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#21 AmazingMe123

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Posted 16 July 2011 - 10:07 PM

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Posted 16 July 2011 - 10:32 PM

:Jimmy: The Shrink Ray Is going to be done in about 26 hours, unless....
:Cindy: Unless what Nerdtron?
:Jimmy: If I use the the Speed-Spray and put it on my hands, I should be able to zip pass the process in less than 30 minutes.
:Cindy: Than put that superfast stuff on it.
:Carl: Jimmy, the last time you did that you turned into weird purple goo last time.
:Jimmy: I made an antidote in case I would get tempted to use it agian. If I get like that again just give me the antidote.
:Sheen: I've got it right here Jimmy!
:Jimmy: Sheen,
:Sheen: Yeah Jimmy?
:Jimmy: That's Mayo. Goddard Give me The Speed-Spray antidote.
:Goddard: *gets the antidote and gives it to Jimmy*
:Jimmy: Good Boy Goddard, Good Boy! O-kay, It's time to get moving.*puts spray on hands and gets to work.

(22 minutes later)
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Posted 17 July 2011 - 01:11 AM

:Jimmy: im finished the shrink ray

:Cindy: took you long enough nerdtron now fix this

(he points the shrink ray at them but it justs short circuits

:Jimmy: i didnt work

:Cindy: of course is didnt you built it

:Jimmy: get off my back vortex im trying to fix this

(jimmy opens the back of the shrink ray)

:Jimmy: ahh i see the problem we need a chemicl known as Canis domesticus

all: :blink:

:Jimmy: mayo

:Libby: sheen has some

:Sheen: that was oddly convenient

:Cindy: just give it to him ultra-dork

:Libby: girl you gotta chill a bit with the insults

:Sheen: i agree with you libbylicious

:Cindy: who asked you anyway

:Carl: CANT YOU SEE THAT THIS CONSTANT FIGHTING IS TEARING US APART!!!!!!

(all stare in silence)

:Sheen: nice one carl, where did that come from

:Carl: i saw it on a soap opera once

:Sheen: you watch too many soap operas

:Jimmy: hello! can i have the mayonnaise

:Sheen: oh yeah

(tosses it to jimmy)

(jimmy puts some in his shrink ray then zaps them with it they all return to normal size)
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Posted 17 July 2011 - 01:23 AM

:Cindy: Okay Neutron, what are e susposed to do now?
:Jimmy: Well, I've figured out how to capture the Nanobots, but I don't know how to stop Baby eddie.
:Cindy: Mabey you should use a BrainBlast?
:Jimmy: Good Idea, Think...think...THINK!!!

:Carl: *in Jimmy's mind* I kept one of those gumballs from the last time they came

:Jimmy: BRAINBLAST! Carl, I need you to get that giant gumball and bring it over here.
:Carl: But how, it's too heavy.
:Jimmy: Goddard, get that gumball!
:Goddard: Bark Bark! *flies away*
:Jimmy: I need one of you to get a radio!
:Sheen: No problem Jimmy!
:Libby: You're seriuosly sending HIM out to get a radio!
:Jimmy: Yes, because...oh yeah, since Libby's the big music person, she'll get the radio
:Sheen: Than what are we going to do?
:Jimmy: You huys are going to track down those Nanobots with something eles, In case the other idea dosn't work.
:Sheen: What is it:?
:Jimmy: I still have their old heads, if you put them on the scanning machine, then push tracking on the keyboard, you'll be able to track them down!

:Sheen: Yeah, Jimmy about that,
:Jimmy: What did you do this time?
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Posted 17 July 2011 - 01:33 AM

:Sheen: nothing! your comuter is flashing alert over and over again so its to busy to track

:Cindy: its baby eddie he made a giant shrink ray and hes turning it into a radio tower

:Sheen: i giant shrink ray ironic isnt it

:Cindy: not the time for irony...so what does the genius say we should do this time

:Jimmy: wait for the others to get back

:Cindy: we probably got 10 minutes what should we do until then

:Sheen: we could talk about ultra-lord

:Jimmy: and :Cindy: noooo!!!!!

