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[Pigquet3]

Now why would I insult you? <_< J/K

*sighs of relief* Oh, thanks. So I can have it in on Mon if I need to? I probably will be done this weekend, but you see I have this term paper cards thing due Mon, and my just have to finish Mon. after school. But, I promise no later. Thanks so much. It's nice of you to not be super strict about it.

Oh, and thanks for saying I could do it on that, Amanda.

I'm workin' hard on it, so I really hope you like it. :D
See ya.
B) Pigquet

[Ang]

You sure can! ^_^


And, you're very welcome, Quet.


I'm sure it'll be great!

[Justine<3]

HEYHEYYOUYOUGUESSGUESSWHATWHAT!

I finished my oneshot!
Warning: it's REAL short, and it's kind of poking fun at Seymour Nibblefarb from "Jimmy Goes To College"

So my entry is on Seymour! duh.

Seymour's Revenge

“Once and for all, Jimmy Neutron, you are surley going down…” Seymour said with a giggle.
He laughed cruelly and spun around in his roller chair. He turned back to his computer.

“Drum roll please!” Seymour paused, raising his hands. Then he looked around on his desk to use for drumsticks. He picked up a ruler and a pencil and started to drum hard on his desk, when suddenly the led on the pencil broke.

Seymour gasped. He jumped from his red, roller chair and scrambled to the drawers and pulled out a body tape measure.
He ran to his body length mirror and wrapped the tape measure around his arm.

“Wow!” Seymour gasped, then flexed a muscle. “Just you wait, ladies! This guy has the brains, and the body.”
BEEP! BEEP!
Seymour raced back to his computer.
Website download: 9%

“9%?!” Seymour groaned. “This is what I get for getting this computer from Good Will!”
Seymour sighed. “Oh well, I guess I can monologue.”
Seymour evil laughed once more. “Jimmy Neutron, you got me expelled from Pomona, and now I am going to…GET YOU INTO DETENTION!” he laughed insanely.

“All I need to do,” he explained to his computer and poster of Albert Einstein on the wall. “is put Neutron’s name on the detention list, and he’ll be there before the day is done!” He smirked.
Seymour turned back to his computer, and it read “10%” and sighed.

Seymour snored as he slept in the red roller chair in front of his desk, which had his computer on top, which he got from the Good Will (got all that?).
He woke up and looked at the screen that read had the open Internet window.
“…HEY IT’S DONE LOADING!”

Seymour slowly typed in the words “Jimmy Neutron”—to make it more dramatic, of course.
His fingers slowly floated above the enter key. Seymour started to slam his finger down when he was suddenly interrupted by:
KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK!

Seymour sighed, “WHAT?!”
“Seymour, darling,” called a high female voice on the other side of the door. “It’s time for dinner!”
“MO-OM!”
“Seymour,” Seymour’s mother said, “You get out of your room now! You’re chicken’s getting cold!”
“BUT MOM! I’m just about to seek my revenge!”

“You can do that LATER!”
Seymour sighed and glared back at the computer, “I’ll be back for you James…”
Then, left to eat his dinner.


Yeah, I tried...


~*(+Justine+)*~

[ShadRose17]

I don't like this story.. its OOC.. to me.. but I just couldn't get this to do what I wanted.. anyway, basically, EvilJimmy is sick of being what he is.. *shrugs*


Titleless-

*EJ POV*

I stood and looked out at the stupid town before me, retroville, the home of my double and enemy and of course his idiotic friends, Pfft.
I walked down the hill where I was standing and into a street and started walking down it thinking hard,
My double had friends, family, what does he have I don’t?! Why don’t I have friends?!
I rolled my eyes as I walked on, because I’m evil… Why was I evil again?
I sighed, its how I was created, that’s why.
But I didn’t like being this way sometimes, but yet.. Other times.. I love it..
I groan as I walk, I hate my life, I can’t decide what I want.
I walked by my enemies house and glanced over, glad he wasn’t out, who knows what would have happened.
I started to walk on but paused and glanced in the window and whippy dip and his family… He looked.. Happy.. Why can’t I be happy? Will I ever be?
I growled and walked on sighing, I walked into the outskirts of town and then started running, I don’t really know why.
I ran until my legs would no longer permit it and collapsed on an old looking street corner, I looked around panting slightly, where was I?

I laid there for a while until my legs would let me move again, I got up and started walking, I walked for what seemed like forever, looking around, this wasn’t retroville.
The streets looked older, more vintage, the houses where nice, and looked better then retroville, I looked around and spotted a name on a sign “Realerville?” I questioned myself, I ran further then I had thought… Great.
I walked, wait, maybe this is a good thing, a fresh start!
But.. What if I started acting like a villain again? I couldn’t really control that, it was in my blood… literally.
But on the other hand, I’m fine now, I’m not even attempting to hurt that kid who’s looking at me odd..
I paused and turned to her “What?” I hissed.
She shrugged and I glared, what is it with people? I walked on and for some odd reason, she followed.
“What’s your name?” She asked curiously.
I growled, and looked at her with an evil look “EJ” I said rolling my eyes, I had to call myself something, initials worked.
“Cool! I’m Jeda!” she said like she thought I would care.
I started to snap something I might regret at her but paused, this WAS my chance to make a new start, and friends, why waste it?



