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#21 CraazyOne

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Posted 23 January 2008 - 12:34 AM

*Spits out coke* CraazyOne, DOTH I MISHEAR YOU???
Chapters my friend!! WE NEED CHAPTERS :kawaii: :kawaii: :kawaii:

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Or you could finish your homework I guess -_-

No, LOL. It's not that I didn't want more chapters; I just didn't want Beks to hurt herself. I mean, with an evil headache an' all, writing usually isn't fun and it's better to take it easy rather than aggravate the headache... *attacked by angry mob*

But, no matter. Beks is writing more now! *gasp* *watches Writer Woman fly into the sunset*


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Posted 23 January 2008 - 02:13 AM

Ok, I have written through the pain of my splitting headache, and finished the 2nd chapter! I hope people are happy, cause it made it worse :grr: , but I'm happy! ^_^

Btw, I added my own personal touch into this part. Mr. Laurence is based solely on my evil English teacher, who's first name is Laurence.

Chapter 2: Mr. Laurence


The next day, Cindy and Libby walked grudgingly up the school’s front steps, within earshot of the sounds of the park. Every whoop and scream could be heard as they slowly came to the double doors.

“Of all the crazy teachers in this school, Mr. Laurence has to be the craziest, most out-of-his-mind teacher of them all! Why is he making us come here? Shouldn’t the school newspaper, ya know, start at the beginning of school, not after?”

“I still don’t know why we got into this.” Libby said as they pushed open the door into the strange, empty hallway. Their feet echoed as they made their way through the silent school.

“Because, our moms got together and thought it’d be a ‘grand’ idea for me and you to experience journalism first hand.” Cindy said, crossing her arms. Just then, they ran into Principal Willoughby as they turned the corner.

“Oh my! Children! What in heaven’s name are you doing here? This is a teacher work day, you know. School doesn’t start again until September.” He put his hands on his hips, looking at them expectantly.

“It’s ok, Principal Willoughby. We’re here to see Mr. Laurence.” Cindy said, knowing he’d understand. Principal Willoughby rolled his eyes.

“Oh, he’s at it again, is he? Well, go on then, and good luck.” He continued down the hall.

“See,” Cindy said as they walked. “Even Principal Willoughby thinks he’s a fruit basket.”

As they approached the classroom, Libby gulped, saying, “Well, here we go.” Cindy reached for the door and led the way inside.

The classroom was mostly normal, except Mr. Laurence had decorated it with framed, blown up pictures of the front page of various newspapers, from The New York Times to the Retroville Daily Telegraph. Apparently, Mr. Laurence, at some point in his life, had worked for every one of them, but was fired from each for various reasons, and ended up here as a teacher and editor of the school paper.

A few other students were sitting in desks around the room, grumbling audibly for everyone else to here. Cindy and Libby took two desks beside each other, in the front row.

“So, where is he?” Cindy whispered to Libby. As if to answer her question, a deep voice from the back of the room spoke, startling the kids as they turned to the speaker.

A rapidly aging man appeared from behind the door, deep wrinkles accenting his gleaming grey-blue eyes, and grey hair growing sparingly upon his head. He looked like one of those teachers who should have retired years ago.

“Good morning, class.” he said, striding through the rows of desks to the chalkboard. He picked up a piece of chalk and wrote in big letters, JOURNALISM. Turning back to the small class, he began his usual lecture.

“Journalism. It’s not easy, and it’s not always fun, but you people know that already, right?” There was a dead silence. “You chose this class because you wished to find the truth. So let’s begin…” He droned on, and on, for what seemed forever, until finally:

“Any questions?”

Oleander, sitting a few seats behind Cindy, raised his hand. “Why are we dong this during the summer?” There were agreeing murmurs and nods around the room. Mr. Laurence smiled, unkindly.

“Why? Because we’re getting a jumpstart on the beginning of the year. Won’t that be exciting? The first edition will be all about Retroville. I’m going to assign you each a different neighborhood or part of town and you will write an article about it. Research it, interview people, do anything you can, and have it done and on my desk by next week. Here are your assignments…”

He pulled out an old hat, filled with pieces of paper. Taking it around the room, each kid reached in, and pulled out a part of town. Libby whispered to Cindy.

“Oh, I hope I get Turnersville! Most of my mom’s family lives there.”

“I don’t really care what I get, as long as it’s not Green Springs. That’s the part of town where all the snooty upper middle class live.” As the hat passed them, they both pulled out pieces of paper.

“On three?” Cindy asked. Libby nodded. “One…two…three!” They opened their folded paper at the same time.

“Turnersville?” Cindy gasped.

“Green Springs?” Libby gasped. They both looked at each other, shock written all over their faces.

“No!” the simultaneously screamed.
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Posted 23 January 2008 - 02:26 AM

OOoo, Cliffie!


