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[Mara=^.^=]

Still hot on a second read through:) masterful work here my friend.

 

Now I have to find a way to excise all the naughty bits because my mom wants to read this friggin thing

 

 

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Katia11]

LOL yeah fair... that would be awkward to have your mother read that. 

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

It would feel awkward for me to read that, too... Just imagining it, um, how do I put this gently...?? It, well, gives me an uneasy feeling... Seriously no offense meant, though, as I may just be jumping to conclusions here... Sorry if I am...

[Mara=^.^=]

It would feel awkward for me to read that, too... Just imagining it, um, how do I put this gently...?? It, well, gives me an uneasy feeling... Seriously no offense meant, though, as I may just be jumping to conclusions here... Sorry if I am...

 

Well, I'm gonna have to write a censored version for my Mom anyway, so you can just read that one when I finish it. 

 

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I'll need to get caught up first...

[Katia11]

*chanting* Do it do it do it

[Mara=^.^=]

If for some reason you're uncomfortable with reading an explicit scene, but you still want to finish the fic, you can read this censored version instead. It contains a steamy makeout and ends with a fade-to-black instead of on-screen sex. I'm putting spoiler tags around the body just to keep it from taking up a ton of room on the topic. 

 

CHAPTER 31: DISARMAMENT (  Version) 

 

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Spoiler

As they entered the bedroom, Tex surreptitiously unfastened her top two buttons, just in case he needed some encouragement.

 

His attention was occupied elsewhere. "Hold this," he said, passing her the lamp.

 

He fished around inside the nightstand until he recovered a skeleton key buried beneath various odds and ends.

 

The trapdoor, she thought. Of course that's what he meant.

 

He dragged the rug out of the way, then crouched and fiddled with the lock; seconds later, it popped open and clanked to the floor. He kicked it aside and lifted the hatch, sending a plume of dust into the air. Tex coughed into her elbow as she gave him back the lamp.

 

"Down?" she confirmed.

 

He nodded. "Watch your step – and shut the door behind you."

 

Together, they descended into darkness. The wooden stairs creaked beneath their feet, and the scent of lanolin and musty paper was so strong that Tex could taste the acrid mixture on her tongue. When they reached the basement floor, he raised his beacon higher to illuminate the room. She glanced around. To her left, she spied vegetables, canned goods, and other root cellar provisions. To her right, a brass armillary sphere glimmered in the lamplight. Beyond it, a floor-to-ceiling bookcase occupied the wall; a cursory inspection revealed titles written in Latin, German, and French.

 

"Do you speak all these languages?" she asked.

 

"I read them all fluently. My spoken French is passable, but I've been told my German accent borders on insulting."

 

"I studied Latin," she said. "You need it for the legal field. And I can haggle in Spanish, Apache, and Chinese."

 

"Tonal languages? Impressive. I'd love to hear that story someday."

 

Tex shifted her attention back to her surroundings. She approached the armillary sphere, frowning as she recalled her first visit to the house.

 

"This can't be everything," she muttered. "Where's the fireplace?"

 

He tapped the side of his head. "Smart," he lauded. "I underestimated you on Monday when I set our wager's terms. I offered hidden knowledge, but I was planning to deceive you. Had you bested me at cards, I would've brought you here, to my decoy antechamber – but it seems the ruse would not have fooled you after all. Observe."

 

He selected a hefty scarlet tome and removed it from the bookshelf; the gold-lettered spine read Vox Populi, Vox Dei. Tucking the volume under his arm, Mr. Neutron slipped his hand into the vacant slot. Tex heard a clicking sound, followed by the scrape of stone on stone. The whole bookcase began to swivel sideways.

 

"A false wall?" Her eyebrows shot up.

 

"What can I say? I have a flair for the dramatic."

 

"A flair for double-dealing, you mean. You really intended to cheat me if I won our Poker match?"

 

"Obviously. Why…did you expect me to play fair?"

 

"No," she admitted. "I would not respect you if you did."

 

"I don't gamble away my secrets. I only share them with the worthy." He returned the book to its slot. "Shall we?"

 

Tex peered into the gloom. "Should I be expecting booby traps?" she asked. "Crates full of snakes…a pit of spikes, perhaps?"

 

"Mmm. Spikes, snakes – the works. You'd best stick close to me."

 

"Very close," she agreed, latching onto his arm.

 

They grinned at each other. Lantern-hand extended, he led her forward into the waiting blackness. The shadows moved as they proceeded, creeping, panther-like, between the furnishings. Tantalizing glimpses beckoned her – here and there, metal objects gleamed like relics in a tomb. Another click, and the chamber sprang to life in a blinding flash of white. She squinted, eyes watering, but her discomfort was short-lived. Tex gazed around in wonder as the bookcase rotated shut.

 

He'd transported her into a different century. The room was spacious, clean, and decidedly industrial, with the futuristic trappings of a World's Fair exhibition. Multiple discrete workstations subdivided the space. Clusters of freestanding shelves showcased a bevy of gadgets, books, and tools. She quickly located the fireplace; inside, a copper boiler crouched on stilts. To her surprise, the hearth was not the source of ambient light – the incandescence came instead from a row of delicate glass spheres mounted on the walls.

 

"Lamps that burn without flame," she marveled. "This is like something out of Jules Verne."

 

He gave a little bow. "Welcome to my laboratory."

 

Tex turned in a slow circle, taking in the sights. "The spheres," she began. "What makes them glow?"

 

"The relentless desert wind. I built an electricity-generating turbine near the gully – you probably mistook it for a windmill. It charges a bank of accumulators, which I use to power the equipment in my lab."

 

"But not the rest of the house?"

 

"Just the telegraph machine. I'm not crazy enough to put electric lights upstairs. I don't want to invite the scrutiny of scientifically-illiterate neighbors. The last time I got cocky with my research, people accused me of consorting with the devil."

 

Still agog, Tex meandered toward the nearest set of furnishings. He set aside the lamp, clasped his hands behind his back, and followed.

 

"My chemistry station," he summarized, as she approached a table covered in beakers, rubber tubes, and looping glassware.

 

"Is this where you concocted your hangover cure?" she asked. A dog-eared notebook labeled Phytochem. Exp. lay propped against a Bunsen burner.

 

"Mm-hmm. And my Crabgrass Accelerator, and my Anti-Aging Tonic. I'm a better engineer than I am a chemist, but my skills are steadily improving."

 

"Crabgrass Accelerator?"

 

"In some parts of the world, it's actually a staple crop. And Carl's llamas love it."

 

"Huh." She studied a row of empty vials. "Could you make inoculations here?"

 

"Invent them, you mean? I'd need more specialized equipment, but in theory, yes. Creating new vaccines is certainly a goal of mine. New medicines, too, if I can manage it."

 

"I want to help you," she said, picking up the notebook. "I'm no mechanician, but pharmacology appeals to me. I'm confident I could contribute if I had the right instruction."

 

He gave her an appraising look. "I'll send away for a lab coat," he said.

 

Tex was underselling her level of experience. Her expertise as an assassin was not limited to firearms and knives; she was skilled in poisons and toxic herbs, and she'd made use of them on more than one occasion. She leafed through the notebook's contents with a discerning eye.

 

"C'mon," he nudged excitedly. "I want to introduce you to more of my creations. There's several here I think you might enjoy."

 

Amused, she snapped the notebook shut. She followed him as he skirted the periphery, striding past a narrow bed, a storage chest, and a door leading to a privy. He tossed his hat onto the cot as they proceeded; it bounced off the mattress and landed on the floor.

 

He keeps a bed in his lab? she mused.

 

He noticed the direction of her gaze. "Sometimes I lock myself down here for days at a time," he shared, with a manic gleam in his eyes.

 

She stooped to peer into a flask with an eyeball floating in it. "That sounds both healthy and normal."

 

Undeterred, he put an arm around her and steered her toward a dinged-up carpenter's table. A hammer, a hacksaw, and a bar clamp were among the tools hanging from the backboard. Various half-finished projects occupied the surface. A cast-iron vise secured a cedar board in place; beneath it, a sprinkling of sawdust speckled the floor.

 

"Straight to the wood-working bench, eh Neutron? Are you tryin' to send me a message?"

 

"You're never going to let that go, are you?" he grumbled. "You'll be subjecting me to puerile innuendo until your dying day."

 

"Beyond my dying day. I shall have an image of a lumber pile engraved upon my tombstone."

 

"Then I shall put a ball-been hammer on mine. I'd prefer it if our gravestones matched, so that everyone might know how we antagonized each other."

 

Tex laughed, and he released her from his grasp. She turned and smiled up at him.

 

"Stop smiling at me," he said. "Turn around, and smile at my invention. I'm trying to show it to you."

 

She looked over at the table. He patted a wooden bucket bristling with knobs.

 

"This is the 'Ice-O-Matic' – my state-of-the-art ice cream machine. My design improves upon the hand-crank models currently in circulation. It's faster, more compact, and less physically demanding to operate."

 

Suddenly, she was all ears. "Ice cream?" she repeated. "How? Where do you source your ice?"

 

"I don't 'source' it; I create it. I built an icemaker to go with my refrigerator. It's over yonder, by the lead-acid batteries."

 

Tex had only eaten ice cream once before, but the experience had left a lasting impression. She immediately started salivating.

 

"I'm going to have ice cream for breakfast," she said.

 

"You most certainly are not. We are going to have oatmeal, like sensible adults. If you eat nothing but sugar, your teeth will rot and fall out of your head."

 

"So? Build a machine to chew my food for me."

 

He tried not to laugh. "We can have some after dinner. Does that mollify you?"

