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Posted 17 September 2007 - 04:22 PM
*bows to ur mad skillz* ALL HAIL SNAZZO! ALL HAIL SNAZZO! XD!
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Hi there!
Aw, thanks for your compliments guys! :bff:
BekBoo20 - Sheen is fun to write. He can say almost anything he wants to.
Loopin - Glad you're liking it. Its fun to write!
Chica - Aw, thanks for stopping bye again Chica! How nice!
Alex - Woot! Woot! I'm glad you're enjoying it and thanks for your kind words.
Tyrik - Hi! Thanks! But hailing me! ^_^ You're going to give me a big head!
And now for another chapter.
-Sorry it took so long, I was kind of busy. As I told Amanda, I didn't even have my computer turned on for two whole days. That's gotta be some kinda record for me.
-I suffered from withdrawl! My hands began to shake and I broke out in a rash.
-(Just kidding.)
In Retroville the Ultrabot picked up several cars from the parking lot, tossed them into the air, and blew them up with its Ultrablaster. Burning debris fell to the ground and the gang scattered.
�Jimmy, do something!� Cindy shouted.
�Maybe we should just surrender,� Carl offered, hiding behind his hands. �I don�t mind hailing every Friday, as long as we finish up before the Wonderful World of Llamas comes on.�
Goddard flew up. �Goddard!� Jimmy said. �Attack! Hit that thing with an Ion Blast!�
A large gun came out of Goddard�s back and fired at the Ultrabot, hitting it in the face. The Ultrabot seemed unfazed.
�Ooo! A robodog!� A nearby Ultrafan said, pointing. �Just like episode 652, the Serious Matter on Sirius Six!�
�That was a great episode!� Sheen said.
The Ultrabot swung its power fist at Goddard and Goddard dodged. A Paralyzer Beam popped out of Goddard and fired. The Ultrabot staggered, then fired a Tachyon Bolt. Goddard dived and the Bolt exploded, shattering windows across downtown. �Be gone, you little canine pest!� the Ultrabot said.
Goddard fired his Quantum Blaster, his Electrobolt, and his Atomic Bazooka but nothing seemed to have any effect. He continued to dodge about the sky. Goddard fired his Nova Flare, his Tickle Beam, his Rainbow Ray, and his Pea Shooter. Suddenly the Ultrabot smacked Goddard and Goddard went flying, crashed through a building, onto a parked car, and bounced along the parking lot.
�Goddard!� Jimmy cried, hurrying up to Goddard. Sheen, Carl, Libby and Cindy crowded in close. Goddard shook the dirt off himself and barked. �Whew!� Jimmy said.
Fighter jets came roaring overhead. �Attention Ultraman,� came General Abercrombie�s voice.
�Ultralord!!� the fans shouted.
�Attention Ultralord,� Abercrombie said as the jets circled around. �You are hereby ordered to stand down and lay down your arms, or else we will fire out laser guided explosive things at you, and believe you me mister, they won�t tickle!�
�Ultralord will never surrender!� the Ultrabot said.
�And neither will Professor Calamitous!� came another voice. �It is you that should surrender General! The U.S. Army is no match for the genius of Professor Calamitous!�
�You leave me no choice Ultralord!� The jets fired a salvo of missiles. Most of them exploded on the Ultrabot�s chest, knocking it back a step, but the Ultrabot grabbed one missile from mid air and flung it at the jets. They shot in all directions but one was hit by a missile. A parachute could be seen descending from the spiraling plane. The plane crashed downtown in a huge fireball.
The remaining nine jets regrouped and dived at the Ultrabot, firing again. Explosions rocked the city. The Ultrabot shot a beam from it�s right elbow and another plane exploded.
�Its got a Electozapper Elbows!� Sheen shouted.
Tanks arrived on the scene and fired. Shells bounced off the Ultrabots armor and exploded all around. Parked cars went up in flames as people ran about in panic. News helicopters descended on the scene while the jets continued their attack. The Ultrabot stepped on one tank, crushing it, and picked up another. It flung the tank up into the air, a dazzling blast came out of its eyes, and the tank disintegrated to ash. It�s crew went tumbling to the ground.
�Wow!� Sheen said. �He�s even got Z-Beam Eyes!�
�Neutron!� Cindy yelled. �That thing is destroying the Army! And Retroville! Do something!�
�Goddard hit it with everything he�s got!� Jimmy said. �I�d shrink the Ultrabot and step on it ��
�You can�t step on Ultralord Jimmy!� Sheen cried.
�But the shrink ray has a defective transmuter!� Jimmy continued. �By the time I replace it Retroville will be destroyed!�
�Well, turn that robot into cheese!� Libby said.
�My cheese ray won�t work on something that large!�
�Maybe you can get your nanobots to delete him Jim,� Carl offered.
�The saucer was destroyed Carl,� Jimmy explained. �And I hope those nanobots never get out again! They�re one of the worst inventions I ever invented!�
�Well have a brain blast for goodness sakes!� Cindy said. �You can�t let Calamitous win!�
�Think. Think. Think!� Jimmy thought. He saw Sheen singing the Ultralord theme song to Liversnap. He saw General Abercrombie saying �He�s too strong, look out!� And then he saw Cindy saying �In your dreams, Oompa Loompa Boy. Cop a squat and watch how real superheroes get it done.��
�Brain Blast!� Jimmy cried. �Who better to defeat a superhero than a superhero?�
�A superhero?� Cindy asked. �Surely you don�t mean �?�
�Yes!� Jimmy said. �Its time for the return of the N-Men!� Jimmy looked at Cindy. �Oh, and don�t call me Shirley.� Cindy gave Jimmy a withering look. �Sorry, I love that movie.�
�To the lab!� Sheen shouted.
That's it! More to come soon.
-I'm pleased to announce my fanfic is finished, on my word processor at least.
-I'll post it all soon. (But I want to wait some time to build up the suspense.)
-In any event, I'm glad to finish it. I felt a little weird posting something that wasn't done. What if I never finished it? But I saw there are many good works in progress here.
Cya!
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Posted 22 September 2007 - 08:01 PM
Ooh, awesome job! ^_^ Ha, the famous quote from "Airplane!". I love it!
I really can't wait to see what happens next! Something tells me something'll go wrong. :P
I really can't wait to see what happens next! Something tells me something'll go wrong. :P
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Posted 24 September 2007 - 10:15 PM
oh yeah, it's N-men time! I can't wait to see how Jimmy does!
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Hi there!
Thanks for the compliments guys.
Chica, Airplane is a fantastic movie. I fell on the floor laughing, and I couldn't resist.
-Says General Abercrombie "Looks like I picked the wrong day to give up amphetamines."
-Just kidding! That's not part of the story! :P
Thanks for the compliment BekBoo20!
I was going to wait until the weekend to post some more, but here I am now getting ready for a shower and bed, so I think I'll post now.
-Maybe more over the weekend, I'm not sure.
In Jimmy’s lab the gang gathered around the Isolation Chamber. “First, to take care of Goddard.” Jimmy opened the Chamber and took out a small disc. “This hasn’t been tested boy, but desperate times call for desperate measures. We’re going to need all the help we can get. Are you ready for an upgrade?”
Goddard hung his head.
“Don’t be like that Goddard, I’m sure its safe.”
Goddard whined.
“Jimmy, is this going to turn Goddard into a rampaging giant robot who is destroying the town again?” Carl asked.
“Yeah, Neutron,” Cindy said. “We’ve already got one giant robot on our hands!”
“That was Timmy’s fault and you know it, Cindy,” Jimmy said.
“I wonder how Timmy is doing?” Cindy asked. “We’ve hardly talked since our last pizza party at the Villain Whose Name Isn’t Shirley’s Pizza Palace.”
“Oh baby,” Carl said, “that liverwurst, kumquat, and schnozberry pizza was delicious!”
Jimmy ignored this and turned back to Goddard. “Come on boy, open up!”
Goddard hesitated, then opened his mouth. Jimmy gave the disc to Goddard and he ate it. A great flash lit up the lab and Goddard sprouted a small metal cape.
“Ladies and Gentlemen, to accompany the N-Men, I give you Super Goddard! After the battle with the Twonkie I wrote some upgrades for his weapons systems. Now Goddard has twenty more weapons; he can do eleven million and twenty-four things! Except clean up after himself, I still haven’t figured that one out.”
