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#61 Chompyzilla

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Posted 22 July 2011 - 11:52 PM

listen to this while reading
(cindy and jimmy are talking and walking down the hall)

:Cindy: (thinking) oh jimmy looks so cute wait why am i thinking this what new low have i reached ah who am i kidding of course i think that but im supposed to hate him (she gets interupted)

:Jimmy: so...cindy

:Cindy: yeah

:Jimmy: do you remember when we were on that island

:Cindy: oh yeah how could i forget :blush: i mean yes i remember whats your point

:Jimmy: while um...i dont know what to say but i was looking for the nanobots earlier with my space telescope and i looked at the island and i saw this (shows a picture on his watch with the palm tree carved with J+C forever inside of a heart)

:Cindy: oh yeah about that :blush:

:Jimmy: did you write this

:Cindy: umm...no it must of...um

:Jimmy: well did you

:Cindy: why would i write such a thing like ugghh you, please

:Jimmy: then how do you explain this

:Cindy: maybe it would...um...

:Jimmy: aha! so you did do it

:Cindy: yes but let me explain

:Jimmy: i'm listening

:Cindy: those days on the island when we were alone were great and then when you brought me that pearl i was like wow your such an amazing guy and thats when i wrote that but i was only once and wont happen again

:Jimmy: so you did write it

:Cindy: yes

:Jimmy: your impossible like one minute your pulling pranks and calling me nerdtron and the next you act like you actually like me i don't know what to think

:Cindy: jimmy,have you sometimes imagined if we never left that island

:Jimmy: yes sometimes i do imagine the possibility of us have not left that island but all i can remember is that one day...

:Cindy: but that day was so amazing...i don't get it were supposed to hate each other

Jimmy: why

Cindy: what?

Jimmy: why do we have to hate each other. it makes no logical sense

Cindy: i don't remember

Jimmy: well why do we still hate each other everyone seems to be sick of us arguing

Cindy: have you consider that maybe they don't want us to hate each other

Jimmy: i haven't

Cindy: well if everyone doesn't want us to hate each other. then maybe we shouldnt
fight anymore

Jimmy: but then where does that leave us

Cindy: jimmy, there is something that i always wanted you two know but i was never able to tell you

Jimmy: and that would be

(cindy is about to answer when sheen interrupts)



(i edited for you ava and they will talk once more after we deal with calamitous)
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Posted 23 July 2011 - 04:03 AM

(Sorry, I Just HAVE To Break The Moment)

:Sheen: JIMMY JIMMY! *sheen runs into them covered in caramel*
:Jimmy: SHEEN! What Are You Doing!
:Sheen: The Monster! I'VE FOUND IT! IT'S ATTACKING ME, LOSER BOY, AND LIBBYLICOUS!
:Jimmy: You Just Completey Ruined The Moment!
:Sheen: What Moment?
:Jimmy: Um.......never mind......Why are you covered in caramel?
:Sheen: Carl, He Had Some Caramel and I tried to take it and squirt it at the monster, and then we had a fight over it, Then Carl fell on it. And then it squirted all over me.
:Jimmy: O-kay Sheen, what is the monster?
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Posted 23 July 2011 - 04:41 AM

(will do but not here i think)

Jimmy: i just set the crono-arch to the moment we left in time

Sheen: well what are we waiting for lets go

(they all go in the time portal)

(they return to a destroyed lab)

Cindy: hey nerd-tron are you sure were at the right time

Jimmy: (looking at the date) yes this is the exact moment we left in time

(past) Cindy: then why is it so...dark

Jimmy: maybe we did something that negativity impacted the time line

(past) Jimmy: but all you did was stop sheen from releasing baby eddie

Libby: i know you two are busy talking over here. but, WHATS YOUR POINT!

(past) Jimmy: i guess its possible that after baby Eddie was released he did something that prevented this

(past) Carl: (looking at a peice of half destroyed newspaper) um guys u might want to look at this

Cindy: (walks over and takes it) give me that! professor Finbar calamitous has unleashed an unstoppable monster upon the city off retroville last night it walks round the city and eats its victims whole and..thats all i can read

Jimmy: baby eddie must have shrunk this last time

(past) Jimmy: why don't we go back in time and stop our future selves which are your past selves from going to the past and stopping our past selves from letting out baby eddie so he can stop professor calamitous

all but the jimmys: :blink:

Sheen: wait is this the future past or the future present or the past present future

past Sheen: man time travel is confusing

Libby: then if thats all true then why isnt baby eddie here

Carl: oh he was here all right (points at a baby size skeleton)

