This fic is freaking AWESOME!!!!!! OMGLOLWTFBBQ!!!
True Colors (My Date With Nick)
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 09:05 PM
(Can not WAIT, for the next chapter..) MORE! MORE! MORE! NOOOOOOOOOOW!
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 10:28 PM
This fic is freaking AWESOME!!!!!! OMGLOLWTFBBQ!!!
-@ssj4majuub: LOL thanks!
(Can not WAIT, for the next chapter..) MORE! MORE! MORE! NOOOOOOOOOOW!
-@JimmyandCindyforever: Thanks! Glad you like it! :D
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Posted 04 September 2007 - 12:51 AM
u did read my cool reply right? :unsure:
o:) Andre o:)
o:) Andre o:)
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Posted 04 September 2007 - 02:52 AM
AWWWWWWWWW, THANKSS!!!!! It took me until the last sentence to realize the other colors were referring to MY fic, LOLok let's imagine I'm Cindy this would have been my colours ( I added some I needed more :P :
gold
aqua (amusement)
gold
sky blue (flatered)
pink
fuchsia (expecting)
red
lime (surprise)
blue
fuchsia
brown
now why:
I was gold when I saw u posted this, so I decided to come to read it, and I turned aqua when I was reading the intro (btw I love ur intros!! :kawaii: ) until I arrived to my drum roll!!! I turned gold again and then totally sky blue!!!!!! I couldn't believe it! such an honor it is! and with that thought I turned pink I was so happy and looking forward to chapter one, that's when I turned fuchsia, until I got to chappie one but when I finished I turned red how could u leave us with a cliffy!! and when I changed the page I was lime! u have already posted chapter 2!! and when I finished reading it I totally turned blue how could anyone write SO good and now I'm fuchsia, because I can't wait for chapter 3 and right now I just changed to brown for no having replied earlier! :D hope u liked it!
oh u read it! I curse that online list lol :P hope u had enjoyed this better than my last post :P
besitos! :bff:
o:) Andre o:)
edit yes sorry for the delay :P oh and nice pics and in chapter 2 orange is yellow and yellow is orange
-@Andrea: Thanks Andrea! And of course it's co-dedicated to you, you are SO awesome! (so was the reply!)
Love you!
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Posted 04 September 2007 - 03:28 AM
awwww that was so sweet! oh I'm awesome? really? thanks!! I really enjoyed writing it!!! write more soon plz!!!AWWWWWWWWW, THANKSS!!!!! It took me until the last sentence to realize the other colors were referring to MY fic, LOL
Thanks Andrea! And of course it's co-dedicated to you, you are SO awesome! (so was the reply!)
Love you!
*:)Rachel
o:) Andre o:)
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Posted 04 September 2007 - 04:36 AM
awwww that was so sweet! oh I'm awesome? really? thanks!! I really enjoyed writing it!!! write more soon plz!!!
o:) Andre o:)
-@Andrea: Thanks! =D You are TOO AWESOME!! welcome! =D
I will, but not too soon. It drives me crazy when other people post too often so I'm guessing you guys think that too.
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Posted 04 September 2007 - 04:51 AM
oooh! this is awesome! I like the idea of the human mood ring!! this'll be exciting...
update sooooooon! :)
update sooooooon! :)
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Posted 04 September 2007 - 07:52 AM
It just keeps gettin better and better. I can't wait for the rest! :kawaii:
Oh and I have always loved this bit: :thumbsup:
Oh and I have always loved this bit: :thumbsup:
Sheen smacked his head. “You’re right! It was called Attack of the Green People That Turned Purple!” he recalled. “Turned yellow. . . pfff, that is idiotic.”
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Posted 05 September 2007 - 08:43 PM
lol yes but only TOO often, but also not every other month lol :D every ten days maximum lol ;)I will, but not too soon. It drives me crazy when other people post too often so I'm guessing you guys think that too.
o:) Andre o:)
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Posted 06 September 2007 - 02:14 AM
It just keeps gettin better and better. I can't wait for the rest! :kawaii:
Oh and I have always loved this bit: :thumbsup:
-@Liz: Thanks! I know, itsn't it hilarious? ;)
QUOTE (sunnstar @ Sep 3 2007, 11:36 PM)
I will, but not too soon. It drives me crazy when other people post too often so I'm guessing you guys think that too.
lol yes but only TOO often, but also not every other month lol :D every ten days maximum lol ;)
o:) Andre o:)
-@Andrea: lol, yeah... when I did my Chapter A Day for a Week thing on Nick, it drove everybody and me crazy, lol =} (<<<<I OWN THE =}!!)
I would post more now, cuz I love you all so much, but the computer with the chapters on it is broken. Sowwy!! (Dang, I really should email every chapter to myself. W/e, too much work anywayz =D)
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Posted 06 September 2007 - 02:24 AM
Hi there!
Sunny, you can't post too often.
-You only have 1000 posts.
-You have a long way to go to catch up to, say, Amanda.
Besides, we're eager to see more.
Snazzo
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Sunny, you can't post too often.
-You only have 1000 posts.
-You have a long way to go to catch up to, say, Amanda.
Besides, we're eager to see more.
Snazzo
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Posted 06 September 2007 - 02:48 AM
I know that, Snazzo. I meant posting CHAPTERS.
WHO THE FREAKIN HECK IS THE GUY ON THE TOP RIGHT OF YOUR SIGGY?!
WHO THE FREAKIN HECK IS THE GUY ON THE TOP RIGHT OF YOUR SIGGY?!
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Posted 06 September 2007 - 11:00 PM
that's Sheen from LSTN! I love that part. :]
my question is... what episode is the bottom left pic from??
my question is... what episode is the bottom left pic from??