 

Appeased, Tex brightened, and he resumed his exposition. He pushed aside a container full of nails, revealing a lacquered hardwood box. He plucked it from the table and presented it to her.

 

"This is a birthday gift for Sheen. I call it 'The Neutron Camp-In-A-Box' – the perfect companion for the overburdened traveler. Pull the latch like so, and it unpacks into a fully functional campsite, complete with luxurious amenities."

 

"How does all that fit in there?" She squinted at the small dark case.

 

"Vacuum packaging. The problem is getting it back into the box once it's been opened. I'm still working on that part."

 

He set the invention down, and she gazed around the room a second time, reconsidering the gadgets and appliances. She asked the obvious question.

 

"Have you sought patents for any of these things?"

 

"Not exactly. I've considered bringing my ice cream machine and my dishwasher to market, but…"

 

"But what?"

 

Mr. Neutron gazed at the floor. "My creations have a way of hurting people," he said quietly. "It's better if they stay locked away down here, where they can't do any damage."

 

It pained Tex to see the joy drain out of his face. Instinctively, she took his hand in hers.

 

"My dearest Sheriff. There's a world of difference between a dishwasher and a Gatling gun."

 

He mumbled something unintelligible and fidgeted uncomfortably. This is an open wound, she thought. For now, all she could do was administer a salve.

 

She kissed his knuckles, then threaded her fingers through his.

 

"Jeez," he smiled sheepishly. "You're making me look bad. I'm supposed to be the gallant one."

 

Hand in hand, they continued their counter-clockwise promenade. They passed by a whimsical novelty rack, and he entertained her with a self-operating toothbrush, spring-loaded shoes, and a hieroglyphics translator comprised of rotating dials. Afterward, he showed her some designs for budget-conscious indoor plumbing.

 

"Wealthy folks back East have already adopted these conveniences," he told her. "Someday, the cost will come down, and running water will be accessible to everyone. Flush toilets, faucet sinks, and heated bathtubs too."

 

As they reached the far side of the lab, they came upon a grim, imposing shelf. There were no gleaming relics in this collection – every item on display was charred, fractured, melted, or deliberately dismantled. The only flawless piece was a perfume bottle labeled with a bright red skull and crossbones. Beneath it, a dangling placard read CAUTIONARY TALES.

 

"Did you build a shrine for your screw-ups?" she asked.

 

"That's…certainly one way to put it."

 

Tex perused the assemblage, then crouched to take a gander at the bottom rung. She picked up a grinning metal doll balanced on a single wheel.

 

"What's this?" she asked. She turned it over to check for signs of damage.

 

"The product of a lonely child's mind," he replied. "His name's Brotomaton."

 

"Odd name for a simulacrum." She gave the wheel a spin.

 

"The Bro is short for brother. I had no friends or siblings as a youth, so I built a mechanical companion for myself. I keep him here as a memento – and as a reminder of the tacit threat. Secrecy is preferable to ostracism."

 

"Surely you don't think Sheen and Carl would reject you just because you're unconventional."

 

"No. They've seen this place. They accept me as I am, and I'm grateful for it, truly."

 

"Then why do you sound so discontented?"

 

He sighed. "Sheen and Carl may affirm me, even love me, but they do not understand me. In that respect, I am utterly alone."

 

She gently set the automaton down. "I know that loneliness," she imparted.

 

"I want you to understand me," he said earnestly.

 

Tex’s stomach did a flip. Can I give him that? she wondered. Just last night, I thought he meant to kill me – my paranoia poisons everything it touches. I don't want to wind up on this shelf.

 

She did not have long to mull it over. He reached above her head and picked up a colorful, unsettling contraption. It resembled a pistol welded to a dinner plate. Two sinister metal prongs occupied the space where the barrel ought to be; the trigger was missing entirely. She stood.

 

"This," he segued, "is but one branch on the tree of my poor judgment. When I was 18, I became obsessed with the concept of hypnosis – not as a parlor trick, but as a tool for mind control. So I built this. A 'Hypno-Beam'." To demonstrate, he pointed the device at her. "Pull the trigger," he narrated, "and prismatic arc-lights confuse and disorient the target, inducing a trance-like state that leaves them open to suggestion. Or that's the idea, anyhow."

 

Tex hazarded a guess. "Did you test it on your parents?"

 

He winced. "I did. I wanted them to love me," he admitted. "I thought…if I could compel them to give away their wealth, they might come to see things differently. Obviously, my invention didn't function as intended. My father fainted, and my mother developed a weeklong, debilitating headache. Had I tinkered with it more, perhaps I could've gotten it to work, but it occurred to me belatedly that what I was doing was insane. You can't force someone to be a better person."

 

She stared at him. She imagined him standing in that grand and distant house, aiming a psychic flintlock at his mother's face.

 

"Change requires intrinsic, not extrinsic, motivation," he went on. "People can turn over a new leaf, but they have to want it for themselves. Like you." He touched her cheek. He still had his fiendish invention in his hand. "Tex," he said.

 

Suddenly, he was very, very close. From force of habit, the outlaw started to retreat, and he backed her up against a drafting table. She caught herself on the corner.

 

Tex rolled her eyes. "Just kiss me," she told him.

 

He seized her around the waist, and she was more than happy to fling her arms around him. There was no caution to the kiss she gave. Seek the flames, the vestige spoke. Know beauty for an instant. Her breath left her lungs in a rush, and her hat fell to the ground as they fumbled and grabbed at one another. The stock of the Hypno-Beam dug into her back. They bumped into the table, and he pulled away, exhaling suddenly.

 

"Forgive me," he said shakily. He took a step back, one hand on her shoulder. "I'm rushing things. Give me a minute to cool off."

 

Tex battled disappointment. She almost argued with him. Stop, she told herself. You need to be mindful of his comfort. If he wanted to show her his whole damn lab before he kissed her, that was his prerogative. He didn't owe her anything.

 

"Come on," he motioned, returning his invention to the shelf. "There's one more point of interest on the tour."

 

He took her hand again. They approached a workbench located in the very center of the room. Piles of schematics lay heaped on its surface, partially obscuring a sundry array of gadgets and component parts.

 

"My indestructible, all-purpose bench," he related. "This is where I test some of my riskier prototypes." He circled the fixture, running his hand along the edge. "See that varnish? It's water, fire, and scratch resistant."

 

His sleeve was rolled up to the elbow, and she ogled his forearm like a pent-up teenaged Puritan.

 

I'm going to climb him like a tree, she thought.

 

He returned to his starting point. Tex removed her bandolier, then interposed herself between the Sheriff and the table. There was a vacant spot just large enough to sit on, so she hopped up backward and settled onto it. Her legs dangled over the side. She tilted her head and kicked her feet in what she hoped was a fetching manner.

 

"So," she flirted. "Do you want to hear my verdict?"

 

He leaned against the bench. "Let me guess: you're consumed by lust for me on account of my fantastical inventions. Also, you're incredibly impressed."

 

That's not far off, she thought.

 

"Neutron, to say that I'm 'impressed' does not do justice to my partiality. This place is amazing. You're amazing."

 

"Strong praise, coming from you."

 

"It should be. You did more than just fulfill the terms of our agreement. You took the time to teach me things. You challenged me, questioned me. When you saw me hurting, you offered comfort, even though I'd done nothing to deserve it. Do you know how rare that is?"

 

He averted his eyes. "Not as rare as you think."

 

"Not in your world. In mine."

 

"Then it's a good thing you're leaving it behind."

 

Thanks to you, she thought. Tex repositioned so that she could initiate a kiss, but the heel of her hand landed on something narrow and cylindrical. Her wrist rolled backward, and pain lanced up her arm; she looked down reflexively. The glint of metal caught her eye. She brushed aside a folded-up schematic and found rifle ammunition underneath. There was something strange about it – the cartridges were made of standard brass, but the bullets had a malformed, blueish-silver tip. She picked one up and frowned at it, then took a closer look at the schematic.

 

"These are munitions plans," she muttered. "I thought you'd sworn off designing weapons?"

 

He took the paper from her and laid it on the stack. "An unfortunate necessity in my line of work," he said. "But I've found a way to minimize the damage." He picked up a projectile. "These are Piezoelectric Shockrounds, a non-lethal form of ammunition. You can think of them as lightning in a cartridge – they incapacitate a man instead of killing him."

 

"They paralyze?"

 

"Induce unconsciousness," he clarified. He nodded toward a rifle mounted near the fireplace. "I commissioned this batch here for that long gun on the wall, but I've been workshopping another caliber as well. They're still just prototypes, but I can show you if –"

 

He reached toward her holster, then froze, stopping just inches from his misappropriated pistol.

 

"May I?" he murmured.

 

Tex looked down. After a moment's hesitation, she nodded, and he wrapped his fingers around the ivory handle. She watched, spell-bound, as he slowly eased the weapon from its sheath. Reflections danced along the barrel when he brought it up into the light; it was a beautifully-wrought firearm, though perhaps not as striking as hers. Careful not to fix her in its sights, he tipped the barrel toward the ceiling and tugged the latch which kept the cylinder in place. It swiveled open with a click.

 

"Look," he said. He tipped the gun sideways, and six blue-tinged bullets fell into his waiting palm. He held the rounds between them like an offering.

 

Tex was astonished. "This whole time…you had Shockrounds in your gun?"

 

"To be honest, I'm surprised you didn't notice."

 

She shook her head in wonder. "I checked to see if there were bullets in the chamber, but I never took them out, and…the rims look so similar, I never imagined…"

 

He kissed her softly, and the words died on her tongue. Tilting his hand, he let the bullets rain down on the tabletop, and then he set the weapon down and pushed it out of sight. She heard the metal scraping against the surface of the table as he gathered her body against his. Tex slid her fingers into his hair; he smelled of pine and old books, and his stubble added texture to their kisses. Desire melted over her like warm honey.

