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[Hugh]

*begins a victory dance**falls on his face within three seconds because he has two left feet*

Bweeheehee! Reactions are always fun!

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*Smacks Hugh upside the head with a spatula* This battle is not over yet! *Runs upstairs, laughing insanely and opening Hugh's diary*

Oh yes they are. And those said reactions trigger important events. Buahaha. Coughhack.

[Hugh]

Ow. D: *scrambles to his feet and runs after* YOU DON'T WANT TO LOOK IN THAT! Seriously!

Ah, the magix of actions and reactions! Jimbo's told me about how those figure in science once but I fell asleep at around "You see, dad, it works like this--"

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Why not? I mean... *Peeks at diary pages and eyes sizzle* IT BURNSSS! *Drops book onto floor*

XD You need to listen to your child more. I'm sure it would help you gain some IQ points! By the way... I just read the ending of "On the Run." WTF. Saaaaad. Have you read it before? D:

[Hugh]

I TOLD YOU. *snatches it up and hugs it protectively to himself* But did you listen? Noooooo!

And do you really think so? It's so hard to stay awake, or to keep my mind from wandering to magical happy fun time land!

And no, I haven't! *puts lame writing on hold to go read and see if it sparks his interest*

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The running away part is fun. The romance is pretty good. The ending... I wish they would've given a little more information about what happens to the other characters. It's like they went through all that work for NOTHING. Arggh.

[Hugh]

Aw, they kill Goddard in the third chapter. D: And I don't see how Cindy's choice could have such a drastic mental effect on her mom, but then again I never manage to figure out much of anything!

*keeps reading anyway*

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I have no idea, either. *Scratches head*

You know what... I want to consult my readers (meaning you lol) about the direction I should take with heck's Angel. Tell me some things that you would like to see in the story. I'm taking notes. :bunny:

[Hugh]

*points excitedly* Hey, they're STILL ELEVEN in this fic!

And, um... I really don't know! More of minor characters, of course, because they're awesome (I wonder whatever happened to Bolbi. :D) and more Carl, because he's awesome, too! Of course, none of that really fits in with the general and actual story line, but OH WELL. *beams*

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Haha, no, it's cool. There's going to actually be a big part played out by some rather small characters. For example: Principal Whyne, Betty Quinlan, Nick Dean, Sheen, Carl (a LOT more of those two later), and some other characters I can't think of right now. Hee. Bolbi might make an appearance if I feel hyper. :bock:

Anything else? And by that, I mean plot ideas. I've got the basic outline, but nothing small has really come to me yet. Well, maybe a little bit, but those ideas are way further in later chapters. ^^;

And LOL, I know. It's pretty much true to the show's characters, except they get pretty violent. There's some serious gore scenes. Which kind of makes me go "O_o" Especially the chapter with Sheen singing about... well, you'll see. ._.

[Hugh]

Bolbi's good to throw in for comic relief. :D No one understands his potential for hilarity in fanfiction! And wo0t for your ability to stick to characters' personalities. I still can't get over how in-character you wrote Sheen! And gore can be good. Not something I'd put in a Neutron fic, but yours has a perfect setting for it! Geez, I want your skills.

As for plots, well, hmm... Jimbo'll obviously have to overcome a lot of obstacles while trying to make Cindy's life better, but I think it'd be purdy neat to show how he develops and re-befriends everyone he used to know, and the obstacles he has to overcome with them. He'd probably take life on from a different stand point, because he's already experienced it and he knows what death is. I think your fic has a lot of potential for side-plots, if you ask me!

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I try hard to keep characters, well, in-character. Cindy's a little "Promiscious," as Jimmy puts it, but that will change a bit later as they come to know each other a bit more.

Gore= Yes. I can promise you that there will be gore. At what level? I'm still not quite sure. >.> <.< The settings and circumstances will have to be right when I type those segments out, though.

You'd think it'd be neat for Jimmy to meet up with people he already knew? I was actually considering that, hmm.

But, for some reason, when you said that, this is what I invisioned:

Jimmy: *At tombstone*
Friend from past: *Dead*
Jimmy: So... how's it been?

I'm a terrible person. :lol:

[Hugh]

Krista, you humorous evil thing of evil! You made me nearly spray coffee out of my nose when I read that! D:

*gigglesnort* Aaaanyway, I was kinda getting confused with the time! Jimmy died... fifty years ago, and he comes back and everyone's somehow still in their teens, and they're all people he knows but he doesn't know them at the same time and they don't know him but Cindy read about his death and apparently Jimmy died in the 60s-70s which is weird because I was a teenager back then and even though he doesn't remember any of his friends he still remembers his parents and FDJAFKDSJFLKAJFLKA

*facethroughdesk+brainexplosion*

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NOOOO silly. I think you've got the whole story confuzzled. Jimmy died fifty years ago, life moves on (people die, other people are born, etc. etc.). No one knows him because they've never met him. Lawl. His parents and mostly everyone he knew are now dead.

Cindy never met him, she's just read about the murder in the house across her street in old information books and articles at the library, interested why the house was vacant since she was a child.

[Hugh]

Butbutbut Cindy, Carl, Sheen and Libby are the same as ever and even have the same names!

*is probably seriously missing something here*

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This is an AU dahling (alternate universe). Since they're about sixteen right now, that means they were born 1990, save for Sheen that was born in 1989 because he got held back.

Jimmy was born 1940, and died 1956, which makes him sixteen as well. He was reborn into the year of 2006, fifty years later.

Does that clear anything up? xD

[Hugh]

*sits all cramped in a school desk and nods enthusiastically as Krista speaks*

Yes, it does! *raises hand* But I have a question! How could've Jimmy been born in 1940 when I was born in 1930? *points at chapter two*

I'm probably still missing something. D: Oh, well, I can still enjoy the fic, even if I can't understand the time line to save my life! :D

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Because you adopt Jimmy in 1951, when you're twenty-one, and he's eleven. *Krista is BRICK'D because of her confusing timeline*

[Hugh]

Ooooh, okay! I forgot all about the whole adoption thing! Sorry, my mind is more dysfunctional than usual at half past one in the morning, even with overdosage of coffee. </excuses>

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'Tis okay. I've basically got the whoooole timeline set up. =D ... Which included me having to do math. And I hate math. *Glares at evil numbers which laugh and mock me* But now I feel all smart-ical. Woooo! *Shovel'd*

And you die when you're fifty one because of pie overdose. :ph43r: *Avoids hockey stick*

By the way, I've made my mind up about meeting people he used to know. What do you think of Jimmy meeting a ten year old girl named Elizabeth in 1956 before he dies? And then meeting her again? =O