Jimmy put his hands behind his back. “Now, as for the N-Men. I had some free time on my hands so I did some genetic engineering on the formulas.”
“You do that in your free time?” Sheen asked.
“The packets will still only last a half hour, I hope its enough time to defeat the Ultrabot,” Jimmy explained “but they’ve been enhanced. Cindy, Special Girl should now be able to shoot heat beams out of her eyes. I don’t know how powerful they’ll be, but you should be able to melt steel.”
“Gee, thanks Jimmy,” Cindy said.
“I considered giving you X-ray vision but I don’t want you X-raying me.”
“Like I would Neutron!”
“Libby, Invisible Sista should be able to generate force bolts now. They are similar to your force fields but for offensive purposes.”
“Cool!” Libby grinned. “I love being invisible but I want to get into the action.”
“Carl, I’ve given you the ability to concentrate the force of your super burps. For example, with some practice, instead of blowing over a Purple Flurp truck you should be able to blow its door off. If you concentrate force on that Ultrabot we just might do some damage.”
“Will do, Jimmy,” Carl said. “It’s a good thing I had Taco Shack breakfast burritos for breakfast. I’ll gobble down the rest of the nitrogen bars too.”
“Sheen, Vibrating Lad should be able to vibrate so fast he’ll be able to move through solid objects. You should especially do this if the Ultrabot aims a blow at you, you’ll pass harmlessly through his fist.”
“Great Jim!” Sheen said. “I hope you didn’t fiddle with my bladder control!”
“Uh, no. I left that alone,” Jimmy said. “As for me, I modified the gene sequence so I should be able to retain my intelligence when I transform into … into … Hm, I never thought of a name for myself.”
“How about Orange Guy?” Carl suggested.
“That’s lame Carl” Sheen said. “I think you should go for the Incredible Bulk!”
“That name sounds familiar,” Cindy said. “How about Megadork?” Cindy and Libby laughed.
“No, I think I’ll just call myself the N-Man.” Jimmy announced.
Sheen gave a shrug. “Its your choice dude.”
“All right then, here’s your packets.”
Cindy looked at hers. “Are you sure you didn’t mix these up like Carl, Jimmy?”
“Hey, I apologized!” Carl protested.
Cindy took a small taste. Then she flew into the air and did a loop to loop. She looked about the lab, spotted a framed picture of Betty Quinlan, and a red beam shot out of her eyes. The picture ignited.
“Hey!” Jimmy protested.
Vox put the fire out with a robotic sprinkler, but the picture was ruined.
“Eh, sorry Jimmy!” Cindy said with a smile. She downed the rest of her packet. “I didn’t mean it, I was just seeing if it worked and it kinda got away from me. I’ll have to practice.”
Everyone else downed their packets.
Libby turned invisible, reappeared, and then held her hands out in front of her. A shimmering bolt like her force field formed in front of her and shot away, knocking over Jimmy’s microscope. “That’s great Jimmy!”
Sheen walked towards the Isolation Chamber, bounced off the wall, and fell to the ground. “Jimmy! It didn’t work!”
“You’ve got to concentrate on it Sheen!”
Sheen tried again. He became a blur, then phased through the wall into the Chamber and back again. “Awesome! Its just like Ultralord’s phantom force!”
Carl looked at one of the cinder block pieces that he had thrown at Sheen when he was learning kung fu. He swallowed, then burped. The brick flew across the room, but it was broken in two. “Jimmy! I did it! And on my very first try!”
“That’s great Carl.”
“Well, I confess, I have been practicing aiming whenever I burp. Its driving my mother crazy.”
Jimmy concentrated, then transformed into a huge orange creature with green hair. “Testing. Testing,” he said to himself. “Energy equals mass times the speed of light squared. The Pythagorean theorem states that in any right triangle, the square of the length of the hypotenuse equals the sum of the squares of the lengths of the two other sides. Great! I’m still a genius! I’m not talking in grunts and monosyllables!”
“Jimmy, should would put on our cool costumes?” Carl asked.
“No time Carl!” Jimmy said. “We’ve only got a half hour. N-Men! And Goddard. To the convention center!”
That's it for now!
-Thanks for reading.
-Snazzo
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Thanks for the compliments guys.
Chica, Airplane is a fantastic movie. I fell on the floor laughing, and I couldn't resist.
-Says General Abercrombie "Looks like I picked the wrong day to give up amphetamines."
-Just kidding! That's not part of the story! :P
Thanks for the compliment BekBoo20!
I was going to wait until the weekend to post some more, but here I am now getting ready for a shower and bed, so I think I'll post now.
-Maybe more over the weekend, I'm not sure.
In Jimmy’s lab the gang gathered around the Isolation Chamber. “First, to take care of Goddard.” Jimmy opened the Chamber and took out a small disc. “This hasn’t been tested boy, but desperate times call for desperate measures. We’re going to need all the help we can get. Are you ready for an upgrade?”
Goddard hung his head.
“Don’t be like that Goddard, I’m sure its safe.”
Goddard whined.
“Jimmy, is this going to turn Goddard into a rampaging giant robot who is destroying the town again?” Carl asked.
“Yeah, Neutron,” Cindy said. “We’ve already got one giant robot on our hands!”
“That was Timmy’s fault and you know it, Cindy,” Jimmy said.
“I wonder how Timmy is doing?” Cindy asked. “We’ve hardly talked since our last pizza party at the Villain Whose Name Isn’t Shirley’s Pizza Palace.”
“Oh baby,” Carl said, “that liverwurst, kumquat, and schnozberry pizza was delicious!”
Jimmy ignored this and turned back to Goddard. “Come on boy, open up!”
Goddard hesitated, then opened his mouth. Jimmy gave the disc to Goddard and he ate it. A great flash lit up the lab and Goddard sprouted a small metal cape.
“Ladies and Gentlemen, to accompany the N-Men, I give you Super Goddard! After the battle with the Twonkie I wrote some upgrades for his weapons systems. Now Goddard has twenty more weapons; he can do eleven million and twenty-four things! Except clean up after himself, I still haven’t figured that one out.”
Jimmy put his hands behind his back. “Now, as for the N-Men. I had some free time on my hands so I did some genetic engineering on the formulas.”
“You do that in your free time?” Sheen asked.
“The packets will still only last a half hour, I hope its enough time to defeat the Ultrabot,” Jimmy explained “but they’ve been enhanced. Cindy, Special Girl should now be able to shoot heat beams out of her eyes. I don’t know how powerful they’ll be, but you should be able to melt steel.”
“Gee, thanks Jimmy,” Cindy said.
“I considered giving you X-ray vision but I don’t want you X-raying me.”
“Like I would Neutron!”
“Libby, Invisible Sista should be able to generate force bolts now. They are similar to your force fields but for offensive purposes.”
“Cool!” Libby grinned. “I love being invisible but I want to get into the action.”
“Carl, I’ve given you the ability to concentrate the force of your super burps. For example, with some practice, instead of blowing over a Purple Flurp truck you should be able to blow its door off. If you concentrate force on that Ultrabot we just might do some damage.”
“Will do, Jimmy,” Carl said. “It’s a good thing I had Taco Shack breakfast burritos for breakfast. I’ll gobble down the rest of the nitrogen bars too.”
“Sheen, Vibrating Lad should be able to vibrate so fast he’ll be able to move through solid objects. You should especially do this if the Ultrabot aims a blow at you, you’ll pass harmlessly through his fist.”
“Great Jim!” Sheen said. “I hope you didn’t fiddle with my bladder control!”
“Uh, no. I left that alone,” Jimmy said. “As for me, I modified the gene sequence so I should be able to retain my intelligence when I transform into … into … Hm, I never thought of a name for myself.”
“How about Orange Guy?” Carl suggested.
“That’s lame Carl” Sheen said. “I think you should go for the Incredible Bulk!”
“That name sounds familiar,” Cindy said. “How about Megadork?” Cindy and Libby laughed.
“No, I think I’ll just call myself the N-Man.” Jimmy announced.
Sheen gave a shrug. “Its your choice dude.”
“All right then, here’s your packets.”
Cindy looked at hers. “Are you sure you didn’t mix these up like Carl, Jimmy?”