 

This cannot be real, she thought.

 

After a moment, he pulled away to smile at her, and the sweetness of that gesture was enough to break her heart. To think, she had almost killed this man! It was obscene.

 

"You can take the other one too, if you want," she whispered, and guided his hand to her belt.

 

The lawman's eyes widened, and he looked down. They both stared at it. The Emerald Ire.

 

He spoke. "You mean…"

 

She nodded. He popped the snap on her holster, and Tex's breathing quickened – but not from fear. Carefully, he took hold of the green handle. Her head swam as the revolver left its stronghold; for the first time in ten long years, it was in someone else's grasp. Under someone else's authority. The room felt boundless and hazy, like yesterday's dream. It was what she wanted.

 

He held the gun in front of her, and for an instant, visions of violence and supremacy flashed through her mind. Then they were gone, and he gently placed the body of the pistol against his upturned palm.

 

The Emerald Ire glimmered in the spherelight, and in a surreal moment of concurrence, she saw it through his eyes: an instrument of death, brought before him for analysis…and disassembly. He turned the weapon over, examining both sides, then popped open the cylinder and peered inside. Frowning, he removed a single bullet, squinted at it, and held it up above his head for inspection. Satisfied, he slid it back into the chamber and spun the cylinder shut.

 

He returned the revolver to his palm, and she watched, breathless, as he tilted it back and forth to catch the light. A spray of reflections danced over his face and cartwheeled onto the wall – tiny stars, brought to life for a fraction of a second. A tingling sensation traveled up her spine. The gun was singing, as it always did, but the tune bore no resemblance to a dirge.

 

"It's well-balanced," he remarked, running his fingers along the length of the barrel. "And oiled to perfection."

 

He traced the curve of the trigger guard, then rubbed his thumb over the rear sight and pulled back the hammer. Heat flared to life in Tex's cheeks…and other places.

 

How can a man be so damn indecent without being indecent at all? she wondered. When he gave the cylinder another spin, her imagination spun with it.

 

Tex continued entertaining rakish thoughts while he finished his examination. When he was done, he held the firearm out to her, handle-first, but she shook her head.

 

"Put it with yours," she instructed.

 

He set it down. She kept her gaze on his face. He slid it away.

 

"So you see," she said.

 

He leaned forward and placed one palm on either side of her. He was so close that she could feel his body heat.

 

"You are so compelling," he marveled, as his eyes roved over her face. "One minute, you're like Scylla, or Charybdis, and the next, you go and do something like this. I've never been afraid of you, Vortex, not for a single second – not even when you jammed a gun into my gut. But now, I think I should be."

 

"What will you do with me?" she asked. Her heart was beating rapidly.

 

He reached up with his knuckle and lifted her chin. Tex swallowed nervously as he tilted her head, admiring the different angles of her jaw.

 

"So beautiful," he murmured.

 

He slid his fingers under the left side of her collar, where her bruise was at its lightest. He bent the cloth away from her skin.

 

"Stop me if this hurts you," he said.

 

He bent and kissed her neck. Tex inhaled sharply. The touch of his lips sent a jolt racing through her body. Softness, and warmth, followed by the sandpaper scratch of his stubble. She did not speak, so he kept going, working his way across the most sensitive part of her throat. Her wolf-brain growled, he'll tear it out! A primal thrill coursed through her.

 

When he made it to the other side, he loosened a third button, exposing her décolletage. His lips traveled south. Halfway down, he lit upon her bruise; pain spiked, and her breathing hitched. He did not stop. He gripped her thigh with his palm as he continued trailing kisses down her neck. Her mouth parted slightly.

 

I'm in trouble, she thought.

 

When he reached the bottom, he stopped, hanging in the space between her shoulder and her neck. He shifted upward.

 

"Tex," he whispered, right against her ear. "I want you to spend the night with me."

 

She shivered. His breath was warm on her skin. "All right," she said.

 

"Don't say yes unless you really mean it. You don't owe me sex as payment for my clemency."

 

"You're kind, but I can assure you, I would not let you touch me if I had any reservations."

 

He drew back to look her in the eye. "I need you to know that I don't take this sort of thing lightly. If there are…unplanned consequences, I'll do right by you."

 

"I know. I trust you."

 

There would not be unplanned consequences. Tex refused to abide by the rules of motherhood roulette. Her skill at herbcraft afforded her this option; she always carried a custom Pennyroyal tincture in her coat, just in case she was assaulted. She had no qualms about using it to end a pregnancy, no matter who the father was. She would not, could not, settle for a marriage of obligation. It would hang like a millstone round her neck. She would doubt him always.

 

"Would you prefer to go upstairs?" he asked. "It might be more comfortable for you."

 

"What, and deprive you of your fantasy? You don't want me in the boudoir – you want to seduce me in your secret lair. That's why you brought me down here in the first place."

 

He chuckled self-consciously. "I fear you may understand me a little too well."

 

"Sheriff. You need not repress yourself to cater to my femininity. I'm not some wilting gardenia in need of careful tending. I'm yours for the taking, so take me."

 

"All right," he shrugged. "Say your prayers."

 

Tex laughed. Grinning, he kissed her, and she smiled against his mouth. Now that all their cards were on the table, it was easy to be tender with him. She kissed him slowly, leisurely. She slid her hands up his chest, seeking out all of the places that had been denied to her before. The fabric of his vest was silk-smooth, and cool on the surface. She slipped her hands inside, where it was warm, then drew him closer, deepening the kiss. She turned her head from side to side, gently exploring every angle.

 

"Mmm," he murmured, as she ministered to him. "You are so sweet. So sweet."

 

"I'm not."

 

"You are." His fingertips delicately skimmed her cheek. "You're just out of practice."

 

He took the lead again, sidling near to get a better grip. He ran his hands up and down her sides, and heat radiated down both her legs.

 

"Heh," he snickered.

 

"What? What's so funny?"

 

"Your fixation on dessert," he answered. "You taste like maple candy."

 

He bumped noses with her, smiling, then kissed her again. She melted into it. He moved down to her neck, then lower, and when he reached her collarbone, he slid his palms onto her lower back and pulled her hips against his. Tex saw stars.

 

He kept doing what he was doing, and Tex realized that tonight was going to be even better than expected. It was easy, so easy, to lose herself when she was with him. No regret, no guilt – no past at all. She was not Tex the Tragedy or Tex the Hired Gun. She was not a story.

 

Mr. Neutron buried his fingers in her hair, exhaling warm air into her mouth. She touched his jaw, relishing the prickle of his five o'clock shadow. Elsewhere, his skin was soft – much softer than her calluses. She scooted forward so she could press herself against him. He dipped her back along their mutual center of gravity, and her ponytail grazed the surface of the bench.

 

"God, you are really good at this," she said.

 

"I don't know why. It's not like I've been suave all my life. It just comes naturally with you. You make me feel like I can do anything."

 

"You can," she flirted. "I'll let you."

 

He kissed her again, and this time, there was heat to it. Slowly, the energy between them built. He kissed her lips, then her neck, then her lips again – he dragged his fingers through her hair until her ponytail came loose. He tossed the hairband aside, then took her face in his hands. Over and over he kissed her, like he meant to devour her. One of the bullets rolled off the edge of the table and fell to the ground with a clink.

 

He stopped to take a shaky breath while he looked down at the casing.

 

"Can't get enough of me, can you?" she teased.

 

"No…no I can't." He settled one palm on her bust. "Um, can I –"

 

"Put your hands on me," she commanded.

 

Tex kissed his neck and jaw while he took liberties. While she was down below his chin, he swallowed, and his Adam's apple dipped and rose. She sensed his vulnerability keenly, and it weighed on her. There were so many ways to kill a man, and so very few ways to save one.

 

With a bit of effort, she pushed it from her mind. They went back and forth, carefully testing out each other's boundaries. Her boldness grew quickly – much more quickly than his – but what he lacked in speed, he made up for in intensity. His touch was electric. He courted dissolution until her head felt like it was floating on a string.

 

A strand of hair got caught on her lips, and he brushed it out of the way. "Dear God, I want you," he exhaled.

 

The breathless desperation in his voice made Tex's blood run hot. She looked down at his waist, his hips. It was still too soon for acts of ribald wickedness, but if she played her cards right, perhaps tomorrow night she could convince him to have his way with her right here on the table. She nuzzled him, then tugged his shirt out of his waistband.

 

"More?" he prompted gruffly.

 

"More."

 

He took hold of her shirt and tried to wrest it free, but she was sitting on the hem. Tex listed to starboard.

 

"What in the –?" He bent to examine the snag. "Did you glue your shirt to your pants?" He yanked harder.

 

"Move!" she laughed, pushing him back. She hopped down off the workbench, but she didn't get very far.

 

He grabbed her by the belt. "Come here," he demanded.

 

Tex stumbled into his embrace.

 

He kissed her feverishly, wantonly groping at her hindquarters. She left the ground for a moment, and they turned a partial circle around each other. Her audacity warred with her inhibition as they narrowly avoided collisions with the furnishings. Finally, restraint became impossible, and she placed her palms on his shoulders and drove him toward the wall. He grinned, then tripped over a random book that he'd left lying around.

 

"Quit throwing your shit all over the floor!" she chastised.

 

"I'll throw anything I want, anywhere I want, any time I want," he defied, tugging at her clothes.

 

This time, he managed to get her shirt loose. He ran his hands up the bare skin of her back, and she shoved him up against the wall.

 

"Look at me," she said possessively.