Cindy: so it seems we have to options. we go back in time and fix the problem...again or we get some weapons and destroy calamitous' stupid monster

Jimmy: actually we have one option. we cant do the time travel cause the crono arch has been destroyed



(so now they have to fight calamitous and his monster)


Uhhhh... Confusing much?

listen to this while reading
(cindy and jimmy are talking and walking down the hall)

Cindy: (thinking) oh jimmy looks so cute wait why am i thinking this what new low have i reached ah who am i kidding of course i think that but im supposed to hate him (she gets interupted)

Jimmy: so...cindy

Cindy: yeah

Jimmy: do you remember when we were on that island

Cindy: oh yeah how could i forget :blush: i mean yes i remember whats your point

Jimmy: while um...i dont know what to say but i was looking for the nanobots earlier with my space telescope and i looked at the island and i saw this (shows a picture on his watch with the palm tree carved with J+C forever inside of a heart)

Cindy: oh yeah about that :blush:

Jimmy: did you write this

Cindy: umm...no it must of...um

Jimmy: well did you

Cindy: um...yes :blush:

Jimmy: you did but that means...

Cindy: jimmy those days on that island were the best days off my life

Jimmy: (speechless

Cindy: i still sometimes imagine if we never left the island

Jimmy: me too

Cindy: uhh i mean i love you and i hate you at the same time and its just so frustrating

Jimmy: well its normal to have mixed emotions ..wait did you say you love me

Cindy: :blush:

Jimmy: well then i want you to know something

Cindy: yeah

Jimmy: i just want you your not the only one with mixed emotions

Cindy: what do you mean

Jimmy: Cindy ever since i met you i couldn't stop thinking about you I've tried i every way scientifically possible to stop it but i cant stop thinking about you

Cindy: what are you trying to say

Jimmy: i love you cindy

Cindy: you do

Jimmy: does this prove it

(jimmy kisses cindy)

Cindy: wow can you be anymore corny

Jimmy: what you didnt like it

Cindy: how could i not like that :wub2:

Jimmy: come on lets go

(they walk off holding hands)

Meh... It's way too quick like most people do at first, although I can't say I've done anything different I've only done them running into eachother (lol) but in my opinion I would have one of them say it then walk away nervously leaving the other in awe until they look back as if to say: You coming?. But...... that's just me. ;)
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#64 Chompyzilla

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Posted 23 July 2011 - 05:54 PM

i edited it kinda
and you can add if you want to
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Posted 24 July 2011 - 01:41 AM

Nah, I have this serious writers block going on I can't even start writing a second chapter to my lame story.
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Posted 24 July 2011 - 02:09 AM

Don't worry; we all get it from time to time. I'm currently having some on my fic Cat's Got Her Tongue. :grr:
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Posted 24 July 2011 - 02:12 AM

Ooooh... But I bet your story isn't lame or loser-ish?
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Posted 24 July 2011 - 11:35 PM

can we get back to the story
and emily you can also join if you want
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Posted 25 July 2011 - 09:07 PM

moar!!!!!!
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Posted 25 July 2011 - 09:08 PM

I'll try to work something up in my mind... Sounds like fun!
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Posted 25 July 2011 - 11:20 PM

(contiue on the story with this...)

:Sheen: it looks kinda like a snake mixed with a fish

:Cindy: thats it?

:Sheen: no its really big

:Jimmy: how big

:Sheen: bigger then miss fowl when you turned her into a plant monster

:Cindy: how are we supossed to beat this nerdtron

:Sheen: maybe we can call ultra-lord he could beat it

:Cindy: :Jimmy: :rolleyes:

:Cindy: wait! what happened to libby

:Jimmy: and carl

:Sheen: they are...
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Posted 26 July 2011 - 12:14 AM

:Sheen: They are in trouble right now! We've got to save them.
:Cindy: Oh! I would have never guessed we'd actualy have to SAVE them!
:Jimmy: Stop it Cindy! What's going on anyways Sheen.
:Sheen: Monster held friends prisoners, we run!
:Jimmy: Talk in a complete sentence!
:Sheen: They're held prisoners, we should find them, come on RUN!

*at the prison*

:Libby: You've better let us outta here!
Calamitous: No! I'm not going to! I've got neutron's little flying sauser trapped too!
:Libby: What's going on here?
Calamitous: Well, My New Partner Woouldn't want you to know, so, I'M NOT TELLING YOU!!!
:Carl: Libby, do you think that we'll be trapped hear forever?
:Libby: I don't know Car...New Partner?
Calamitous: Yea, he's right over there
:Carl: :Libby: *once they see him* WHAT!!!
:Libby: It's...
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Posted 26 July 2011 - 02:07 PM

:Libby: its meldar prime!

meldar: that's right i'm back and i'm going to get revenge on you jelly-bags for ruining my show

:Carl: please dont blow up our planet meldar

meldar: well you will be happy to know i cant cause someone stole my matrix generators (looks menacingly at carl)

calamitous: but with the help of my genius we shall take over the...erm

:Libby: well i would like you to know that jimmy cindy and sheen are going to save us

:Carl: i hope

meldar: no one can save you! not even your worthless little friends we have this place rigged up with a lot of traps

:Carl: well jimmy is a genius he will figure something out

meldar: fine lets see what they can do
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Posted 28 July 2011 - 04:35 PM

I'm going to write what's going on in Sheen's mind right now.

:Sheen: ....


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Posted 08 August 2011 - 09:13 PM

:Sheen: ....

(if your gonna do that get it right)

:Sheen: this is just like ultra lord episode 472 when ultralord had to...

:Cindy: shut up ultra-dork!!!!

:Sheen: but what about ultra-lord

:Cindy: ultra-lord is not real hes is just a stupid doll

:Sheen: hes not a doll hes an action figure!

:Cindy: and he wears purple. what kind of "hero" wears purple

:Sheen: its a manly purple

:Cindy: a manly purple. that doesnt even make sense

:Sheen: yes it does

:Jimmy: QUIET! we have to save libby and carl. this is no time for arguing

(they wander into one of the rooms that meldar and calamitous had trapped)
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Posted 12 June 2012 - 03:54 PM

(if your gonna do that get it right)

:Cindy: and he wears purple. what kind of "hero" wears purple


(Hey...I know one! And he is my favorite!)

:Sheen: You know what? I wish that Libby and Carl were here. Carl would then get made at me for saying that!
:Jimmy: Why?
:Sheen: We've been droppin' low in friendship...AHHHHHH!!!!
*Cindy and Sheen fall into a trap-door that closes fast enough for Jimmy not to get through*
:Jimmy: This can't be HAPPENING TO ME!!! I hope Sheen can survive...trapped alone with Cindy like that!
*down under with Sheen and Cindy*
:Sheen: You...know, If I had UltraLord's atomic plasma cannons...we would be out of here by now.
:Cindy: Can you POSSIBLY go ONE DAY without talking about UltraLord...you really get on my verves!
:Sheen: Oh yeah? Well Little Miss-perfect is always RIGHT isn't she.
:Cindy: I am not little miss-
:Sheen: Doesn't this sounds familiar? 'Oh, I'm Cindy Vortex I'm so pretty and I'm the smartest kid in class besides Neutron, who's saved me hundreds of times but I don't care because it makes me look less perfect. Oh, look at me, I just saved the town...oh wait, it was actually Jimmy he's just sitting there while I try to boast about it. Oh, what's that? I've done so many things that Jimmy hasn't! I'm such a good karate master and just because I'm perfect I'm going to say one more time that I am the smartest kid in class, but Jimmy isn't because he's put the town in danger a few times! He has no creativity even though he's had some many creative inventions such a GODDARD who if I'm not mistaken never hurt, but helped the town, but...oh well!'
:Cindy: What did you just say?
:Sheen: I'm not re-saying it, and Seth's hands DYING from having to type me argue...yeah I did it, I broke the forth wall...what are you going to do about it?
:Cindy: Sheen...
:Sheen: I just don't think it would be a problem FOR YOU TO BE NICE TO ME AND CARL ONCE IN A WHILE!
:Cindy: It's Carl and I...
:Sheen: WHO CARES???

Yeah, I know, I brought it back...and it is probably annoying. Or is it? I dunno...

Remember the scene in the movie when Nick and :Sheen: are fighting? Just imagine that except with :Cindy: instead.
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Posted 19 July 2012 - 04:39 AM

Reviving!! I'm sure Seth and Cam will appreciate this! ;)
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Posted 19 July 2012 - 02:50 PM

Yeah...wow. This was one of the weirdest things I remember from last summer when I joined.

Though I did post...it was all like...two months ago. I'll check...*checking checking*

Oh, also, the Reason Cindy and Sheen are trapped is because I WANT to try to help them work out their differences. Will it work? I don't know...it depends on the flow of the RP. .. :D
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Posted 19 July 2012 - 02:57 PM

Then what does jimmy do? Does he try to save sheen and Cindy? Does he try to save Carl and Libby? Or does he get captured by meldar prime.
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Posted 19 July 2012 - 03:10 PM

Or...does he save himself...OR does Meldar or Calamitous convince him to save himself?

Your choice... :onfire:
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