“Hey, I apologized!” Carl protested.
Cindy took a small taste. Then she flew into the air and did a loop to loop. She looked about the lab, spotted a framed picture of Betty Quinlan, and a red beam shot out of her eyes. The picture ignited.
“Hey!” Jimmy protested.
Vox put the fire out with a robotic sprinkler, but the picture was ruined.
“Eh, sorry Jimmy!” Cindy said with a smile. She downed the rest of her packet. “I didn’t mean it, I was just seeing if it worked and it kinda got away from me. I’ll have to practice.”
Everyone else downed their packets.
Libby turned invisible, reappeared, and then held her hands out in front of her. A shimmering bolt like her force field formed in front of her and shot away, knocking over Jimmy’s microscope. “That’s great Jimmy!”
Sheen walked towards the Isolation Chamber, bounced off the wall, and fell to the ground. “Jimmy! It didn’t work!”
“You’ve got to concentrate on it Sheen!”
Sheen tried again. He became a blur, then phased through the wall into the Chamber and back again. “Awesome! Its just like Ultralord’s phantom force!”
Carl looked at one of the cinder block pieces that he had thrown at Sheen when he was learning kung fu. He swallowed, then burped. The brick flew across the room, but it was broken in two. “Jimmy! I did it! And on my very first try!”
“That’s great Carl.”
“Well, I confess, I have been practicing aiming whenever I burp. Its driving my mother crazy.”
Jimmy concentrated, then transformed into a huge orange creature with green hair. “Testing. Testing,” he said to himself. “Energy equals mass times the speed of light squared. The Pythagorean theorem states that in any right triangle, the square of the length of the hypotenuse equals the sum of the squares of the lengths of the two other sides. Great! I’m still a genius! I’m not talking in grunts and monosyllables!”
“Jimmy, should would put on our cool costumes?” Carl asked.
“No time Carl!” Jimmy said. “We’ve only got a half hour. N-Men! And Goddard. To the convention center!”
That's it for now!
-Thanks for reading.
-Snazzo
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Posted 28 September 2007 - 08:30 PM
AWESOME!!!!
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Posted 29 September 2007 - 12:52 AM
This is really good! I can't wait to know what happens! I love that they're the N-men again! This is great! Please update ASAP!!! =D
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Posted 30 September 2007 - 03:53 PM
this is so Awsome, it so fantastic, incredible, amazing, and good that I can't find any words to describe it....oh wait, I did! ^_^
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Posted 30 September 2007 - 04:02 PM
Ooh, this is REALLY getting good! :thumbsup: Seriously, GREAT job!!!
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Hi there!
Thanks, as always, for your kind words. Supersnazz!
Glad you're liking it still Tyrik.
Thanks for reading JimmGurll. How nice!
BekBoo20, you're making me Ultrablush! Hee-hee.
Chica, hi once again! Its so nice of you to keep stopping by.
Time for another chapter.
Things were going badly for the U.S. Army. They had lost several tanks and all the planes were down. Smoke rose over Retroville. The Ultrafans were having a great time though.
“Man, this is better than Utlracon 1998, in Yazoo City, Mississippi! Remember that, when the entire cast of season four showed up?”
“That was incredible!”
“How about Ultracon 1995, in Bangkok, Thailand? When first place in the raffle was a guest role in Ultralord Three in 3-D?”
“Ooo! That was fantastic! But you’re right, this is way better!”
General Abercrombie was on the ground now, directing the tanks, his plane having been blown apart by a Pulverizer Ray. He took out a radio and called for reinforcements. Then said “Get me a secure line to the White House. Thank you. … Mister President? General Abercrombie sir. The situation in Retroville is deteriorating. I recommend a tactical nuclear strike, we’ve got to stop this thing. What? Sir, I apologized for launching that missile at Albuquerque, that could have happened to anybody. Besides, its not as if it was Chicago or Los Angeles. Who would miss Albuquerque? What? I know the election’s coming up, that’s why we’ve got to stop this thing.” The general paused. “Yes sir, we’ll keep trying.”
The N-Men arrived. General Abercrombie saw Jimmy. “You?!”
“Call off your troops, General,” Cindy said. “We’re the only ones that can handle this!”
“What?” the general asked. “You told me that last time!”
“And we handled it, didn’t we?” Cindy said.
“All right, I guess I have no choice. Tanks, fall back! He’s all yours N-Men.”
“Thank you general!” Cindy said, saluting. “N-Men, attack!”
Carl and Libby rushed forward, Cindy flew into the air, but Jimmy noticed Sheen hesitating.
“Sheen, what’s the matter?”
“Jimmy, I can’t do it! I can’t force myself to raise my hand against Ultralord.” He shook Jimmy by the shoulders. “It goes against everything I ever stood for!”
“Sheen,” Jimmy said, “its not Ultralord! Its a big robot built by Professor Calamitous! I’m sure the real Ultralord would want you to fight evil.”
Sheen thought about it. “You’re right Jimmy. Love, Valor, Ultralord! That Ultrabot is going to taste the wrath of Vibrating Lad!”
The Ultrafans watched Special Girl fly up and sock the Ultrabot in the jaw. “Who’s that?” one asked.
“Look, it’s the Fearsome Five from episode 573, the Battle for Planet Fentlewoodlewix!” another cried, pointing to the N-Men.
“Are you sure? I don’t recognize that big orange thing at all!”
“Its them I tell you!”
Jimmy took a running jump, soared through the air, and smashed the Ultrabot in the nose with his fist. The Ultrabot said, “Oh, my nose!” and swiped at Jimmy as he fell back to earth, landing on his feet but landing on a parked car, smashing it to bits.
Cindy circled the Ultrabot, then let go a heat beam, hitting the Ultrabot in the jaw again. It didn’t seem to hurt it any.
“Watch out Cindy!” Carl shouted, and burped. Cindy flew away and the concussion blast hit the Ultrabot in the chest, lifting it off the ground. “Argh!” it cried. “That boy’s got some Ultragas!” It aimed a Photon Blast at Carl and Libby rushed to his side, throwing up a force field.
Sheen zipped up the Ultrabot’s feet and began pounding it with his super fast punches. “Aw man,” he said, “I can only hit it’s ankles! What kind of hero attacks someone’s ankles?”
Super Goddard fired his Pulse Gun.
Jimmy hurried up to Sheen, got his finger’s under the Ultrabot’s massive foot, and lifted with a grunt. The Ultrabot teetered, then fell over on a building, showering the street with bricks.
The crowd gasped.
The Ultrabot stood up. “Jimmy Neutron,” came Professor Calamitous’ voice “is that you? There’s something different about you. But I recognize that awful hair anywhere.”
“We’re here to take you down, Calamitous!”
“Give me your best shot, Neutron. This time I won’t fail! I’ve thought of everything! I finished that self help course on the Internet. I’m cured! I can finish everything now! Sentences, inventions, diabolical … diabolical … uh …”
“Schemes?” Carl asked.
“Annoying villainous monologues?” Cindy asked.
“Plans?” Jimmy asked.
“Plans! Plans!” Calamitous said. “Diabolical plans! And this one is my most diabolical yet!” Calamitous laughed.
“I’ve had it with your evil laughter!” Cindy said. She flew away several blocks, then came hurtling back, gathering speed. She plowed into the Ultrabot’s right eye with a tremendous crash. The robot’s head jerked back. “That’s going to leave an Ultra-Black Eye!” the Ultrabot said. It took a swing at Cindy with its huge fist, she dodged, and tried her heat vision again. The Ultrabot fired its Opti-Blast. The two beams met in mid air with a shower of sparks.
Carl burped a second time. Libby sent a force blast into the Ultrabot’s gut. It staggered under the dual assault. Jimmy tore a light pole out of the ground, leapt into the air, and whacked the Ultrabot. The pole broke in half.
“You guys are having all the fun!” Sheen cried.
The Ultrabot hit Cindy with a Neutrino Beam. She lit up a like a firework and then fell to the ground.
“Cindy!” Jimmy yelled and ran to her.
“I’m all right!” she said. “Oh no! My shoes are melted! Those were new shoes! You’ll pay for that, Calamitous!” She flew back into the air and belted the Ultrabot in the mouth.
Libby let go another force bolt. “That’s kinda cool!” she said.