 

He cursed, and she kissed him. Tex was every bit as strong as he was, and far more physically skilled. It was easy to pin him in place; it drove her wild to feel him struggling against her. Her kisses grew rougher as she unclasped his belt.

 

"I'm going to ruin you," she breathed, against his open mouth.

 

He laugh-gasped. She lifted his shirt, exposing his stomach. Tex took her fingers for a walk down main street. She followed the line of wooly hair from his navel to his ceinture, then slipped her hand inside the fabric band.

 

"I wonder how far down this goes," she toyed, leering as he grimaced.

 

"Just take…my damn clothes off…" He couldn't do it himself.

 

Tex stripped off his vest. His badge fell to the earth, pinged once, and pinwheeled under the cot. A smug satisfaction settled over her. Let it stay there forever, she thought. I'll be his new vocation.

 

The outlaw was only distracted for a moment, but that was all he needed. He managed to wriggle out from underneath her, and after a brief scuffle, he reversed their positions. Her back slammed into the wall, and she gasped from the shock of it. Tex did not resist when he leaned his weight against her. After so many years of fending for herself – of fearing the intentions of every man who came within reach – this kind of trust was a powerful intoxicant. She gazed up at him with doe-eyed willingness.

 

The abrupt change in her demeanor gave him a moment's pause. He eased off and let her loop her arms around him, then hiked up her leg and hooked his arm underneath. Once she was positioned to his liking, he returned to his primary directive: dismantling the last of her defenses. He was so warm, so persuasive. He kissed her mouth, her jaw, her throat, her collarbone – she was drowning in him.

 

"I'm surprised you let me corner you like this," he confided. "Let me make it worth your while."

 

She murmured her approval, and he pushed his hips against hers, low and slow. She closed her eyes; her cheeks burned. He whispered to her, but despite the surging heat, she didn't make a sound.

 

"Do you like that?" he asked.

 

Tex dared not open up her mouth, lest she debase herself by telling him the truth: that she longed to be completely at his mercy, now that she had tasted it. To lie there, helpless and eager, while he overpowered her – not because she wanted him to hurt her, but because she was certain that he wouldn't. The fantasy became a kind of torment, sweet, and heady, and electrifying. She winced from discomfort and desire.

 

He abruptly pulled away. "Enough," he directed. "Undress me."

 

Tex staggered as she pushed off the wall. She went to work unbuttoning his shirt, but her efforts were stymied by his simultaneous attempt to remove hers. She gave his knuckles a little slap to make him wait his turn. After tugging his arms free of his sleeves, she tossed the garb on top of its predecessor. Mr. Neutron held still so that she could admire his physique, but Tex was caught up in her other senses – she settled her palms on his pectorals, relishing the goosebumps on his skin.

 

He mistook her silence for disappointment. "I know I'm not much to look at," he acknowledged nervously. "Not like Nick or Sheen. But I've gotten more muscular since I left the city –"

 

Tex grabbed him by the scruff and kissed him hungrily. Her enthusiasm left no room for insecurity. He began to back her toward the bed, then tensed when she started nibbling on his neck.

 

"Wildcat," he muttered, and seized her face again. Tex stared into his eyes; she was so dizzy, the corners of the room were beginning to blur. He kissed her, then softly bit her lower lip. A tiny sound escaped her throat.

 

Fire sparked in his gaze, and Tex saw her future – what he was going to do to her in a matter of mere minutes.

 

Take me apart, she thought. Hurry.

 

He steered her toward the bed while he unfastened her remaining buttons. She helped him with the last one.

 

"Holy shit," he said, when her top finally came off. He gawked at her. The garment slipped between his fingers and fell to the ground.

 

It should have been cute, but Tex was way past that. Flushed and wide-eyed, she pressed herself against him.

 

"Be rough with me," she urged.

 

He flung her onto the mattress. She tried to sit up, but he climbed on top of her and pinned her down. She laughed.

 

"Oooh," she teased, rolling her shoulders, "so obedient. I must have trained you well."

 

"Keep it up, you little minx, and I'll put my clothes back on," he threatened.

 

"You wouldn't dare."

 

He leered at her, then kissed her, and she kicked off her boots and wrapped her legs around him. She could feel his heart beating like a drum. Tex valiantly attempted to linger in the moment – to appreciate the silky slip of skin on skin – but she could not focus, now that she was under him. He propped himself up and slunk backward, kissing his way down her chest and stomach.

 

"I've been thinking about this all evening," he confessed. "Imagining the things I'd do to you if I could get you on your back."

 

Tex squirmed, red-faced, and pushed his head lower. He stopped beside the ugly pockmark on her abdomen, just above her hip – her old bullet wound.

 

"You have so many scars." He gently traced the edges of the mark. "God. How did you survive all this?"

 

She draped one forearm across her eyes. "Why are you still talking?"

 

He bent and kissed the slashmark on her ribs: a bar fight. A broken bottle. He caressed the gouge on her sternum: a knife-wielding stranger in her tent. She'd killed him with the blade he'd used to slice her blouse. The puncture wound near her clavicle: a rain-soaked target, brandishing a screwdriver.

 

Tex flinched. "Don't!" she said. "Don't do that."

 

"Oh," he cringed. "Sorry."

 

"Pretend they're not there. Pretend I'm like any other woman."

 

"Okay."

 

He moved back up to her mouth and kissed her the way she liked – deeply, searchingly – until the tension began to fade from her muscles. He slid his hands down her arms and took hold of her wrists, then pinned them in place on either side of her head. He kissed her throat, the curve of her shoulder, and her bust, slowly growing rougher as he went. She melted back into a puddle.

 

When he returned to her mouth again, his hot breath mixed with her own, and she whimpered almost imperceptibly. It was too much for him. He sat up and fumbled with the buckle on her belt.

 

Be mindful of his comfort, her addled brain advised.

 

Tex's belt went over the side, and he hastily unbuttoned her pants. The bed creaked as he disrobed her. She was in a rush to do the same to him, but he pushed her back down onto the mattress. He kissed her, hard, then buried his face in her neck. A twinge of pain shot out from her bruise. Her hair was everywhere – hopelessly tangled in the pillowcase, the sheets, and between his fingers. She could not see straight.

 

He kneaded her chest, kissing her desperately, and her thoughts shrank until there was only one word left in her vocabulary. More. More of his hands, more of his mouth, more of him. It was the kind of madness that could get a woman killed.

 

She yanked on his belt, and that finally got his attention. He straightened and attempted to remove his trousers, but there simply wasn't enough room for him to maneuver, and awkward blundering ensued. She sat up to watch the show, and he raised his arm to block her view.

 

"Stop rubbernecking," he told her. "I look like an idiot."

 

He yanked his ankle free, and Tex treated him to a round of mock applause. He tossed the rest of his clothes, then half-fell, half-crawled on top of her.

 

"You'll pay for that later," he said.

 

He slipped his hand between her legs, and ran his palm up and down the underside of her bare thigh. She grimaced. Relentless, he continued. He warmed her up with his hand.

 

I'll be damned, she thought. The men are learning. Next, they'll be landing on the moon.

 

His fingers worked their magic, and Tex grew taut and bit her lip. She blushed as one leg bunched itself up in the sheets. On some other night, it might have titillated her completely, but at present, it bordered on intolerable. She ached for him. Her impatience grew.

 

She let her hand drift down towards his stomach, and she gave him a little extra motivation.

 

This strategy produced immediate results. He withdrew his hand and grabbed her wrist. He instructed her in the correct technique, but not for long. The kissing resumed, and he gave her a series of quick little nips. She shivered.

 

"How do you want it?" he proffered. "I'll give it to you any way you like."

 

His tone made her toes curl. How did she want it? No one had ever asked her that before. It took a second for her to answer him.

 

"Do anything you want to me," she decided. "Only tell me that you need me while you do it."

 

He did not offer comment; instead, he filed it away for future use. He went back to kissing her neck, and she clung to him, dizzy with anticipation, as he shifted his position. He pushed her knees apart, and her heart rate soared. Tex draped her forearm across her face again. He rubbed his body against hers, teasing, promising.

 

Despite her eagerness, the darkness she'd invited conjured up old fears. For an instant, she was afraid – afraid that this would all turn out to be a dream, and at daybreak, she would awaken, and find herself alone. She placed her palms on his chest, just to make sure he was real.

 

"Ready?" he prompted.

Tex's head was spinning. "Go ahead," she said. "Make me yours."

He nibbled on her ear. "You're already mine."

Obliteration, she thought. La Petite Mort - the small death. Rapture, and impermanence.

 

She took them for herself.

 

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Tell me what you thought! I personally think the uncensored version is stronger emotionally because it contains Tex's feelings of vulnerability in the aftermath, but everyone has their own level of comfort with adult topics.
 

