I swear people must hate me on this site or something. Because people never reply. Well if that's the case, I might as well not come on here anymore.
Thanks for nothing people. And to pay you back, I'm not replying to your stories anymore either!
See how you like it.
Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius: Big Brother
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Posted 22 July 2008 - 02:41 PM
Aww, Gretchen, I'm sorry you're upset.
I'll reply. If those stupid people on here won't then I will.
Signed
Your sister Mary
I'll reply. If those stupid people on here won't then I will.
Signed
Your sister Mary
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Posted 22 July 2008 - 02:42 PM
Yeah, and I'll reply with Mary to your story every time you post a new chapter.
We don't have accounts of our own, but we'll write under your name.
We love your story so far, big sister.
Keep up the great work.
You other sister,
Claudia
We don't have accounts of our own, but we'll write under your name.
We love your story so far, big sister.
Keep up the great work.
You other sister,
Claudia
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Posted 22 July 2008 - 02:43 PM
Aww, thanks guys.
That makes me happy that my sisters will reply to my story.
Gretchen
That makes me happy that my sisters will reply to my story.
Gretchen
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Posted 22 July 2008 - 03:30 PM
Awww, Gretchen, this story is so cute! I love how you threw both J/C and S/L in; not everyone remembers to include Sheen and Libby, it seems.
It's also unique that you have sections of your story narrated by Judy and Hugh. It's neat!
Your Valentine's Day chapter with Jimmy giving valentines to his parents was so cute! Poor Hugh, not understanding how Jimmy works his inventions. ): But so sweet how you mentioned that he'd cherish it forever.
It's going to be awesome seeing Jimmy's new baby sisters! They have such adorable names!
Keep postin', girl!
~Rachel~
It's also unique that you have sections of your story narrated by Judy and Hugh. It's neat!
Your Valentine's Day chapter with Jimmy giving valentines to his parents was so cute! Poor Hugh, not understanding how Jimmy works his inventions. ): But so sweet how you mentioned that he'd cherish it forever.
It's going to be awesome seeing Jimmy's new baby sisters! They have such adorable names!
Keep postin', girl!
~Rachel~
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Posted 24 July 2008 - 04:48 PM
Hi there Gretchen, just read your story. Pigquet 's right,maybe some haven't notice the posting ur doing now :blink: ...Hey thanks for replying to my story Athena and Toki.
To answer your question Toki, the babies will be born in chapter 20.
Enjoy chapitre quinze (15).
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That's the chapter. Hope you enjoyed it.
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Quote from chapter 15: "Good afternoon, my name is Pru fes sur Sheen. And I shall be learning you today." Sheen Estavez
i recently was aware of it ^_^ glad that I did!
So don't feel hurt about amount of reviews....the important thing is that you enjoy writing the plot ^_^
So far I've liked ur fic very much :thumbsup: it's cool!!!
l'histoire est réellement fantastique!
So....what's happening next :huh:
quand vas-tu montrer chapitre seize :huh:
Don't forget to keep updating ;) :'(
I'll try to review and keep reading when I'm free (coz college is really killin' me now :wacko: )
Oooh wait a sec, at the beginning u wrote that u stayed in chapter 22 in this fic... U are finishing the story right?? [puppy eyes]....... right???
à bientôt!
Noemi ^_^
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Posted 24 July 2008 - 05:35 PM
Hey Gretchen,
Pigquet and Noemi are right. You shouldn't say that people hate you. I certainly don't.
What you need to do is reply to other people's stories or even PM them and say 'Hey can you check out my story please?' and I'm sure they'll reply.
I know it's hard on you too, with your father and all.
But this story is very good. They got Valnetine's!.
And they have off, too.
Just keep in mind what I told you, and keep posting.
Your friend,
ToKi
Pigquet and Noemi are right. You shouldn't say that people hate you. I certainly don't.
What you need to do is reply to other people's stories or even PM them and say 'Hey can you check out my story please?' and I'm sure they'll reply.
I know it's hard on you too, with your father and all.
But this story is very good. They got Valnetine's!.
And they have off, too.
Just keep in mind what I told you, and keep posting.
Your friend,
ToKi
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Posted 24 July 2008 - 09:15 PM
Hey Gretchen,
Pigquet and Noemi are right. You shouldn't say that people hate you. I certainly don't.
What you need to do is reply to other people's stories or even PM them and say 'Hey can you check out my story please?' and I'm sure they'll reply.
I know it's hard on you too, with your father and all.
But this story is very good. They got Valnetine's!.
And they have off, too.
Just keep in mind what I told you, and keep posting.