“This is getting me nowhere!” Sheen declared, and zipped away, phasing through buildings. A second later he was at the Candy Bar. “Sam, I need a bottle of your heavy seltzer water!”
“You still owe me a buck eighty from last time, yeah!” Sam said. Sheen zipped around the counter, grabbed a bottle, and took off. “Now that’s three sixty freak boy! Yeah!”
Sheen zipped up to Carl’s side. “Here ya are Carl. Give him the works!”
“You’ve got it!” Carl said, and guzzled down the seltzer water. Sheen super churned him and Carl let out a monstrous belch. The Ultrabot flew into the air, back several blocks, and crashed down in the park, knocking over a couple trees and destroying the fountain.
“That boy’s better than the Belch Beast from episode 879, the Attack of the Giant Horror from Planet Pepto-Bismol!” an Ultrafan exclaimed.
The Ultrabot flew into the air and back to the battle. Jimmy picked the turret of a tank and hurled it at the Ultrabot. The Ultrabot blasted it with it’s Fusion Canon.
“Man! Now I can’t even get it’s ankles!” Sheen complained.
“And its beyond the range of my burps!” Carl said.
“I can still hit it!” Libby cried, and let go another force blast, her most powerful yet. The Ultrabot tumbled through the air.
Super Goddard fired his Megahurtz Beam, hitting the Ultrabot in the arm to no avail.
Cindy flew up with a telephone pole in her hands. She swatted the Ultrabot’s head, the pole splintered to pieces, and the Ultrabot’s head spun around.
“Taste my Destructobelt, you fiends!” the Ultrabot said and a brilliant flash erupted from the Ultrabot’s belt. Retroville lit up like a supernova and Cindy and Goddard plummeted to the ground.
Cindy staggered to her feet. “Neutron! I don’t think this is working! We’re not making a dent in it and our half hour’s running out!”
Goddard flew back into the air, firing his Quantum Laser. Libby let fly another force bolt.
“I can’t believe Calamitous could design anything so powerful!” Jimmy said. “But I have to admit, for a bumbling genius he’s great with robotics. Remember Quentin Smithee? That thing passed for human. That’s something I haven’t achieved yet!”
“And don’t forgot Peggy Tsu,” Sheen said, then sighed and smiled. “I’ll never forget her.”
Jimmy turned to Sheen. “Sheen, you’re an Ultralord expert. Ultralord must have an Achilles’ heel!”
“An Achilles’ heel?” Sheen asked. “He’s got Hyrdraulic Heels and Atomic Ankles, but no Achille’s heel.”
“No, a weakness! Like Kryptonite for Superman!”
Sheen gasped. “Jimmy! Ultralord is invincible! In 1345 episodes he has never once been defeated!”
“We’re doomed!” Carl cried.
“The closest he ever came was in episode 1239, Negalord!” Sheen said. “Doctor Strangeglove used a transdimensional generator to open up a portal with a parallel universe. Another Ultralord came out, an evil Ultralord named Negalord! He even had a goatee! Oh man, was that battle awesome! Ultralord defeated Negalord, of course, but you’re never going to believe this: Negalord broke Ultralord’s arm! Never has he had an injury like that! The Internet was talking about it for months!”
“Another Ultralord?” Jimmy asked. “Sheen! You’re a genius!”
“What?” Sheen asked. “I am? Jimmy, did that Ultrabot smack you in the head?”
“Cindy, do what you can. Sheen and I will be back in a minute.”
“Okay Neutron.”
“Oh, and Cindy …”
“Yes?”
“Please be careful.”
Cindy smiled and flew into the air.
“Sheen, come with me,” Jimmy said.
“Where are we going?”
“Back to the lab!”
That's it for now. Enjoy!
-Almost done. I may be mistaken but I think there's just one chapter to go, but its a long one.
-Can anyone guess what Jimmy is planning on doing back at the lab?
Bye for now!
-Snazzo
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Thanks, as always, for your kind words. Supersnazz!
Glad you're liking it still Tyrik.
Thanks for reading JimmGurll. How nice!
BekBoo20, you're making me Ultrablush! Hee-hee.
Chica, hi once again! Its so nice of you to keep stopping by.
Time for another chapter.
Things were going badly for the U.S. Army. They had lost several tanks and all the planes were down. Smoke rose over Retroville. The Ultrafans were having a great time though.
“Man, this is better than Utlracon 1998, in Yazoo City, Mississippi! Remember that, when the entire cast of season four showed up?”
“That was incredible!”
“How about Ultracon 1995, in Bangkok, Thailand? When first place in the raffle was a guest role in Ultralord Three in 3-D?”
“Ooo! That was fantastic! But you’re right, this is way better!”
General Abercrombie was on the ground now, directing the tanks, his plane having been blown apart by a Pulverizer Ray. He took out a radio and called for reinforcements. Then said “Get me a secure line to the White House. Thank you. … Mister President? General Abercrombie sir. The situation in Retroville is deteriorating. I recommend a tactical nuclear strike, we’ve got to stop this thing. What? Sir, I apologized for launching that missile at Albuquerque, that could have happened to anybody. Besides, its not as if it was Chicago or Los Angeles. Who would miss Albuquerque? What? I know the election’s coming up, that’s why we’ve got to stop this thing.” The general paused. “Yes sir, we’ll keep trying.”
The N-Men arrived. General Abercrombie saw Jimmy. “You?!”
“Call off your troops, General,” Cindy said. “We’re the only ones that can handle this!”
“What?” the general asked. “You told me that last time!”
“And we handled it, didn’t we?” Cindy said.
“All right, I guess I have no choice. Tanks, fall back! He’s all yours N-Men.”
“Thank you general!” Cindy said, saluting. “N-Men, attack!”
Carl and Libby rushed forward, Cindy flew into the air, but Jimmy noticed Sheen hesitating.
“Sheen, what’s the matter?”
“Jimmy, I can’t do it! I can’t force myself to raise my hand against Ultralord.” He shook Jimmy by the shoulders. “It goes against everything I ever stood for!”
“Sheen,” Jimmy said, “its not Ultralord! Its a big robot built by Professor Calamitous! I’m sure the real Ultralord would want you to fight evil.”
Sheen thought about it. “You’re right Jimmy. Love, Valor, Ultralord! That Ultrabot is going to taste the wrath of Vibrating Lad!”
The Ultrafans watched Special Girl fly up and sock the Ultrabot in the jaw. “Who’s that?” one asked.
“Look, it’s the Fearsome Five from episode 573, the Battle for Planet Fentlewoodlewix!” another cried, pointing to the N-Men.
“Are you sure? I don’t recognize that big orange thing at all!”
“Its them I tell you!”
Jimmy took a running jump, soared through the air, and smashed the Ultrabot in the nose with his fist. The Ultrabot said, “Oh, my nose!” and swiped at Jimmy as he fell back to earth, landing on his feet but landing on a parked car, smashing it to bits.
Cindy circled the Ultrabot, then let go a heat beam, hitting the Ultrabot in the jaw again. It didn’t seem to hurt it any.
“Watch out Cindy!” Carl shouted, and burped. Cindy flew away and the concussion blast hit the Ultrabot in the chest, lifting it off the ground. “Argh!” it cried. “That boy’s got some Ultragas!” It aimed a Photon Blast at Carl and Libby rushed to his side, throwing up a force field.
Sheen zipped up the Ultrabot’s feet and began pounding it with his super fast punches. “Aw man,” he said, “I can only hit it’s ankles! What kind of hero attacks someone’s ankles?”
Super Goddard fired his Pulse Gun.
Jimmy hurried up to Sheen, got his finger’s under the Ultrabot’s massive foot, and lifted with a grunt. The Ultrabot teetered, then fell over on a building, showering the street with bricks.
The crowd gasped.
The Ultrabot stood up. “Jimmy Neutron,” came Professor Calamitous’ voice “is that you? There’s something different about you. But I recognize that awful hair anywhere.”
“We’re here to take you down, Calamitous!”
“Give me your best shot, Neutron. This time I won’t fail! I’ve thought of everything! I finished that self help course on the Internet. I’m cured! I can finish everything now! Sentences, inventions, diabolical … diabolical … uh …”
“Schemes?” Carl asked.
“Annoying villainous monologues?” Cindy asked.