Did you catch all of the invention cameos? Here's a list! (I specify the name of the original if it's different than the name I gave it in the fanfic)
1) Vox Populi, Vox Dei (Vox – Jimmy's lab security system – first mentioned in Runaway Rocketboy)
2) Crabgrass Accelerator (The Feud)
3) Anti-Aging Tonic (Granny Baby)
4) Neutron Camp-In-A-Box (Aaughh! Wilderness!)
5) Self-operating toothbrush (Brush-O-Matic, the feature film)
6) Spring-loaded shoes (Bouncy Shoes, Fundemonium)
7) Egyptian hieroglyphics translator ('Sandskrit'-to-English Dictionary, Beach Party Mummy)
8) Brotomaton (Brobot, episode of the same name)
9) Hypno-Beam (Hypno-Birthday To You, among others)
 

HISTORICAL SHIT AND BULLSHIT SHIT
 

- Literary references: The Latin term Vox Populi, Vox Dei means 'the voice of the people is the voice of God'. A political treatise by that name was published in 1709, arguing that all humans are equal and that the common folk have the right to choose their own form of government. Jules Verne (1828-1905) was a French novelist, poet, and playwright. He's probably best remembered for his speculative fiction and adventure novels, especially Journey to the Center of the Earth (1864), Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Seas (1870), and Around the World in 80 Days (1873). Scylla and Charybdis appear in Homer's The Odyssey. These two terrifying female monsters sat on opposite sides of a narrow strait, presenting a lethal challenge to passing sailors.
- Fun fact: in the 1800s, lab coats were black, not white. Still Jimmy's fantasy, no doubt. lol. And now, some more fun facts...about real inventions!
- The history of the lightbulb is complicated. There have been so many iterations on the road to commercial viability that it's difficult to figure out who deserves the credit. So let's start at the beginning: in 1802, Humphry Davy invented the first electric light. He called it the 'Electric Arc Lamp', but it burned out quickly, and it was uncomfortably bright. Over the next 7 decades, a flurry of inventors around the globe experimented with incandescent lighting. What follows is a simplified timeline of the final years. 1874: Canadian medical electrician Henry Woodward (and his colleague Matthew Evans) filed a patent for an incandescent lightbulb. 1879: Thomas Edison bought their patent, made some improvements, and figured out a way to market it successfully. 1870-80: Across the pond, British physicist Joseph Swan independently invented and patented his own incandescent bulb. Similarities between Edison and Swan's inventions lead to legal disputes over the patents. 1880: Swan became the first person to illuminate his house with incandescent lighting. 1882: Edison developed a practical electrical distribution system, leading to the opening of the world's first power station in NYC. 1883: Edison and Swan stopped squabbling and joined forces, forming the Edison & Swan United Electric Light Company, or Ediswan.
- The first electricity-producing wind turbine was built in Scotland in 1887 by Professor James Blyth of Anderson's College, Glasgow. He installed the cloth-sailed turbine at his holiday cottage in the countryside. It charged a bank of accumulators developed by the Frenchman Camille Alphonse Faure, which in turn lit the cottage, thus making it the first house in the world to have its electricity supplied by wind power. He was capable of producing more than he needed, so he tried to offer some of it to the nearby townsfolk. They turned him down because electricity was quote "the work of the devil".
- In 1843, Nancy M. Johnson of Philadelphia received the first U.S. patent for a hand-cranked ice cream freezer. Nancy, a housewife-turned-inventor, came up with a design that incorporated ice, rock salt, and a pewter cylinder. Thanks to her machine, ice cream transitioned from an expensive treat reserved for the upper classes to something regular people could enjoy.
- I put an ice cream machine in this chapter specifically so I could talk about the one person who is almost single-handedly responsible for everything you love about ice cream: Agnes Bertha Marshall, an English culinary entrepreneur, inventor, and celebrity chef. She was basically the Gordon Ramsey of her day, if Gordon Ramsey were also a mechanical engineer. Born illegitimate and impoverished, she was the very model of a self-made businesswoman. In 1882, the Married Women's Property Act granted married women (limited) economic rights, and Agnes immediately went and bought the Lavenue Cookery School in Westminster, together with her husband. She changed its name to the Marshall's School of Cookery and turned it into a globally-respected culinary institution that taught high-end English, French, and foreign cuisine. Not long afterward, she created the Marshall's Patent Freezer, which was able to freeze a pint of ice cream in less than five minutes. Her design remains faster and more reliable than many electric ice cream machines today. In 1885, she published the first of four books: dubbed The Book of Ices, her inaugural work included 177 different ice cream and dessert recipes, along with numerous gorgeous illustrations. Her 1894 book, Fancy Ices, further expanded that list. She came up with the concept of ice cream cones, although hers were made out of almond. Before that, commercial ice cream was often sold frozen to metal rods which were licked clean and returned. Her unique flavors and colorful toppings catapulted ice cream into the public imagination, where it remains to this day, even though she herself has largely been forgotten.
- The term 'robot' was coined by Czech writer Karel Capek in his 1920 play, R.U.R. It comes from the Czech word robotnik, meaning 'forced worker'. Since the term did not exist in 1875, I had to rename Brobot – I changed the portmanteau from Bro+(ro)bot to Bro+(au)tomoton.
- Lead-Acid Batteries were invented in 1859 by the French physicist, Gaston Planté. They were the first type of rechargeable battery ever created. Western Union used them to power their telegraph machines.
- The first artificial refrigerator was designed by a Scottish professor named William Cullen in 1755. Cullen used a pump to create a partial vacuum over a container of diethyl ether, which then boiled, absorbing heat from the surrounding air. His refrigerator even created a small amount of ice, but at the time, he could find no practical application for his experiment.
- The 19th century was the beginning of the birth control revolution. The National Museum for Civil War Medicine delves into this topic extensively. In 1800, the U.S. had the highest birth rate in the world: on average, each woman gave birth to eight children. By 1900, that number had fallen to only three children per woman. So, what happened? Well, education happened, for one. Popular books like Fruits of Philosophy (Dr. Charles Knowlton, 1832) and The Book of Nature (James Ashton, 1859) provided frank, medically-accurate information about human reproduction. Another important factor was the growing availability of condoms. Prior to 1840, condoms were far too expensive for most people to afford, but mid-century innovations in the rubber manufacturing process allowed companies like Goodyear to produce them en masse (and hence the term "rubber" was born). Pessaries that blocked the cervix were also popular, as were antiseptic irrigants. Medication abortions and surgical abortions were widely performed; by 1860, 1 in 5 pregnancies ended in an abortion. Emmenagogues like Pennyroyal (which is not native to the U.S., but was introduced early in the colonial period) were administered in pill form or in tinctures and teas. Advertisements for these products were positively everywhere; to shield themselves from obscenity laws, manufacturers used veiled terms like "female pills" or "mother's friend", and promised to "relieve irregularities" for "ladies in a certain situation". These remedies were not regulated, so there was no guarantee of efficacy, and some contained toxic compounds like turpentine, making them potentially lethal. Unfortunately, there's something about politics that attracts men who are obsessed with controlling other people's genitals, and in 1872, Congress passed the Comstock Act, which made it illegal to ship birth control by mail. This created a HUGE barrier to obtaining contraceptives, and left many folks with few options besides coitus interruptus ("pulling out"), which is notoriously unreliable. In time, people found creative ways to get around this law, but the mouth-breathers weren't done with their crusade. Before 1880, abortions were legal in virtually every state up until the time of quickening, but in the 1880s, a massive conservative backlash against women's rights spread across the country, and laws were passed nationwide outlawing abortion. None of these laws stopped the practice, but they did make it more unsafe. This politicization of healthcare kicked off more than a century of medical persecution that continues to the present day.
- Tasers have long dominated the market, but Shockrounds (actual name) were patented in 2006. I've taken some artistic liberties with how they function, because hey, Jimmy is a genius, and I want to have some fun with zappy-zaps.
 

Vocab:
* Lanolin - a waxy grease secreted by the sebaceous glands of wool-bearing animals like sheep. Lanolin and its derivatives were (and are) key ingredient in industrial lubricants, shoe polish, rust-preventive coatings, and other commercial products.
* Armillary Sphere - a model of objects in the sky, consisting of a spherical framework of rings, centered on the Sun. I chose to include this because it's the closest era-appropriate visual equivalent of Jimmy's classic Atom logo.
* Accumulator - a device which accepts energy, stores energy, and releases energy as needed (examples include: rechargeable batteries, mainsprings, capacitors, steam and hydraulic accumulators, etc.)
* Spherelight - the word 'lightbulb' did not enter the lexicon until the mid 1880s, so Tex refers to them as glass spheres.

 

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Katia11]

“He nibbled on her ear. "You're already mine." Obliteration, she thought. La Petite Mort - the small death. Rapture, and impermanence. She took them for herself.” I loved this ending. Gorgeous.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I appreciate that censored version, Mara, thanks... That really means a lot to me; I'll come back to it once I'm finally caught up with the rest of it...

[Katia11]

I hope you know how much I appreciate all the work you are doing on this fic, mara. Like. The art! the time and effort you've put in! just.. Thank you. 

[Mara=^.^=]

I hope you know how much I appreciate all the work you are doing on this fic, mara. Like. The art! the time and effort you've put in! just.. Thank you. 

 

 

 

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Katia11]

And how lucky we are! I eat those chapters up like candy! Gimme 400 and I’d still eat every single one up! (I am not actually saying give me 400) lol

[Mara=^.^=]

This isn't 100% polished yet, but I want to get some feedback before working on the next section. 

 

 

CHAPTER 32: PATH OF RIGHTEOUSNESS

 

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The outlaw woke up in the lawman’s arms.

 

This arrangement was not borne of some grand romantic sentiment. Rather, it was a product of necessity: the bed was too narrow for them to both lie on their backs. If he scooched left, he’d hit the wall. If she moved right, she’d fall off the edge. It was a bit like trying to sleep on a cliff-face. She groaned and rubbed the bleariness from her eyes.

 

When Tex could see again, she found him smiling at her. Not a loving smile – a shit-eating grin.

 

“What are you smirking about,” she mumbled.

 

“Oh, you know. Just enjoying the…subversion of my expectations, is all.”

 

She wriggled toward him. “Enjoy the subversion further to the left. My ass is hanging off the bed.”

 

They did a little shuffle as he attempted to accommodate her. It didn’t help much. She burrowed deeper into the blankets and prepared to doze for a couple minutes more.

 

“I wish you could see how cute you are right now,” he said.

