too." Mom said.
So I continued my party. I took them to my lab and showed them my experiments.
"Wow, Jimmy, you make all these?" Betty asked.
"Yeah, he does. And they're cool. Okay.. I'm bored. Can we have cake now Jimmy?" Sheen asked. Typical Sheen.
"Sure," I said. "wait we need dinner, too." So while we were eating dinner, Cindy and Libby came. "Sorry we're late Jimmy. It's just that I had to wait for Cindy to come home, and then we had to get your presents. So happy birthday, Jimmy." Libby said. "Yes, happy birthday, Jimmy," Cindy said. Now that everyone was there. We ate dinner, played games. And then had cake. I opened up all my presents. Some of them didn't know what I liked so I just got cards, but I liked them anyway.
At the end of my party when everyone was going home, Cindy said, "I had a good time Jimmy." "Me too." I said. "Yep, and next month you'll be a big brother." "Yep," And then she kissed me on the cheek, and I kissed her back. That was the first kiss Cindy or any girl had given me, but that was what I wanted all along. To kiss Cindy, and her to kiss me back. What a perfect way to end my birthday.
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I hope you enjoy this.
Thanks,
Gretchen
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"This is my room now. Since my old room is inhabited by an immature beast."-Drake from Drake and Josh
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Posted 12 August 2008 - 08:49 AM
:thumbsup: keep it up!!!
**squeals ***one month left????!!!!
yah!!!
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**squeals ***one month left????!!!!
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Posted 13 August 2008 - 11:20 AM
Happy birthday to Jimmy,
Happy birthday to Jimmy,
I'm too lazy to write the rest. ^_^
Keep writing!!!
I love it so far, :thumbsup:
Can't wait for when Jimmy turns into a big brother!!!
Go girl!!!
Ok, too much encouragement. it gets boring.
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Happy birthday to Jimmy,
I'm too lazy to write the rest. ^_^
Keep writing!!!
I love it so far, :thumbsup:
Can't wait for when Jimmy turns into a big brother!!!
Go girl!!!
Ok, too much encouragement. it gets boring.
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Posted 18 August 2008 - 12:28 AM
This is a great story, Gretchen.
Wow, Jimmy had a great party.
Can't wai till the babies are born.
You BB 4 LiFe,
Celeste
Wow, Jimmy had a great party.
Can't wai till the babies are born.
You BB 4 LiFe,
Celeste
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Posted 23 August 2008 - 06:29 PM
Oh Gretchen,
I remember reading this story on nick.com.
You did a great job on it.
You also showed me and Celeste how it ended.
I won't tell anyone though. Please post soon.
Your BB from nick.com and also your BFF,
Millicent (Millie)
I remember reading this story on nick.com.
You did a great job on it.
You also showed me and Celeste how it ended.
I won't tell anyone though. Please post soon.
Your BB from nick.com and also your BFF,
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Posted 25 August 2008 - 12:15 AM
Thanks for all the replies I've had since I've posted chapter 18!
Here's chapter 19. Enjoy.
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Chapter 19 Part 1 in Hugh's POV
Hooray it was finally April! The babies would be born any day now. I was so excited I hadn't even made any new ducks, and that's pretty astonishing for a duck lover like me. Judy and I had been getting all the supplies ready for the two twin girls like new clothes, and toys. And a crib. One of them was going to use the one Jimmy used when he was little. Now that Jimbo had his eleventh birthday he would be able to help us get ready. He was even getting excited. He was finally going to be a big brother like he always wanted to. He didn't even go into his lab now because the babies were coming. I was in the kitchen right now checking to see if everything we had was with us. "It looks like we have everything, Judy," I said. "That's wondefrul." she said. Jimmy came into the room with something in his hand. "Jimmy, what is that you're holding?" Judy asked. "Oh, these are rattles I made for the babies. One can have a purple one, and the other can have a pink one. I made them out of titanium, and I painted them with my special sparkley shiny paint that I have, then I carved each of their names on one side see, Elizabeth Katilda is going to have the purple one, and Jillian Margaret will have the pink one. On the other side I carved my name, so they will know when they get older they were made by me. I also put beans inside for the rattling noise, and that's it." Jimbo said. "Wow, Jimmy, that's amazing, and so thoughtful," Judy said. "Yeah Jimbo it is." I said. We each took a rattle and observed how Jimmy made it. "Wow, this is really something Jimbo," I said. ''Thanks, Dad. Now I will keep them until the babies come." Jimbo said. Later that evening we sat down for dinner. We were just about to eat when Judy screamed. "Mom, what is it?" Jim Jam asked. "It's time." Judy said. "Oh my let's get you to the hospital quick!" I said. Judy, Jimbo, and I went in the car, and we rushed to the hospital. On that Friday night, Jimmy was closer to becoming a big brother. We couldn't wait for the new babies to be born.