:Sheen: then what should we do im bored (he points at cindy) you! entertain me!

:Cindy: no way entertain yourself

:Sheen: wait i have my ultra lord video game (he takes it out of his and starts playing with it) you guys can just talk or whatever
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Posted 17 July 2011 - 01:51 AM

:Jimmy: I'm Not Talking to HER!
:Cindy: Yeah Ultra-Loser why would want to talk to King Caranium!
:Sheen: Take THAT Robofeind!
:Jimmy: You're doing good Sheen!
:Cindy: Hey Robo-Whatever, kick Ultra-Loser's Butt!
:Jimmy: You can do it UltraLord, six more points to HIGH SCORE!
:Cindy: What's this? It looks like, Reset! I think I'll push it!
:Jimmy: NO!!! *shrinks Cindey*
:Sheen: Almost There! HIGH SCORE! YEAH, WOOHOO!
:Jimmy: *Prints out ten sheets of the high scores* Go Sheen!
:Sheen: I wonder how Carl, Goodard, and Libby are doing.

-at the Radio store-

:Libby: I wish I could turn Invisible or somethin' *grabs a radio and ducks*

Man walks past her

:Libby: That was a Close One! *throws Radio threw the window and onto her basket of clothes.*
:Libby: Yes! :Libby: Now to get back to Jimmy's lab!

-at Carl's place-


:Carl: Yes, I've got the Gumball, giddi-up Goddard
:Goddard: Bark Bark! *flies through Carls window*
:Carl: Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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Posted 17 July 2011 - 02:21 AM

Wow good story. I like it how u can make the story good but have 2 ppls writing it. :)
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Posted 17 July 2011 - 02:17 PM

(back at the lab waiting for carl libby and goddard)

:Cindy: y aren't they back yet

:Jimmy: maybe the nanobots got them

:Cindy: or baby eddie

:Sheen: (in the background) DIE ROBOFEIND DIE!

:Jimmy: sheen be quiet

:Cindy: hey libby is back

:Libby: ok i got the radio jimmy why do you want it

:Jimmy: ill explain when carl gets back

:Libby: whatever

:Sheen: (in the background) ULTRA-LORD WILL PREVAIL!

:Libby: SHEEN QUIET DOWN

:Sheen: sorry where is carl and goddard

:Carl: right here

:Goddard: aoww bark bark

:Jimmy: do you got the giant gum ball

:Carl: yep its inside goddard

:Jimmy: great everyones here so heres the plan

(p.s. i have no idea what your plan is and now you got two options jimmy says the plan now and something screws up or u but a
5 minutes later thing and just execute the plan)
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Posted 17 July 2011 - 06:36 PM

:Carl: What do you want me to do with the gumball agian?
:Jimmy: Eddie is still a baby, so he'll probaly chase it and then get lured into my new invention drianer to make him small agian and to get rid of the force field so we can get everyboby back to normal!
:Libby: Okay I've got this radio, what I'm I susposed to do with it?
:Jimmy: I'll tell you in a minute, now carl, you, I, and Sheen are going to get that gumball!
:Goddard: Bark...Baark................
:Jimmy: What's wrong goddard? *opens up Goddard's cheast and sees gum splattered everywhere*
:Jimmy: CARL! Did you shove that whole Gumball into Goddard?
:Carl: Yeah, was i not susposed to?
:Jimmy: That's why I sent the hyper-cube with you!
:Carl: I'm sorry Jimmy, I just used that to put the Giant LollyPop incase you wanted it too.
:Jimmy: I :Jimmy: ve aready told you, the H :Jimmy: er-Cube can store everything on the Planet, and still have room!, wait, did you say Gant LollyPop?
:Carl: Yeah,
:Jimmy: That's even Better! Get it out!
:Carl: O;kay!
:Libby: The Radio?
:Jimmy: Oh, Right, the whole radio thing is susposed to....

