We're Curious (Black and White)!
#201
Posted 18 January 2009 - 07:07 PM
You did a great job with this story.
I'm so glad you finally finished it. It had such a sweet ending.
It's nice that Cindy and Jamal stayed friends.
:bff:
#202
Posted 18 January 2009 - 10:00 PM
Keep it up! :rock: :bff:
#203
Posted 18 January 2009 - 11:29 PM
#204
Posted 19 January 2009 - 12:11 AM
thanks, PIg ^_^
#205
Posted 19 January 2009 - 12:14 AM
Really, you did.
#206
Posted 19 January 2009 - 12:15 AM
#207
Posted 19 January 2009 - 12:17 AM
#208
Posted 19 January 2009 - 02:31 AM
I loved reading this story! ^_^
^Kaytron^ :ph43r:
#209
Posted 19 January 2009 - 06:23 PM
#210
Posted 19 January 2009 - 06:33 PM
#211
Posted 19 January 2009 - 10:05 PM
#212
Posted 20 January 2009 - 09:58 PM
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#213
Posted 21 January 2009 - 04:17 AM
#214
Posted 28 January 2009 - 06:32 AM
OK, I finally sat down and read the whole story. I have to give you serious props for tackling this subject in a fanfic. You did a really nice job of showing the disparities between the two socioeconomic/racial neighborhoods. I get the feeling that a lot of people would consider this fanfic to be politically incorrect - but hey, stereotypes exist for a reason. The controversy contained in the fic just gives it an added dimension, in my opinion.
I appreciated the metaphor with the apple and the orange, and the fact that Cindy and Libby still FELT like themselves on the inside, despite how other people's perceptions of them changed. Oh, and I also REALLY liked the concept of Jimmy's appearance transformer being used in the witness protection program. Nice tie-in to real life! ^_^
The blood transfusion took the idea of becoming someone else to a nice literal end, and it hearkens back to the days when racist donors/recipients would try to make sure that they were only giving/getting blood from their own race. I appreciated that historical reference. ^_^ The beginning chapters are fabulous - the J/C at the end felt a little forced, but hey, I'm not knockin' it :P
Nice job all around, this was a very enjoyable fic!
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#215
Posted 28 January 2009 - 11:26 PM
#216
Posted 04 November 2012 - 07:07 AM
Ok, after what seems like forever, I have finally finished the next and the last chapter of this fanfic....and it only took me a few months to get my butt in gear.
So enjoy! Or else!
(jk
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Meanwhile, Libby cautiously pushed open the door to Sheen’s room, where he laid peacefully in-between the pure white sheets.
“Oh, Sheen,” she murmured, coming up to the bed. “You look so calm when you’re sleeping.” She gingerly put her hand on his as tiny tears started to collect at the corners of her eyes. “Why did you do something that stupid? Why did you feel the need to risk your life to prove your love?” A soft laugh came to her lips. “You’ve pretty much established that.” She gently bit her lip as a single tear ran down her cheek. “Don’t do anything like that again, ok?”
I almost cried here. ;(
#217
Posted 07 November 2012 - 09:47 PM
#218
Posted 07 November 2012 - 11:03 PM
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