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#881 RocksmySocks

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Posted 11 May 2009 - 11:03 PM

(Emily. I apologize in advance, but you can't do that. If you are going to roleplay, you have to accept that your powers are not limitless. You can't always win. A good story has both conflict and success, but you never seem to allow for conflict. Beks and I have worked very hard on this roleplay, making it into a story, and we don't want to see our efforts messed up. Being able to always escape ruins the suspense.

In addition, it violates the rules of the NK, set down by Mara in the Joining the NK topic.

4) You may not give yourself ridiculous superpowers. As Krista so succinctly put it, "it's annoying when a person tries to make their abilities outdo someone elses-- THE MARY SUE KNIGHTS." All Neutron knights should have (roughly) equal powers. You can give yourself cool fighting abilities, but they should be hard earned, not just POOF! I'm super powerful.

The NK are not about having superpowers. Knights are every day people, with every day faults and every day limitations. We may be smarter, and some of us may have a special gift, etc, but we can't just poof ourselves out of every situation.

I am asking you politely to please respect the story Beks and I have created here. If we're in trouble, we're not actually asking to be saved, even if our characters are. We're working towards an emotional end to this storyline, and that won't work if you keep magically having the ability to solve every crisis with a flick of your wrist. We HAVE to have conflict and suspense. We have to be captured, we have to have painful things happen.

In other plotlines, I am okay with people having more fun. But Beks and I are trying to wrap up something painful right now. You can't be the hero to this story. I'm sorry. It'll all be made clear soon why that is.

Thanks for understanding.)
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 12:01 AM

(On a slightly unrelated note, I'm excited for the NKs first anniversary on June 11. :wub: )

*The sunlight filtering through the trees grows brighter as they walk, and suddenly they come to the edge of the forest. A quaint little village stood in the near distance, innocent smoke rising from many chimneys. An old graveyard stood apart on the right*

I think this is Spike's old hometown. I heard her talking about the awful smell that came from the Junkyard if the wind was blowing just right.

*A voice answers from the shadows of the last tree*

Voice: Yeah, it was pretty nasty at times.

*The figure moved out of the darkness to reveal itself. Standing before them, arms crossed casually, was Spike herself*
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 12:03 AM

*stares, utterly amazed*

Spike!

Oh thank goodness! Oh, it looks like they didn't even lay a hand on you!

*rushes over to embrace her*
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 12:10 AM

*Spike holds up a hand to stop Rat Lady's advance*

Spike: Don't come any closer, Rat Lady, for you own good.

Me: What are you talking about, Spike, and why aren't you tied up or anything? Didn't Eustace steal you away?

Eustace: *comes to stand next to Spike* I'm afraid to tell you that your little comrade here came to me on her own. Seems as if she's accepted her dark and evil destiny, and wishes to open the Chest. *puts an arm around Spike's shoulders* Isn't that right, my little key holder?
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 12:30 AM

*tears start to form*

Writer Woman: *gasps* No. No, no, no. Not after everything we've been through...

Me: Spike...no...no this isn't right. You must be...you can't be...can't be serious. Something else is going on. Something else has to be going on!

Spike: Rat Lady, I've chosen my destiny. I knew it would not be what Writer Woman and you would agree with. I first tried to run away, but I did not get far before I could feel fate wrap itself around me. Don't you see? This is who I am. There is no fighting it.

Me: *tears fall* But...Spike...

Spike: *gives hard stare* This HAS to be the way.

Eustace: *grinning* You see? What a logical little soul we have here, eh, ladies? Now hand over the Chest.

Writer Woman: *about to hand it over, then suddenly bursts into action* Rat Lady, now!

*Takes a dive at Eustace, punching and kicking*

*suddenly thrown to the ground by Spike and held there*

Spike: *taking the Chest from a shocked Writer Woman* Go. Get away from here. This is my destiny. MINE!

*she shoves both of us backwards, and moves back to Eustace's side*


*Writer Woman and I cling to one another, neither of us certain what to do next*
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 01:37 AM

*despite myself, a single tear streaks down my face*

Me: As you wish, Spike. You are my dear friend and comrade, so I trust your judgment.

Rat Lady: Are you crazy, Writer Woman? We can't just let her go! This is the end of the worldas we're talking about!

Me: No, she's right. This is the way it has to be.

*holds Rat Lady's shoulder reassuringly and starts to back away into the forest. But before we take a dozen steps, a wall of henchment block their path*

Eustace: *speaks to Spike* As much as I too trust your judgement, my dear, I can't just let these two women go. They can be the witnesses to this glorious event.

Spike: *gives the Chest to Eustace* Very well. It would be good to have them see this.
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 01:44 AM

*sobs*

Oh gods, please, there has to be something we can do! We can't let this happen! I won't let this happen!