“Plans?” Jimmy asked.
“Plans! Plans!” Calamitous said. “Diabolical plans! And this one is my most diabolical yet!” Calamitous laughed.
“I’ve had it with your evil laughter!” Cindy said. She flew away several blocks, then came hurtling back, gathering speed. She plowed into the Ultrabot’s right eye with a tremendous crash. The robot’s head jerked back. “That’s going to leave an Ultra-Black Eye!” the Ultrabot said. It took a swing at Cindy with its huge fist, she dodged, and tried her heat vision again. The Ultrabot fired its Opti-Blast. The two beams met in mid air with a shower of sparks.
Carl burped a second time. Libby sent a force blast into the Ultrabot’s gut. It staggered under the dual assault. Jimmy tore a light pole out of the ground, leapt into the air, and whacked the Ultrabot. The pole broke in half.
“You guys are having all the fun!” Sheen cried.
The Ultrabot hit Cindy with a Neutrino Beam. She lit up a like a firework and then fell to the ground.
“Cindy!” Jimmy yelled and ran to her.
“I’m all right!” she said. “Oh no! My shoes are melted! Those were new shoes! You’ll pay for that, Calamitous!” She flew back into the air and belted the Ultrabot in the mouth.
Libby let go another force bolt. “That’s kinda cool!” she said.
“This is getting me nowhere!” Sheen declared, and zipped away, phasing through buildings. A second later he was at the Candy Bar. “Sam, I need a bottle of your heavy seltzer water!”
“You still owe me a buck eighty from last time, yeah!” Sam said. Sheen zipped around the counter, grabbed a bottle, and took off. “Now that’s three sixty freak boy! Yeah!”
Sheen zipped up to Carl’s side. “Here ya are Carl. Give him the works!”
“You’ve got it!” Carl said, and guzzled down the seltzer water. Sheen super churned him and Carl let out a monstrous belch. The Ultrabot flew into the air, back several blocks, and crashed down in the park, knocking over a couple trees and destroying the fountain.
“That boy’s better than the Belch Beast from episode 879, the Attack of the Giant Horror from Planet Pepto-Bismol!” an Ultrafan exclaimed.
The Ultrabot flew into the air and back to the battle. Jimmy picked the turret of a tank and hurled it at the Ultrabot. The Ultrabot blasted it with it’s Fusion Canon.
“Man! Now I can’t even get it’s ankles!” Sheen complained.
“And its beyond the range of my burps!” Carl said.
“I can still hit it!” Libby cried, and let go another force blast, her most powerful yet. The Ultrabot tumbled through the air.
Super Goddard fired his Megahurtz Beam, hitting the Ultrabot in the arm to no avail.
Cindy flew up with a telephone pole in her hands. She swatted the Ultrabot’s head, the pole splintered to pieces, and the Ultrabot’s head spun around.
“Taste my Destructobelt, you fiends!” the Ultrabot said and a brilliant flash erupted from the Ultrabot’s belt. Retroville lit up like a supernova and Cindy and Goddard plummeted to the ground.
Cindy staggered to her feet. “Neutron! I don’t think this is working! We’re not making a dent in it and our half hour’s running out!”
Goddard flew back into the air, firing his Quantum Laser. Libby let fly another force bolt.
“I can’t believe Calamitous could design anything so powerful!” Jimmy said. “But I have to admit, for a bumbling genius he’s great with robotics. Remember Quentin Smithee? That thing passed for human. That’s something I haven’t achieved yet!”
“And don’t forgot Peggy Tsu,” Sheen said, then sighed and smiled. “I’ll never forget her.”
Jimmy turned to Sheen. “Sheen, you’re an Ultralord expert. Ultralord must have an Achilles’ heel!”
“An Achilles’ heel?” Sheen asked. “He’s got Hyrdraulic Heels and Atomic Ankles, but no Achille’s heel.”
“No, a weakness! Like Kryptonite for Superman!”
Sheen gasped. “Jimmy! Ultralord is invincible! In 1345 episodes he has never once been defeated!”
“We’re doomed!” Carl cried.
“The closest he ever came was in episode 1239, Negalord!” Sheen said. “Doctor Strangeglove used a transdimensional generator to open up a portal with a parallel universe. Another Ultralord came out, an evil Ultralord named Negalord! He even had a goatee! Oh man, was that battle awesome! Ultralord defeated Negalord, of course, but you’re never going to believe this: Negalord broke Ultralord’s arm! Never has he had an injury like that! The Internet was talking about it for months!”
“Another Ultralord?” Jimmy asked. “Sheen! You’re a genius!”
“What?” Sheen asked. “I am? Jimmy, did that Ultrabot smack you in the head?”
“Cindy, do what you can. Sheen and I will be back in a minute.”
“Okay Neutron.”
“Oh, and Cindy …”
“Yes?”
“Please be careful.”
Cindy smiled and flew into the air.
“Sheen, come with me,” Jimmy said.
“Where are we going?”
“Back to the lab!”
That's it for now. Enjoy!
-Almost done. I may be mistaken but I think there's just one chapter to go, but its a long one.
-Can anyone guess what Jimmy is planning on doing back at the lab?
Bye for now!
-Snazzo
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Posted 02 October 2007 - 06:55 AM
WOW that's good. He's glabaly gonna use his wormhole generator! :D
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Posted 03 October 2007 - 12:08 AM
Great job!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: I loved the little J/C-ish part you put in! :dance:
Hmm, I would say that Jimmy's gonna build another Ultralord robot, but that'd take too much time...IDK...
Hmm, I would say that Jimmy's gonna build another Ultralord robot, but that'd take too much time...IDK...
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Posted 03 October 2007 - 01:50 AM
Maybe he's gonna bring Ultralord out of Sheen's video game?
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Hi everybody!
-Thanks for reading.
-Here, if it fits, is the final chapter.
-I hope that doesn't make it too short of a fanfic.
-I see some big ones here, and Mara's is an epic masterpiece.
-Though this is a long chapter.
Hi Alex! Sorry, no generator.
Hi once again Chica! Thanks for coming by yet again. That's so nice of you! :dance:
-I'm very glad you seem to be liking it.
BekBoo20 - Cool Jack Skellington things. I love that movie! Its a masterpiece.
-But: :o :o :o
-YOU should be writing this fanfic. Why? See below!
-I don't know if that means I'm a good author, a bad author, or an obvious one, but there it is:
In the lab Jimmy turned to Sheen and asked �Sheen, do you still carry a copy of Ultralord Verses Robofiend Mega Battle in your pocket?�
�Of course!� Sheen answered and whipped out the CD-ROM.
�Excellent! Put it in the Neutronic Game Pyramid.� Sheen did so and Jimmy sat down at his computer and began to type furiously.
After two minutes Sheen said �Uh, Jimmy, I hate to rush you but we only have a half hour to save the world. What exactly are you doing?�
�Do you remember how I sent you into the video game?�
�Do I? Man, that was awesome! That was one of the most memorable days of my life! Let�s do it again!�
�No time Sheen!� Jimmy said. �I�m reversing the phase inducers and the flux capacitor on the transference pad. I�m going to bring Ultralord out of the video game to help us! If Ultralord can�t beat Ultralord, no one can!�
Sheen�s jaw dropped in amazement and his eye twitched. �Jimmy! You genius! I�ll get to meet TWO Ultralords in one day! Three if you count the Ultrabot!�
�Activate Game Pyramid � now!� Jimmy pushed the enter button, the lights in the lab dimmed, the Game Pyramid glowed, began to smoke, then exploded. When the dust cleared, there stood Ultralord.
�Ultralord!� Sheen gasped.
�Sheen! Don�t faint!� Jimmy said. �We don�t have any smelling salts here!�
�Greetings Sheen!� Ultralord said.
�You know my name?�
�Of course! You helped me defeat Robofiend. Ultralord telepathy! Besides, Jimmy here just called you Sheen.�
�Ultralord,� Jimmy began �I don�t have a lot of time to explain ��
�No need to explain Jimmy!� Ultralord said. �The vile Professor Calamitous is threatening your fair city with a dastardly robotic Ultralord that�s nigh invincible!�
Jimmy looked startled. �How did you know that?�
�Telepathy Jimmy!� Sheen explained. �Ultralord knows everything! Like you, kinda.�
�Come, Battle Buddies, there�s no time to waste!� Ultralord said.
