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#1 miss.darkstar

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Posted 27 December 2008 - 01:28 AM

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Princess in Disguise

The King of England, William had died before his daughter was born. Her name was Princess Madeline. One day she would be a queen, just like her mother. When Madeline was sixteen she was drop dead gorgeous. She would decline any man that her mother would choose to be her husband. She wanted to marry someone she loves. She never really wanted to be a princess anyway. She wanted to live in America, to be free and not having to do all this work all the time. So she went for it. She changed her image completely so no one would recognize her. She bought a ticket for America and went off, taking 1 hundred thousand dollars with her. She was no longer Madeline She was Massie. Massie Block. She bought a house in a normal neighborhood in Westchester County, New York. She had neighbors she liked and neighbors she hated.

The Weird Girl

“ Hey I’m Layne! I’m your new neighbor. Wanna be friends?”

The Bitch

“ Stay away from my BF, cause he was eyeing you the whole time. You don’t want to face consequences do you? You really don’t know who you’re messing with. So stay AWAY!”

Bitch’s Nice Puppy

“ Don’t mind her. She’s the alpha and what she says goes. I know how hard it is to be the new girl. By the way, I’m Dylan Marvil.”

The Cute Boy

“ Hey you’re new here right? Massie isn’t it? Well nice to meet you. I hope you don’t become one of HER puppy dogs. I know she’s my girlfriend but seriously, don’t tell her but it’s like she’s Paris Hilton and their all clones of Tinkerbell.” He chuckled.

But it’s not as easy as she thought fitting in was supposed to be. How was she gonna be queen ,if only after one day she couldn’t handle all the teenage drama? No one knows that she really is a princess. Why does life have to be so hard, She thought over and over again. She wasn’t gonna go back to England and she didn’t want to. She’ll go through the ups and downs of being a teenager. No matter what it takes.

The Escape

Princess Madeline sneaked out of her quarters with her plane tickets and 100,000 dollars in hand. She had given herself the makeover a few minutes ago. Now all she had to do was leave the palace as if she was one of the loyal subjects asking the Queen for something. When she was about to reach the palace doors a guard blocked her.

“Where do you think you’re going?” He asked.

“Um,” Princess Madeline was looking past his shoulder towards the palace doors. How was she going to get there? She cleared her throat and said in her best disguise voice, “I am leaving the palace.” He looked at her with a confused face.

“You know to the marketplace.” She said again in her disguised voice.

“You may proceed.” He said. She sighed with relief. “Princess.” He also said with a sly grin. She was shocked. She may be a princess, but she inherited fighting skills from her mother. She did a backward-flip and her heels hit the guard’s jaw. More guards came in view. She felt a grin come to her face. She punched, kick, and did all these karate moves. Soon, there were guards all over the floor. She dusted off her purple –her favorite color- dress and walked out of the palace. She was off on her own.

Westchester County, New York

Princess Madeline had came up with a name that she liked. Massie. Massie Block was going to be her name. She wondered if anyone would be her friend. Well, she’ll find that out soon.

When she landed, she took out a jacket and put it on. It was really cold. She walked into the airport. It was a lot different than the one back at England. She went to the desk. She had overheard from her friends that if you see a woman by a desk, she can help you get a ride.

“Excuse me.” Massie said not caring about disguising her accent.

“Yes. How may I help you?” The woman asked her.

“Um, I need a ride to the house I just bought-“ She began to say.

“Ah yes! Would you like a limo or a taxi.” The woman asked her.

“Does my limo come with a driver?” She asked.

The woman chuckled and said, “Yes it does.”

“Then the limo I will have.” Massie said grinning.

“I will call up a limo for you. Please wait outside.” She told Massie.

Massie nodded then walked away. She walked through crowds of people looking for people coming off the plane. She finally reached the door. She waited outside for 10 minutes and then saw a black Range Rover come up by her. A tall man came out and looked around.

“Don’t you have any bags?” He asked her.

“No.” She replied.

He didn’t answer. He just walked over to the door in the back and opened it for her. She stared at it for a moment then went into the Range Rover. It was nothing compared to the limos she always rode back in England.

“Where to?” He asked.

“Uh, here” She said handing him a piece of paper with writing on it. He didn’t reply. Then they started to move.

They started to pass a neighborhood full of mansions and limos. Massie looked at all of them awestruck. She couldn’t believe that she was going to live here. Finally, they came up to a big mansion with a beautiful garden in front. The door was opened for Massie and she stepped out.

“Thank you” She told the man and walked away toward the entrance. There was a woman there already. She looked like she was in her late thirties. She was grinning like an idiot.