 

She buried her face against his shoulder. “Please don’t be a morning person.”

 

He kissed the side of her head. “Sorry,” he soothed, stroking her hair. “I woke up a while ago. I’ve been doing a bit of soul-searching.”

 

“Keep searching – you won’t find it.” Her voice was muffled. “I never give them back, once I get my hooks into them.”

 

He chuckled. Tex moved closer, and he sat up just enough to let her wiggle underneath him. Once she was comfortable, he laid on top of her, resting his weight on his forearms. Exhilaration chased away her languor.

 

“I was asking myself the deep questions,” he continued. “For instance: when did I become the sort of man who could seduce a hot-blooded assassin onto the path of righteousness?”

 

She slapped the mattress. “You are enjoying this way too much.”

 

“What, I’m not allowed to gloat?”

 

“You are. In moderation. But you’ve exceeded your daily gloat allotment.”

 

“How? It’s only 9am – I’ve barely gotten started!”

 

“I don’t make the rules,” she deadpanned. “Take it up with the committee.”

 

“I’ll give you a ‘daily gloat allotment’,” he muttered, and kissed her.

 

Warm, and soft. Familiar. She wrapped her arms around him, enticed by the silky smoothness of his skin.

 

“How are you feeling?” he asked, more seriously. 

 

“Quite besotted, thank you. Perhaps I ought to start a wall tally of all the times that you impress me. I’ll lose track otherwise.”

 

“As long as it doesn’t resemble the scratchings on a prison wall, I’m in favor of the idea.”

 

“Heh,” she teased. “I make no promises.”

 

She shifted, and her thigh brushed against his body. She smiled at him.

 

“Sooooo,” he prompted, when she started playing with his hair, “do you wanna…you know.” He made a spinning motion with his finger.

 

“Again?”

 

“Is there a daily bang allotment now too?”

 

Tex shoved him. “Get off of me,” she laughed.

 

“I can’t. I’ve contracted psychosomatic paralysis. It’s fast-acting, and incurable. I’m sorry.”

 

“Get off!” She shoved him again, and he went limp as a rag doll. “You asshole!” she shouted.

 

They tussled for a while. She could’ve thrown him clean off the bed if she’d wanted to, but it was more fun to let him win, especially once he started plying her with kisses. Last night was still fresh on her mind, and it did not take much to get her fired up again. She began to reconsider her decision.

 

The man makes a compelling argument, she thought. My compliments to the professor. 

 

He kissed his way down her neck and chest, and Tex laid back to enjoy the sensations. I never want to wake up alone again, she thought. Before she could fully avail herself of his affections, a sound outside the room diverted her attention. It was faint…almost inaudible. A creaking board?

 

Years of self-preservation instinct flared to life in an instant. “What was that?” she whispered.

 

“What was what?”

 

“Shh,” she hissed, clamping a hand over his mouth. “Listen.” Something was wrong.

 

She closed her eyes, shifting focus to her other senses. When she heard the noise a second time, she recognized it: boots – several pairs of them – scuffing on the floor above. A cold dread slithered up her spine. Holding a finger to her lips, Tex slowly inched toward the edge of the bed. She put one toe down, then carefully shifted her weight onto the ball of her foot. The other followed. Staying low, she crept toward the indestructible workbench.

 

Indistinct voices echoed from above. She heard the clinking of a latch, and the creak of hinges.

 

They’ve found the trapdoor, she assessed.

 

She silently lifted the Emerald Ire from the tabletop and ghosted toward the bookcase. The voices were louder now; she could almost make out the words. She held her breath, heart thundering.

 

“…hell is this?” said one of them. A man, on the other side of the false wall.

 

“…looks like a gl….I dunno. And some…foreign shi…”

 

She pressed her ear to the bookcase, both hands on her gun.

 

“....don’t make any sense.” A stranger. The first one. “Why keep this tucked away? There ain’t nothin’ down here worth hidin’.”

 

“He’s a wackadoodle, remember? Don’t fuss about it too much.”

 

A wet cough, and a snorting sound. “The boss ain’t gonna like this. That fat farmer said he’d be here.”

 

“Yeah, if he weren’t out in the desert. Now stop bein’ such a nellie – and get your goddamn gun out of my face, you moron. Let’s check the back porch. Maybe Rick found somethin’ outside.”

 

Immediately, Tex began making calculations. There were at least four men involved in this incursion: a leader, whose whereabouts remained unknown, and a trio of subordinates. She would need to take one of them alive. It was certainly doable, but she couldn’t fight assailants while she was stark naked. She turned to retrieve her clothes, and found Mr. Neutron standing by an open panel in the wall, a blanket wrapped around his waist. He’d deployed a row of periscopes and was busy staring into one of them. He motioned her toward him.

 

“Two men exiting the trapdoor,” he whispered. “Another in the kitchen.”

 

She grabbed her pants off the floor. “Do you recognize any of them?”

 

“No. But they’re heavily armed.”

 

Tex laid a hand on his shoulder. “Neutron. They interrogated Carl.”

 

The lawman looked over at her, eyes wide with horror. He immediately stooped and picked up his trousers.

 

They both got ready in record time. He grabbed his long gun off the wall, and she secured her bandolier in place. She had precious few bullets left, but she kept a knife in each boot, and in a pinch, she could use just about any object as a weapon. Tex was faster, better trained, and more ruthless than any dime-a-dozen cutthroat. She wasn’t going to let them hurt the only man she’d ever cared about.

 

They climbed the stairs as quietly as possible, guns at the ready. The room above was empty, as expected, but Tex did a quick sweep just in case. She nodded to him, and they crept down the hallway leading out of the bedroom. The washroom door was closed, so she left it be. She turned right, securing the parlor, and he poked his head around the corner and peered into the kitchen.

 

He jerked his head sideways. “Outside,” he mouthed. She caught the sound of voices coming from the back porch.

 

They snuck into the pantry and approached the rear exit. She walked backward, ready to cover him if anyone should enter the parlor. Then, all at once, a burst of action: she heard the clank of hinges, and the Sheriff raised his gun and fired. Tex whirled in time to see the intruder crumple to the floor, convulsing as tiny threads of lightning sparked across his body.

 

He’ll live, she thought. Which means I can kill the others.

 

She crouched and fired through the doorway as a second man rushed toward the commotion. The bullet kneecapped him; he fell forward and crashed into the kitchen, dropping his pistol. He reached for it, but she kicked it out of range. Tex crushed the assailant’s hand with her heel, then shot him dead while she was stepping over him. Outside, a third man armed with a machete turned and ran for cover.

 

Tex hopped onto the porch, pulled her knife, and flung it at him. It hit him between the shoulder blades, and he plowed face-first into the dirt. She calmly drew her other knife and started walking toward him; the Sheriff hovered just behind her, scanning for enemies. As she drew near, the injured hitman rolled onto his side and began swinging his machete. She scuffed sand into his eyes, knocked the weapon from his grasp, and then kicked him in the head as hard as she could, over and over and over. He yowled in pain as the explosion of violence rained down on him.

 

Vermin, she stomped. You think you can come here and kill my man? I’ll scrape your brains off the bottom of my boot.

 

Her victim splayed into his back, battered senseless. She crouched and deftly slit his throat.

 

“We need to check the perimeter,” said the Sheriff, gun raised to his shoulder.

 

Tex stood and blew a strand of hair out of her eyes.

 

“Kitchen first,” she told him. “I want to get that pistol.”

 

She retrieved her other knife and picked up the machete. She flicked the blades to remove the blood, then returned them to their sheaths. On their way back to the porch, she pulled two bullets from her bandolier and reloaded her revolver. Her ears were still ringing from the gunshots; she could taste the black powder.

 

“Jesus,” he said.

 

The bodies of the fallen were tangled together in the doorway – one dead, one unconscious. Mr. Neutron grimaced as he side-stepped over them. Once she was inside the pantry, Tex scooped up the attacker’s six-gun. It was the same basic model as her own, with the same caliber ammunition. She opened the chamber and checked inside. Four rounds. A paltry sum, but still better than nothing. She plucked them out and added them to her roster.

 

“How long will he be out?” she asked, nudging the catatonic man with her toe.

 

“A while,” he answered. “He won’t be lucid when he wakes, so we’ll have to wait until he recovers before we can question him.”

 

“We should tie him up now.”

 

“Agreed. Open that drawer there, on the left. There’s rope inside.”

 

Grunting, the Sheriff dragged the man out from underneath his dead compatriot, and a snail-trail of blood smeared across the floor. Tex tossed him the coil. He knelt and bound the thug’s wrists and ankles, then relieved him of a shotgun, a nail-studded club, and a dagger. He searched the dead man too, but found nothing of interest, beyond a pair of knuckle-dusters. He shook his head in dismay at the carnage.

 

She kept a watchful eye on both points of egress. “We still need to clear the washroom and the study. I don’t want to take any chances.”

 

He nodded, looped the leftover rope around his shoulder, and stood. Together, they finished investigating the house. Now that she had space to think, Tex was able to appreciate his level of composure – not everyone could keep a cool head under fire. When he did show fear, he did so on behalf of others. She felt proud to have him by her side.

 

“I’m glad Goddard isn’t here,” he said quietly, as they headed for the front door. “They probably would’ve killed him.”

 

She peered out the entrance. The porch was deserted, but she spied a cloud of dust billowing up the trackway which connected Retro Valley to Marble Orchard. Horses, she thought. She pointed at the distant road.

 

“Riders,” he surmised. “Several, by the looks of it.”

 

Tex frowned. The ‘boss’ must still be out there. How many subordinates did he have at his disposal?

 

“Who are we dealing with, you think?” she asked him. “I doubt it’s my client; he still thinks I’m on the job.”