(I don't know what the radio is needed for)
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Posted 17 July 2011 - 09:52 PM

:Jimmy: ...by blasting the music out of this as loud as possible a high pitched frequency witch being the same frequencies as the nanobots will attract them here

:Libby: fine but im picking the music

:Cindy: so nerdtron what do we do when they get here

:Jimmy: i dont know yet

:Cindy: rlly nerdtron you got nothing! here is what we do when they get here we can just smash them with a hammer...and you call yourself a genius.

:Jimmy: that could work but they are to small to see

:Sheen: (holding his ultra-lord game still) maybe this could control them when they get here

:Jimmy: thats a great idea

:Cindy: woah! ultra lord fiinally got a good idea

:Sheen: bound to happen at some point

:Jimmy: give that here (pointing to the game system)

:Sheen: but i almost got a new high score

:Jimmy: give it!

(sheen tosses it to jimmy and jimmy tinkers with it a bunch)

:Jimmy: so here is the plan the radio frequency will attract the nanobots then my lab security will pick them up then we can use this to move them to where we can see them

:Cindy: then we smash them like you should of done in the first place

(your turn seth and please make this plan fail somehow)
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Posted 17 July 2011 - 10:33 PM

:Jimmy: O-kay, One Two Three, NOW!

:Libby: *plays a realy loud song attracting the Nanobots*
:Jimmy: It's working!

*Nanobts appear inside the room*

:Jimmy: O-kay I'm now controlling them!
NanoBot 1: There is the Ray! We must delete it!
:Cindy: Why isn't working Nerdtron!
NanoBot 2: DELETE! DELETE! DELETE! *deletes controller*
:Jimmy: Oh No! They deleted the Controller!
:Cindy: MAKE THEM GROW NOW!!!
:Jimmy: Good Idea! *fires ray at the flying dot* *flying saucer gows HUGE*
:Jimmy: AHHHHH!
NanoBot 2: No you Moron, the Ray must be over there! *deletes shrink ray*
:Jimmy: DANG IT
:Cindy: Great Idea Nerdtron! :Cindy: *starts to push him*
:Jimmy: Cindy NO!
:Cindy: *pushes Jimmy*
nanobot 2: She just harmed Creator! *deletes Cindy*
:Jimmy: I thought I re-programed them to not care about anyonr hurting me!
:Libby: Aperently Not! Now lets leave!
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Posted 17 July 2011 - 10:49 PM

:Sheen: ill protect you libby (picks her up in his arms)

:Libby: your going to need protecting if you dont put me down now!

:Sheen: okay, okay (he puts her down)

:Libby: good

:Jimmy: maybe we should run

:Sheen: okay (they all run out of the lab)

:Libby: we have to rescue cindy

:Carl: but how the nanobots have taken her and jimmy's lab

:Sheen: and baby eddie is on a rampage

:Jimmy: but we have none of our inventions or Cindy's karate mastery

:Sheen: maybe we can find another high tech lab

:Jimmy: well i do know 1 other

:Libby: who jimmy

:Jimmy: professor calamitous

:Libby: are you carzy

:Jimmy: wait let me explain he is in jail so his house has all his inventions unguarded none of them are complete but they are almost complete

:Carl: but how do we get in jimmy

:Sheen: we can go get ultra-lord and have him use his plasma blasts on the door

:Carl: sheen ultra-lord isnt real he is just a doll

:Sheen: action figure!

:Carl: doll

:Sheen: (putts his fingers in his ears and starts singing) lalalala i cant hear you lalalala

:Libby: shut up sheen

:Sheen: fine

:Libby: now how do we get in jimmy

(thats up to u seth)
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Posted 18 July 2011 - 03:49 AM

:Jimmy: All I realy have to do is blast it with my Cheese-Ray, and it will get eaten by, Carl!
:Carl: Jimmy, I'm Allergic to Dairy!
:Jimmy: Then we'll eat it! Then I'll get inside and push the rest of the door down so that we can all get in.