“Hello. You must be May-see right?” She said still grinning like an idiot.

She chuckled. “No my name is pronounced Mahh-see.” She said smiling. “But that’s alright.”

“Oh, I am terribly sorry.” She said her grin turning into a pout.

“No really it’s okay.” Massie replied.

“Alrighty then, how about I show you around? My name is Judi by the way.” Judi said.

“Sure!” Massie said cheerfully.

When they walked into the house, it was so huge! Massie couldn’t believe she was the only one living here.

“Well what do you think?” Judi asked her idiotic grin coming back.

“It’s beautiful!” Massie said. She was now grinning from earring to earring.

“Yup! And it comes with the furniture and the housekeeper.” Judi said. Walking into the kitchen. It was half as big as the living room. There was another woman there.

“Jocelyn, this is the new owner of the house.” Judi said to Jocelyn.

Jocelyn turned around. She was beautiful. She had black smooth long hair, emerald eyes , a Keira Knightly nose, and a pursed mouth.

“Hello.” Massie said extending her hair out toward Jocelyn. Jocelyn took it and shook with a firm grip.

“Hi.” Jocelyn replied.

“Jocelyn’s daughter Star lives here too. I guarantee that you’ll love her.” Judi said walking out of the kitchen back to the living room. They started to walk up the stairs that were in the middle of the living room.

“I’m going to show you your room.” Judi said. She stopped in front of a room and opened the door. Inside there were two girls going through some book. They both turned around and looked up.

“Star, Claire can you please go somewhere else? I’m showing the new owner the house.” Judi told the two girls. As they passed, the girl in blond that must be Claire scowled at Massie. Massie rolled her eyes.

“Well this is your room!” Judi told Massie. The room was pink and blue. Massie disliked it immediately. She hated the color pink. Hated it, hated it, hated it! She liked blue a little but she mostly loved purple. Purple was her favorite color. They went through the whole house. They finally went to the backyard. Outside was Star, Claire and some little boy with red hair. They were digging something by a tree.

“Star, Claire, and Todd! What are you kids up to?!” Judi shouted marching over to the trio. Massie pretended to not be interested and looked around. There was something that looked like a barn but had “Spa” written on top of the doors. There was a pool but it was covered with plastic. There was also a house in the back. Massie’s attention was caught by a boy who was by the gates. He had jet black hair, a black leather jacket and EHMAGAWD! He had a blue eye and a green eye. Massie had never seen a cuter boy. He looked her way and smiled. She smiled back. She found herself blushing. Claire then ran into his arms and he started to chuckle. Massie rolled her eyes again and went into the house.

“Like the house?” Jocelyn asked her.

“I love it.” She replied taking off her jacket. “It’s very beautiful.

Jocelyn took her jacket and put it away in a closet.

“I hope Star likes you. She is really going to miss Claire.” Jocelyn shook her head.

“Yeah I hope so too.” Massie replied , but she was looked at the mystery boy that probably is Claire’s boyfriend.

“Jocelyn would you please make me a hot chocolate? It helps me relax.” She said.

After having her hot chocolate, Judi went over to give Jocelyn a big hug and a kiss on the cheek. She did the same to Star. Then she came over to Massie.

“Massie, honey, I heard how you needed a school to go to and that you were sixteen so I enrolled you in the same school as Star and Claire. By the way Massie, where are your parents?” She asked. Massie couldn’t tell her about England. She imagined saying it.

Oh, I used to be a princess but I wanted to live like a real teenager so I bought these tickets and this house and set off for America…….Yes I’m a real princess…….Wait, why are you giving my money back?...Why are you pushing me out of the house?...But I don’t want to go back to England…... Well that went well.

“My father died and my mom blamed it on me and left me alone.” Massie half-lied.

“Oh I am so sorry! Listen if you ever need me ask Jocelyn for my number. She’ll give it to you. Okay?” Judi said hugging Massie.

“Okay.” Massie said her stomach dipping.

Layne Abeley

Ding .Dong

Massie raced to the door. She opened it. On the other side was a girl with brown hair that was put into French braids, green eyes, a blue Good Charlotte concert tee, red Old Navy jeans, and black flats. Massie giggled.

“Hey there! I’m Layne! I live next to you.” Layne said.

“I’m Massie.” Massie said.

“Wow! You live all alone here?” Layne said walking in.

“Uh not really. I live with Jocelyn and Star” Massie said.

“Cool!” Layne said.

“Hey, uh, Layne? Um, what school are you going to?” Massie asked.

“Briarwood Octavian Country Day High. You?” Layne said.

