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Posted 22 May 2008 - 07:12 PM

Please I need more people reading this, so tell someone.

Here's chapter 4.
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I looked at the expression on Jimmy's face. He didn't look upset at all about me being pregnant. He actually looked pretty ecstatic. "Jimmy," I said, "Are you okay?" Jiimmy looked at Hugh and me. "Mom, a-are you r-really pregnant?" Jimmy asked? "Yes, Jimmy, I really am," I said. "You're going to be a big brother Jimbo. We know how much you wanted to be one too," Hugh said. Jimmy was so excited, he started talking really fast without taking one breath. "Oh my gosh this is so exquisit. I can't wait to tell Carl and Sheen tomorrow, they will love this news, and then I'll tell my whole class, and Ms. Fowl, and Cindy, and Libby, and Principal Willoughby and and..."Jimmy ran out of breath and had to take one. "Calm down Jimmy," I said, the baby won't be here for 5 months, and I really want to know what I'm having. That's why next week I'm going to get an ultra sound." "And then we'll know what you mother is having," Hugh said. Jimmy just then jumped right out of his seat. "I gotta go call Carl and Sheen and tell them," Jimmy said. Then he ran out of the kitchen saying, "I'm going to be a big brother! I'm going to be a big brother!" I smiled to myself. Now my little Jimmy was going to be a science and math genius, and a big brother at the same time.
I was happy that Jimmy was going to be a big brother. The baby was going to learn a lot from him. I looked at Hugh. "Oh Hugh, didn't you see how happy Jimmy was? He was really excited," I said. Hugh said, "And you didn't even want to tell Jimbo today Judy cakes, you wanted to wait another day," Hugh said. "Well, I didn't know he'd like the news," I said. Then Hugh and I cleaned up and we started planning what we would need for the baby and what day next week I should go and see what I'm having. Whatever I had, I knew the baby would be happy to have Jimmy for a big brother, and Jimmy would be happy to have him/her for a brother/sister.

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Quote from Chapter 4: "The square root of a flex nard is a cup full of boogers"-Carl Wheezer
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Posted 22 May 2008 - 07:17 PM

I'll do Chapter 5 also.

