Excellent chapter, Millie.
Keep up the great work.
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My First Girlfriend Ever!
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, Oct 08 2008 02:20 AM
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I'D forgive you, FJ... <3<3
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Posted 05 December 2008 - 05:44 PM
I can't wait for the next one!! You rock!!!! :bff:
Cya!
Cya!
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Posted 06 December 2008 - 03:07 AM
Come on Millie post another chapter!
I know you're out there somewhere.
Come on IDOJ again, BFF! You're missing all the fun!
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I know you're out there somewhere.
Come on IDOJ again, BFF! You're missing all the fun!
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I'D forgive you, FJ... <3<3
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Posted 08 December 2008 - 08:39 PM
YEAH!!! Totally! :bff:
Cya!
Cya!
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Posted 12 December 2008 - 07:52 PM
Oh thanks so much for the replies you guys.
I will be sure to update this ASAP!
Millicent
I will be sure to update this ASAP!
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Posted 12 December 2008 - 10:55 PM
Chapter 4
We got to the Candy Bar, Victoria and I, and we saw my friends there.
I went over to them.
"Guys, I want you to meet someone. This is my new neighbor, Victoria Hutchinson."
"Hey Victoria," everyone said.
"Hey," Victoria said.
"Victoria, that is Jimmy, Carl, Cindy, and Libby."
"Nice to meet you all."
All my friends were happy to meet Victoria.
"So will you be going to our school Victoria?"
"Yes, I will. You guys don't have to call me Victoria, you can call me Vicki, or Torie."
"Okay," we alll said.
Torie and I sat down with my friends, we told Torie what it was like to live in Retroville.
"I'm sure I'll like it here then."
I kept looking at Libby. How would I ever tell her that this new girl could possibly become my new girlifriend?
I knew I would have to tell her some time, but I just had to know when.
Yeah not that good of a chapter, but please reply.
Marching Millie
We got to the Candy Bar, Victoria and I, and we saw my friends there.
I went over to them.
"Guys, I want you to meet someone. This is my new neighbor, Victoria Hutchinson."
"Hey Victoria," everyone said.
"Hey," Victoria said.
"Victoria, that is Jimmy, Carl, Cindy, and Libby."
"Nice to meet you all."
All my friends were happy to meet Victoria.
"So will you be going to our school Victoria?"
"Yes, I will. You guys don't have to call me Victoria, you can call me Vicki, or Torie."
"Okay," we alll said.
Torie and I sat down with my friends, we told Torie what it was like to live in Retroville.
"I'm sure I'll like it here then."
I kept looking at Libby. How would I ever tell her that this new girl could possibly become my new girlifriend?
I knew I would have to tell her some time, but I just had to know when.
Yeah not that good of a chapter, but please reply.
Marching Millie
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Posted 13 December 2008 - 12:11 AM
Nice cute and short little chapter, Millie.
Let's see if Sheen tells Libby or not that he likes Vicki.
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Let's see if Sheen tells Libby or not that he likes Vicki.
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I'D forgive you, FJ... <3<3
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Posted 13 December 2008 - 04:46 AM
Can't wait......................please update! (haha, that rhymes!)
Cya!
Cya!
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Posted 28 December 2008 - 01:25 AM
Hey Millie, please write more of this!
I hope you had a great Christmas I haven't seen you yet during break.
You can come over anytime you know. Just because my father's here, doesn't mean you don't have to come over.
I hope you had a great Christmas I haven't seen you yet during break.
You can come over anytime you know. Just because my father's here, doesn't mean you don't have to come over.
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Posted 28 December 2008 - 04:09 AM
Don't worry, Gretchen, I'll write more of this.
You know I'll come over sometime. Maybe tomorrow.
See ya later, BFF.
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You know I'll come over sometime. Maybe tomorrow.
See ya later, BFF.
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Posted 12 February 2009 - 09:54 PM
Hey guys Chapter 5 of my story will be up soon!
I hope you'll still read this!
I hope you'll still read this!
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Posted 12 February 2009 - 10:25 PM
Hey Millie. I just read the four chapters you've got so far.
I thought they were pretty cute and that it was a good start to your story.
But...could they be longer? Long chapters are awesome :D
So...is this gonna be SL or SOC? I'd like either pairing, because I like this Victoria character you created. And I like how straightforward they are with their liking each other to begin with. I thought that was really cute.
Also, the fact that it's Sheencentric...+1000 points for being about Sheen.
I thought they were pretty cute and that it was a good start to your story.
But...could they be longer? Long chapters are awesome :D
So...is this gonna be SL or SOC? I'd like either pairing, because I like this Victoria character you created. And I like how straightforward they are with their liking each other to begin with. I thought that was really cute.
Also, the fact that it's Sheencentric...+1000 points for being about Sheen.
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Posted 12 February 2009 - 10:28 PM
Sure they'll be longer Mary.
Remember, they're beginning chapters, they're going to be short.
As the story goes on, it's going to have longer chapters.
I hope you'll continue to read it.
Thanks for all the nice compliments.
Remember, they're beginning chapters, they're going to be short.
As the story goes on, it's going to have longer chapters.
I hope you'll continue to read it.
Thanks for all the nice compliments.
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Posted 12 February 2009 - 10:50 PM
Glad they'll be up soon! *looks over at Sheen* Cuz I don't think he can wait much longer.
:Sheen: GOT that right, Amelia! *jumps up & down* C'mon, C'MON, Millie!!! Huuuuuuurrrrrrrryyyy uuuuuuuuuup!!!!!!!!!!
Wow. Either Sheen's REALLY impatient, or he REALLY has to GO!! :lol:
:Sheen: GOT that right, Amelia! *jumps up & down* C'mon, C'MON, Millie!!! Huuuuuuurrrrrrrryyyy uuuuuuuuuup!!!!!!!!!!
Wow. Either Sheen's REALLY impatient, or he REALLY has to GO!! :lol:
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Posted 13 February 2009 - 12:49 AM
Yay you're continuing your story!
Post soon Millie!
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Post soon Millie!
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Posted 20 February 2009 - 03:00 AM
Hey if you guys still wanna read this, Chapter 5 will be up this weekend!
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I'D forgive you, FJ... <3<3
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Posted 20 February 2009 - 03:37 AM
Yes, I DO!!! DO post it this weekend!
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Posted 20 February 2009 - 08:44 AM
(Vehemently agrees with Em.) It looks good! Do post quickly! :D
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Posted 20 February 2009 - 08:14 PM
Well don't worry Emily and Fireysue, you'll have the chapter tonight or tomorrow!
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Posted 20 February 2009 - 08:20 PM
Cool! What about JN:BG, Big Bro? Can't you finish that one, too? Tell me if I'm being too demanding, k?
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