Your friend,
ToKi
You go girl! :thumbsup:
That's very supportive o:)
Don't 4get to keep in mind what Toki is sayin' Gretchen
and keep posting!!! ;)
I don't know what happens to you but the only thing that i can say is....everything is possible in life, while u're alive..... so cheer up!!! :dance:
I'm sure that if u ask Mara she can gladly help u too right guys??
well... ta ta
hv a nice n wonderful day B) [IDOJ hug]
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Posted 27 July 2008 - 08:44 PM
Wow Gretchen, I can't believe you said you are hated on this website.
Don't be absurd.
Saying people hate you is absolutley ludicrous.
I reply to your story. I just haven't been present for quite a large time frame.
But I'm back and this story is great.
I hope you write more.
Sincerely,
Hannah Nicole H., 13 year old genius/scientist
P.S. You and I have the same middle name!
Don't be absurd.
Saying people hate you is absolutley ludicrous.
I reply to your story. I just haven't been present for quite a large time frame.
But I'm back and this story is great.
I hope you write more.
Sincerely,
Hannah Nicole H., 13 year old genius/scientist
P.S. You and I have the same middle name!
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Posted 27 July 2008 - 09:51 PM
Yah you're absolutely right!I ^_^this story is great.
I hope you write more.
Sincerely,
Hannah Nicole H., 13 year old genius/scientist
P.S. You and I have the same middle name!
hope she does soon :kawaii:
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Posted 28 July 2008 - 09:33 AM
Hey Gretchen,
I love your fanfic!!!!
I'll try to reply after every chappie you post... I'll try, i didn't say I will.
I'm loving it so far....
I think Cindy and Jimmy's new year's resolution was cute..... in a way of speaking.....
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)
^Kaytron^
I love your fanfic!!!!
I'll try to reply after every chappie you post... I'll try, i didn't say I will.
I'm loving it so far....
I think Cindy and Jimmy's new year's resolution was cute..... in a way of speaking.....
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)
^Kaytron^
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 01:13 AM
Hey Gretchen!
I'm so glad I'm on here now.
I don't have to read your story. I remember it from nick.com.
Great job.
Celeste
I'm so glad I'm on here now.
I don't have to read your story. I remember it from nick.com.
Great job.
Celeste
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 05:27 AM
Hey I love your story so far
Its very cute
The names are so cute
I'm glad to see that Jimmy and Cindy are friends now
Its very cute
The names are so cute
I'm glad to see that Jimmy and Cindy are friends now
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 03:13 PM
Thanks Athena, Rachel, Noemi, Toki, Hannah, Kaytron, Little Sweety and Celeste for replying to my story.
I guess I'm not hated on here after all.
Yeah, Celeste. Thanks for reading this. And do you know what? You read all the way up to chapter 22, which is where I left off on nick.com.
I also told you what the rest of the story was about, but don't tell anyone okay? If Millie were on here, she'd tell, 'cause she can't keep a secret. Maybe by the time she signs up, I'llbe done this story.
And to Noemi, wow, you speak French too.
Here's chapter 16.
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After receiving alot of chocolate and cards and flowers for Valentine's Day, I decided to get some stuff for the new babies coming. I knew they would be coming in a few months. Each day was getting more exciting for Jimmy. The due date for the babies was April 20th, and Jimmy had made a calender starting with todays date February 16th all the way to April 20th and had counted down the days. They might be born early, so Jimmy might not have to use all the days, but it was still good. Hugh was becoming more excited too. We would have two more little Neutron's in the family. And they would be born a month after Jimmy's eleventh birthday, so they would be like a belated birthday gift to him. So I was about to figure out what to get already for the babies, when this thing just flew by me in the kitchen and almost hit me!
It was a Jimmy invention of course. Jimmy came into the kitchen. "Sorry, Mom. Just testing out my new invention, the JimCopter 10,000," he said. "Jimmy, that thing almost hit me. It could have knocked me over and could have hurt the babies!" :Sorry, Mom. I had to test it out." "In the house?" I asked. "Sorry, Mom. I'll get it and take it outside." :Good," I said. Then Hugh came in the room. "Look what flew into the room while I was polishing my ducks. A helicopter!" he said. "That's Jimmy's helicopter Hugh," I said. "Ahem, it's called the JimCopter 10,000. And I need it back. I was just testing it." "Why did you make that thing anyway, Jimbo?" Hugh asked Jimmy. "Because, maybe my little sisters will want to play with it when they get older," he said. "Jimmy, they'll be girls. Girls won't want to play with a helicopter," I said to him. "Okay, maybe not. But I'm taking it in for show and tell tomorrow." "You most certainly will not." "Oh, come on Sugar Booger, let him have his fun," Hugh told me. "Okay,"I said, "but just be careful with it." Then Jimmy went back to his lab. And Hugh and I continued out baby plans.