�Sheen,� Jimmy said, �here, take this. My burping cola for Carl. It�ll give him even more power than Sam�s heavy seltzer.�
�You got it Jimmy!�
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Jimmy, Sheen and Ultralord returned to the scene of the battle. Libby was firing force bolts, Goddard was circling the robot�s head firing his Sonic Disrupter, and Carl was burping. Cindy flew down to them.
�Cindy!� Jimmy cried. �What happened?�
Cindy had a black eye. �I was too slow, that�s what happened. The Ultrabot smacked me and I hit a school bus. I�m pretty strong but not invulnerable, apparently. You should have worked on that when you were doing your genetic engineering!�
�Does it hurt?� Jimmy asked.
�Of course it hurts Neutron!� Cindy said. �Where on earth did you get this Ultralord?�
�He�s from my Neutronic Game Cube,� Jimmy said. �I hope he can help us.�
�Greetings, Cindy,� Ultralord said. �I�ll start by helping you. Here, let me use my Ultralord Hands of Healing upon you.� Ultralord touched Cindy�s black eye, his hand glowed blue, and the black eye disappeared.
Cindy touched her eye. �Wow. Thanks, Ultralord.�
The Ultrafans noticed Ultralord too. �Look! Another Ultralord!� one shouted.
�That makes two Ultralords in one day!� another said. �Three if you count that giant one!�
�I haven�t died but I�ve gone to heaven!� a third Ultrafan cried in joy.
�Hey, that�s my line,� Carl said.
�Gather around quickly, Battle Buddies,� Ultralord said. The N-Men, and Goddard, gathered around. Libby threw up a force field around them. �We�ve got to concentrate our powers to bring that Ultrabot down. Hit it in the head with everything you�ve got, all at once. That�s the control center and that�s where Professor Calamitous is hiding. Cindy, use your heat beam and concentrate like you never have before. Libby, the biggest force bolt you can muster. Carl, a super belch. Jimmy, a power punch. Goddard, hit it with everything you�ve got.�
Goddard gave a questioning sort of bark.
�Yes, everything Goddard,� Ultralord said.
�And what am I supposed to do?� Sheen asked. �I can�t even hit it in the ankles, its flying in the air now!�
�Here, Battle Buddy.� Ultralord made a movement with his hand, and pulled a sword from thin air. He handed it to Sheen.
Sheen gasped and took the sword in his trembling hands. Again his eye twitched. �Your Ultrasword?�
�Yes, Sheen,� Ultralord said.
Sheen saluted. �I shall strive to uphold the Ultralord tradition!�
�Sheen, give Carl the burping cola!� Jimmy said. Sheen did so. �Remember, Carl, focus your burp!�
�All right, Battle Buddies, let�s make Professor Calamitous rue the day he decided to mock Ultralord!� Ultralord said.
�I don�t know what �rue� means,� Sheen said �but I�m all for it!�
�N-Men!� Jimmy shouted. �And Goddard. Attack!�
Libby dropped the force field and they sprang into action. Cindy, Goddard, and Ultralord flew into the air. Libby held out her hands in front of her and began to form a gigantic force bolt. Sheen aimed the Ultrasword. Jimmy sprinted down the street so he could get a good running jump. Carl drank down the burping cola.
�What�s this?� the Ultrabot said. �Another Ultralord? I shall dispose of you, vile impostor!�
�You�re the only impostor here, Calamitous!� the real Ultralord said, and let go with his Ultraforce blast. Cindy fired her heat vision, Libby let go her force bolt, and Carl burped. A massive array of weapons came out of Goddard and fired all at once. Jimmy can running down the street, leapt into the air, and drove his fist into the Ultrabot�s skull. Sheen pointed the Ultrasword at the Ultrabot and a green beam of Ultrapower shot upwards.
Carl�s burp sent a shockwave radiating outwards. The cars in the parking lot were blasted into the air and the light poles came tumbling down. The heat of Cindy�s heat vision singed the posters on the convention center�s walls. All of Goddard�s weapons firing at once made the air throb with energy. Jimmy�s blow sounded like a bomb going off. Libby�s force bolt made the ground tremble and the Ultrapower and Ultrablast etched permanent shadows into the ground beneath the Ultrabot.
General Abercrombie was standing in the distance, watching the battle with binoculars. �Great Googly Moogly!� he cried.
The Ultrabot�s head was torn completely off. It shot upwards high into the air. The headless body came falling out of the sky, landing with a huge crash that shook the ground. The head came down seconds later, creating a crater in the pavement.
Goddard, Cindy, and Ultralord landed.
�Is it dead Jimmy?� Carl asked.
They all looked into the smoldering crater. The body nearby seemed quite lifeless.
Goddard barked and lifted up his head, revealing his chest screen. �Power levels critical!� flashed on his screen.
�Goddard firing everything at once almost drained his battery!� Jimmy said. �Go home, boy, and plug yourself in. I�ll see you in a little while.� Goddard barked, his ears began to spin, and he flew off.
After a moment Professor Calamitous came crawling out of the crater, waving a small white flag. His glasses were broken. Ultralord stepped over and lifted him up.
�Let that be a lesson to you, Calamitous,� Ultralord said, �never tamper with the might of Ultralord!�
The Ultrafans erupted into a cheer.
�Wow! Ultralord! That was better than awesome!� Sheen said.
�Defeated again Calamitous,� Jimmy said. At the same time he began to shrink, turning from an abnormally large orange creature into a small boy with an abnormally large head.
�I�ll get you one day, Jimmy Neutron!� Calamitous vowed. �You haven�t heard the last of Professor Finbarr Calamitous! One day I shall rule Retroville! And sometime after that, I�m not too sure how long, it could be a few weeks, maybe a few months, the world!�
General Abercrombie and the remaining tanks approached. �General,� Jimmy said �arrest that mad scientist!�
Ultralord handed Calamitous over to General Abercrombie. �Thank you N-Men!� the general said.
�All in a day�s work for the N-Men,� Carl told him.
The crowd cheered and applauded again. �The N-Men?� an Ultrafan asked. �Who the heck are the N-Men?�
�Man, what an incredible day!� Sheen exclaimed.
�Incredible?� Cindy asked. �You dork! Half of Retroville got destroyed. And I got a black eye besides!�
The cars in the parking lot were strewn about, many of them overturned, most of them with shattered glass. The school bus Cindy had hit sat near, it�s roof crushed. Smoke rose from different parts of the city and fire truck sirens sounded in the distance. Bricks and debris littered the street.
�Retroville is always getting destroyed,� Sheen said. �Jimmy Neutron lives here! Besides, Robofiend has destroyed Ultra City 126 times and it always bounces back the next episode.�
Cindy rolled her eyes.
Some Ultrafans came forward. �Can I have your autograph?� one of them asked. Ultralord signed their books. Then they turned to Carl. �Can I have your autograph too?�
�My autograph?� Carl asked, astounded.
�Yeah! You were awesome dude! That was a fight I�ll never forget! I mean, you actually knocked Ultralord across the city! No one has ever managed to do that!�
Carl signed the book �Carl Wheezer, Burp Boy.� Cindy, Libby, Sheen and Jimmy soon found that their autographs were wanted as well.
�This is so flattering!� Cindy said, blushing.
�You guys clearly aren�t the Fearsome Five,� an Ultrafan said, �but that fight will go down in Ultralord history! I was recording it on my cell phone, I�ve already posted it on Ultralord.com. And I know I�m not the only one! Just wait until we get the news footage from those choppers!�
�Cool,� Sheen said. �That�s my site!�
�Your site?� the fan asked. �You mean, your �UltrafanOne?� The creator of Ultralord.com?�
�He�s got a lot of free time on his hands,� Cindy explained.
�Dude, I�ve gotta shake your hand,� the fan said, and did so. �I�m �Battlerage34.� I spend practically all my online time on Ultralord.com.�
�Oh wow, Battlerage,� Sheen said, �you do some awesome fan art! I�ve got your drawing of the Battle of Wynchester Five as my wallpaper.� Sheen soon found himself surrounded by fans, shaking his hand, taking his picture, and again asking for his autograph.
�Man,� a fan told Sheen �you should have held a seminar at this Ultracon. I would have paid to hear you speak.�
Cindy looked dumbfounded.