This one is long because it has 3 parts.
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The next day, Jimmy went into school feeling very happy that he was going to become a big brother. He had called Carl and Sheen last night and told them about his mom being pregnant and they had been excited about that. "See Jimmy I told you your mom was going to have one some day! And that just happened to come true!" Sheen had said. "Yeah, Jim, now you'll have a little brother or sister," Carl had said. Jimmy couldn't wait to tell his class the news. They would all be proud of Jimmy, but he wondered how two girls in his class would react to this fact, and they were none other then Cynthia Aurora Vortex, and Liberty Danielle Folfax. Would they care or not? Jimmy secretly hoped that Cindy would care. He went to his locker to get his stuff for his morning classes then went right into Ms. Fowl's room. Later after announcements had finished and Ms. Fowl had taken attendance, she said it was time for show and tell. Jimmy's hand shot up in the air very quickly. "Okay, Jimmy brawk, you can go first, but you didn't bring in anything to share," Ms. Fowl said. "Well, Ms. Fowl I actually have some good news to tell the class," Jimmy said. "Okay, Jimmy. I would like to hear your news too," Ms. Fowl said. Jimmy got up and went to the front of the room. "The good news happened to me last night. I found out something really exciting!" Jimmy said. "Yeah and he told us too, his mom is..." Sheen started to say. "Sheen, no. Let Jimmy tell them the news," Carl said. "Thank you Carl. Anyway, as I was about to say. Last night I found out my mom is pregnant!" Jimmy exclaimed. A whole burst of cheers rang out from the classroom! Jimmy couldn’t believe it! So many people were happy for him. “Like way to go Jimmy. That is like so exciting!” Brittany said. “Yeah, Neutron, you actually told us something that was exciting,” Nick said. Everyone had something to say to Jimmy. Libby was even proud of him. “Oh Jimmy that’s so rockin’ awesome!” she said. Jimmy was wondering when Cindy would speak up. She did but she didn’t say congratulations she said, “Oh great another big headed Neutron in the world!” That’s what she said aloud, but inside her head, she was full of love and excitement. ‘Jimmy is going to be a big brother, oh not only will he be a science genius, but a big brother too. And he’ll still be a total hunk muffin.’
Jimmy looked at Cindy with anger. "Cindy, how dare you say that! This is a new baby that is entering our world, our society, and you don't even care? I can't believe you!" Then he stomped back to his seat real upset and didn't talk to anyone for the rest of class. Ms. Fowl had liked Jimmy's news very much. She had said to him after class, "Jimmy, brawwwk. I thought your news was brawwwk rather exciting. Don't let Cindy brawwk bother you." Jimmy had said, "I kow Ms. Fowl." Later in the hallway Cindy saw Jimmy at his locker. He still looked upset even after Ms. Fowl talked to him. Cindy went up to him. "Hey Neutron," she said. Jimmy turned around and frowned. "Oh great. What do you want now, Vortex?" he asked exasperatedly. "Jimmy, I really didn't mean what I said in class. I didn't want everyone to know how I really feel about this news," Cindy said. Jimmy looked at her with a smile coming on his face. "You mean you actually care?" Jimmy asked. (And now heres some J/C action for anyone who's a J/C fanatic) Cindy looked at him. "Yes, I do, Jimmy. I am glad you're going to be a big brother. The baby will learn so much from you. You're an excellent guy. That baby will be so lucky to have you for a brother." Jimmy blushed." Really Cindy? You really mean all this?" Jimmy asked. "Yes, Jimmy. I really do. I really think you are going to be the best brother ever for a baby. I think you're excellent too." She blushed as she said this. Jimmy blushed too and started to hold her hands. "Thanks Cindy. That really means a lot to me. I think you're excellent too. i think you would make a good sister too if you ever became one." Jimmy said. "Oh Jimmy, you dont know how much that means to me," Cindy said. They stood holding each others hands and looking lovingly into each others eyes. Then they sadly let go as the bell for the next class rang. "I'll see you later Jimmy," Cindy said, and she blew a little kiss to him as she went into her classroom. Jimmy almost bumped into the wall as he realized what had just happened to him. Then remembering that the last bell was going to ring, he quickly got his. things and went into his next class. Sheen and Libby walked down the hallway hand in hand. (This is happening at the same time Jimmy and Cindy are together).
"Oh Libby isn't it wonderful how we're the only ones in the hallway?" Sheen asked Libby. Libby looked at Sheen. "Yeah, I know. Now we can finally have some time together," Libby said. (Now here comes the S/L that we've all been waiting for). Sheen blushed. "You mean it, Libs? You actually like spending time with me?" he asked. "Of course I do Sheen. You're really fun to be around," Libby said. Sheen blushed again and looked at Libby. "Libby, that really means a lot to me. You know if you became a big sister like Jimmy is going to become a big brother, you'd make a great sister to the baby," Sheen said. Libby blushed. "Oh Sheen, that's so sweet. That really means a lot to me," she said. Libby turned forward and held Sheen's hands. They stood looking into each other eyes, very lovingly. Then the bell rang for class. "Oh Libby, I don't really want to go to class. I just want to stay here with you," Sheen said sadly.
"Oh Sheen, I don't want to leave either, but we'll see each other again,"Libby said. She let go of his hands and gave him a quick kiss on the cheek. Then she went into her room. Sheen touched the cheek where Libby kissed him , and said, "I really love that girl." Then he got his things from his locker. Then went into his next class. Cindy and Libby were both really happy when they saw each other in Ms. Zouri's math class because they had both spent time with their loves. "Cin, guess what? Sheen and I actually spent time together," Libby told her friend. "That's great Libs. Because I finally hung out with Jimmy. And it was nice." Cindy said. "I knew you two would get over your differences someday," Libby said. Cindy just smiled and the two girls sat down. (While they had that conversation, Jimmy and Sheen were talking about their time with Cindy and Libby in Mrs. Sippi's science room). Carl said, "Wow, you guys have great lives. You have people that care about you." "Don't worry, Carl. You''ll have someone that you'll love in the future," Sheen said. "Yep, I concur withSheen. You will find love someday Carl," Jimmy said. "Thanks giys," Carl said. Then he said to himself, "I already have someone that I love. Judy Neutron."