-Profeser Colamitus's Lab Entrance-

:Jimmy: Time to say Cheese! *fires cheese ray at front door* Now we'll just wait untill....
:Sheen: IT'S FINISHED! *ate ALL of the cheese
:Jimmy: Now we just need to find a good exparement to capture the nanobots!
:Carl: Jimmy watch out! There are spikey things on the walls!
:Jimmy: His lab is right over there!


:Sheen: I don't see anything to use, mabey this wasn't such a Good idea,
:Jimmy: Nonsence Sheen, We need to re-wire this vaperation ray and make everyone they've deleted so far re-appear!
:Sheen: O-kay Jimmy! But how are we susposed to get rid of Eddie?
:Jimmy: All I should have to do is get the nanobots to Delete the force field around him, then to delete him and find somewhere far away to place him, where, i have no Idea!
:Sheen: But don't the Nanobots usally not follow orders?
:Jimmy: No, They almost AWAYS follow orders, just in the wrong way!
:Libby: So what if something messes up?
:Jimmy: Don't worry, it's all going to work out fine!
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Posted 18 July 2011 - 08:52 PM

:Sheen: well then start doing all your sciencey stuff before profeesor calamitous breaks out of jail...agian

:Jimmy: ok ill start with the vaporization ray

(he starts rewiring it)

:Carl: im scared

:Sheen: y

:Carl: what if jimmys plan fails and the nanobots catch us

:Sheen: dont be such a baby carl but if they do catch us they will delete us forever

:Carl: ahhh! im allergic to being deleted

:Sheen: how is that even possible

:Carl: i have lots of allergies

:Sheen: of course you do you little winy baby

:Libby: GUYS! BE QUIET.

:Carl: :Sheen: sorry

:Libby: jimmy are you done yet

:Jimmy: wait a second.....done

:Libby: that was fast

:Jimmy: it was already 98.9806% done

:Sheen: so now what
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Posted 18 July 2011 - 10:19 PM

:Jimmy: We go out, find the nanobots, trick them into deleting Eddie and Him ForceField and then, making them delete him permenantly,

:Sheen: O-kay Jimmy, But when do we start, because I'm thinking next week!
:Jimmy: That's a good time, but I was thinking right Now?
:Sheen: I don't like that idea, I'm still thiking next week,
:Jimmy: C'mon Sheen!
:Sheen: O-kay!

-at the town sqaure-

Nanobot 2: That must be every tiny person in the town, now let's go and delete everyone in the state!
Nanobot 1: I say we go to the U.K.!
Nanobot 2: Well, You know I am the creator's favorite!
Nanobot 1: He hates both of us you nitwitt!
Nanobot 2: He hates YOU more!
Nanobot 1: How are you suposed to know!
Nanobot 2: Because I HEARD Him!
Nanobot 1: No you didn't, now let's get back to pleasing him!
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Posted 18 July 2011 - 11:15 PM

(later at town square)

:Jimmy: ok i see the nanobots over there

:Libby: well of course you see them their huge

:Jimmy: i see that to

:Libby: so what exactly do we do

:Jimmy: first we get Cindy out

:Sheen: but how the nanobots are evil

:Jimmy: we get up close and shoot them with this (holds up vaporizing ray)

:Sheen: can i shoot them with it i always wanted to shoot something

:Carl: that is not a good idea

:Sheen: WHAT!