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Thanks for reading. Oh and to Rachel, yeah this is cool, having Judy and Hugh narrate some times.
And to Toki, thanks for the advice. I will tell people to reply.
Thanks,
Gretchen Nicole W.
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And to Athena thanks for caring about my father.
No quotes for this chapter. Chapter 17 will be up soon.
I guess I'm not hated on here after all.
Yeah, Celeste. Thanks for reading this. And do you know what? You read all the way up to chapter 22, which is where I left off on nick.com.
I also told you what the rest of the story was about, but don't tell anyone okay? If Millie were on here, she'd tell, 'cause she can't keep a secret. Maybe by the time she signs up, I'llbe done this story.
And to Noemi, wow, you speak French too.
Here's chapter 16.
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After receiving alot of chocolate and cards and flowers for Valentine's Day, I decided to get some stuff for the new babies coming. I knew they would be coming in a few months. Each day was getting more exciting for Jimmy. The due date for the babies was April 20th, and Jimmy had made a calender starting with todays date February 16th all the way to April 20th and had counted down the days. They might be born early, so Jimmy might not have to use all the days, but it was still good. Hugh was becoming more excited too. We would have two more little Neutron's in the family. And they would be born a month after Jimmy's eleventh birthday, so they would be like a belated birthday gift to him. So I was about to figure out what to get already for the babies, when this thing just flew by me in the kitchen and almost hit me!
It was a Jimmy invention of course. Jimmy came into the kitchen. "Sorry, Mom. Just testing out my new invention, the JimCopter 10,000," he said. "Jimmy, that thing almost hit me. It could have knocked me over and could have hurt the babies!" :Sorry, Mom. I had to test it out." "In the house?" I asked. "Sorry, Mom. I'll get it and take it outside." :Good," I said. Then Hugh came in the room. "Look what flew into the room while I was polishing my ducks. A helicopter!" he said. "That's Jimmy's helicopter Hugh," I said. "Ahem, it's called the JimCopter 10,000. And I need it back. I was just testing it." "Why did you make that thing anyway, Jimbo?" Hugh asked Jimmy. "Because, maybe my little sisters will want to play with it when they get older," he said. "Jimmy, they'll be girls. Girls won't want to play with a helicopter," I said to him. "Okay, maybe not. But I'm taking it in for show and tell tomorrow." "You most certainly will not." "Oh, come on Sugar Booger, let him have his fun," Hugh told me. "Okay,"I said, "but just be careful with it." Then Jimmy went back to his lab. And Hugh and I continued out baby plans.
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Thanks for reading. Oh and to Rachel, yeah this is cool, having Judy and Hugh narrate some times.
And to Toki, thanks for the advice. I will tell people to reply.
Thanks,
Gretchen Nicole W.
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And to Athena thanks for caring about my father.
No quotes for this chapter. Chapter 17 will be up soon.
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 03:17 PM
Yay! Another chapter. Sweet, the babies will be born only a month after Jimmy's birthday. ^_^ And it's so cute how Jimmy's counting down the days till he gets to see his baby sisters! ...And trying to invent something they'd like to play with, awww!
Looking forward to the next chapter, Gretchen!!!!
~Rachel~
Looking forward to the next chapter, Gretchen!!!!
~Rachel~
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 03:38 PM
Thanks for the replies Rachel and Athena.
Chapter 17 will be up in a few days.
Maybe when I'm at the beach I'll do it.
Gretchen Nicole W.
Chapter 17 will be up in a few days.
Maybe when I'm at the beach I'll do it.
Gretchen Nicole W.
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 03:38 PM
Ur welcome :thumbsup: (and yah I do speak some French but I prefer German ^_^ I'm just learning it. It's more challenging for me at least :lol: considering that my first lang is Spanish :blink: )Thanks Athena, Rachel, Noemi, Toki, Hannah, Kaytron, Little Sweety and Celeste for replying to my story.
I guess I'm not hated on here after all.
Yeah, Celeste. Thanks for reading this. And do you know what? You read all the way up to chapter 22, which is where I left off on nick.com.
I also told you what the rest of the story was about, but don't tell anyone okay? If Millie were on here, she'd tell, 'cause she can't keep a secret. Maybe by the time she signs up, I'llbe done this story.
And to Noemi, wow, you speak French too.
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keep the good writing :thumbsup:
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Posted 02 August 2008 - 09:10 PM
Okay in Chapter 17, I skipped ahead a month. So now it's March in this chapter.
I'm writing this from my lap top in my house at the beach that we're staying in.