*SCREAMS and launches self at the henchmen, beating through them*

You can't do this to her! No! She isn't evil! SHE'S MY FRIEND!!!!!!!

*Writer Woman walks over and lays a hand on my shoulder*

Writer Woman: Rat Lady, please. We can't win this. Spike has a destiny to fulfill.

Me: Oh no, not you, too! There is no such thing as destiny! You have a choice, Spike! We all have a choice!

Spike: *gives a pained smile* Rat Lady. I already told you. I made my choice. Please, if you ever cared for me...let me do this.
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 01:51 AM

Me: Trust me, Rat Lady, this is killing me too, but part of being a good hero and friend is being able to let go.

Rat Lady: *sobs* But...this isn't just Spike we're losing. The world's gonna end too!

Me: We'll be fine, Rat Lady.

Eustace: *yawns* As amusing as this soap opera is, we should really get a move on, shall we?

*We are tied up again and led across the clearing and towards the graveyard. Rat Lady sniffles quietly beside me and I suddenly wish I had my hands back so I could hug her*
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 01:53 AM

*whispers*

Ratty...just in case I can't figure out a way to stop this before...well...Just know that I love you, sweetie. You're being a very good girl. Stay hidden. And whatever happens...stay with me.
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#890 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 13 May 2009 - 07:02 PM

*does NOT interfere anymore*

Me: What do you WANT from me, Mr. TOOTH-FAIRY'S-WORST-NIGHTMARE???!! *folds arms as I'm captured once more, to my sheer infuriatedness* And HOW, dare I ask, did you LIVE for all these HUNDREDS of years??? <_<
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Posted 18 May 2009 - 08:25 PM

(He's the great grandson of the original Eustace ;) )
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#892 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 19 May 2009 - 11:05 PM

(Wouldn't that leave us only about a century, give or take, in the future, instead of MANY HUNDREDS of years?? Trust me, I'm a whiz in math and have calculated it before using another fave TV show of mine: Phil of the Future, in the ep called Not So Great-Great-Grandfather... Trust me; I know what I'm talking about. ^_^ B) )
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Posted 19 May 2009 - 11:18 PM

(Well, maybe he's more than a great grandson...probably more like a great great great great grandson, but yeah, it's still supposed to be lots of centuries ago)


Me: *whispers to Rat Lady* I know this may sound a bit too optimistic at this point, but I have faith that Spike will do the right thing.
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#894 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 20 May 2009 - 02:20 AM

(Let's just say he's a distant descendant of him, ok?)

*morphs into liquid lava that's WAAAAAAAAYYYY too hot to touch and will melt ANYTHING*
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#895 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 10 March 2010 - 01:24 AM

*brings life back into this topic*

I'm back, as Atomic Anna, from several months of superpower upgrading training! I've discovered that I can bring back others from the grave and restore them to their young selves again from between ages 0 to 18! I also know the exact locations of the Great One and his friends' graves by using an advanced form of telekinesis to locate their deteriorated DNA signatures! Luckily for us, they are located just 1 mile from our location! *uses advanced telekinesis* Concentrate...concentrate... AHA!!! *hands glow as I bring them out of the ground and back to us, then restoring them to their 11/12-year-old selves, and finally awakens them* Jimmy and friends, welcome to Neutronia, A.D. 2800!! I think they need some explaining, my friends! Care to help them out??

(Is all that okay, guys?? I was just "DYIN'" to include them SOMEHOW!!!! If I'm breaking the rules here, I understand, but I won't be happy about it if ya kick me out! Plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplz allow this!! I miss them not being in this topic, so PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ????????? *puppy-dog eyes*)
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Posted 11 March 2010 - 12:14 AM

(Sorry, Em, the kids are not in this RP. You have plenty of other RPs going that have the kids, so just you'll have to just let us have this one without them. You can participate, of course, but don't bring the gang into it, because that's really not how our story is going.)

(I agree that we should start this back up...)
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#897 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 11 March 2010 - 01:07 AM

(WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( )
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Posted 11 March 2010 - 01:55 AM

Me: *whispers to Rat Lady* I know this may sound a bit too optimistic at this point, but I have faith that Spike will do the right thing.


Me *whispering to Write Woman*: I just don't understand...I don't understand how this is happening...

Eustace *irritated*: Wow, do you two ever just shut up? Keep that up, and I'll just shoot you both now.
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#899 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 11 March 2010 - 01:58 AM

(I may as well leave this again cuz I can't stand anything here JN-related that doesn't have the gang involved... I mean it this time. Not. KIDDING.)
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Posted 11 March 2010 - 01:59 AM

(That's fine if you don't want to participate, Em. Everyone has their own preferences when it comes to RP topics.)
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