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#41 sunnstar

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Posted 09 July 2007 - 12:04 AM

I hope by worst you mean scariest and not most badly written. Cuz if not that would be so mean *sniff*

It's not going to be scary bad, just funny-annoying-makes-you-want-to-laugh/kill-me. Like me. :)

Just wondering, do you have this topic on email alert? if not, how do you reply so fast?!?

I'd love to see your Mad Hatter Cindy. PM it to me?
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Posted 09 July 2007 - 12:08 AM

I meant scariest. xD Um, I do have it on email alert (I have Yahoo, so every time I get a new email this little icon pops up the corner of the screen ^w^). Plus I just type really really fast. Trust me. Every time I type in front of my friends they go "WTF? @_@"

In fact, I was talking to my friend Haley on IM, and she was all like "HOW DO YOU TYPE SO FAST?"

Me: " >_________< "

And yes, I will PM her to you. ^_^

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Posted 09 July 2007 - 12:09 AM

I just found the second chappie. I know I MUST be blind. Well anyways its really good! I really hope to hear the rest!
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Posted 09 July 2007 - 12:11 AM

Cindy_Auora: LOL it's okay, I do that too sometimes. And thanks!

Krista: OMG I feel so special! And I type fast too... my friend Josh is telling me something "so awesome" (boys have very weird opinions of what's awesome) and practically when he hits enter I answer... he's like "you didn't even read it!" and i say "yeah I did!" and he goes "dang you type fast" lol. Half the time I'm already three different topics ahead of him while he's replying to the first one. XD
Dang, getting kicked off again. TTYL! REPLY everyone!
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Posted 09 July 2007 - 12:13 AM

Lawl sent. =D

Don't keep me in anticipation about Chapter 3 or I will personally come hunt you down with an axe. ... :ph43r:

You: UHOKAYTHENNN.

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Posted 09 July 2007 - 01:14 AM

I need the next chapter!!!
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Posted 09 July 2007 - 04:02 AM

:) soon, BekBoo, soon... in the meantime, do you mind if I use a couple of your HP drawings as my avatar?
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Posted 09 July 2007 - 04:16 AM

COOL! LOVE THE FIC SUNNSTAR!!!!
(Woah, that has nothing to do with the last three posts, but WHO CARES?!?!)
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Posted 09 July 2007 - 04:19 AM

Thanks so so much loopin! This is turning into the JN/HP forum or something...
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Posted 09 July 2007 - 05:57 PM

The drawings are not actually mine. I just found them!
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Posted 09 July 2007 - 06:06 PM

BTW Rachel, my commet on nick.com was supposed to come up before your first chapter. Sorry...
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Posted 11 July 2007 - 02:15 AM

OK, so since I haven't gotten a reply in like a day, I figured the only way to get more was to post another chapter (I'm a real light bulb, aren't I?). So here it is! Oh, but before that--feel free to just skip down after this, cuz it's a random bit of trivia--I just thought you'd be interested in the fact that I'm writing the first paragraph of Chapter 9 (the rest of it, and Chapter 10 were made a month and four days ago [they should be "paint a picture with your words" enough for you, Krista ;)]). I'm really excited (seriously, not just saying that... my stomach is like jumping), because after that, I can start writing Chapter 11, the real plot twist. DUN DUN DUN DUN!!! (EDIT:: For the surprisingly large number of people who can't wait for Chapter 11 [which is like, 4], I thought I'd help calm your nerves by saying that Chapter 9 and 10 help "twist the plot." Chapter 11 and 12 are real plot twists, though. At least for me.)

