well my fist idea was great until I got to the 5th chapter and the I got witers blok and also lost inters but I got a new Idea soo here is chapter 1.........
Christmas is a time for the family .In most places you find your self surrounded by family or friends ,that is in most.My name is Cindy Vortex and I have spent 11 Christmas alone. I am naturally smart girl and was able to take care if myself at a young age,so my parent's left me alone in the house allot.most kind love it but I don't especially in Christmas.Now I'm 16 years old and alone in the house with my brother in Christmas . Welcome to my life..
so waht do you think good bad tell me its my firs time so tell me if I should keep writing :lol:
For the X-mas contest
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, Dec 21 2008 01:12 AM
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Beks
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Posted 21 December 2008 - 02:43 AM
It sounds like a very intriging plot to me. Let's see more! :thumbsup:
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Posted 21 December 2008 - 08:22 AM
Ooh, I want to see more of this... it looks great! ^_^
^Kaytron^ :ph43r:
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