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Now please read this,
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Quotes from chapter 5: "You messy little hooligan. I just cleaned that floor 8 months ago. Yea."-Sam Melnick
"Plus ponies on the wall paper. Please what am I five?"-Libby Folfax
"Good morrow scholars. Sorry I'm tardy. I was doing this morning's crossword puzzle in pen"-Sheen Estavez

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Posted 23 May 2008 - 09:27 PM

Wow, Gretchen!

J/C and S/L! In one chapter. That's awesome!

And congrats to having 100 posts!



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Posted 28 May 2008 - 07:20 PM

Thanks Toki for your reply.

I feel grateful that at least someone is replying to my post.

But I think I'll talk to myself again.
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Posted 28 May 2008 - 07:21 PM

Hello Gretchen,

Do you like my story so far?
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Posted 28 May 2008 - 07:21 PM

Yes, i do.

Please post chapter 6.

I want to read it.
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Posted 28 May 2008 - 07:26 PM

Okay here's Chapter 6 for you Miss Gretchen Nicole W.

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When I came home from school, I was so excited because I had finally spent some time with Cindy. But when I went into the family room, I was surprised to see Mom not at the doctor's. She said she was going to be there when I came home. Dad was with her on the couch. "Mom, how come you're not at the doctor's?" I asked. Mom looked upset. "Jimmy, the doctor wasn't in today, now I have to wait till next month to see what I'm having, and I just can't wait that long," Mom said. "You're mother is very upset, Jimbo, and so am I," said Dad. That's when I stood with my arms crossed, and my facial expression becoming thoughtful like it always does when I'm thinking. I knew I had made an invention the other day that might help Mom, but I just couldn't remember what it was. That's when I had my Brain Blast. "Come on think, think, think," I said to myself. Then I remembered, my X-Ray machine. "Brain Blast!" I said. "Mom, stay here. I'll be right back." Then I rushed to my clubhouse, held my hair up to the DNA scanner, and went into my lab. I found the machine and brought it back to the family room. "Jimmy, what is that?" Mom asked. "It's an X-Ray machine, Mom. If the doctor can't tell you what I'm having, then I will." I said. "Wait a minute. I'm confused," said Dad. "I thought X-Rays were only for seeing bones." "You're right Dad, but I can switch the view on here to not see bones, just the baby," I said. "Oh," Dad said. So I did just that and gave Mom the thing on the machine that sticks to her stomach on top of her clothes, and then turned on the machine. The picture came into focus. When I looked at the screen, I gasped. I could not believe what I saw. "Leaping leptons!" I exclaimed. "What? Jimmy, is something wrong with the baby?" Mom asked. "No, Mom. The baby is fine. It's just what your having caught me by surprise." I said. "What is she having, Jimbo?" Dad asked. I looked at Mom sitting on the sofa, and Dad on the sofa next to her. "Jimmy, if the baby is healthy, tell me what I'm having." Mom said. "Are you sure Mom?" I asked. "Yes, Jimmy. Please tell me. I can't take the suspense any longer," Mom said. "Me neither," Dad said. "Okay," I said. I took a deep breath, then looked at my parents impatient excited faces. I looked Mom right in the eyes and said. "Mom, you are having twins.”
Mom looked at me. "Tw-tw twins? Twins! Hugh, isn't this wonderful? We're having twins!" Mom exclaimed. Dad was upset about this at first. "Oh, no. That's two more mouths to feed." Then he became excited. "But hey, if they're boys, I can name them after me! One Hugh Neutron Jr. and the other one Hugh Neutron II. That'll be cool. I'll finally have someone named afer me," Dad said. I looked at the babies again on the screen. Then back at Dad and Mom's excited faces. If I told them the truth, mom would be happy, but probably not Dad. "Uh, Dad. You should probably know something," I said. Dad stopped dancing around. "Oh, Jim Jam, do you want to say that you're happy too? I know you'll have two brothers now!" he said. "No, Dad. That's not what I wanted to say," I said. Dad got shocked. "Jimbo, you mean you don't want brothers? But I thought you wanted to become a big brother," dad said. "I do Dad, but I am not going to have two brothers. I'm going to have two sisters because Mom is having identical twin girls," I said.