�Sheen!� Jimmy said. �You�re famous!�
�Ultralord!� Sheen suddenly said. �What�s happening to you?�
Ultralord was becoming transparent. You could see through him.
�I�m sorry Sheen,� Jimmy explained. �Ultralord is made of unstable photons. He is a video game after all. I knew he wasn�t going to last long, I just hoped he could last long enough to defeat Calamitous.�
�Goodbye, Ultrafans!� Ultralord said as he continued to fade. �Goodbye N-Men! Sheen, my number one fan. Keep fighting the good fight!�
�Goodbye Ultralord!� Sheen said with tears in his eyes. Then Ultralord faded out of existence.
Sheen and the N-Men continued to sign autographs and pose for pictures for a good half hour. The crowd gradually drifted back into the convention center. Then an announcement came over the public address system. �Attention Ultrafans! This has been the most exciting Ultracon ever held! Sadly the light is fading, and with the roof gone, we have no lights. So we�re going to have to close the Con early. We will be having our last event, the raffle, in five minutes.�
�Ooo! The raffle!� Sheen exclaimed. �Let�s go, guys. I feel lucky today!�
�I�ve had enough Ultralord to last a lifetime,� Cindy said. �I don�t want to go back in.�
�Come on Cindy,� Libby said. �The day�s almost over and I know you�ve enjoyed it, except for the black eye. Besides, if you win I�m sure you can sell the prize for big bucks.�
Cindy�s eyes lit up. �I�m in!�
They entered the convention center and joined the crowd in front of the stage. After a few minutes the master of ceremonies came on the stage and the crowd hushed. They pulled up a huge tumbler of names and he reached inside and pulled out a name. �Ladies and Gentlemen and Ultrafans, the winner for third place, a CD signed by all the members of the Mighty Disciples of Ultralord is � Donald �Throatwarbler� Mangrove! Of Bolton, England!�
Everyone applauded, including Sheen, though he was disappointed. Donald Mangrove came onto the stage, shook the hands of the Mighty Disciples of Ultralord, received his prize, paused for a picture, then left.
�And now the second place prize, an autographed framed picture of Ultralord, goes to Sarah Felton of Muncie, Indiana!�
Again everyone applauded. Sarah walked up to the stage. The framed picture was enormous, almost life size, and she had trouble carrying it but she was grinning like the Cheshire Cat. The photographer took her picture and she returned to the crowd.
�Now, Ultrafans, the winner of first prize, an authentic Ultralord mask used in the series from episode one, Ultralord, Defender of the Galaxy, to episode 463, Ultralord and the Case of the Vanishing Mixed-Up Giant Wombats, and worn by Ultralord himself � includes a certificate of authenticity � the winner is � Libby Folfax of Retroville, Texas!�
The crowd applauded while Jimmy and the gang gasped.
�Wow, Libby, congratulations!� Carl said.
Libby looked stunned.
�Just what you always wanted, eh?� Cindy asked, grinning.
Sheen was in awe. Libby made her way through the crowd and up onto the stage. She took the mask into her hands and smiled for the camera. �Put it on!� someone shouted. Libby, like the rest of them, had left her first mask and her Ultracon bag at Jimmy�s lab for safekeeping. She put the mask on, the crowd cheered, and the photographer took another picture.
Libby returned to the gang, wearing her mask.
�Ultrafans,� the announcer said, �that officially concludes this Ultracon! I hope you all had a great time. Until next time, Love, Valor, Ultralord!� The crowd echoed the phrase, and began to disperse, chatting away.
�Man I am never going to forget that Ultracon as long as live!� an Ultrafan said.
�We should hold all our Ultracons in Retroville,� a second said. �If they promise to have great battles and mondo destruction every time!�
Sheen gazed at Libby with longing, moreso than he usually did. Libby smiled at him.
An Ultrafan came up to them. �Hey kid,� he said �I�ll give you a $100 for that mask!�
�A $100?� another fan said. �You cheapskate! I�ll give you a $1000!�
Cindy gasped. �Do it, Libby, do it! Think of how many CDs you could buy with that!�
�Sorry, guys, the mask isn�t for sale for any price,� Libby said.
�Well, it didn�t hurt to try,� the first fan said.
�Good choice, kid,� a third Ultrafan said. �That mask is destined to be a memento well worth keeping.�
�Oh, I�m not going to keep it,� Libby said. She took the mask off and handed it to Sheen. �For you, Sheen.�
Sheen�s hands trembled. Unlike the other plastic masks, this mask was made of purple titanium with genuine silver accents. �Libby!� Sheen said. �Are you serious?�
�Of course I am, Sheen.� Libby said, smiling.
Sheen fell to a knee and kissed Libby�s hand. Cindy rolled her eyes. Sheen stood up and put the mask on. �Didn�t I tell you guys,� he said �when we first came in? Wasn�t this was the most exciting day of our lives!�
�It sure was,� Carl agreed. �To think, complete strangers wanted Burp Boy�s autograph! Wait �til I tell my mom!�
�It was cool being Special Girl again,� Cindy agreed. �Despite the black eye.�
�Enough with the black eye!�
�And I always love it when we kick a bad guy�s butt,� Cindy finished.
�Well I�m just glad we defeated Calamitous!� Jimmy said. �And the new N-Men packets worked so well. There was a chance the genetic formula went wrong and we�d all mutate into mutant three-headed zombies.�
�Now you tell us Neutron!� Cindy said.
�And the most exciting part of all,� Sheen said, �was this is the perfect opportunity to kiss my chicky baby here.� And he kissed Libby on the lips.
�Oh gross!� Carl said.
Cindy gasped. �Libby! Do something!�
�Okay,� Libby said, and gave Sheen a quick kiss back.
Cindy and Jimmy looked at each other, then turned away with their tongues sticking out. �Libby! You�re acting so weird today!� Cindy said again.
�Libby, you�re more exciting than Ultralord ever was,� Sheen told her.
�Thanks, Sheen,� Libby said.
�Except for episode number 879, the season ending cliffhanger, Ultralord and the Malevolent Keith Maniac.� Sheen sighed with the memory of it. �Boy, now that was exciting!�
Libby laughed and put her hand on Sheen�s shoulder. �You need to learn to quit while you�re ahead, Sheen, but that�s still sweet. In a geeky kind of way.�
The End
And there it is!
-I may do a "wrap up" to talk about it a bit, Ultraterror being my first fanfic.
-But not now, I'm too tired.
Hope you ladies and gentlemen liked it.
-And I hope to do some more fanfics soon!
Love, Valor, Ultralord!
-Snazzo
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Posted 06 October 2007 - 06:36 AM
Ooh, GREAT finish!!! Seriously, I REALLY enjoyed reading it (I love action-y stuff) and I completely adored the S/L at the end!!! :wub: EEP!!
You seriously have a gift for writing! ^_^
You seriously have a gift for writing! ^_^
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Posted 06 October 2007 - 12:50 PM
Yes!!! I loved it! Great job!
I knew that was going to happen! Ha! In your faces! :P (JK ;) )
I knew that was going to happen! Ha! In your faces! :P (JK ;) )
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Posted 06 October 2007 - 03:33 PM
Awww. :wub: Very nice fanfic.
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Posted 06 October 2007 - 05:22 PM
Pardon me,wile I faint out of excitement. *ahem* AWESOME-ETH!!!
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Hi there!
Yeah, some more compliments. :dance:
-You guys are too kind.
Aw, I'm already missing writing this. Although I do have another fanfic started, and a third one at Chica and Sunny's site.
Chica, you're great! Thanks for all the compliments.
BekBoo20, alas, I wish I could offer you an Ultraprize for guessing the ending.
:o
-That's awesome!
GirlGenius123, thanks for reading! I'm super glad you liked it.
Tyrik, don't faint! I don't have any Ultralord Smelling Salts on me! :)
Well, the fic is over, but I wanted to say a bit more about it.
-It being my very first fanfic ever. (I'm gonna mail it to Mara and hope she uses it. I may be mistaken but I think she told me she doesn't take them off the Boards, because they're all chopped up and in bad formats.)
I made a lot of In Jokes in my fanfic, and I thought I’d point some out.
-How many did you notice?