Chapter 3

“Everybody here?” Corki yelled over his sunglasses.
“Everybody but Carl,” Libby informed him.
“Well, where is he? If he’s not here in five minutes he is so fi—”
“Here I am! Here I am,” Carl said, panting.
“What took you so long?” Cindy barked. “I’m ready for my close-up!”
“Sorry, sorry, but I was at the bakery and I couldn’t decide whether to get chocolate, sprinkled, or powdered donuts, so I ended up getting all of them at the last minute,” he apologized.
“What?!” Sheen yelled.
“I know! Why were you getting donuts in the first place?! We have people for that, don’t we?” Corki snapped his fingers. A bald guy wearing a baseball hat appeared out of nowhere with a powdered donut and handed it to Corki.
“Don’t you remember? Yesterday you appointed me official handler of nuts, and I figured <I>do</I>nuts counted!”
The picture fades into a flashback:
“Hi Corki!” Carl said.
“Hello,” Corki said wearily.
“Hi Corki!”
“Um, hello.”
“HI CORKI!”
“What’s wrong with you?”
“Well, I was wondering if there was anything you needed me to do on set, you know, like anything?” Carl smiled hopefully.
“Kid, you’re in the movie,” Corki retorted.
“Oh, please? Please please please please please please PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE—”
“You’re nuts! Now leave me alone, I need to work on my tan.”
“Nuts, right, got it! I’m on it, Corki!” Carl exclaimed, running off.
The picture faded back into reality.
“Sheen, what were you screaming about?” Carl asked.
“You got powdered donuts?” Sheen cried. “How could you?! They’re like white, powdery balls of evil!”
Jimmy shook his head and said “So Corki, I’ve been thinking—”
“Here we go,” Cindy said exasperatedly.
Jimmy glared at her. “And I think it would be best if we get our scripts now, so we can start memorizing our lines.”
“Scripts?” Corki blinked in surprise. “Silly boy, there are no scripts! This is what we in Hollywood call an ‘ad lib film,’ so you’ll just make up your lines.”
“But there’s no such thing as an ad lib—” Cindy began.
“So!” Corki interrupted her. “Are we ready to start filming?”
“Yeah,” all five of them said at the same time.
“Then—”
“Action!” Sheen yelled.
Everyone else looked at him.
“Sorry, just trying to help,” Sheen said, insulted. “Dun, dun dun dun dun dun dun! And, action!”
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Posted 11 July 2007 - 02:44 AM

Oh I like! KEEP WRITING!
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Posted 11 July 2007 - 02:47 AM

Thanks! I will, trust me!
Wow, a reply only 29 minutes after posting, not bad!

HARRY POTTER IN 19 HOURS!!
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Posted 11 July 2007 - 12:36 PM

"You got powdered donuts?” Sheen cried. “How could you?! They’re like balls of white, powdery evil!”

:lol:

Write more!
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Posted 11 July 2007 - 04:03 PM

I've just read chap 2 n 3 and they rock! u rock!! love this fic and can't wait for chapter 11!!!


o:) Andre o:)
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Posted 11 July 2007 - 04:20 PM

LOL thanks guys! and LOL again to Andrea b/c Chapter 11 is like 9 chapters away **mwahahaha** :mad:
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Posted 11 July 2007 - 06:41 PM

One word:




AWESOME!!!!
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Posted 11 July 2007 - 06:59 PM

You really think so? **giggles and blushes** thanks! keep reading guys!

*:)Rachel


JUST SO EVERYONE KNOWS, I EDITED THE LAST CHAPTER'S "RANDOM BIT OF TRIVIA" AT THE END, AND SHEEN'S DONUT LINE A LITTLE BIT. IN CASE YOU CARE.

The big font/red color is mine in this topic. Special news bullatins should be easy to see, so please guys, DON'T use them! thanks!
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Posted 11 July 2007 - 07:32 PM

Ooh, nice writing! I usually have my stories planned out to the dot, but sometimes writing stuff randomly is supah fun and helps me keep my juices flowing. :lol: The images are flowing together a bit more now, and I can tell that you're doing better. Keep up the great chapters, and update soon!

P.S. Did you ever get to read any of my work, or were you too busy? Because that's totally okay if you were... :unsure:

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