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Quotes from Chapter 6:


"Oh, Jimmy, about Einstein being a hall monitor, that was my sister, Eunice. I'm always getting them mixed up."-Principal Willoughby

"Yeah right, Libby. When am I ever going to have a science genius and a sweet but clueless yuss fighting over me again?"-Cindy Vortex

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Posted 28 May 2008 - 07:26 PM

Thanks Gretchen.

I'll read it when i have time.

Good bye.
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Posted 28 May 2008 - 07:27 PM

Good bye.

The next time you want a chapter, just tell me okay?
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Posted 28 May 2008 - 07:28 PM

Okay.

Bye.
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Posted 28 May 2008 - 07:28 PM

Okay bye.
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Posted 28 May 2008 - 08:07 PM

oy vey! Are you talking to yourself again? :rolleyes: I think this is a lovely story, so don't go crazy. I'll never get to see more of it if you go crazy. :P

Yeah, two sisters! :dance:
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Posted 05 June 2008 - 07:37 PM

Chapitre sept pour mes amis.
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I looked at what Jimbo just said. "Twin girls?" I asked. "Yeah Dad. Twin girls. If you find that to utterly surprising for you to comprehend, then come and look yourself," Jimbo said. So I went over and looked in his X-Ray thing and saw the babies. "Holy ducks! Sugar Booger, you are having twin girls!" I said. "I know. I'm shocked about this too, Hugh," Judy said. Then Jimmy said "Well, I have to go do my homework now. So I'll let you guys be now." Then Jimbo took his X-Ray thing away and then went to his room. Judy and I exchanged glances. "Well, Judy I guess we'll be parents to twin girls." I said. "Yep, now we have to make more plans because we made our plans before we found out I was having twins," Judy said. "Yep." I said. I was a little disappointed that I wouldn't be able to name the babies after me, but I was still happy. Not only because Judy was having them , and because I was going to be their father, but because Jimbo was finally going to be a big brother like he always wanted to, and that makes me happy a lot.
Judy and I got out our plans that we had made the other day. We had to change our plans around now since we were having twins. Judy and I silently fixed the plans. We were to shocked by the fact that Judy was having twins to say anything. Finally when we were done our plans Judy said, "Well, Hugh. Now that we have plans made we need to come up with names." I sighed. "I never like this part because I can't think up names," I said. "Of course you can, Hugh," Judy said. "No, I can't. You're the one that came up with Jimmy's name. I remember perfectly. We were sitting together at the kitchen table and we were coming up with names, and you said, "Let's name our baby James Isaac Neutron." And I agreed with you," I said. Judy looked at me. "No, you didn't Hugh. You wanted to name Jimmy, Thomas Frank Neutron," Judy said. (A/N: This is all made up by me with the names). "Well, I thought it was a good name, but then we finally agreed on his name together," I said. "Yeah it took a while, but we both liked it," Judy said. "We just have to agree on the names that one of us says." "Yep," I said. Then we both sat in silence thinking of names, until they came to me. I turned to Judy. "Judy," I said. "Let's name them Elizabeth Katilda Neutron and Jillian Margaret Neutron."

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Posted 05 June 2008 - 07:59 PM

I love the names! So cute! ^_^
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Posted 05 June 2008 - 10:36 PM

Awww, what cute names. Jillian Margaret and Elizabeth Katilda. I love them!

Write more soon,
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Posted 08 June 2008 - 04:09 PM

Hey Gretchen,

I remember this story very well back on nick.com.

It is very exciting. Please post more soon.