Told ya.. awful.. OOC... TAR *facepalm*

[Pigquet3]

Justine and JimmyandCindy, they were great!
Justine, yours was very funny.
@JimmyandCindy-- Could it be that Evil Jimmy will no longer be evil and have a kind-hearted soul? Nah!
Still very interesting. Can't wait to see what Amanda will say.

Man, looking at yours, mine is wicked long. I'm just about done, but still, hope it qualifies as a ONESHOT.
See y'all.
B) Pigquet

[Pigquet3]

Okay, I'm finally done. Two things I need to tell you.
1. It's EXTREMELY long. Hope it still qualifies.
2. I already told Amanda and Justine, but for everyone else, this is supposed to be a little thing about what happened after The League of Villians, after my fic, which I haven't started posting yet, hosted by Mega and Hope, the two stars of my fic. You won't completely understand their introduction, but you should get the story. You'll get more when you read it. Sorry.
Anyway, throughout it you'll hear (or read) Mega and Hope's voiceover commentary during the story. They will be adding a little bit of comendy to the situation, no matter how dramatic, scary, or serious it is. So, little bit of comedy (hopefully a lot of comedy) romance, and adventure. Isn't that what the shows about? Anyway, enough mapieism. Hope y'all, especially Amanda, like it.

When Maniacs Persist

The blonde boy and African American girl come running from behind a tree in play clothes up to the screen.
Mega: Hi there, everyone. Nice to see you all. As normal--I'm Mega Neutron and this is my best friend Hope Estevez.
Hope: That's me.
Mega: We're here today hosting backround info at the one and only Retroville Park! ("Park" echoes and the two look around)
Hope: Anyway...We love just hangin' here talkin' about old time sakes.
Mega: Now, we've told you stories last time about when we went back in time and our adventure there.
Hope: Pretty cool.
Mega: But, now we were thinking--you might want to hear a little bit about what happened later in the present.
Hope: And its extrememly weird what did. So, whether you want to hear it or not, we're gonna tell you a little story about (pointing over to Mega) his parents...
Mega: Jimmy and Cindy when they were young, of course
Hope:...and what exactly they did after we left.
Mega: That we are.
Hope: Well, as you all know, when we went to face our dire consequences...
Mega: Which didn't even happen.
Hope: Shut it.
Mega: Sorry.
Hope The league of villians continued soon after.
Mega: Key word: "villians." You know that story already.
Hope: And then Sam reopened The Candy Bar and the space bandits, who were now their friends, paid for their treats.
Mega: Hey, Hope, how come Zix, Travoltron, and Tee never pay for our ice cream from Sam?
Hope: 'Cause they don't know us.
Mega: Oh, yeah. We should go find them.
Hope: Another time. You're off topic.
Mega: It's what I do; sorry.
Hope: So, while we were there, you know that we were at the island where his parents had that special time we've heard so much about with Jimmy and Cindy. And, that nutcase Eustace Strytch came and tried to kill us!
Mega: That wasn't the best time. So, even though all of them that knew who we were forgot about us...
Hope: That Strytch weirdo didn't.
Mega: Jimmy forgot about that, because when he got outta jail he knew something weird went on with two little kids and Neutron.
Hope: But not exactly what.
Mega: Meanwhile, as you all know, before they went into the Candy Bar, Jimmy grabbed my mom's hand and she smiled. That shows us a lot, so it leads us to now. A lot of people wonder what happend with them after that.
Hope: Probably yucky romance
Mega: Will you stop talking like your mom?
Hope: Oops.
Mega: Well, they didn't remember, but felt something. And since they were getting along and this was all over...

Slips into scenes with the kids voiceover.
Of Jimmy grabbing her hand...
Mega's voiceover: ...they went back to the island together, expecting to have a REAL time.
Show the island...
Hope: THEY WENT BACK! Can you believe it? They actually went BACK! And, when they went back...
Mega: That maniac found out and tried again, not knowing they didn't know...
Shows Strytch...
Hope: Man, that kid just never gives up.
Mega: I'll say. He's got issues. So, anyway. I think you get it now. We're gone, you expect GUSH (you'd be correct)...
Hope: Of course
Mega:...they go back to island and don't remember, Strytch remembers and goes after them, they don't know...
Hope: I think they get it. So, here's the story of when this maniac--Eustace Strytch--goes back AGAIN and kidnaps...
Mega: (throwing his hand in front of her mouth) Uh, let them just see if for themselves.
Hope: So, here's a little story we like to call--
Both in unicine: "When Maniacs Persist"

Jimmy and Cindy are sitting by the waterfall drinking smoothes.
Cindy: Want to go for a swim?
Jimmy: Sure. Just give me a minute.
Cindy: This place looks almost as beautiful as the first time.
Jimmy doesn't say anything, but just looks down.
Cindy: Hey...
Just then, the little monkey who lives there and was with them last time runs up and tries to get their attention.
Cindy: Hey, what do you want?
He screeches and screeches, jumping up and down, and pointing the other direction.
Jimmy: I think he's trying to show us something.
Cindy: It's a monkey, Neutron, not a dog! We don't just go and...
Suddenly he starts to pull on Cindy's arm hard in the same direction as he was pointing.
Jimmy: Still don't think so?
Cindy: Fine. Let's go see.
So, Jimmy and Cindy go running from the water to back up shore in front of their treehouses, to see something in the sky.

Hope's voiceover: Why didn't they listen to us, yet they listened to a stinkin' monkey?
Mega: voiceover: 'Cause Cindy hated me, they wanted alone time, you reminded them of your mother, and we wanted adventure. Satisfied?
Hope: Sooooo touchy.

Cindy: J--J--Jimmy? Is that really...?
Jimmy: Yup. I'd know it anywhere.
Cindy: What the heck...? Why--how...let's get outta here!
Jimmy: Run!
The two of them quick run for the hovercar while the monkey tries to shelter himself by running up in Jimmy's treehouse. Suddenly the hovercar disappeared right before their eyes.
Jimmy: Pukin' Pluto!
Cindy: Where'd it go?!

Up in the tripod...
Strytch: Good work, Blix. Now to trap those two and get rid of her once and for all.

Hope's voiceover: You know, Mega, you really should have said something like that in your recording. Your imitation is so uncanny its scary.
Mega: Yeah, I should have.

Strytch: Keep that thing invisible until she's dead. He'll never show his face in our town for a loooooooooong time. That's for keeping me with that diaper head.
Blix: Yes, Sir.
Blix quick presses a button on the counter, and Eustace fires two rays in their direction.
Eustace: Here we go again. With no sign of those brats to help you. (squinting his eyes) It's just you and me, Neutron.

Jimmy and Cindy: (jumping out of the way and barely making it) Aahhhh!
Jimmy starts feeling around the area and a look of relief fills him.
Jimmy: Wait, its not gone its only invisible. Quick get in.
Cindy tries to feel around for the bottom of the hovercar and quick grabs Jimmy's hand and climbs in. He finds the keys (apparantly everything inside had gone invisible too) and starts up. As soon as Eustace sees them flying in mid air he panics.

Eustace: What?! They found it and a' getting away! Shoot!
He fires another missle at the hovercar which heads directly for the front and center inches below their head. They quick duck and it goes right into the car and it pops, making a huge hole in it, and they fall down right by the shore as it swirls out of control like a balloon when you first let the air out of it. They crash, screaming all the way leaving Cindy back to a familiar spot and Jimmy unconcious.

Mega and Hope's voiceover: Yikes!!!

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

Jimmy: (groaning) Uh. Oh, what time is it? Where the heck...? Where am I? Wha...(rubbing his head) Oh, my head.
Jimmy gradually woke up and found himself in the middle of the jungle part of the island, feeling like he had been out of it for a month with the worst headache. He had been knocked out in the head for almost 6 hours with one of Strytch's missles--the same one's of Calamitous when the whole leauge captured him. After about two minutes, Jimmy catches on and remembers what had happened when he was awake.
Jimmy: I must have--he--CINDY!!!
He quick ran as fast as he could, still holding his head a little, back to where they first fell. He didn't see her anywhere. He looked up in her treehouse, all over the jungle and everywhere he could think. He ran to the edge of the beach and called out.
Jimmy: CINDY, WHERE ARE YOU??!!! Cindy! (sighs) Oh, my gosh. What the heck did I let happen to her? And, how did he knock me out for (quick looks at his watch) 6 hours?! Oh, man. Where on earth could she be? Did she make it back or did he--CINDY!! (thinks a minute) Wait, what happened to the hovercar?
Nothing was making sense to him right now. He had no idea what had been taking place for the last few hours, or if Cindy or Eustace were even alive. Suddenly, the same monkey we know comes running up to him from up in a tree, and Jimmy couldn't be happier to see anyone.
Jimmy: Hey! Hey, okay you're still here. Do you know where Cindy is?
The monkey shakes his head yes and immedietly points up in the sky.
Jimmy: There isn't anything up there. Unless... (He quick puts on the invisibility detector on his watch on and points it in that direction, only see the tripod folded up hovering over the ocean.) You're right. They're up there! Let's move.
After a matter of time he finds the hovercar not in too bad of shape, and the monkey is able to help him patch up the hole from stuff on the island, and Jimmy fixed most of the damage to the engine with his watch. Afterwards, he got dressed up in his treehouse, and took off up to where he detected the tripod, waving good-bye to the monkey.
Jimmy: Thanks, boy. What am I saying? (shakes his head) See ya.

Up in the tripod, Cindy is tightly strapped to a seat with Strytch walking back and forth by her menacingly.
Cindy: You've been doing that for hours! Will you let me outta here already?! I'm more than just a little adjatated!
Eustace: Patience. I've got a few issues to resolve.
Cindy: (disgusted) Like what? And how did you know where we--I was?
Eustace: (smiley an evil smile) Duh, Blondie! You went to the same exact spot you were at last week with those kids when I trapped you. Only this time I'll do you in once and for all. Now tell me where they are.
Cindy: I haven't the slightest idea what you're talking about! And, what do you even want with me? Why are you so determined to get me?!
Eustace: (rolls eyes) Fine, be that way. You know what I mean. I'm getting revenge at you two once and for all.
Cindy: Are you delusional--wait I already knew that.

Mega and Hope's voiceover: Bahahahahahahah.
Hope: You tell 'im, sister.

Cindy: Wait a minute--Kids?! (realization hits her) Oh, no. SHEEN! Sheen. Don't tell me he...
Eustace: I don't know what Ultra nutshell has to do with this, but all that matters now is that I rid you of my world. Now, I was going to innialate you right in front of Neutron, but I might as well have him discover you're dead later. So, say you're prayers, Cynthia. This is our last meet.
Cindy squirms a bit, and a look of fear takes over her face. Suddenly she hears propellors in nearby and she gets a smile knowing who it is.
Eustace: What the...?
Jimmy's hovercar appears above and lands inside the open way of the tripod, as he jumps out the second he sees Cindy.
Cindy: Jimmy! How are you...?
Jimmy: LET HER GO RIGHT NOW!
Eustace: I don't think so, James. (walking around Cindy's seat slowly) I think...I'll just take a little time...to enjoy this helpless moment...for the last time!
Jimmy: (over at Cindy desperatly) What does he mean "the last ti--
Cindy: I'm not sure, but for right now just don't...
Eustace: Okay, that's enough! Now...(calls to other room) Blix! (a ray gun comes flying from the other room and Strych catches it) Thank you. Now...(points the directly onto Cindy's chest and she gasps) back off unless you want to see her die right before you're very eyes.
Jimmy: Don't you even think about it, Strych. Get revenge on me if you have to, but leave her alone!
Eustace: Fine, Cindy. (she softly squeals real quick) Tell me that you hate Neutron and always will for as long as you live, and regret ever saving yourself from loosing him. Now!
A look of hurt appears in Jimmy's eyes, but Cindy immmediatly blurts out with no trouble at all...
Cindy: Fine. I hate him! I've said that my entire life, and I have no trouble saying it again. I hate Dertron. (over to Jimmy) I hate you. (back to Eustace) If that's what this is all about, its nuts! That doesn't mean I'd want you to...
Eustace: (evilly) You are such a liar.
Jimmy: (taking a step closer while making a fist) I swear if you hurt her...
Eustace: You'll what?
Jimmy: Ahhh! (knocks him down on the side off the edge and Jimmy quick grabs on to the edge for life)
Cindy: JIMMY! STOP IT, Eustace, don't...don't hurt him...
Jimmy: (weakly) Cindy...
Eustace: Let's drop this for good.
Eustace grabs his hand and throws him faster than anything off the edge and sends him plummenting into the sea, Jimmy yelling all the way.
Cindy: NOOOO, JIMMY! NOO! Eustace, you...(She quick breaks herself free and grabs his arm and, in one swift move, staps him binds him up against the wall.)
Eustace: What the...? Blix!
Cindy: Fine. Want company? (The second Blix walks in she grabs him, whose weaker than Eustace is, and ropes him near Strych.) How do like that?
Blix: Owwe.
She runs to the front desk and grabs a radio and tries to contact someone she hopes is still alive.

Jimmy landed hard on a wooden plank in the middle of the ocean completely alone surrounded by nothing but ocean.

Hope's voiceover: You know, that's exactly where I landed.
Mega's voiceover: No kiddin'?
Hope: Yeah, what are the odds?

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Cindy: Hello? Hello? Jimmy, are you there?!
She feared he probably just drowned in the ocean, but she didn't give up. She tried calling on his watch again.
Cindy: HELLO! Jimmy, its Cindy. Can you hear me? Are you okay?! Jimmy! Ugh. Alright. I'll just have to turn this thing around back to Retroville myself. Anyone have a problem with that? (she picks up the gun in her hand and points it at them as they shake their heads no)

Jimmy: This is awful. I've got no hovercar. No watch. I'm IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE and Eustace is probably torturing Cindy right now and is gonna get killed, and I could have stopped it. Where do I go now?

Hope's voiceover: Meanwhile, my mom was still at The Candy Bar with the space bandits having a good old time.