 

“Who is your client, anyway?”

 

“Eustace Strych.”

 

He goggled at her. “Eustace sent you? That invertebrate?”

 

“I take it you’re familiar.”

 

“Regrettably. But we can hash all that out later – right now, we need to go check on Carl and Elke. If something happened to either of them because of me, I’m never going to be able to forgive myself.”

 

Tex’s mouth pursed into a grim line. She would not offer reassurances.

 

“Let’s do that perimeter check,” she said. “Then we can go.”

 

Three minutes later, they returned to the house. Tex readied the horses while Mr. Neutron went inside to stash the unconscious man somewhere more secure. Once both mounts were saddled, she rummaged through her effects and located two additional knives: a fixed blade Bowie, and a stiletto, thin enough to slip between the ribs. The latter was for mercy kills. She strapped the sheaths to her body, then bounded up the front steps and whistled for him through the door. He appeared, carrying her coat, but his exit was interrupted by a noise coming from the pantry. Blip blip blip, bliiiip bliiiip bliiiip, blip blip blip…

 

He froze mid-step to listen to the telegraph. After a pause, all of the color drained out of his face.

 

“Men…” he faltered. “Men are attacking the town. The sender describes it as…a cavalry.”

 

For a second, the two of them simply stared at each other.

 

“Lab,” he said. Tex was already moving.

 

They sprinted down the stairs into the basement. Once inside, he started shoving anything and everything into a travel bag, and she swept up as many Shockrounds as she could. Most of it was ammunition for his rifle, but she found some pistol rounds mixed in. She took those for herself, along with his revolver. She cursed herself for wasting bullets on target practice.

 

Tex hunted around for anything else she could use as a weapon, and he placed a small red ball into her hand.

 

“It creates smoke, to drive animals from their dens,” he explained. “Flick this latch up and throw it. Do not drop it near you.”

 

She did not bother asking what else was in the bag. They dashed up the stairs again and loaded their gear onto the horses. The dust on the road was beginning to settle. Her pulse thrummed in her ears; her mind floated, like a dandelion seed. Sunlight. A blue and open sky. The thundering of hooves. They rode.

 

As they proceeded up the track, they spotted three horses tied to a cluster of spruce trees. The trespassers must have stashed them yonder before sneaking onto the Neutron homestead. One of the beasts was incredibly distinctive – it was a dark gray stallion with two white patches on its eyes. They resembled spectacles.

 

“Shit.” The Sheriff glanced over his shoulder as they galloped past. “That’s Amber’s horse. This is bad – they must’ve taken her from Sally’s ranch.”

 

He fought to keep the panic from his voice, but Tex wasn’t fooled. Another friend who might be dead, she thought. Her grip tightened on the reins.

 

They spurred the horses on, taking the route that would lead them into town. Nature, it seemed, had come dressed for the occasion – blood-red flowers stained the landscape, conjured by the recent storm, and ruby petals tumbled with the grit beneath their mounts. Painted Ladies fluttered by, seeking out the sweetest nectar, heedless of the tumult on the road. Pinprick lives, and gossamer deaths. Tex envied them.

 

Mr. Neutron slowed to a canter as they approached the Wheezer farmstead.

 

“Carl!” he shouted hoarsely, in the direction of the house. “Elke!” He paused a beat before repeating himself.

 

The wind answered. Llamas capered here and there, unbothered by the ruckus. A ways away, Tex spied Oleander’s straw hat lying in a ditch. She did not point it out. Instead, she directed his attention to a column of smoke rising in the distance. He looked back at the house, then at the smoke, then at the house again. Grief twisted his expression as he wrenched himself away.

 

 “Carl, forgive me,” he despaired.

 

Solemnly, Tex concurred with his judgment – they did not have time to search the property for bodies, or survivors. If they stopped now, others would surely perish. The needs of the many, she reflected, as they galloped off again. She did not envy him his choice.

 

“Dear God,” he said.

 

Up ahead, a roiling black spire climbed into the heavens, illuminated now and then by surging jets of flame. The town was burning.

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HISTORICAL SHIT AND BULLSHIT SHIT

- There's no time for that! Retro Valley is under attack!
 

Vocab:
*Nellie - wimp

 

 

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Katia11]

cracks knuckles

alright. let's DO THIS.

"The outlaw woke up in the lawman’s arms. This arrangement was not borne of some grand romantic sentiment. Rather, it was a product of necessity: the bed was too small for them to lie on their backs. If he scooched left, he’d hit the wall. If she moved right, she’d fall off the edge. It was a bit like trying to sleep on a cliff-face. She groaned and rubbed the bleariness from her eyes." This opening was PERFECT. I loved the blend of humor and honesty so much. And despite the fact that it may have been because of necessity, I still think it's romantic, so there.

"When Tex could see again, she found him smiling at her. Not a loving smile – a shit-eating grin.“What are you smirking about,” she mumbled. “Oh, you know. Just enjoying the…subversion of my expectations, is all.” She wriggled toward him. “Enjoy the subversion further to the left. My ass is hanging off the bed.” THESE TWO. I love them so much. THE BANTER IS CHEF'S KISS.

“I wish you could see how cute you are right now,” he said. She buried her face against his shoulder. “Please don’t be a morning person.” He kissed the side of her head. “Sorry,” he soothed, stroking her hair. “I woke up a while ago. I’ve been doing a bit of soul-searching.” This is SO SOFT. SHUT UP.

“Search away – you won’t find it.” Her voice was muffled. “I never give them back, once I get my hooks into them.” HAHHAHAHA. Okay, this made me grin. She's such a little smart ass. They both are and it's wonderful.

“I was asking myself the deep questions,” he continued. “For instance: when did I become the sort of man who could seduce a hot-blooded assassin onto the path of righteousness?” THIS LINE JUST ABOUT TOOK ME OUT. It was funny and egotistical at the same time.

"She slapped the mattress. “You are enjoying this way too much.” “What, I’m not allowed to gloat?” “You are. In moderation. But you’ve exceeded your daily gloat allotment.”“How? It’s only 9am – I’ve barely gotten started!” “I don’t make the rules,” she deadpanned. “Take it up with the committee.”“I’ll give you a ‘daily gloat allotment’,” he muttered, and kissed her. Warm, and soft. Familiar. She wrapped her arms around him, enticed by the silky smoothness of his skin." This is so lovely, Mara. The familiarity and comfort that she's already finding here just warms my heart. AND THE BANTER? You know I love the banter.

“Quite besotted, thank you. Perhaps I ought to start a wall tally of all the times that you impress me. I’ll lose track otherwise.” This legit made me smile. Like. MY HEART.

“Sooooo,” he prompted, when she started playing with his hair, “do you wanna…you know.” He made a spinning motion with his finger." So SUAVE. *slaps forehead* so dorky and yet, it's endearing?! 

“Again?” “Is there a daily bang allotment now too?” Tex shoved him. “Get off of me,” she laughed. “I can’t. I’ve contracted psychosomatic paralysis. It’s fast-acting, and incurable. I’m sorry.” “Get off!” She shoved him again, and he went limp as a rag doll. “You asshole!” she shouted. They tussled for a while. She could’ve thrown him clean off the bed if she’d wanted to, but it was more fun to let him win, especially once he started plying her with kisses. Last night was still fresh on her mind, and it did not take much to get her fired up again. She began to reconsider her decision. The man makes a compelling argument, she thought. My compliments to the professor." He kissed his way down her neck and chest, and she laid back to enjoy the sensations." THE FLIRTING. THE WRESTLING. THE KISSES. JUST EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS SO SOFT AND WONDERFUL.

"It was faint…almost inaudible. A creaking board? Years of self-preservation instinct flared to life in an instant. “What was that?” she whispered." Uh-oh

“Shh,” she hissed, clamping a hand over his mouth. “Listen.” Something was wrong. She closed her eyes, shifting focus to her other senses. When she heard the noise a second time, she recognized it: boots – several pairs of them – scuffing on the floor above. A cold dread slithered up her spine. Holding a finger to her lips, Tex slowly inched toward the edge of the bed. She put one toe down, then carefully shifted her weight onto the ball of her foot. The other followed. Staying low, she crept toward the indestructible workbench. Indistinct voices echoed from above. She heard the clinking of a latch, and the creak of hinges. They’ve found the trapdoor, she assessed." OH SHIT. SHIT.

"She pressed her ear to the bookcase, both hands on her gun." I KNOW THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE TENSE AND YOU CAN BET I WAS BITING MY NON-EXISTENT NAILS (because I actually do bite my nails) but all I could think was, girl, you realize you are naked, right?

"A wet cough, and a snorting sound. “The boss ain’t gonna like this. That fat farmer said he’d be here.” OH NO. CARL!!!!!!

"She would need to take one of them alive. It was certainly doable, but she couldn’t fight assailants while she was stark naked. She turned to retrieve her clothes, and found Mr. Neutron standing by an open panel in the wall, a blanket wrapped around his waist. He’d deployed a row of periscopes and was busy staring into one of them. He motioned her toward him." Okay, again, the tension was so GOOD but I did have to laugh a little at the image of Neutron standing in a towel. ((Also, can you be more vulnerable than when you are naked?))

"Tex laid a hand on his shoulder. “Neutron. They interrogated Carl.” The lawman looked over at her, eyes wide with horror. He immediately stooped and picked up his trousers. They both got ready in record time. He grabbed his long gun off the wall, and she secured her bandolier in place. She had precious few bullets left, but she kept a knife in each boot, and in a pinch, she could use just about any object as a weapon. Tex was faster, better trained, and more ruthless than any dime-a-dozen cutthroat. She wasn’t going to let them hurt the only man she’d ever cared about." LET'S GO.

