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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 05:48 AM
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 05:50 AM
Say, when do we start writing? Anytime?
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 05:51 AM
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 05:51 AM
I'll get right on that. :]
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 05:53 AM
HA, Chica, I told you she wrote fics!Hmm, why not? I haven't written fanfiction in ages LOL. Besides the Group Fanfic, I mean. :ph43r: Anyway, I'll have to try the JC oneshot out. I recommend to have started on something a little simpler, though, such as a character's point of view in a created situation. :3
Sooo you can signmeupplz.
And I'll join! Could I be a Co-Leader pwettyplease? **puppydogpout**
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 05:56 AM
'Kay! And sure! ^_^
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 06:03 AM
YYYYYAAAAAAAYYYY! **ish happy**
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 06:08 AM
By the way, Chica. You can call me Eva! (pronounced A-va) :DCHALLENGE FOR OCTOBER:
Write a oneshot with J/C as the main pairing. You can have other pairings on the side, but it has to be focused on J/C for the most part. Deadline is October 31st. Good luck and have fun!
Fragile
Cindy cast a longing glance at Jimmy. She wanted to be the only thing he ever thought about, as he was to her. But all he cared about was science.
Like now, as she stole a glance at what he was writing, it was schematics for a new invention, not "J&C" or "Cynthia Aurora Vortex Neutron" like she would write.
Sometimes, she thought of screaming "I love you" to his face, in a difficult language, so he may hear but never hear. Then again, wasn't he fluent in some 12 languages?
With a sigh, Cindy flipped through her notebook. She had made a crude flipbook animation in the corner that showed their hearts entwining, squeezing the science out of Jimmy's so there was only her. She smirked as notes from Libby flew past.
"C'mon, you know you like him..." "Just admit it..." "Don't hide your feelings..."
If only everything could be as easy as Libby made it out to be. But alas, there were reputations at stake. There were possibly grades at stake. She couldn't twine the science out of him! Not until he was out of college. She couldn't keep him away from something that would make him a very successful man. And though she hated to admit it, Cindy would love to live in a larger house. With him, of course.
And yet, science is part of the reason she loved him. She wouldn't if he was unintelligent. Shallow, but true.
Libby cleared her throat, and Cindy realized that Ms. Fowl had asked her a question; expectant eyes were upon her.
She blushed, and, all these thoughts running through her head, gave the question to Jimmy, with a seal marked, "Fragile."
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 12:10 PM
here's the link to mine! It's called "While You Were Out"
http://z9.invisionfr...0#entry10101682
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 02:12 PM
PLEASE? I don't get involved with many writing things/clubs/groups.
I need to dun't I?
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 02:56 PM
NOT FORGOTTEN
Between the sound of the steady pouring and splashing of the rain in the yard, and the tense lump in the back of her throat, she felt like dieing. The voice of reason and judgment pounding in her brain, telling he r to leave, to just go home and forget the whole thing. The calming, subtle melody of hope told her to wait just a moment longer. Only every moment she ignored the logic, it grew stronger, overpowering the melody of hope until it began to fade. She turned and walked away through the downpour of soft, steady rain that masked her tears as only another drop of crystal rain.
‘Why was I that clueless?’ she thought in misery. ‘He just played another mean trick. Why am I so surprised? He’s never serious about anything. Especially stuff like this.” She stepped lightly through the swampy yard and across the flooding road. Her heart so heavy she couldn’t bear to look back at his house. ‘Why did you ask me if you knew you weren’t gonna even be there?’ She stepped up the stairs up the stairs to her front door, silently daring herself to look back. With great pain, she looked back, only to see the shower of rain falling from the heavens. With a tear-choked sigh, she opened her front door, ignoring the puddles she left on the pink carpet and the confused stare from her father on the couch. She was too enveloped in her sorrowful thoughts to even take notice.
“Cindy?” her father asked cautiously as she trudged up the stairs.
She turned to her dad and in he r gown of raindrops and teardrops said, “I don’t want to talk about it.” Dismissively, she turned and continued up the stairs. Her father left dumfounded on the living room sofa watching television commercials.
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 03:07 PM
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 03:11 PM
[OMG, I've got over 1,000 posts! :dance: ]
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 03:13 PM
:wacko:for about a week months ago.
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 03:17 PM
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 04:25 PM
'Kay Amanda! ^_^ Welcome!Signnn meee upppp Chicaaaa.....
PLEASE? I don't get involved with many writing things/clubs/groups.
I need to dun't I?
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 04:29 PM
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 04:29 PM
That was really good Kimmy! =DOkay, this is a little vague, but Jimmy asked Cindy on a date to go to his lab, yanno, like Valentine's Day, and he wasn't there. I found this in one of my old notebooks and originally it was going to be a longer fanfic, but anyway, here it is:
NOT FORGOTTEN
Between the sound of the steady pouring and splashing of the rain in the yard, and the tense lump in the back of her throat, she felt like dieing. The voice of reason and judgment pounding in her brain, telling he r to leave, to just go home and forget the whole thing. The calming, subtle melody of hope told her to wait just a moment longer. Only every moment she ignored the logic, it grew stronger, overpowering the melody of hope until it began to fade. She turned and walked away through the downpour of soft, steady rain that masked her tears as only another drop of crystal rain.
‘Why was I that clueless?’ she thought in misery. ‘He just played another mean trick. Why am I so surprised? He’s never serious about anything. Especially stuff like this.” She stepped lightly through the swampy yard and across the flooding road. Her heart so heavy she couldn’t bear to look back at his house. ‘Why did you ask me if you knew you weren’t gonna even be there?’ She stepped up the stairs up the stairs to her front door, silently daring herself to look back. With great pain, she looked back, only to see the shower of rain falling from the heavens. With a tear-choked sigh, she opened her front door, ignoring the puddles she left on the pink carpet and the confused stare from her father on the couch. She was too enveloped in her sorrowful thoughts to even take notice.
“Cindy?” her father asked cautiously as she trudged up the stairs.
She turned to her dad and in he r gown of raindrops and teardrops said, “I don’t want to talk about it.” Dismissively, she turned and continued up the stairs. Her father left dumfounded on the living room sofa watching television commercials.
But really angest-y. Something I don't usually read. But it was good. I liked it. You're REALLY good at discribing (Did I spell this right?) things. I could tell with the second chapter of the tri-fic (serously! we need to give it a name!). Good job!
Will there be a second part to this? I felt like it needed more. I mean, did she confront him? Or did she talk to her dad? IDK, maybe I'll just leave THAT to my imagination. ;-D
Good job, Kimmy! =P
*~Justine Alexandre
			
				
					
						
					
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			Posted 07 October 2007 - 06:56 PM
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