Libby inside dancing to music on the CD player in the middle of the room with Travoltron beside her.
Travoltron: Ah. This music, this beat, its all so--so...how you say...?
Libby: Funky?
Travoltron: Yeah, that's the word. Its funky.
Libby: And, it gets even better. Let's crank up the volume. (she turns it up higher, and Zix walks up to them)
Zix: So...where'd Big Brain and Blondie go?
Libby: (rolling her eyes) Who knows?
Suddenly there's a crash in the middle of the street outside and everyone jumps to the windows to see. The tripod, which isn't invisible anymore, smashes in the middle of the road.
Carl: OH NO; NOT AGAIN!!! THEY'RE OUT TO GET US AGAIN! THEY'RE AFTER JIMMY!
Libby: Carl, cool it. They've obviously escaped and Eustace is after Jimmy on his own again. We have to go find him and Cindy so we can warn him.
But, before they run out, they see Cindy walking out the tripod, and quick runs into The Candy Bar.
Libby: Cindy? What were you doing, and how...?
Cindy: (frantically) Shh. No time to explain right now, Libby. But, boy am I glad to see you guys. By the way, Libby, where's Sheen?
Right then Sheen walks out of the boy's bathroom with a huge smile on his face.
Sheen: Ah, looks like I've finally got this bladder control thing down.
Libby: Okay, ew.
Cindy: Sheen! I have to ask you something. You may have been right about something.
Sheen: Whoa! I was right? Cool. 'Bout what?
Cindy: Remember when you said you had remembered something about two kids being here?

Mega and Hope's voiceover: (failing to hold back giggles) How cool is that?
Mega: Totally something you wouldn't expect.

Sheen: Yeah.
Cindy: Well, Eustace said he--seems to know--
Libby: (cutting her friend off) Wait, so Eustace IS in there? With you? Girl, spill.
Cindy: Uh, nevermind. Here's the short version--Jimmy and I were on the island together, Strych found us, went nuts, captured me and tried to kill me and knocked Jimmy into the...
Libby: You were where?
Cindy: THAT'S NOT the Point! Neutron could be dead right now and, I can't get a hold of him on his watch. (suddenly there's a beeping coming from outside, and Cindy goes back to find Jimmy's watch in the hovercar) Oops. (runs back) Hurry. Does anyone know where Goddard is?
Carl: Probably back in Jimmy's lab.
Cindy: Quick go call down there and try to send Goddard out to find Neutron in the ocean. Libby can you help me make sure Loser and his butler don't escape?
Libby: Sure thing, Cin.
They both run out only to find an empty tripod.
Cindy: Where are they?!!
Eustace: Thought this was that simple, eh, Cynthia? No, no, now that not even Neutrons are in my way, I'll get you. (He pushes a button and the tripod stands up strait on all threes again, ready to fire)
Libby: This has been a bad day for you, hasn't it?

Hope's voiceover: He's on house arrest again, isn't he?
Mega's voiceover: Yeah. Nothing big. Of coure that stupid Michael Dean will always want to mock it since his (disgusting baby voice) dad and Strych were in prison at the same time (normal voice) sometime before he bailed himself out again.
Hope: Oh, don't remind me. I hate that kid.
Mega: Ditto. You know they're sendin' him back to a reformed preschool so he won't be class with us anymore.
Hope: Awesome.

Jimmy's still sitting alone on the board until he sees Goddard appear in the sky.
Jimmy: (jumping up excited) Goddard!
Goddard quick comes down and turns to fly cycle mode for Jimmy to hop on.
Jimmy: Oh, thanks so much, boy. Where is everyone? (Goddard barks for Jimmy to head for Retroville and he does so. Jimmy get's out a spare watch from Goddard and calls his other.)
Cindy: Hello? Neutron?
Jimmy: Cindy?! Are you alright.
Cindy: Jimmy, you're alive! I--I me-mean, um, I'm glad you're okay, Neutron. Listen, get over here before this nutcase destroys the town and us! Sheen may have been right about what he said in the Candy Bar and now Eustace just won't give up!
Jimmy: No way, that can't be...
Cindy: I'm not sure, but it somehow is, now GET over here. Hurry!
Jimmy: On it.

After about ten minutes, Jimmy arrived back in Retroville and quickly turned his attention to Eustace in the tripod. He saw the girls and knew he had to do something to save them, especially after getting a second chance for Cindy. It was the whole thing all over again. What next? He flew down, and ran to the boys in The Candy Bar and they told him what had happened so far. Libby quick ran in to help Sheen and found Jimmy.
Libby: Jimmy, you gotta do something, before Eustace gets his wish!
Jimmy: I can't believe I'm actually saying this, but he knew something we didn't about this villians behavior today, and I'm stumped, (takes a deep breath and gives a heavy sigh) Sheen, what would Ultralord do?
Sheen: (his face lighting up) Well, he's ULTRALORD. He'd...
Jimmy: Uh, short version please.
Sheen: Oh. In that case, he'd probably get rid of his stupid 3-leggeded war device with a magma-filled blaster and handle him before we're part of a slime pit!
Jimmy: Oh, of course! (slaps his hand to his forehead) The iron in his tri-pod should easily melt if hit at just the right angle--Sheen, you really are a genius today!
Carl: Hey, that's what you're supposed to say to me.
Jimmy: But, where am I supposed to get a...?
Zix: I think I may have exactly what you're looking for in our old ship if you need.
Jimmy: Really? And, you'd let us use it?
Zix: Well, we are on this new being nice to y'all thing, so sure.
Jimmy: Thanks. I'm off. But, I'm gonna need some back up.