“Same!” Massie said excitedly.

“Ugh, what is THAT LBR doing here?” A voice said. It was Star.

“Oh, uh, Massie, I’ll see you at school.” Layne said walking away with her head hung. She slammed the door behind her. Star was spraying the place Layne was in with Lysol.

"What the heck was that for? She was trying to be friends with me!" Massie shouted at her.

“Listen biotch if you want to be cool, don’t hang out with Abeley. She is a dork and wears used clothes. She shops at second-hand stores and she is an LBR, which means Loser. Beyond. Repair. And stay away from Claire's boyfriend Cam. Cause I saw you smiling at him and blushing.” Star said with a disgusted face. Star was a replica of her mother except she had hazel eyes and was a total bitch. Star shook her head then went to her room. Massie sighed. She read a poem called ‘The Clique’ and it always helped her with decisions like this.

The hardest thing is not getting in, it’s staying in
They send you nasty comments and a fake grin,

Layne it was. I mean she just met the girl. She had to know more about her. So Massie went over to Layne’s house. As Massie was walking and zipping up her jacket outside she bumped into someone and he or she fell on top of her. When Massie got a good vision she could make out a girl. When her vision was clear, she saw…..

“Ehmagawd! Madeline is that YOU?!”
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Posted 13 March 2009 - 01:00 AM

I totally LUV it, Daph! Please write more soon! It's adorable!
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Posted 14 March 2009 - 04:50 PM

Meeting an Old Friend

Massie looked at the stranger trying to recognize her. But as soon as she saw the emerald green eyes and pale skin she knew who it was.

“Princess Destinee?” I asked. She didn’t have her natural brown silky hair, she now had red fiery curly medium hair. She hugged me and I hugged her back laughing. We both started to laugh. Then we just smiled at each other.

“How did you get your mum to agree for you to come to live in Ahmerica?” She asked Massie.

“She didn’t. I ran away. I was tired of being a princess.” Massie answered. Dylan was shocked and impressed.

“Are you serious? You’re ah-mazing! I guess you followed my footsteps! BTW my name is Dylan Marvil now.” Dylan said.

“What’s BTW?” Massie asked her with a confused face. Dylan chuckled.

“It means by the way!” She said chuckling. “Don’t worry I’ll teach you.”

“Ok. Of course I followed you're footsteps. You're my BFF. We have been since we were 4. Oh and uh, BTW my name is now Massie Block. Well Dylan I’ll see you around. I have to go see someone.” Massie said.

“Alright. BTW where do you live?” Dylan asked. Massie pointed to the mansion behind her.

“You live with Kuh-laire?” Dylan asked.

“NO! She moved out already.” Massie said.

“Aw man. I’ll just visit Star then.” Dylan said.

“Okay. Bye Dylan!” Massie waved bye and left to Layne’s house.

If you’re not “cool”, that’s exactly what you’ll get.
They’re everywhere, you can’t control it.
Louis Vuitton, Gucci, and Dior.
Prada, Chanel, and much, much more.

She rang the doorbell and Layne answered the door.

“Um, hey?” Layne said.

“Hey Layne. Mind if I come in?” Massie asked.

“Not at all.” Layne said smiling.

Star Lopez Is A Fun Girl

Star opened my door and barged in right when I was opening my white and purple paint cans. She looked mad and she was wearing overalls and her hair in two ponytails. Dylan looked the same and was smiling brightly.

“We’re here to help you paint.” Star gritted between a forced smile.

"Yea it was my idea!" Dylan said brightly

“Oh ok.” I handed paint brushes too them and two paint cans. They started to paint all the walls. When they were done, that;s when Star thought it would be fun to flick white paint at Dylan. She started to laugh and so did Dylan. Dylan dip her brush in the white paint and without even taking off some paint she flicked it whole at the still laughing Star. When she got hit she gasped. Massie didn’t even know what they were doing and she didn’t care. She kept painting her purple wall. But she felt something brush against her hair all the way down to her butt. She turned around and saw Star and Dylan laughing. Star had painted a line going down from Massie's head to her booty. They were covered in splatters of white paint. Massie dipped her brush in the purple paint and dropped it on Star’s head. Star gasped and turned around. Massie grabbed the brush and started to laughing so did Dylan, hysterically.