"They climbed the stairs as quietly as possible, guns at the ready. The room above was empty, as expected, but Tex did a quick sweep just in case. She nodded to him, and they crept down the hallway leading out of the bedroom. The washroom door was closed, so she left it be. She turned right, securing the parlor, and he poked his head around the corner and peered into the kitchen. He jerked his head sideways. “Outside,” he mouthed. She caught the sound of voices coming from the back porch.They snuck into the pantry and approached the rear exit. She walked backward, ready to cover him if anyone should enter the parlor. Then, all at once, a burst of action: she heard the clank of hinges, and the Sheriff raised his gun and fired. Tex whirled in time to see the intruder crumple to the floor, convulsing as tiny threads of lightning sparked across his body. He’ll live, she thought. Which means I can kill the others." The way you built up this section was just delicious. I was on the edge of my seat! Also. HOT ASSASSIN IS HERE AND I AM HERE FOR IT.

"She crouched and fired through the doorway as a second man rushed toward the commotion. The bullet kneecapped him; he fell forward and crashed into the kitchen, dropping his pistol. He reached for it, but she kicked it out of range. Tex crushed the assailant’s hand with her heel, then shot him dead while she was stepping over him. Outside, a third man armed with a machete turned and ran for cover. Tex hopped onto the porch, pulled her knife, and flung it at him. It hit him between the shoulder blades, and he plowed face-first into the dirt. She calmly drew her other knife and started walking toward him; the Sheriff hovered just behind her, scanning for enemies. As she drew near, the injured hitman rolled onto his side and began swinging his machete. She scuffed sand into his eyes, knocked the weapon from his grasp, and then kicked him in the head as hard as she could, over and over and over. He yowled in pain as the explosion of violence rained down on him.Vermin, she stomped. You think you can come here and kill my man? I’ll scrape your brains off the bottom of my boot. Her victim splayed into his back, battered senseless. She crouched and deftly slit his throat." Every beat here was EXCELLENTLY placed. The violence is sudden, well described, but not overly violent? It conveys what is happening very well without going too far. ALSO. THAT LAST BIT. LITERALLY STOMPING HIS FACE. GIRL. GET HIM.

"She retrieved her other knife and picked up the machete. She flicked the blades to remove the blood, then returned them to their sheaths. On their way back to the porch, she pulled two bullets from her bandolier and reloaded her revolver. Her ears were still ringing from the gunshots; she could taste the black powder." Oh, I loved the details here. Very visceral.

“He won’t be lucid when he wakes, so we’ll have to wait until he recovers before we can question him.” “We should tie him up now.” “Agreed. Open that drawer there, on the left. There’s rope inside.” Grunting, the Sheriff dragged the man out from underneath his dead compatriot, and a snail-trail of blood smeared across the floor. Tex tossed him the coil. He knelt and bound the thug’s wrists and ankles, then relieved him of a shotgun, a nail-studded club, and a dagger. He searched the dead man too, but found nothing of interest, beyond a pair of knuckle-dusters. He shook his head in dismay at the carnage." I love how well they work together. I feel like that's a weird thing to say right now, but …. I said it anyway.

"He nodded, looped the leftover rope around his shoulder, and stood. Together, they finished investigating the house. Now that she had space to think, Tex was able to appreciate his level of composure – not everyone could keep a cool head under fire. When he did show fear, he did so on behalf of others. She felt proud to have him by her side." His level of staying cool IS very impressive. And it did warm my heart to see her PROUD to have him there. This is a woman who has been alone for a very long time, so I feel like that really means something.

“I’m glad Goddard isn’t here,” he said quietly, as they headed for the front door. “They probably would’ve killed him.” Of course they would have and it got me good that that's what Neutron is thinking about right now.

“Riders,” he surmised. “Several, by the looks of it.” UH OH

“Eustace Strych.” He goggled at her. “Eustace sent you? That invertebrate?” “I take it you’re familiar.” “Regrettably. But we can hash all that out later – right now, we need to go check on Carl and Elke. If something happened to either of them because of me, I’m never going to be able to forgive myself.” Tex’s mouth pursed into a grim line. She would not offer reassurances." His reaction, though? LIKE he hadn't even considered Eustace? Boy. I thought you were a genius. NOOOO. I hope Carl and Elke are okay.

"He froze mid-step to listen to the telegraph; after a pause, all of the color drained out of his face. “Men…” he faltered. “Men are attacking the town. The sender describes it as…a cavalry.” OH SHIT. SHIT SHIT.

"Most of it was ammunition for his rifle, but she found some pistol rounds mixed in. She took those for herself, along with his revolver. She cursed herself for wasting bullets on target practice." Oh yeah!

"Tex hunted around for anything else she could use as a weapon, and he placed a small red ball into her hand. “It creates smoke, to drive animals from their dens,” he explained. “Flick this latch up and throw it. Do not drop it near you.” SMOKE BOMB???

"The dust on the road was beginning to settle. Her pulse thrummed in her ears; her mind floated, like a dandelion seed. Sunlight. A blue and open sky. The thundering of hooves. They rode." This description was .. .. it was short and to the point and yet it was gorgeous somehow? I don't know you managed that, but you did.

“Shit.” The Sheriff glanced over his shoulder as they galloped past. “That’s Amber’s horse. This is bad – they must’ve taken her from Sally’s ranch.” He fought to keep the panic from his voice, but Tex wasn’t fooled. Another friend who might be dead, she thought. Her grip tightened on the reins." NO.

"They spurred the horses on, taking the route that would lead them into town. Nature, it seemed, had come dressed for the occasion – blood-red flowers stained the landscape, conjured by the recent storm, and ruby petals tumbled with the grit beneath their mounts. Painted Ladies fluttered by, seeking out the sweetest nectar, heedless of the tumult on the road. Pinprick lives, and gossamer deaths. Tex envied them." MARA MARA MARA MARA MARA MARA MARA MARA MARA MARAAAAAAA

“Carl!” he shouted hoarsely, in the direction of the house. “Elke!” He paused a beat before repeating himself. The wind answered. Llamas capered here and there, unbothered by the ruckus. A ways away, Tex spied Oleander’s straw hat lying in a ditch. She did not point it out. Instead, she directed his attention to a column of smoke rising in the distance. He looked back at the house, then at the smoke, then at the house again. Grief twisted his expression as he wrenched himself away. “Carl, forgive me,” he despaired. Somberly, Tex concurred with his judgment – they did not have time to search the property for bodies, or survivors. If they stopped now, others would surely perish. The needs of the many, she reflected, as they galloped off again. She did not envy him his choice. “Dear God,” he said. Up ahead, a roiling black spire climbed into the heavens, illuminated now and then by surging jets of flame. The town was burning." NOOO! CARL! ELKE! NOOO!!! THE TOWN! This was excruciating! EEEFFFFF. I FEEL THE DEVASTATION LIKE A SPIKE THROUGH MY HEART.

This was SO GOOD, MARA. The beginning loveliness and then the violence and chaos of the end were VERY well balanced. I am literally on the edge of my seat right now. YOU CANNOT END IT THERE.

[Mara=^.^=]

This opening was PERFECT. I loved the blend of humor and honesty so much. And despite the fact that it may have been because of necessity, I still think it's romantic, so there.

 

Necessity is the mother of invention! I mean romance. 

 

THIS LINE JUST ABOUT TOOK ME OUT. It was funny and egotistical at the same time.

 

He will be gloating forever, unfortunately. 
 

I love how well they work together. I feel like that's a weird thing to say right now, but …. I said it anyway.

 

It is very natural. They are completely in lock-step without even needing to communicate verbally. 

 

His reaction, though? LIKE he hadn't even considered Eustace? Boy. I thought you were a genius.

 

I think he expected Eustace to send a team of well-dressed lawyers to harass him to death with legal motions, as opposed to a direct assassination.
 

This description was .. .. it was short and to the point and yet it was gorgeous somehow? I don't know you managed that, but you did.

 

Sudden brevity is a useful way to convey an altered state brought on by adrenaline. 

 

MARA MARA MARA MARA MARA MARA MARA MARA MARA MARAAAAAAA

 

Heh. I knew you'd like that paragraph. I had Libby mention the coming bloom back in chapter 22 specifically so I could have a blood-red landscape in the lead-up to the final battle. 

 

YOU CANNOT END IT THERE.

 

 

I hope I was able to imply just how screwed the Sheriff would've been if this had happened while he was alone. Banging Tex really did save him, in the end. There's irony hiding in there somewhere.


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Katia11]

Oooo yeah. Boy would’ve been toast. Screwing saved him from being screwed.

[Mara=^.^=]

Screwing saved him from being screwed.

 

Poetry.

 

 

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Katia11]

There is so much I love about this fic. Just. Rip my heart out and leave me begging for more.

[Katia11]

"They spurred the horses on, taking the route that would lead them into town. Nature, it seemed, had come dressed for the occasion – blood-red flowers stained the landscape, conjured by the recent storm, and ruby petals tumbled with the grit beneath their mounts. Painted Ladies fluttered by, seeking out the sweetest nectar, heedless of the tumult on the road. Pinprick lives, and gossamer deaths. Tex envied them." I AM STILL THINKING ABOUT THIS LINE. Like.. YOU CAME FOR MY THROAT. HERE HAVE MY JUGULAR WHY DON'T YOU.

[Mara=^.^=]

I AM STILL THINKING ABOUT THIS LINE. Like.. YOU CAME FOR MY THROAT. HERE HAVE MY JUGULAR WHY DON'T YOU.

 

JUG-U-LAR! JUG-U-LAR!

 

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =