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[sunnstar]

..::PROLOGUE::..

She paced up and down the floor, frustrated, trying to figure out what was wrong with her plan. With a shock of realization, twisting a strand of smooth, black hair around her finger, she drew a big black X over one of the boxes with a thick sharpie. Then, biting her index fingernail, she thrust her weight to her left leg and observed the diagram with a pondering expression upon her face. Crossing out several ideas in her head, she wondered what else there was left to do. She turned around to face the other wall and saw what was sitting there. And then it struck her.

He was extremely aggravated, as always; something was clouding up his brain and stopping his ideas. But what could he do? It just didn’t make sense. Mentally eliminating several possibilities, he was stuck speculating every other detail. He erased the four lines on his plan sheet, so irritated that he poked a hole in the paper. But then one specific memory was brought back and something else occurred to him, knocking everything else out of his head. Many complicated phrases followed this thought, but every single one seemed to give him another reason to go on with his plan. Yes, he was definitely going to do it.

She was almost ready to pull her bright red hair out. Not this, not that, not anything else. She was having complete and total idea block. She couldn’t think of any possible alternative. No, no, and no. There was nothing left. How could this have happened? She was never out of ideas. Never. She was famous all around her town for thinking of idea after idea, sometimes even too many. But now she couldn’t think of a single, solitary thing and her reputation was about to crash. The television reporter, however, had something else in mind. One sentence from her and a wonderful grin spread slowly across her face.

[JimmySpaz]

OOOOOOOOoooooooooohhhh...


I love it so far...! Can't wait for the first chapter! I am thoroughly in suspence now...

[Mara=^.^=]

Ooooh, interesting! Post more soon!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[ssj4majuub]

IT IS FRIDAY,NOVEMBER 30. *cough points to sunnys sig* *waits for dee debut*

[Chica_Andromeda]

Ooh!! Ahaha, I remember when you showed this to me a few days back! XD

*thinks* Ohsnap, I just figured out who the first people are (I'm not gonna say, though xD). :D

[CraazyOne]

Well, I already read this, but I thought I'd reply to say, "Hurray! You got it up!" And..."Cool title!" :D Way to go, Sunny!

~Rach~

[rumorgirl1983]

Nice prologue! ^^ Suspense always reels me into a good fic. Update when you can.

[sunnstar]

OOOOOOOOoooooooooohhhh...


I love it so far...! Can't wait for the first chapter! I am thoroughly in suspence now...

Thanks!! YAY I HAVE SOMEONE IN SUSPENSE =DDDDDDDDD

Ooooh, interesting! Post more soon!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

GaspMaravisitedmyfic. Thanks! I will!
Do you remember the title from my fanfic voting topic from Nick.com, way back when?

IT IS FRIDAY,NOVEMBER 30. *cough points to sunnys sig* *waits for dee debut*

The prologue was "dee debut," but okay. First chapter tonight (I always post Chapter 1 the day after the prologue.)!

Ooh!! Ahaha, I remember when you showed this to me a few days back! XD

*thinks* Ohsnap, I just figured out who the first people are (I'm not gonna say, though xD).  :D

Yup! =D

LOL. After Chapter 1, if you think really hard and confusedly, you might guess the third person.

Well, I already read this, but I thought I'd reply to say, "Hurray! You got it up!" And..."Cool title!"  :D  Way to go, Sunny!

~Rach~

Thanks! And LOL thanks again!

Nice prologue! ^^ Suspense always reels me into a good fic. Update when you can.

Thanks!! =) Suspense rules, doesn't it? But a certain MARA keeps it up too long. WAY TOO LONG. **stares pointedly at Mara**

..::Excerpt of the day:: BRUNETTE: (pointedly) Can we have some of that pie now?::..

[cancel_me]

Hmm, interesting prologue, Sunnster. o: You've definitely improved much and I can't wait to see what you do next.

P.S. Can I make a guesstimate about the story through PM? XD

[sunnstar]

Hmm, interesting prologue, Sunnster. o: You've definitely improved much and I can't wait to see what you do next.

P.S. Can I make a guesstimate about the story through PM? XD

(For a second there, I thought you called me SUNNSTAR. At which I would have been very insulting.) Thanks!!

Sure! I'll PM you now. ^_^

..::Excerpt of the day:: BRUNETTE: (pointedly) Can we have some of that pie now?::..

[sunnstar]

..::Chapter 1:: A Piercing Decision::..

Get ready or not ’cause here I come; dance, dance, dance have some fun…

The uplifting song lyrics snapped her eyes open and turned her lips into a smile.

6 5 4, 3 2 1, get up, get up!

Cindy Vortex woke up at 6:59 Friday morning in a particularly good mood. Before she even woke up her heart was pumping wildly and after a nanosecond of consciousness a single thought ran through her mind: THE LAST DAY OF SCHOOL! Every student in her class had been looking forward to this day since September first, including her. There had been final exams all week, but now they were finally free—after today.