We got to the hospital and quickly got Judy into a room. She was going into labor, I knew that from when she had Jimmy. "Aww, I can't wait till they're born," I said. "Me neither. I just want this over with," Judy said. Then the doctor came in. "Hi. I'm Doctor Hockmenstein. I will help Mrs. Judith Neutron (A/N: I'm making her full name Judith.) to deliver her twin identical girls whenever she's ready." "Well, hello Doctor Hockmenstein, I'm Hugh Neutron, and this is my son James Neutron." I said. Doctor H. looked at us. "Well, I guess you guys are both excited. Especially you, my darling," she said. Jimmy nodded. "Of course I have been impatiently counting down the days till this day approached, but may I say it was early. The babies will be here quite early." Dr. H. smiled. "Aww aren't you an intelligent young man. Wait till your sisters see how smart you are." she said. I smiled along with Jimmy. Once the babies arrive, it'll be a happy night for us. Their will be two more Neutron's in the family. Then there will be six of us. Me, Judy, Jimbo, Goddard, and the two new baby girls.
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Next chapter is when the babies are born.
Thanks for reading,
Gretchen
Here's chapter 19. Enjoy.
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Chapter 19 Part 1 in Hugh's POV
Hooray it was finally April! The babies would be born any day now. I was so excited I hadn't even made any new ducks, and that's pretty astonishing for a duck lover like me. Judy and I had been getting all the supplies ready for the two twin girls like new clothes, and toys. And a crib. One of them was going to use the one Jimmy used when he was little. Now that Jimbo had his eleventh birthday he would be able to help us get ready. He was even getting excited. He was finally going to be a big brother like he always wanted to. He didn't even go into his lab now because the babies were coming. I was in the kitchen right now checking to see if everything we had was with us. "It looks like we have everything, Judy," I said. "That's wondefrul." she said. Jimmy came into the room with something in his hand. "Jimmy, what is that you're holding?" Judy asked. "Oh, these are rattles I made for the babies. One can have a purple one, and the other can have a pink one. I made them out of titanium, and I painted them with my special sparkley shiny paint that I have, then I carved each of their names on one side see, Elizabeth Katilda is going to have the purple one, and Jillian Margaret will have the pink one. On the other side I carved my name, so they will know when they get older they were made by me. I also put beans inside for the rattling noise, and that's it." Jimbo said. "Wow, Jimmy, that's amazing, and so thoughtful," Judy said. "Yeah Jimbo it is." I said. We each took a rattle and observed how Jimmy made it. "Wow, this is really something Jimbo," I said. ''Thanks, Dad. Now I will keep them until the babies come." Jimbo said. Later that evening we sat down for dinner. We were just about to eat when Judy screamed. "Mom, what is it?" Jim Jam asked. "It's time." Judy said. "Oh my let's get you to the hospital quick!" I said. Judy, Jimbo, and I went in the car, and we rushed to the hospital. On that Friday night, Jimmy was closer to becoming a big brother. We couldn't wait for the new babies to be born.
We got to the hospital and quickly got Judy into a room. She was going into labor, I knew that from when she had Jimmy. "Aww, I can't wait till they're born," I said. "Me neither. I just want this over with," Judy said. Then the doctor came in. "Hi. I'm Doctor Hockmenstein. I will help Mrs. Judith Neutron (A/N: I'm making her full name Judith.) to deliver her twin identical girls whenever she's ready." "Well, hello Doctor Hockmenstein, I'm Hugh Neutron, and this is my son James Neutron." I said. Doctor H. looked at us. "Well, I guess you guys are both excited. Especially you, my darling," she said. Jimmy nodded. "Of course I have been impatiently counting down the days till this day approached, but may I say it was early. The babies will be here quite early." Dr. H. smiled. "Aww aren't you an intelligent young man. Wait till your sisters see how smart you are." she said. I smiled along with Jimmy. Once the babies arrive, it'll be a happy night for us. Their will be two more Neutron's in the family. Then there will be six of us. Me, Judy, Jimbo, Goddard, and the two new baby girls.
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Next chapter is when the babies are born.
Thanks for reading,
Gretchen
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Posted 25 August 2008 - 02:46 AM
OMG GRETCHEN!
I can't wait!!!
The moment we've all been waiting for is finally coming!!!
I can't wait to see what the babies will be like...
Keep it up! :thumbsup:
^Kaytron^
I can't wait!!!
The moment we've all been waiting for is finally coming!!!
I can't wait to see what the babies will be like...
Keep it up! :thumbsup:
^Kaytron^
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 11:19 PM
Wow awesome Gretchen!
Next chapter the babies will be born.
I can't wait. Although I've read it already, i still can't wait to read it again!
Millicent, your BB
Next chapter the babies will be born.
I can't wait. Although I've read it already, i still can't wait to read it again!
Millicent, your BB
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Posted 29 August 2008 - 03:53 PM
Ah, cute! The babies will be here next chapter!!!!!! I like how you had Jimmy make presents for them; it was so sweet and thoughtful. And his birthday was a sweet chapter, too. ^_^ (I can't believe I missed it. :rolleyes: ) Anyway, post again soon!
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Posted 31 August 2008 - 05:41 AM
hurray!! babies coming :kawaii:
poor Judy on labor ....
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poor Judy on labor ....
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Posted 31 August 2008 - 09:58 PM
It's the moment you've all been waiting for, Chapter 20, when the Neutron babies are born!
Enjoy.
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Chapter 20 Part 1 is narrated by Judy Neutron
I had been waiting in the hospital for 4 and 1/2 hours. It was now almost eleven at night. We had left at quarter to 7 and I had to wait. The babies weren't ready to be born yet. Jimbo and Hugh had went to get stuff to eat at the food place in the hospital. I had to stay in bed with Doctor Hockmenstein. She was going to help me deliver the babies. Hours and minutes and seconds went by, it was almost 2 in the morning when it started. Then all of a sudden at 3:20am, that's when it happened.
At 3:20 am, that's when the babies were born. Elizabeth Katilda Neutron was born at 3:21 am. I calmed down for a minute. The other one wasn't here yet, but 5 minutes later at 3: 26am, Jillian Margaret was born. I gasped at how cute they were. Doctor Hockmentstein called Hugh and Jimmy into the room after the babies had been washed, tested for healthiness, and were clothed, and layed in their beds. "Hugh here are your new daughters, and Jimmy, your new sisters." Dr. H. said. They went over to look at them. "Aww, they're so cute." Hugh said. "Who's who?" "Well the one in the pink hat is Elizabeth Katilda, and the one in the purple hat is Jillian Margaret." I said. "Aww, I've been waiting for them to come ever since I told you what you were having Mom," Jimmy said. Then I burst out in tears of happiness. I just had to hold one of the babies. Dr. H. gave Jillian to me, and gave Elizabeth to Hugh, and Jimmy sat in between us, and Dr. H. took our new family photo.
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Chapter 21 will be up in a few days.