“You’re dead!” Star said with a smile. She ran out of the room and came back with three big water guns and handed one to each of them. “LOAD ‘EM UP!” Star shouted and ran to her can so did Dylan and Massie. And they started a paint war. Splatters of paint covered them walls and each other. They avoided part from the neck and up. But Star went full fire on Massie’s face. Luckily none got into her eyes and mouth. She had both closed. Massie smiled and then started to fire at them again. They were having so much fun that they didn’t notice Claire open the door and they accidentally shot paint at her. She screamed. They all turned toward her. Her whole outfit was covered in purple and white splatters. Claire pointed at Massie.

“YOU DID THIS!” Claire yelled. Dylan immediately came to Massie’s defense.

“Wait, Kuh-laire! It was all of us! We didn’t see you come in.” Dylan said.

“Massie, am I a wall?” Claire asked completely ignoring Dylan.

“What? No.” Massie said

“Then why did you paint me?” Claire said. Star giggled.

“Star come help me clean up.” Claire said. Star obeyed.

“Don’t mind her. She’s the alpha and what she says goes.” Dylan said when they were gone. She looked around the room.

“Hey, your room looks kind of good.” Dylan said. She was right. Splatters of different shades of purple and white were on the walls and it gave a cool vibe to the room.

“I don’t want to paint over it. I like it this way.” Massie said.

“Let's go take showers and then we can go to A Slice of Heaven.” Dylan suggested.

“Sure. Can Layne come?” Massie asked. Dylan’s face looked as if she smelled a fart.

“Layne?” Dylan asked.

“She is not an LBR Dylan. She’s really cool.” Massie said.

“Alright. She can come.” Dylan said sighing and leaving the room.
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Posted 15 March 2009 - 12:52 AM

That was AWESOME!! I'm TOTALLY getting into this!
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Posted 15 March 2009 - 01:11 AM

Meeting the Tomahawks

Layne, Dylan, and Massie were walking to SOH in complete awkward silence. Massie and Layne glanced at each other and knew that someone had to break the silence.

"So..." Layne said trying to start a conversation. "Are comfortable in the new neighborhood Mass?"

"Yea. I think Westchester's pretty good." Massie replied.

"That's good. That's good." Layne then turned to Dylan who was on the other side of her.

"So, uh, Dylan," Layne started to say.

"What LBR?" Dylan said.

"How is it in bitch world?" Layne said with a smile. "What did you guys do yesterday? Burn a house down?"

Dylan's mouth dropped. "Ex-ka-use me?" Dylan stopped walking. Layne stopped right in front of her.

"You heard what I said. You're not deaf." Layne said.

"You think you're so cool just because you wear those stupid USED CLOTHES." Dylan said.

"Have you ever thought of donating yourself to a Pet Shop? Cause you would make a great female dog!"

"Why don't you kiss one, lesbian?"

"Why don't you?"

"Because I'm straight!"

"Fine then go hump a tree!"

"STOP!" Massie stepped between them. "Can we puh-lease get to Slice of Heaven in peace?"

Layne and Dylan both stared at each other then started to walk again. Massie joined them and once again they were walking in complete silence.

"We're here." Dylan said flatly. Massie looked at SOH. It looked like a giant pizza oven. They entered and a woman with the name tag Angel was standing there with menus beside her.

"How many?" Angel asked with a wide-toothed grin.

"Three." Dylan said.

"Right this way.” Angel said and then took them to a table by a wall. The girls looked through the menus and decided that they should just get a regular cheese pie. Massie started to sip on her Pepsi when Dylan and Layne started to pick up on where they left off.

"Stop SUCKING on that straw lesbo." Dylan said.

"From you hair to your smile to your personality: FAKE, FAKE, and FAKE!" Layne fired back.

"Layne, Halloween isn't until October"

"Then why are you acting like such a bitch?"

"Stop insulting yourself."

"Your hair is messed up."

"Your brain is messed up."

"At least I have one!"

Massie kept sipping on her Pepsi and watching the fight.

"It's funny, how a girl like you can have such a tiny brain and still have a huge mouth."

"Look who's talking!"

"If you have such a huge mouth why don't you kiss an elephant?"

"Go hump a tree!" Those were Layne's last words when a guy with shaggy blond hair and warm brown eyes stopped at their table.

"Dylan what’s up?" He said then high-fived her. Massie wanted to drink more of her Pepsi but it was gone.

"Hey Derrick!" She said. "Where are your boys?"

"I'm going home. See ya later Massie!" Layne said then shot a glare at Dylan and stormed off. Derrick sat where Layne was sitting.

"Uh, Derrick, Massie. Massie, Derrick." Dylan introduced.

"Hi." Massie said.

"Hey. You new here?" Derrick asked. Massie nodded.

"She lives where the Lyons used to live." Dylan said. Another guy came and sat next to Derrick. Massie sat up straight. Claire's boyfriend.

