Crouching Jimmy, Hidden Cindy
#41
Posted 05 June 2009 - 12:27 AM
très - "very/much"
bien - "good/well/better/great"
maintenant - "now/right now/at this moment"
mon - "my"
ami - "friend/companion"
Therefore: It's very good (or much better, if you want to translate it that way) now, my friend!
#42
Posted 05 June 2009 - 12:35 AM
Thanks. ^_^
#43
Posted 05 June 2009 - 12:37 AM
#44
Posted 05 June 2009 - 12:42 AM
#45
Posted 05 June 2009 - 12:45 AM
#46
Posted 05 June 2009 - 04:06 AM
And be careful with your grammar, spelling and quotation marks, Pedro,..they surely make some of the readers quite irritated...
But, after all, you're a really good writer...
:w00t: o:) ~+Gabby+~ o:) :w00t:
#47
Posted 05 June 2009 - 05:40 PM
#48
Posted 05 June 2009 - 06:13 PM
#49
Posted 10 June 2009 - 03:46 PM
Thanks.
#50
Posted 10 June 2009 - 03:49 PM
As we wait on for the new forums to get back up and running, I present to you Part 5!
Which I think is my most funniest yet weridest chapter I've written yet.
Just read.
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Part 5 - The Training Begins... (Jimmy's Embarrassing Episode)
Not long after, Master Hong walks with Jimmy and Cindy to the outskirts of a forest. Both the kids, crossed armed and heads purposely looking away from each other, were very unenthusiastic about the task ahead of them. Plus doing it all in one week.
"Well, this is as far as I can take you, children. You're both on your own from here on in."
He turned to Cindy.
"Remember, you have one week to prepare him to fight Yoo Yee and save your friends. I entrust that your master taught you well, Cindy?"
She desperately wanted to say no and run, but in obeisance to Hong, she temporarily buried it.
"Yes, Master Hong. I will."
She bowed her head.
"I leave you two now. Good luck."
He then turned to Jimmy, giving him a scare.
"Or else!"
Hong then walks away.
"Ugh. This must be a nightmarish hallucination! If there was a rock nearby I'd hit myself awake!"
"Well, news flash Spewtron! This ISN'T a dream. And last time I checked I didn't precisely apply for this job ether!"
"Well, maybe you can FIRE yourself and find a new hobo job while I work on something to help me find the others!"
"Ugh! You're such a dunder-head you know that?!"
"Excuse me, Miss Big-Mouth, but you're not exactly the calm type ether!"
"OK, THAT'S IT!!," she waved her arms apart as gesture for silence, "Master Hong appointed ME to be YOUR master. We both don't love the idea but since you don't have any of your goofy, show offy inventions to help us find Sheen, Carl and Libby PLUS the fact that Yoo Yee challenged YOU, not me, to a fight to save their lives, then all we got left is good old-fashion butt kicking!," she yelled as she punched and kicked the air a bit to prove her point. "Unless you got anything else forming inside your big head!"
He gave up trying to argue his way out.
"As much as I hate to admit it, Vortex, you're right. But-"
"Good! So let's get started!," she interrupted.
"How?"
"By first taking a hike up that mountain." She pointed towards the mountain behind the resort.
"Hmm. That's not so bad."
"While carrying these!"
Suddenly from behind a tree she took out her entire luggage, 4 ones in all.
"WHAT?!?," Jimmy gasped, "You're INSANE Vortex!"
"Well beats me having to carry them all, Nerdtron. Now pick them up and let's get going! I don't have all day y'know?!"
"Ugh! Leaping leptons!"
But before he proceeded to carry her bags.
"Wait, Neutron!"
"What?"
She then pointed at Jimmy's shoes.
"Huh? What about my shoes?"
"Take 'em off Nerdtron! NOW!"
"What?!? Out here? Why? I... all right!"
Reluctantly, Jimmy began taking his shoes off.
"The only good thing about Sheen, Carl and Libby being captured is that they don't see me like this."
"Tough luck for you, Neutron, cause I'm gonna tell them all about it after we rescue them! Oh, and don't forget to take off your paints too!"
"WHAT?!? You're out of your mind!!"
"Keep moving!"
After an extremely awkward and uncomfortable 5 minutes, Jimmy was reduced to just his red atom symbol t-shirt and his red trunks with blue lines on both sides. If he'd be in a public place, it would sure be an embarrassing episode for the poor 11 year old boy genius. Cindy had to hold back her laugher hard at seeing Jimmy like this.
"Ok, I'll restate my previous saying - NOW I feel violated."
He noticed Cindy giggling.
"Vortex? Will you stop that?"
"Why? You should be thanking me, Neutron. At least you'll be much more comfortable... in... pfft... THAT!"
"Ok, so we ALL know I look silly, vapid and inane like this! Can we just get on with it already?"
"Alright, alright!," she stopped, "just pick up the bags and let's go."
Jimmy placed all the bags on his back and started walking up the mountain with Cindy leading the way.
"Ow! Ow! Ah! Ugh!"
Cindy looked back and saw Jimmy struggle not only carrying the bags, but mostly walking.
"What's wrong with you Neutron? Haven't you walked barefoot anywhere else but the beach?"
"Ugh! Apparently... Ow... not.. Vortex... Ah!"
"Then you have A LOT to learn, Nerdtron. Keep walking!"
"This... Ow... is... Ah.. torture... ugh!"
From afar, standing atop a tree, Master Hong watches on in amusement.
"He, he, he, he. This should be interesting."
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Feedback or Constructive Critisism por favor.
#51
Posted 10 June 2009 - 07:35 PM
I think something got messed up in the copying, because the quotations are little a's with hats, haha. But otherwise, quite fun!
#52
Posted 10 June 2009 - 10:17 PM
Yeah. Let me get fixing on that right now.
#53
Posted 10 June 2009 - 10:23 PM
#54
Posted 10 June 2009 - 10:34 PM
@Katie: DONE!!
#55
Posted 10 June 2009 - 10:38 PM
I agree with Master Hong. This will be interesting...very interesting.
#56
Posted 11 June 2009 - 05:50 AM
Poor Jimmy! He's now very embarrassed esp. to Cindy!!! I, too, can't walk up a mountain like that!!!
Oh, and Master Hong was right!!!! This should be VERY interesting!!!
GREAT JOB!!!
#57
Posted 11 June 2009 - 01:05 PM
#58
Posted 11 June 2009 - 01:56 PM
Wow. Thanks alot guys. I'm so glad you got such a kick out of this, even if you giggled.
I must say that I almost ROTFLed while writing this cause it originally was gonna be a more serious, sutle beginning to thier training, but for some odd reason it got shifted from there into.. well... this!
And I'm glad it did.
#59
Posted 15 June 2009 - 10:00 PM
And poor Jimmy. Cindy seems like she's gonna love bossing him around!
#60
Posted 22 June 2009 - 01:47 PM
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