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The space bandits went lightspeed to help, Jimmy explained the whole plan to Cindy and Libby, all while Carl and Sheen were forced into distracting Eustace and Blix.
Cindy: Works for me. Let's just get this over with with this maniac attacking us so we can have just a little bit of calmness during these few days.
Libby: Amen.
Jimmy: I'm on it.
Jimmy hops onto Goddard in flycycle position and flew overhead the tripod to wear he couldn't be seen. When was completely behind, he got out the magma blaster and readied himself.
Sam: (from inside looking out the window) Get rid of 'im, yeah.

Mega's voiceover: It's amazing the cool stuff happened even after we left, AND they defeated the league of villians.
Hope's voiceover: The whole things so romantic.
Mega: Girls.

With one swift move, he blasted, the girls watched with anticipation, and the tripod started to sink into nothing but a metal plate, control board, and three legs. As it went down, Eustace shouted out a girlish scream.
Eustace: Ahhhhhhh! (turning around) WHAT?! Neutron?! How did you get here? You're the same...I thought you were over. Dead. Done for. Blix, do something!
Blix: I'm outta here. (Blix hops out and heads for a nearby home)
Eustace: What the...? This is not going to be good. (faints)
Jimmy flies down and everyone is cheering.
Cindy: Yeah, once again you're the hero. You know who bound them up, turned this thing around back to the town, and sent to save you instead of leaving you out there? I could've just let you die out there with nothing. (Jimmy gives her a look) Still, not bad, Nerdtron. (reluctantly like a little kid) Glad you're alive.
Jimmy: Mm. You, too. Well, whatever it is going on around here, I'm sure I could just erase his memory of before the league of villians got together. Might be best for the future.

Mega's voiceover: Fascinating.

Just then, Strych's father Mr. Strych, shows up in the door way.
Mr. Strych: Oh no. Not again. I thought you weren't going to do this anymore; this is the fourth time in the past two weeks! (over to Jimmy) I'm sorry if he's been trying to crush you again.
Jimmy: Uh...its' fine? I think?
Mr. Strych: (sighs) Well, looks like you'll have to be grounded for another month again, Eustace. (He snaps his fingers and suddenly Blix shows up again, and pulls Eustace up to the front door and pushes him into the house.
Eustace: Okay, this is embarrasing.

Mega's voiceover: So THAT'S what he meant by being grounded for trying to crush Neutron.
Hope's voiceover: Ohhhh, I get it. Goes off to not their best time. No offence.
Mega: None taken. (you hear them high-five)

Cindy: (whispering over to Jimmy) What does he mean "again"?
Jimmy: I haven't the slightest idea, and I'm guessing its not important. (calling over to Strych's dad and pulling something out of his pocket) Hey, do you mind doing this one little favor considering, and erasing his short term memory of last week with this? (throws it to him and he catches it)
Mr. Strych: No problem.
Eustace: I'LL GET YOU FOR THIS, NEUTRON!

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Sam: Okay, nothing more goin' on I hope. Let's get back inside and have the police deal with the ruckage, yeah.
Most of the townspeople walk away and into The Candy Bar, and Libby, Carl, and Sheen walk onto the base of the destroyed tripod, Libby discovering Jimmy's hovercar.
Libby: Sorry about your hovercar, Jimmy.
Carl: Yeah, its pretty messed up.
Jimmy: It's okay. It's been worse before.
They hed back and Libby decides to wait by the door for Cindy. Jimmy walks up to Cindy.
Jimmy: Gee, that was somethin'. I--I can't believe he just came and found us there. He attacked us on the--the one place I thought we could always be safe and, uh, alone together.
Cindy: Yeah, well that wasn't the best time. I'm just as surprised to be honest. But, (looking down) I, uh, (looks back up) was scared for you.
Jimmy: Thanks. Still almost being killed on the island. So, I guess this means we can't go anymore.
Cindy: What, are you kidding? Of course we can. I--I mean, I hope so. So, what if by some weird coincidence Strych found us there and persisted? Good thing we're stronger than ever. It doesn't mean since there was an attack--(sighs) Jimmy, that place is special to us. It's where we had our first actually good time together; its beautiful, its got memories, its where we go when by some chance we want to get along and just relax and the one place I actually don't think of you as the idiot you are. (Jimmy smiles) We can always go there at certain times; just the two of us. Plus, we've gotta tell that monkey there about what the heck happened.
Jimmy: (giggles) Yeah. I bet he's wonderin' what ever happened to us and with the buck-tooth nutcase firing missles.
Cindy: So, as long as you don't mind--
Jimmy: (immediatly) I don't mind!
Cindy: Then nothing has to change, and we can go back whenever the time is right.
Jimmy: (smiles) Works for me.
Libby looked over and you could tell she understood.
Cindy: But, that time is not right now! Have fun cleaning up your mess, Nerdtron!
She stops away looking like she's heading back to her house, flips around real quick and winks, then walks away. Jimmy winks back, although she hadn't seen it.
Jimmy: Mm-hm. Right. Well, it'd be nice to get a little relaxation in today. Tomorrow's the first day of school.
Libby: (groans and leans back against the wall) Oh! Seriously?
Tee: (quick holds the door open and pops his head suddenly) Yeah, you gotta do you're thing, so let's finally get the fun on, fools!

Back to seeing Mega and Hope in the park together, arms intertwined.
Hope: And, that's the story of what happened.
Mega: You think its cool? We did. When that maniac Eustace Strych just would not give up after leaving the Cretacious Era, all 'cause of us. But, they'll always be able to beat him.
Hope: You might be wondering how we know about all this.
Mega: We saw it on Goddard after The League of Villians, and thought it was neat someone remembered, but no harm done.
Hope: Plus, you KNOW we love this adventure stuff. Especially him.
Mega: It's true.
Hope: Hope you didn't mind our ramblings--we tend to do that a lot.
Mega: SI`.
Hope: Well, this was fun.
Mega: Yes. Everyone, thanks for listening. You are distressed.

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

You like? I did my best. I got the idea for the last line from my school principal Mr. Peria.
So, did I get any laughs? You think its funny? At all? Sorry, but that would make it worth while.
Anyway, there's my entry; worked hard (as you can see, too long).
Thanks for reading.
See y'all.
B) Pigquet

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Is there a certain TIME in which the contest ends? I'm still working on my entry, but if the contest ends at midnight tonight I could totally enter HAHA. Sorry, I just got lotsa homework and I had rehearsals today!!

Respond when you can, although I'd like to know quickly therefore if I write a whole story and it ends up the deadline already passed I will pwn myself into oblivion (how else? By headdesking.).

[Ang]

ATTENTION: I will announce the winner tomorrow, which, that would be March 4. Last minute enteries are welcome.

[Justine<3]

*looks at watch, that says date :P* Hmm... XD

IT'S OK I WAIT. *waits* even though I know I won't win...



~*(+Justine+)*~

[Ang]

..Or March 5. XD


Well, since everyone pretty much doesn't enter my contests, I only have three people to place. Meh.


I shall give REVIEWS! *shotoffcliff* Okay, okay. D: !




Review One:


Titless By JimmyandCindyForever


Well, well. I see little Miss Good-At-Writing-POVs has eneter with nothingless! It's great! This seemed SO EJ. Luck for you, you got my fav evil guy. Lucky, you. XD


What I Liked:

The style and prose of it. I adored how you stuck to orginality. I must say, this was very appealing to the most part. And, it was DEFINETLY not too OOC like you thought. ^-^


What Could Be Improved:

Yeah, yeah. It's me, the grammar nerd reporting! :rolleyes: Well, some of your sentences were run-ons. Maybe being lengthy and putting them into a different setence? Besides that, it was very entertaining.




Review Two:


Seymour's Revenge by JimmysGurl11


Very funny! I was ROFLing! :lol:


What I Liked:

Comedy baby! I LUFFED the comedy! And, the little scene where Seymour's mom popped in there. Very witty and sheer classical genius!


What Could Be Improved:

Well, overall, it was pretty darn good! But, what I noticed, was your ending. It was a little rushed. Perhaps, you could've gone into greater detail?



Review Three:


When Maniacs Persist by Pigquet3


Whoa, mamma! Talk about a HUGE oneshot! :blink:


What I Liked:


Hello? Do I smell a possible plotline for a fic or what? Amazing! You did such a great job with this. I loved how you kept on going when I definetly wanted more. ^-^


What Could Be Improved:

What I noticed most, was several grammar errors. Not too many, but enough to send a grammar nerd into high blitz. I mean, these were..MICROSCOPIC errors. Stuff, you probably would hardly catch.



*cracks knuckles* Alright, time for zee winnerrr..


And, the winner isss..



Pigquet33!!!!! :bff: :kawaii: :wub:


2nd Place: JimmysGurl11

3rd Place: JimmyandCindyForever


I was SO STUCK on who should get 2nd place. I mean, SERIOUSLY.