"Hey Dylan." He said.

"Hey Cam! I think you didn't meet Massie did you?" Dylan said.

"Yea! I saw you at Claire's old house! You're the new owner right?" Cam asked. Massie nodded. Then a few more guys came. They pulled another table next to the one Cam, Dylan, Derrick, and Massie were sitting at.

"Hey Dylan." They all chorused.

"Hey New-Girl." The one with glasses said.

"Her name is Massie! Be nice." Cam said then gave a warm smile to Massie. Massie smiled back.

"Oh, sorry about that. Nice to meet you. I'm Chris but everyone calls me Plovert." He said. Dylan nudged her.

"Nice to meet you too." Massie hid behind her empty glass.

"I'm Josh." Josh had brown eyes, red lips and a NYY hat covering golden brown hair.

"And I'm Kemp!" The last one said. Massie waved at all of them. Derrick looked around.

"Derrick you know TPC doesn't eat here why are you looking around?" Dylan said.

"What are you talking about?" Massie asked.

"The Pretty Committee. The clique I'm in. Let's just say that I'm the only nice one in the group. There are five of us. Alicia is the beta, Kristen is the athlete, Star's the second prettiest one and Claire's the alpha. We rule BOCD High. The rest of the girls are mean and nasty! Except for me and Star. We're the only nice ones." Dylan replied

"Why are you so afraid of them showing up?" Massie pushed her glass away.

"Because they think they have the right to tell us what to do, or to hang out with." Plovert said.

"Yea and Plovert and I rock cause we don't have to follow their rules cuz we're not their boyfriends!" Plovert and Kemp high-fived. Massie's eyebrows knitted in confusion.

"Josh is Alicia's BF, Derrick's Star's BF, and Cam's Claire's BF." Dylan explained.

"Why don't you just, y'know leave the group?" Massie asked.

"Because if we do, Claire can crush us with the snap of her finger." Dylan explained.

"Why doesn't Claire go hump a tree?" Kemp said. All the boys, Massie, and Dylan laughed except for Cam who rolled his eyes.

"C'mon Cam, she isn't here! You can make fun of her all you want." Josh said.

"Star sprayed paint all over Claire with a water gun and Claire blamed it on Massie." Dylan said with an eye roll.

"Claire's a biotch." Plovert said. Cam punched Plovert's arm.

"No she is not!" Cam said.

"Dude, how many times have you broken up with her?" Derrick asked.

"At least 3 times!" Cam said.

"THREE TIMES?!" The whole table except for Massie and Cam yelled.

"You must be out of your mind!" Dylan said.

"You and Claire have broken up 17 times!" Kemp told him.

"And counting!" Plovert added.

"What?! Claire said it would for real this time!" Cam said.

"Who gives a shit about what Claire says? You got to move on man and leave her in the dust like she does to you for three days and then calls you back crying on the phone of how much she needs you back." Josh said.

"I just can't." Cam said running his hand through his hair.

"Yes you can. We'll be right there with you!" Dylan said.

"You don't understand!" Cam said looking up.

"He doesn't want to break up with her cause he lost his virginity to her." Derrick said. Everyone laughed except Massie. She knew why Cam couldn't break up with Claire. The same thing happened to her in England. Cam fumed and stormed out of SOH.

"Come on guys lets leave this place. He'll calm down sooner or later." Derrick said. They all left, not paying the bill.

Later that day Massie was putting all the new furniture into her new room when Star stomped in.

"I'm sorry Claire blamed you for spraying paint all over her." Star said. Massie ignored her and went back to fixing her bed.

"She hates you because Cam won't stop talking about you and she broke up with him 15 minutes ago. Again." Star said. Massie looked at Star, shook her head then when to open her drawers but remembered that she has to go shopping. She reminded herself that she has to call Dylan to ask her to take her shopping.

"Listen; don't hate me because Claire hates you. I'm just trying to be nice because my mom told me to. Maybe we can hang out sometime?" Star said. Massie exhaled and thought about it.

"Sure. Tomorrow you, Dylan and I can go shopping. But right now I'm not in the mood. So why don't you go hump a tree." Massie said without looking at her.
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Posted 17 March 2009 - 09:05 PM

ooo, ouch! this just keeps getting better and BETTER!
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Posted 16 April 2009 - 09:20 AM

Yes, it is realy awesome...It's so exiting!!!I think you're very talanted!!!Thank You!!! :bff:
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Posted 21 April 2009 - 08:36 AM

AWESOME!
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Posted 26 April 2009 - 01:24 PM

So, Where's the continuation???
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