Thanks for reading,
Enjoy.
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Chapter 20 Part 1 is narrated by Judy Neutron
I had been waiting in the hospital for 4 and 1/2 hours. It was now almost eleven at night. We had left at quarter to 7 and I had to wait. The babies weren't ready to be born yet. Jimbo and Hugh had went to get stuff to eat at the food place in the hospital. I had to stay in bed with Doctor Hockmenstein. She was going to help me deliver the babies. Hours and minutes and seconds went by, it was almost 2 in the morning when it started. Then all of a sudden at 3:20am, that's when it happened.
At 3:20 am, that's when the babies were born. Elizabeth Katilda Neutron was born at 3:21 am. I calmed down for a minute. The other one wasn't here yet, but 5 minutes later at 3: 26am, Jillian Margaret was born. I gasped at how cute they were. Doctor Hockmentstein called Hugh and Jimmy into the room after the babies had been washed, tested for healthiness, and were clothed, and layed in their beds. "Hugh here are your new daughters, and Jimmy, your new sisters." Dr. H. said. They went over to look at them. "Aww, they're so cute." Hugh said. "Who's who?" "Well the one in the pink hat is Elizabeth Katilda, and the one in the purple hat is Jillian Margaret." I said. "Aww, I've been waiting for them to come ever since I told you what you were having Mom," Jimmy said. Then I burst out in tears of happiness. I just had to hold one of the babies. Dr. H. gave Jillian to me, and gave Elizabeth to Hugh, and Jimmy sat in between us, and Dr. H. took our new family photo.
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Chapter 21 will be up in a few days.
Thanks for reading,
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Posted 31 August 2008 - 11:22 PM
Oh, I've always liked this story. It's so good. :thumbsup:
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Posted 01 September 2008 - 12:23 AM
Thanks Pigquet, and that was the whole chapter 20. It was narrated by Judy Neutron.
I'll try to post chapter 21 sometime this week, but once I start school, I won't be on as much.
See you later.
Your friend,
I'll try to post chapter 21 sometime this week, but once I start school, I won't be on as much.
See you later.
Your friend,
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Posted 01 September 2008 - 12:39 AM
Well, we all have to go to school, Pigquet.
But I'll always post a chapter, and I'll always remember to notify you.
I know I like calling you Athena, but if you'd rather have me call you Pigquet, then I'll do that too.
See ya later,
But I'll always post a chapter, and I'll always remember to notify you.
I know I like calling you Athena, but if you'd rather have me call you Pigquet, then I'll do that too.
See ya later,
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Awww! Sweet chapter, Gretchen! The babies sound soooo adorable!
Post the next part soon! =D
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Post the next part soon! =D
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Posted 01 September 2008 - 12:51 AM
Did you know back when I was posting this on nick.com, I actually wanted to quit writing this story?
I got bored of it, that's why, but now, I am glad I didn't stop it.
I will post another story after this one, it might be another JN one, or I'll put one in the creative works forum which can be about anything. Like my friend Millicent has one in there about her life in the marching band.
See ya,
I got bored of it, that's why, but now, I am glad I didn't stop it.
I will post another story after this one, it might be another JN one, or I'll put one in the creative works forum which can be about anything. Like my friend Millicent has one in there about her life in the marching band.
See ya,
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Posted 01 September 2008 - 01:13 AM
I've had a couple of ideas for fics in my mind for awhile.
When i'm done this story, I'll post my ideas and you can choose which one to do.
I have one JN idea, and one regualr story idea.
See ya later Pigquet,
When i'm done this story, I'll post my ideas and you can choose which one to do.
I have one JN idea, and one regualr story idea.
See ya later Pigquet,
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Posted 01 September 2008 - 01:21 AM
Have you ever written any fanfics, Athena?
Yes, i know, stories! (joins Athena in her weird dancing).
Woa we could start a dance club. Lol.
Yes, i know, stories! (joins Athena in her weird dancing).
Woa we could start a dance club. Lol.
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