Cindy got up and ready in record time, and beat the bus by fifteen minutes. Even a straight-A advanced students like her couldn’t love the last day of school enough.

MS. FOWL: As you all very well—BRAAAAAAAAWK!!—know, today completes the academic semester of learning and—

JIMMY: Um, Ms. Fowl, if I may point out, that doesn’t actually make sense… see, academic is the adjective form of learning, therefore by saying ‘the academic semester of learning’ you are really saying ‘the adjective form of learning semester of learning’ which, obviously, is being repetitiously redundant.

**Jimmy Neutron, the one boy who could challenge Cindy’s intellectual capacity, had again failed to continue the rule of “no learning on the last day of school.”**

CINDY: (irritably) Nerd-tron, what are you SAYING? You know it’s the last day of school!

SHEEN: Hey Ms. Fowl, why are you talking so weirdly?”

MS. FOWL: My Guide for Beginner Teachers says that using long words makes me sound like I actually got my BRAAAAAAAAAWK!! Degree.

CARL: (whining) Ms. Fowl? Do we really have to learn today?

MS. FOWL: Are you kidding? Before SHEEEEEEEEEEEEEN!!! interrupted me, I was going to announce a Friday Funday! Do whatever you want, as long as you don’t make a BRAAAAAAAWK!! mess.

**Thunderous cheering and applause ensued. Jimmy, Carl, and Sheen formed a huddle with their desks, probably discussing last week’s baseball game (where Cindy had performed a spectacular tie breaker in the last inning—with a broken wrist) while Butch was finishing some last minute wedgies. Cindy, Libby, Brittany, and Nissa created a group with a few other girls in the corner for Truth or Dare. Soon, forty minutes had passed**

BRITTANY: (with a mischievous grin) Okay, Cindy, truth or dare?

Everybody at Lindberg knew that Cindy Vortex never turned down a dare. Libby actually looked nervous; the queen of dare-givings plus the queen of dare-doings could only be trouble.

CINDY: (calmly) Dare, of course.

**Brittany checked the clock; there was only time for one more and it would have to be good. What dare would the famous Cindy have to turn down? She looked around the group and her eyes lit up on Libby, who was playing with her earring (taking it out and putting it back in). Then she remembered Cindy’s eighth birthday fiasco**

MRS. VORTEX: Okay everyone, time for the cake!

GUESTS: (cheering) Yay!

MRS. VORTEX: But before you start eating, I have an announcement. Cynthia?

CINDY: Yeah?

MRS. VORTEX: After the party, I’m taking you to get your ears pierced!

CINDY: WHAT?!

**Swiftly picking up the cake, she threw it in her mother’s face before anyone realized what was happening**

BRITTANY: (half shouting, her voice dripping with glee) Cindy, I dare you to get your ears pierced!”

Finally, a dare impossible even for Cindy!


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..::Excerpt of the day:: BRUNETTE: (pointedly) Can we have some of that pie now?::..

I was about to post the second part when I realized how much it gives away... so I'm waiting for 3 replies! :D

[Liziana]

Wow. This is really good, Sunny/Rach! I can't wait for some more! ^_^

And I don't blame her. I wouldn't want to get my ears pierced either... (And I like the name of the chapter. xD Cleverness.)

[Chica_Andromeda]

Nice Rachel!! :thumbsup:


Lord, I am NEVER getting my ears pierced (this coming from the girl who is a daredevil). XD

[sunnstar]

Wow. This is really good, Sunny/Rach! I can't wait for some more!   ^_^

And I don't blame her. I wouldn't want to get my ears pierced either... (And I like the name of the chapter. xD Cleverness.)

Thanks!!

LOL. I got mine the day before I turned ten (I just HAD to have my birthday on a Monday that year).

Nice Rachel!!   :thumbsup:


Lord, I am NEVER getting my ears pierced (this coming from the girl who is a daredevil). XD

Thanks!!

LOL. You: Yeahsure I'll go skydiving ear-piercing NOOO

..::Excerpt of the day:: BRUNETTE: (pointedly) Can we have some of that pie now?::..

[cancel_me]

Hmm, so maybe I was waaaay off LOL. Oh well. Good job with the writing, Sunny! Once again, I'm not a huge fan of script format, but you and Mara pull it off nicely. Loved the first chapter, mah dear. :] I can't wait for the next part!

I got my ears pierced when I was seven. ._. And I got a second piercing in each ear just last winter. Woo for second piercings. I want to get a third pair in my upper ears but I heard it hurts more because there's less cartiledge.