The flux capacitor mentioned in Jimmy’s Neutronic Game Pyramid is the main device that allows time travel in the Back to the Future series. (Great movies!)
One of the winners in the raffle, Donald “Throatwarbler” Mangrove, from Bolton, Great Britain, is a Monty Python reference. In the series a skit features a man with a monstrous false nose named Raymond Luxury Yacht. He claims that his name is spelled Raymond Luxury Yacht but really pronounced Throatwarbler Mangrove.
-Bolton itself is a Monty Pythons reference.
-The Fish Slapping Dance is another Monty Python sketch.
-And Keith Maniac is yet another Monty Python sketch.
-(I’m crazy about Monty Python. I know almost every episode by heart.)
The other winner of the raffle is Sarah Felton. Sarah Felton is a character in a comic book I love called Knights of the Dinner Table. Its mostly about four guys, and Sarah, that sit around a table and play a role playing game like Dungeons and Dragons that’s called Hackmaster. It’s hilarious! See your local comic store for Knights.
-Sarah used to live in Muncie, Indiana, btw.
One Ultralord episode, episode 573, the Battle for Planet Fentlewoodlewix, is a reference to a series called the Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy. It’s a work by one Douglas Adams. It’s a fantastic and funny series of books, radio plays, a computer game, a television show, long playing records, and a Hollywood movie.
-Fentlewoodlewix is the name a bunch of people give to prehistoric earth.
Doctor Demento is the host of a great syndicated radio program. He plays comedy routines, novelty records, and wonderful funny songs by artists such as Weird Al Yankovick, Spike Jones, and Tom Leher.
-In fact it was Doctor Demento that gave Weird Al his start. Al sent the good doctor a tape he recorded in his college campus bathroom, because he couldn’t afford a recording studio. The rest is history!
Doctor Stranglove, or How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love Bombing Villains is a play on a Stanley Kubrick film, Doctor Strangelove, or How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Bomb. It’s a very dark but hilarious movie about nuclear war starring Peter Sellers.
“Surely you can’t be serious?”
“Yes, I am serious. And don’t call me Shirley.”
That’s a very funny joke from a very funny movie called Airplane!
-As Chica pointed out. I couldn't resist it.
Oh, and when Ultralord gets hit in the nose and says “Oh, my nose!” that is a rather lame reference to a famous line from the Brady Bunch. Marcia gets hit in the nose with a football and cries “Oh, my nose!” Over and over again.
OK, so some were stretches and kinda lame, but I couldn’t help it.
Just for fun, I wanted to mention that “Great Googly Moogly!” is one of my favorite expressions. It beats swearing any day.
-I’m also fond of “Jumping Jehosophat!” and especially “Holy Schmoly!”
One more thing. One of the hardest bits of this fanfic was all the weapons, Goddard’s and Ultralord’s. I may be mistaken but I don’t think any weapon was used twice. It was a task keeping track of them all.
-And naming them! Plasma Cannon, Z-Beams, Neutrino Beams, Quantum Lasers, Atomic Bazookas. I credit my love of Star Trek. They are always talking some weird science gobeldy gook which makes for good sounding weapons.
And another thing, I hope its not too violent! I was a little worried about that.
-I might get an R rating if Mara posts it, for violence, exaggerated mayhem, and old lady kicking.
-Poor Cindy got a black eye.
-And the Acme Building blew up like the Empire State Building in Independence Day. One could reason that Ultraterror is not on a school day, it probably takes place on a Saturday, so the Acme Building being an office building was empty. No one injured or – worse – killed.
-But then there’s the crushed tanks and downed planes. Would you believe all the soldiers and pilots survived? They ejected from their planes before they went down, and they scrambled out of their burning tanks.
And I reckon that's it. Thanks for reading you guys!
Snazzo
:huh:
Yeah, some more compliments. :dance:
-You guys are too kind.
Aw, I'm already missing writing this. Although I do have another fanfic started, and a third one at Chica and Sunny's site.
Chica, you're great! Thanks for all the compliments.
BekBoo20, alas, I wish I could offer you an Ultraprize for guessing the ending.
:o
-That's awesome!
GirlGenius123, thanks for reading! I'm super glad you liked it.
Tyrik, don't faint! I don't have any Ultralord Smelling Salts on me! :)
Well, the fic is over, but I wanted to say a bit more about it.
-It being my very first fanfic ever. (I'm gonna mail it to Mara and hope she uses it. I may be mistaken but I think she told me she doesn't take them off the Boards, because they're all chopped up and in bad formats.)
I made a lot of In Jokes in my fanfic, and I thought I’d point some out.
-How many did you notice?
The flux capacitor mentioned in Jimmy’s Neutronic Game Pyramid is the main device that allows time travel in the Back to the Future series. (Great movies!)
One of the winners in the raffle, Donald “Throatwarbler” Mangrove, from Bolton, Great Britain, is a Monty Python reference. In the series a skit features a man with a monstrous false nose named Raymond Luxury Yacht. He claims that his name is spelled Raymond Luxury Yacht but really pronounced Throatwarbler Mangrove.
-Bolton itself is a Monty Pythons reference.
-The Fish Slapping Dance is another Monty Python sketch.
-And Keith Maniac is yet another Monty Python sketch.
-(I’m crazy about Monty Python. I know almost every episode by heart.)
The other winner of the raffle is Sarah Felton. Sarah Felton is a character in a comic book I love called Knights of the Dinner Table. Its mostly about four guys, and Sarah, that sit around a table and play a role playing game like Dungeons and Dragons that’s called Hackmaster. It’s hilarious! See your local comic store for Knights.
-Sarah used to live in Muncie, Indiana, btw.
One Ultralord episode, episode 573, the Battle for Planet Fentlewoodlewix, is a reference to a series called the Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy. It’s a work by one Douglas Adams. It’s a fantastic and funny series of books, radio plays, a computer game, a television show, long playing records, and a Hollywood movie.
-Fentlewoodlewix is the name a bunch of people give to prehistoric earth.
Doctor Demento is the host of a great syndicated radio program. He plays comedy routines, novelty records, and wonderful funny songs by artists such as Weird Al Yankovick, Spike Jones, and Tom Leher.
-In fact it was Doctor Demento that gave Weird Al his start. Al sent the good doctor a tape he recorded in his college campus bathroom, because he couldn’t afford a recording studio. The rest is history!
Doctor Stranglove, or How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love Bombing Villains is a play on a Stanley Kubrick film, Doctor Strangelove, or How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Bomb. It’s a very dark but hilarious movie about nuclear war starring Peter Sellers.
“Surely you can’t be serious?”
“Yes, I am serious. And don’t call me Shirley.”
That’s a very funny joke from a very funny movie called Airplane!
-As Chica pointed out. I couldn't resist it.
Oh, and when Ultralord gets hit in the nose and says “Oh, my nose!” that is a rather lame reference to a famous line from the Brady Bunch. Marcia gets hit in the nose with a football and cries “Oh, my nose!” Over and over again.
OK, so some were stretches and kinda lame, but I couldn’t help it.
Just for fun, I wanted to mention that “Great Googly Moogly!” is one of my favorite expressions. It beats swearing any day.
-I’m also fond of “Jumping Jehosophat!” and especially “Holy Schmoly!”
One more thing. One of the hardest bits of this fanfic was all the weapons, Goddard’s and Ultralord’s. I may be mistaken but I don’t think any weapon was used twice. It was a task keeping track of them all.
-And naming them! Plasma Cannon, Z-Beams, Neutrino Beams, Quantum Lasers, Atomic Bazookas. I credit my love of Star Trek. They are always talking some weird science gobeldy gook which makes for good sounding weapons.
And another thing, I hope its not too violent! I was a little worried about that.
-I might get an R rating if Mara posts it, for violence, exaggerated mayhem, and old lady kicking.
-Poor Cindy got a black eye.
-And the Acme Building blew up like the Empire State Building in Independence Day. One could reason that Ultraterror is not on a school day, it probably takes place on a Saturday, so the Acme Building being an office building was empty. No one injured or – worse – killed.
-But then there’s the crushed tanks and downed planes. Would you believe all the soldiers and pilots survived? They ejected from their planes before they went down, and they scrambled out of their burning tanks.
And I reckon that's it. Thanks for reading you guys!
Snazzo
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