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Where's Green Springs?? Sounds familiar...
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Posted 23 January 2008 - 02:27 AM

I made it up. It might be a real place, IDK?
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#25 CraazyOne

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Posted 23 January 2008 - 05:43 PM

Oooh, that was awesome! And basing Mr. Laurence on your own evil English teacher? :lol: Hehe, that's awesome! :thumbsup:

Interesting cliffy there. I wonder exactly why the girls dread those particular places so much...

DUN, DUN, DUUUUN!

XD Sorry, that was necessary. Update soon, purdy plz with a hot fudge brownie sundae on top? ;)


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#26 jeh517

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Posted 09 February 2008 - 09:08 PM

I hope you'll put up the 3rd and maybe 4th chapters today or tomorrow.
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Posted 09 February 2008 - 10:41 PM

Sorry for the delay everyone, I'm drowining under homework at the moment, and I'm taking the SAT in less than a month, and I need to study for that. I feel really bad cause I've written barely anything on chapter 3...I promise to write whenever I find time!

It looks like Writer Woman has a new arch enemy: The Homework Dragon! :o
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Posted 09 February 2008 - 11:24 PM

That's ok Beks. Just finish your homework and study for the SAT. Just let me know when the 3rd chapter is ready for me to see.
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Posted 16 February 2008 - 03:27 PM

I can't wait to see the 3rd and the 4th chapters of We're Curious Black And White today.
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Posted 16 February 2008 - 05:26 PM

Um, I'm not done yet... :unsure:
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Posted 16 February 2008 - 10:01 PM

So just do your best and let me know when chapter 3 of We're Curious Black And White is ready. :D
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Posted 18 February 2008 - 01:07 AM

Beks just told me she justed half way to finish chapter 3 of We're Curious Black And White.
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Posted 19 February 2008 - 12:14 AM

So just let me know when chapter 3 of We're Curious Black And White ready.
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Posted 20 February 2008 - 03:28 AM

Chapter 3 of We're Curious Black And White must be ready tonight. :D
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Posted 23 February 2008 - 03:41 AM

Ok, I'm still not technically done with chapter 3, but my reason is that it's unusually longer, so I'm going to spilt it up into 3 parts, so you guys will have at least something to read while I finish the third part.



Chapter 3: Discrimination Nation (part 1)


"I don't believe this!" Cindy and Libby had returned to Cindy's room, where Cindy was loosing her frustration on a punching bag she had gotten for her birthday. Libby sat at the end of the bed, listening to her music with one earphone, in order to listen to Cindy's rant. She sent punch after punch crushing into the foam, sweat dripping down her concentrated face. At last, her anger spent, she stopped. She sighed as she flung herself onto the bed, causing Libby to bounce slightly.

"I thought you didn't care what neighborhood you got?" Libby said, swiveling on the bed to face her.

"I don't mind getting Turnersville, but you wanted that one, didn't you?" Cindy said, sitting up. "And you got Green Springs. The one I hated. Is this ironic, or what?" She leaned against her pink lacy pillow, wiping sweat off her face with her arm.

"So, what's the plan?" Libby said. "We do need to start on our articles." Cindy thought a moment.

"Ok," she said finally. "Tomorrow morning, we should go to each of our neighborhoods, interview people and stuff like that, and meet up back here at like noon or something, to work on them together. Sound good?" Libby nodded her approval and then looked out the open window into the growing darkness outside. The warm sounds of crickets and other summer bugs floated through, putting a calming effect on the girls.

"I guess I should go home. Mom will want me to set the table." Libby got up from the bed, and called as she walked out the door, "See ya tomorrow, Cindy."

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I know, not that good of a transition, but trust me it gets better. Oh, and I'm going to warn you now: this is going to get a little race-y, so just remember that any view expressed by any character is not neccessarily my opinion.


I will post the next part when I have at least 3 replies!
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Posted 23 February 2008 - 04:42 AM

Great job on the first part of part 1 of chapter 3. I can't wait to see what will happen next in part 2.
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Posted 23 February 2008 - 06:06 PM

Thanks guys! ^_^ I still need one more reply from another person before I'll post the next part! So go bully your friends to post! Mwahahahaha! *cough*
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Posted 24 February 2008 - 01:50 AM

Hiya Beks! I'll reply!
-Since you so kindly always reply to mine, you SuperBeks!
-(Wait, she's not SuperBeks, she's Writer Woman!)

I must have you confused with another superhero I know.

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Anyway, good chapters!
-Chapter Two was excellent and Chapter Three was good.

I confess, I preferred Chapter Two. :unsure:
-Because Three was so short!
-But I'll have to see what else happens.

That IS funny naming the teacher after your teacher.
-I would have thought you would like English though.
-That's where I discovered Creative Writing, so I was very thankful to my English teacher.

Take your time Beks, and don't neglect your homework.
-It's a lot more important than we are.
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-I know, I know, how can I say that?

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P.S. - Pigquet, I saw your signature message and came over here.

P.P.S. - Hey Beks, even though you've stopped writing your other fics, I hope you're still thinking about them. I dearly want to see them finished sometime, especially Letters From Sweden.
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Posted 24 February 2008 - 02:06 AM

Ok, here's the next part!

Chapter 3: Discrimination Nation (part 2)


In the morning, Cindy waved her mother good-by as she drove away, leaving Cindy standing on a street corner in the middle of town. When the car was out of sight, she looked up at the street sign beside her to confirm that she was in the right place.

"Ok, let's go." she said to herself, taking out a notepad and sticking a pencil behind her ear, to look more professional. Her pad already had some notes on it, which she had gotten from a book at her house called The History of Retroville.


Encompassing the roads of Turner Street and Andrew Jeffrey Street, Turnersville as a neighborhood was developed just after the turn of the last century. It was originally a separated village for the African American community, but after the Civil Rights movement in mid-century, it was integrated into the town.

Today, many of the same families live in this rustic neighborhood, living in the same homes as their ancestors did in the 1900's. The neighborhood is of mostly African American descent, with a small minority of Asian groups....



Cindy immediately saw that 'rustic' was not a good description for the neighborhood. More like 'rusty'. Trash everywhere, the streets were cracked beyond recognition, and buildings looked ready to collapse. It was a real ghetto, so to speak.

She spotted two elderly men sitting in chairs outside a store, and made towards them.

"Um, hi. I'm sorry to bother you, but..." she started to say, but was interrupted by one of the men.

"Are you lost, girly?" Cindy gave a small laugh.

"No, I..." She was once again interrupted, this time by the other man.

"Of course she's lost, you idiot. A girl like her in this neighborhood? She must be really lost if she ended up here."

"But I'm here on purpose!" Cindy said, pointed down to the ground to emphasize her point. But both men shook their heads and one wagged a finger at her.

"Don't try fibbin' to us, girly. None of your kind ever come down this way. Now you just go up the street there, and take a right, and you'll be up at Main Street in no time." And with that, the two men got shakily out of their chairs and went into the store.

"Your kind?" Cindy thought as she continued down the street. "What's that supposed to mean?" She thought she had and idea, but people can't still be thinking like that, can they?

"Maybe if I try someone younger..." she thought. She spotted a middle aged man walking towards her down the street, and tried to get his attention.

"Um, excuse me mister, can I..." He walked past her without a glance. She tried again with a woman wearing a green babushka gracefully on her head.

"Miss, excuse me, but..." The lady looked rudely down at her and walked on past. She tried again and again with every other adult that went by, all with similar results.

"This is ridiculous! Why won't anyone talk to me?" Cindy murmured to herself. She sighed exasperatedly as she said down on a creaky old bench. Suddenly, she heard a small giggle, and saw a stroller parked beside the bench, a cute baby girl sitting up and looking at her with the first friendly face she'd seen all day. Cindy gave a small laugh.

"At least you don't mind me." she said to the baby, tickling her under the chin, making her laugh. Suddenly, the mother of the baby, with a look of astonished disgust, quickly wheeled the baby away, leaving Cindy speechless.

"What's the matter with these people? That lady took her baby away from me like I had some kind of disease." she thought to herself. "Now that I think about it, lots of people have been looking at me like that." She suddenly notice the tiny hints of distaste and hatred from the men and women who glanced at her as she sat alone on the bench.

She heard laughter behind her, and turned her head to see a weed-choked basketball court across the street. Getting up from the bench, she quickly crossed the street.

"Finally, kids." she said as she walked through the chain fence opening. She spied a small group of kids around her age playing a game of 3-on-3, and made towards them. The game stopped suddenly as they noticed her approach, and formed a protective group. A boy in front, obviously the leader, leaned to one side, the basketball held on his hip.

"What do you want, whitey?" he said.

"Excuse me?" Cindy said, putting her hands on her hips.

"You heard me, whitey. Just tell us what you want, and go away." Cindy heaved a great sigh.

"Not you too! Look, I'm just trying to interview people for my stupid school newspaper article, but everyone won't even talk to me!"

"Man, are you dumb! It's cause you're a whitey!" the boy said. "Everyone around here hates people like you. You all don't mind black folks being store cashiers, secretaries, or babysitters, but you whities won't even consider black people as friends."

"Hey, that's not true! My best friend happens to be black, for your information!"

"That don't matter to most people around here." the boy said. "Look, whitey, I suggest you get out of Turnersville right quick, before you get jumped by someone, or something." And with that, the group of kids went back to their game.

Cindy, not knowing what else to do, took the boy's advice, and started towards Main Street.

There has to be a way to get them to talk to me." she thought as she walked.
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Ok, there's part 2 of chapter 3! Long enough for ya? Oh, and don't worry, I will still do my other fanfics. I will never neglect them or my wonderful readers!
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Posted 24 February 2008 - 02:36 AM

Thanks Pig! ^_^ It's always nice to see you reply!

Yeah, this summer's gonna be a fanfiction bonanza! I might even finish Temper Tantrum, although I might not. I have a feeling it's going to end up really long.
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