[sunnstar]

Hmm, so maybe I was waaaay off LOL. Oh well. Good job with the writing, Sunny! Once again, I'm not a huge fan of script format, but you and Mara pull it off nicely. Loved the first chapter, mah dear. :] I can't wait for the next part!

I got my ears pierced when I was seven. ._. And I got a second piercing in each ear just last winter. Woo for second piercings. I want to get a third pair in my upper ears but I heard it hurts more because there's less cartiledge.

YAY A THIRD REPLY

LOL. Yeah. But thankles!! Oooh, dangit. I forgot how many people don't like script format (INCLUDING ME). But whatever. It's funnier, IMO, for this fic.

Yeah, it's supposed to KILL. And I want a second piercing waaah... my mom's thinking of getting one but NOT ME. ]:

[sunnstar]

..::Chapter 1:: Part 2:: Revealed Surprise::..

CINDY: (irritably) No way!
LIBBY: Girl, you have to! What about your rep?
CINDY: Well, I would never live it down…
LIBBY: (threateningly) Yeah, just think… Brittany would take over your title as Queen of Dares!

Brittany was just behind Cindy, only having failed one dare in her whole life (but she is contractually obligated by court of law to not speak about it).

CINDY: Okay, then fine, I’ll do it.

**Brittany stopped smiling. She had thought she would finally be Queen.**

**BAM. The classroom scene suddenly disappeared to be replaced by an old-fashioned stage. A three-legged stool appeared in the center, followed by a sixties-style boom box. An arm popped up from behind the left-hand curtain and a finger pressed the “play” button. Music erupted from the amplifiers and the boom box started bouncing rhythmically**

Trips to the stars
Fueled by candy bars
Rides a kid with a knack—

**POOF. All of a sudden, a pink cloud materialized out the thin air with the word “POOF” written in it, covering the boom box, which was immediately replaced by a modern looking CD-player**

Timmy is an average kid
That no one understands.
Mom and dad and Vicky—

**BAM. A fuzzy pair of earmuffs covered the speakers and dimmed the sound, and the boom box knocked it off the stool and resumed playing**

A superpowered mind
A mechanical canine
Rescues the day from sure destruction—

**POOF. The two-dimensional CD-player knocked the boom box of the chair and continued its song**

‘Cause in reality
They are his odd parents, Fairly Odd Parents—

**BAM. The stereo sprouted arms and threw the CD-player into the empty audience**

This is the big one
Jimmy Neutron.

**POOF. The boom box turned into a frog, croaked a loud “ribbit,” and hopped offstage, revealing the CD-player**

His Fairly Odd Parents!
(Yeah right!) Boink!

**From behind the right curtain, three-dimensional Jimmy Neutron walked out, holding a remote and looking angry. From behind the left curtain, two-dimensional Timmy Turner walked out, holding a magic star-tipped wand and looking furious**

**Jimmy, gnashing his teeth, pointed his remote at Timmy and pushed a button. Timmy, grunting inaudibly, pointed his wand at Jimmy and waved it. A beam of dazzling blue shot out of Jimmy’s remote; a jet of brightest green exploded from Timmy’s wand; they collided in midair, showering the stage in multicolored sparks that faded, showing the people backstage**

**Cindy Vortex and Libby Folfax, three-dimensional jumped up from the right side of the stage, looking startled, but Sheen Estevez and Carl Wheezer waved at the camera**

**Chester, two-dimensional, from the left of the stage, ducked and covered his head and AJ looked merely bored. Cosmo and Wanda hovered above them, arm-wrestling in mid-air**

**More rainbow sparks erupted from both sides and created a sign on the back wall: everybody ran away, so that the words could be read in glittering letters:**

JIMMY/TIMMY POWER HOUR 4: MISSION, SAVE THE WORLD.

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..::Excerpt of the day:: BRUNETTE: (pointedly) Can we have some of that pie now?::..

[cancel_me]

Now you can post your second part. >8U YEYA. And okay. We'll just have to wait and seeee.

Yeah, I love my second piercing. XD < 3 I actually started asking for one when I was nine, but my mom wouldn't let me have one! I don't think she wants me getting a third... and orly? I heard belly button piercings are supposed to be excruciating, too. ._o

[Chica_Andromeda]

Ooh!!! It's le awesome!! :D

*figured something else out*

[sunnstar]

Now you can post your second part. >8U YEYA. And okay. We'll just have to wait and seeee.

Yeah, I love my second piercing. XD < 3 I actually started asking for one when I was nine, but my mom wouldn't let me have one! I don't think she wants me getting a third... and orly? I heard belly button piercings are supposed to be excruciating, too. ._o

Woot :dance:

Yeah, belly button piercings sound like ze worst.

Ooh!!! It's le awesome!!   :D

*figured something else out*

Thanks!! xDD

LOL, probably.

..::Excerpt of the day:: BRUNETTE: (pointedly) Can we have some of that pie now?::..