When the winners see this post, PM me for your prize. ^_^

[Pigquet3]

OMG, AMANDA! THANK-YOU! Thank you, thank you, thank you so much! I can't believe I won, I didn't expect to win! I soooooooo appreciate it. *dances around computer room like crazy* Oh, yeah, oh, yeah, I WON I WON I WON I WON! *stops* ahem, anyway.
Sorry. :D
I mean, I thought you'd love it but there were a few reasons why I thought I probably wouldn't in--like you said, EJ is your fav and JimmyandCindyForever did that; it was too long; and it really only makes complete sense after reading LBGBBG.
Yes, it is supposed to be a little thing about after Let By Gones Be By Gones which I'm not done w/ yet, so its so cool you get that. It was primarily for someone after reading it, but you liked it and the story anyway. I'm glad I could please you.

*sighs* I expected that. I guess I rushed. It's okay, Rachel's part of the grammar police, too. I knew I should have sent this to her first. No, I'm only kidding.
Congradulations to the other two, especially Justine! See, you thought you'd be dead last, but you took SECOND!!! I'm so happy for you!
I'll PM you soon. Thanks again so much.
:bff:
B) Pigquet

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I'm sooooo sorry for not entering, Amanda. There's just so much going on in my life right now (we had Pre-UIL choir competition, One Act Play Competition last Saturday, two more performances this week, the big TAKS test and loads of homework). I hope you're not mad at me!! I really had a great idea, I just never got around to it.

I'm sincerely sorry. Please accept my apology! </3 *Hugs Amanda for dear life*

PS. CONGRATS Pigquet!

[Pigquet3]

Oh, thanks so much, Krista. That's so sweet.
Yeah, I was actually looking forward to reading your if you entered, but that's okay. I know what its like to be swamped w/ schoolwork :wacko:
B) Pigquet

[Pigquet3]

Thanks so much, Snazz! Did you like it?
I've only seen one, but it was a while ago. "One Week". I meant to watch it again, but my mom interfered. I'd love to see more. I already have a feeling what song I'm gonna request and I bet she'll do a great job!

Aw, that's okay. I'm sure you'll get another chance. I'd love to read it.
Thanks again. I better go to bed.
Your Friend.
B) Pigquet

[Justine<3]

First, I would like to say...GREAT JOB AND CONGRATS PIGQUET!
I can't wait to see what song you choose for Amanda to make you (...that made sense?)

Second, I'd like to say...THANKS AMANDA! WHEE! SECOND PLACE AIN'T SO BAD! AND I'VE NEVER WON ANYTHING ON A ONLINE CONTEST! :dance:
And I'll send you the pics for my animated avvie soon.

Third, You did great, Sarah! I didn't think it was OOC! Great job!

And last...

See, you thought you'd be dead last, but you took SECOND!!! I'm so happy for you!

...not sure if that's a compliment or an insult.... ;)

EDIT: *headpalm* Ignore that....didn't read it right...>_<



~*(+Justine+)*~

[Pigquet3]

Oh, thanks a bunch, Justine!

Of course it was a compliment! It wasn't an insult, why would you think it was? Why would I insult you?; I loved it! Why did you think it could be taken as an insult? I'm so sorry. I didn't mean that, I was just congratulating you on second place 'cause you didn't think you would. I hope you're not mad at me :angry: I honestly did mean it in a good way. Maybe...Congratulations, is a better way to put it.
Thanks again.
See ya.
B) Pigquet

[Ang]

Aww, I'm glad yous guys were pleased! ^_^


Pigquet- Yay! You did a really awesome job, that's why I picked you mostly, you looked like you worked pretty darn hard on that. But, of coruse, as did Justine and Sarah.


Snazzo- Awww. I should be sorry! Maybe the deadline was too early? *pats* Tell ya what, Tim, when I get out of school, you can request any MV/pairing/tribute you'd like. ^_^


Krista- Totally understandable. Things are getting pretty hectic a little for me, too. Especially with those tests coming up.


Justine- Oh, lol. I loved yours though. Besides, I could hardly even DECIDE!

[Justine<3]

Oh, thanks a bunch, Justine!

Of course it was a compliment! It wasn't an insult, why would you think it was? Why would I insult you?; I loved it! Why did you think it could be taken as an insult? I'm so sorry. I didn't mean that, I was just congratulating you on second place 'cause you didn't think you would. I hope you're not mad at me :angry: I honestly did mean it in a good way. Maybe...Congratulations, is a better way to put it.
Thanks again.
See ya.
B) Pigquet

Your welcome!

*headpalm* Aww, snap, I read it wrong...*headdeskandfeelslikeidiot*
Just like, forget everything I ever said. *glaresatself*

Justine- Oh, lol. I loved yours though. Besides, I could hardly even DECIDE!

Thanks. ^_^



~*(+Justine+)*~

[Pigquet3]

Oh, good! *sighs of relief* Phew, 'cause I was afraid I really hurt your feelings, and my mom noticed what you said after quoting me and thought I was rude. And I'm like "Oh, no!" So, good...
It's okay, Justine. It happens. :P
:bff:
B) Pigquet