Hannah Nicole H. 13 year old genius/scientist.
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Posted 08 June 2008 - 05:28 PM

Post chapter 8 please Gretchen.
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Posted 13 June 2008 - 06:42 PM

Chapitre 8 pour mes amis
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I looked at Hugh. Had he just said good names without thinking? "Hugh, what were those names you said?" I asked. "Elizabeth Katilda Neutron and Jillian Margaret Neutron. Why did you ask me that for? You don't like the names? Oh it's just like when we were picking out Jimbo's name you didn't like the name I gave him. Well, then you can name them, Judy," Hugh said. I looked at Hugh."No, Hugh. I like those names," I said. Hugh perked up. "You do? You like the names I picked? For real?" he asked. "Yes, Hugh. I like those names. I knew you could think of names," I said. "So it's settled right. We can name them Elizabeth Katilda and Jillian Margaret?" Hugh asked. I thought for a moment. "Before we actually settle the names. There's one thing we have to do," I said. "What's that?" Hugh asked. "We have to ask Jimmy what he thinks of the names. He has to agree on the names too since they'll be his sisters." I said. "Oh, don't worry Sugar Booger, he'll like them," Hugh said. "I just want to make sure," I said. Then we went up the stairs and went to Jimmy's room. I really liked the names Hugh picked out and so did he. I hoped Jimmy would like them. Jimmy answered his door. "Oh hi Mom and Dad come on in. I'm done my homework." he said. We went into Jimmy's room. "What do you want to tell me?" asked Jimmy. Hugh and I looked at each other. "We came up with names for the twins, Jimbo."Hugh said. "Oh really? Let me hear them," Jimmy said. "Okay," I said. "We decided to name the babies Jillian Margaret and Elizabeth Katilda." "Tell us what you think of them Jimbo," Hugh said. Jimmy's face became thoughtful. "Well, Jimbo what do you think?" Hugh asked. Jimmy thought some more. "Well, to be honest, I think theyre...."
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I usually post both parts of my chapters. But today, I'm only doing the first part of chapter 8. Because it's a cliff hanger.

Thanks,
Gretchen



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Quote from chapter 8 part 1. "Carl, you and Leppy were suppose to find food and shelter"-Jimmy Neutron
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Posted 13 June 2008 - 06:50 PM

Ooo, cliffie! :ph43r:

Hurry up with the next chapter! I'm really getting interested!

Oh, and you can post more than one chapter at a time. Those are a little short, cause you've been posting on Nick for so long. Loosen up, man! :rock:
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Posted 13 June 2008 - 06:56 PM

Okay chapter 8 continued
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I looked at Jimmy's face. I really wanted him to say yes. Hugh had picked such good names, I didn't want him to be disappointed. "Jimmy please tell us what you think of them," I said. "Okay, to be honest I think they're the best names I've ever heard," Jimmy said. "You mean it? You like them?" I asked. "Yes, Mom. I really do," he said. "Woo hoo! Jimbo likes the names," Hugh said, "I guess we can have Elizabeth Katilda and Jillian Margaret after all!" "Yep, but Jimmy you sure gave us a scare there. We thought you wouldn't like them and then we'd have to pick new ones," I said. "You didn't have to consult with me in order to name them. I would have been happily satisfied with any names you picked," Jimmy said. "Well, it never hurts to check Jimbo," Hugh said, "because when your mother and I wanted to pick a name for you, we didn't really agree at first to call you James Isaac Neutron." "You didn't want to call me that?" Jimmy asked. "Well, I did, but your father wanted to call you Thomas Frank Neutron," I said. Jimmy looked at us. "Seriously? You wanted to name me that?" "Yeah, but we finally agreed to call you James Isaac Neutron,"Hugh said. "And now that we all agree on the names we picked for the twins, we can name the Elizabeth Katilda and Jillian Margaret," I said. " Then, it's settled?" Hugh asked. "It's settled," I said.
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Gretchen

Quote for chapter 8: "Greetings life form. I'm about to defeat Robofiend in pitched combat. Would you like to be my battle buddy?"-Ultralord
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