:Jimmy: maybe you should just be a distraction

:Sheen: whatever

:Jimmy: go over there and do...something

:Sheen: okay jimmy

:Jimmy: you two come with me

(they go to the other side of town square while sheen starts singing the ultra-lord theme song)

:Sheen: (singing VERY BADLY) ULTRA LORD ULTRA LORD, FIGHTING CRIME WITH HIS ULTRA SWORD. HE CAN FLY, WHAT A GUY, WATCH THE CRIMINALS WAVE BYE-BYE. WHOS GOT ELETRIC BOOTIES LOVES HIS CRIME FIGHTING DUTIES AND HES IMMUNE TO COOTIES HIS NAME IS ULTRA-LORD!!!!!!!!

nanobot2:error

nanobot1:EXTREME ERROR

nanobot2:we must delete extreme error

nanobot1:fire up the particle beam

nanobot2:firing in 3...2....1...fi..(ray comes from behind and hits the saucer)

:Jimmy: haha got you

(cindy and lots of random townspeople randomly appear)

:Jimmy: nanobots listen to me

nanobot1:the creator wishes to speak to us

nanobot2:maybe we finally pleased him

:Jimmy: nanobots execute original programming your new task is to delete baby Eddie and take the shrink ray

nanobot2:of course master we live to please

nanobot1:suck up

(nanobots fly off in search off baby eddie
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Posted 19 July 2011 - 12:44 AM

im going to read this from the beginning
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Posted 19 July 2011 - 12:55 AM

nanobot 2: *to baby eddie* Hello, Are You The One You Know As Baby Eddie
Eddie: WHAT ARE YOU!
nanobot 1: We are from...THE FUTURE!
nanobot 2: We are from the "future" and have come to tell you to make everyone bigger agian, or you will be.... 1/1,000 cenemeter tall forever!
nanobot 1: Untill you get seriusly hurt by an army of Germs!
Eddie: Wait One second! *looks closely at the nanobots* Your One of Jimmy's inventions!
nanobot 1: I'll have to talk to the creator and tell him to stop puting his symbol on everything he invents!
Eddie: Goodbye, Tiny Robots!
nanobot 2: DELETE DELETE DELETE!
:Jimmy: Goodbye Eddie!
Eddie: Jimmy! You think theese little robots can destroy ME?
:Jimmy: They have a highly powerful delete button!
Eddie: Who Cares?
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Posted 19 July 2011 - 01:21 AM

(y did they say they were from the future and please act for like the nanobots)

:Cindy: in a moment you

:'( bring it on you little twerps

nanobots:DELETE DELETE DELETE
(they fire the beam at eddie but he whips out his rattle and blocks the shot his rattle gets deleted)

:'( oh thats it (grabs the saucer and throws it like a frisbee off into the horizen)

:'( now how are you going to stop me cousin (points shrink ray at them)

:Cindy: (quietly so baby Eddie cant hear) so whats your idea this time nerdtron

:Jimmy: i got nothing

:Cindy: well you better do one of your dumb brain blast things

:Jimmy: think think think (zooms inside his brain an image passes through his head) he sees himself shooting the nanobots with the vaporization ray) brain blast

:Cindy: thats getting kind of lame nerdtron

:Jimmy: ill be mad at that later

:Cindy: whats your plan

:Jimmy: THIS! (pulls out his vaporization ray and shoots it at a cloud above baby eddie

:'( nice try small fry but you missed PREPARE TO BE SHRUNK... AGAIN!

(the cloud jimmy hits turns into water on impact it rains down upon baby Eddie...and the shrink ray shorting it out)





(i want there to be some J/C in this at some point)
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Posted 19 July 2011 - 02:15 AM

Eddie: NOOO! You can't do this to me cousin! NOOOOOOOOOO *yells while getting smaller*
Eddie: MY FORCE FIELD! MY STRANGH! THEY'RE ALL GONE!! :'( :'( :'(
:Carl: Now we've got Eddie, but how do we get where the nanobots are?
:Jimmy: The Nanobots will be easy to find, all I need to do is get the hover-car and then just zoom around the world to find the nanobts.
:Carl: O-kay
:Sheen: Jimmy, I think we have a problem,
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