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It was March 10th, four days before Jimmy's birthday. He was getting ready to celebrate his eleventh birthday. He wanted to invite Sheen and Carl of course. He would invite Libby, too. And since Cindy had been being so nice to him lately, he would invite her too. He went into school the next day with an invitation. He had given one to Sheen and Carl since he walks with them to school. Libby had got hers too. All he had to do was invite Cindy. "Umm, Cindy, would you like to come to my party?" he asked her. "Of course, Jimmy." she said. "Here's your invitation," he told her. He gave her it. Then he walked away. Cindy couldn't believe it. Jimmy had invited her to his party, now she could spend even more time with him.
Jimmy, meanwhile had been going to homeroom, when Butch and Brittany, and Nick came up to him. "Hey Neutron, you should invite the Nickster. You're cool now, since you are having twin sisters. Invite me." Nick said. "And me Neutron, or I'll beat you up till you give me one." Butch said. "And you have to like invite me. I like have to come like too." Brittany said. All these people wanted Jimmy to invite them to his party, but he didn't have any invitations for them. "Umm, guys. I don't have any invitations for you," he said.
They all looked at him. "Well, give us some tomorrow, okay?" Butch said. "Okay," Jimmy said. Then they walked away.
"Hey Jimmy, I would love to come too," Betty said. Jimmy smiled. "Yes, betty, I will invite you too," he said. "Thank you, Jimmy," she said. Then she went away. The next day Jimmy brought in invitations for those who said they wanted to come. Jimmy gave them their invitations, and they said thank you. Jimmy was happy. No one had ever wanted to come to his parties like this before, but they were being nice to him now since he was going to be a big brother. He couldn't wait for March 14th to come.
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That's it. Enjoy.
Thanks Gretchen
P.S. I'll be back on Tuesday from the beach.
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"Are you a dentist?"-Toki Wartooth, Metalocalypse that'a show on Adult Swim.
I'm writing this from my lap top in my house at the beach that we're staying in.
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It was March 10th, four days before Jimmy's birthday. He was getting ready to celebrate his eleventh birthday. He wanted to invite Sheen and Carl of course. He would invite Libby, too. And since Cindy had been being so nice to him lately, he would invite her too. He went into school the next day with an invitation. He had given one to Sheen and Carl since he walks with them to school. Libby had got hers too. All he had to do was invite Cindy. "Umm, Cindy, would you like to come to my party?" he asked her. "Of course, Jimmy." she said. "Here's your invitation," he told her. He gave her it. Then he walked away. Cindy couldn't believe it. Jimmy had invited her to his party, now she could spend even more time with him.
Jimmy, meanwhile had been going to homeroom, when Butch and Brittany, and Nick came up to him. "Hey Neutron, you should invite the Nickster. You're cool now, since you are having twin sisters. Invite me." Nick said. "And me Neutron, or I'll beat you up till you give me one." Butch said. "And you have to like invite me. I like have to come like too." Brittany said. All these people wanted Jimmy to invite them to his party, but he didn't have any invitations for them. "Umm, guys. I don't have any invitations for you," he said.
They all looked at him. "Well, give us some tomorrow, okay?" Butch said. "Okay," Jimmy said. Then they walked away.
"Hey Jimmy, I would love to come too," Betty said. Jimmy smiled. "Yes, betty, I will invite you too," he said. "Thank you, Jimmy," she said. Then she went away. The next day Jimmy brought in invitations for those who said they wanted to come. Jimmy gave them their invitations, and they said thank you. Jimmy was happy. No one had ever wanted to come to his parties like this before, but they were being nice to him now since he was going to be a big brother. He couldn't wait for March 14th to come.
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That's it. Enjoy.
Thanks Gretchen
P.S. I'll be back on Tuesday from the beach.
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"Are you a dentist?"-Toki Wartooth, Metalocalypse that'a show on Adult Swim.
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Posted 03 August 2008 - 04:04 PM
Wow Gretchen
That was a great chapter!
I really enjoyed that.
I wonder how his party will turn out.
And yay the babies will be here soon.
ToKi
That was a great chapter!
I really enjoyed that.
I wonder how his party will turn out.
And yay the babies will be here soon.
ToKi
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Posted 05 August 2008 - 10:26 PM
Hey, Gretchen!
Nice chapter! :D That's so cute that Jimmy's getting all this attention. I hope his party goes well.
Please post the next chapter soon so we can see how his party goes...and read about his new sisters, of course! ^_^
~Rachel~
Nice chapter! :D That's so cute that Jimmy's getting all this attention. I hope his party goes well.
Please post the next chapter soon so we can see how his party goes...and read about his new sisters, of course! ^_^
~Rachel~
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