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Posted 06 September 2007 - 11:32 PM
Win, Lose and Kaboom.
:lol: That's funny!
:lol: That's funny!
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Posted 07 September 2007 - 04:10 AM
I don't feel like drawing now. Here yoozz go!
Chapter III
The next day in class, while Cindy (with gray nails and highlights) and most of the class were half asleep, Jimmy was fervently working on reversing the Rainbow 5000. He felt so guilty about what had happened to Cindy that he devoted nearly every second of his spare time to fixing the machine.
“And then, in 1532, cheddar was replaced by mozzarella. . .” Ms. Fowl droned on.
Suddenly, a note was passed from behind her onto her desk. For a second, she dared to hope it was from Jimmy—could he have the invention fixed already?—but then she remembered that Jimmy sat to her right, not behind her. And anyway, the handwriting wasn’t neat enough to be his. In fact, she thought hopefully, it looks sort of like—
“Nick!” she breathed.
Cindy quickly decoded the illegible writing into actual words, so it read
Hey Cindy, do you want to go out with me?
She fumbled through her pencil box, dropping a calligraphy pen twice before getting a solid grip on it. With pink nails, she shakily responded
Sure! Saturday’s good for me, what time? 555-1246.
By the end of class, Nick had replied by saying that he’d pick her up around six-thirty-ish and take her to Café Caribe (a casual but elegant restaurant), Jimmy had made a 3% progression in fixing his invention, and Ms. Fowl had introduced four more types of cheese. All in all, not a bad day. Cindy wished she could say the same about that night.
“Okay. . . okay. . . sounds great! I can’t wait. . . okay, see you then. Bye—oh no. . . what? Oh, never mind. . . I’m fine—yeah I’m sure . . . thanks—” giggle—“okay. . . ‘kay. See you soon! Bye.”
This was what Cindy’s side of her conversation with Nick sounded like. He had called at 6:58 PM; Cindy’s uh-oh had occurred at exactly seven—precisely 24 hours after Jimmy had zapped her with the Rainbow 5000. As soon as the hour changed, her toenails had turned the same color as her fingernails—pink: excitement. Plus, after hanging up and looking in the mirror, Cindy realized that the strand of “dyed” hair had mirrored itself on the other side of her head.
Angrily and red, she called Jimmy.
“Neutron!” she moaned.
“What?”
“It’s getting worse!”
“What?”
“Now more hair is colored, and my toenails too!”
“Wait, this started when?” asked Jimmy worriedly.
“Exactly seven o’clock,” she informed him.
“Just as I suspected. Every 24 hours, your condition gets 5% worse.”
“Well what can I do?” Cindy asked, nails turning yellow.
“I don’t know,” Jimmy apologized. “I mean, I’m working as hard as I can to find the antidote, but in the meantime, there seems to be nothing to do.”
It took every scrap of Cindy’s willpower not to throw her phone at the wall.
“Fine. Bye.”
Jimmy couldn’t blame her for being angry, although technically it was her fault. Cindy, however, had a different opinion.
“Stupid Neutron,” she muttered. “He just had to zap me with his ray. Of course. Why is everything always his fault?” her grumblings subsided enough that she was no longer audible.
The next night (Saturday night) at 6:25, Cindy was frantically waiting for Nick to pick her up, while Libby was nitpicking at her makeup. (“This eye shadow will look good with whatever color your hair turns!” Libby promised.)
“Libby, what if he gets all weirded-out by this?” Cindy worried.
“Well, if he notices, just explain your situation and hopefully he’ll understand. And if not, then girl, he ain’t smart enough for you anyway!”
Cindy didn’t look too reassured by this, although the corners of her lips turned up slightly.
“Just remember, Cindy, you’re going on a date with Nick!” Libby squealed.
Suddenly, a car horn honked from outside her house. Cindy screamed.
“Cindy, calm down!” Libby shouted. Eyeing the green color of her nails, she added, “Besides, this isn’t all about you. Nick has other things to think about.”
Cindy glared at her and left.
Meanwhile, as usual, Jimmy was working in the lab on the Rainbow 5000. After concluding that the Undo button officially didn’t work, he had to start almost from the beginning. Jimmy wiped his brow, and then looked up in alarm. He had rigged VOX to beep if there was movement outside the clubhouse so he wouldn’t accidentally let his dad in (or, more recently, a vicious squirrel). He pushed a blue button and studied the screen: a mini-van was driving past his house, with the back window open—and Cindy was in it.
Jimmy frowned: that wasn’t the Vortex’s car! But right before it drove around the corner, Jimmy caught sight of the license plate: DEAN FMLY. Dean family? Cindy was on a date with Nick?
Jimmy was fuming. He made aggressive changes to his invention, violently taking out parts and slamming them on his desk in fury. I’m in here fixing the invention for her and she’s going out with Nick? Oh, that’s just fantastic. . .
The machine abruptly blew a fuse, and a firey-yellow spark flew above Jimmy’s head. Calm down, Jimmy. . .
Chapter III
The next day in class, while Cindy (with gray nails and highlights) and most of the class were half asleep, Jimmy was fervently working on reversing the Rainbow 5000. He felt so guilty about what had happened to Cindy that he devoted nearly every second of his spare time to fixing the machine.
“And then, in 1532, cheddar was replaced by mozzarella. . .” Ms. Fowl droned on.
Suddenly, a note was passed from behind her onto her desk. For a second, she dared to hope it was from Jimmy—could he have the invention fixed already?—but then she remembered that Jimmy sat to her right, not behind her. And anyway, the handwriting wasn’t neat enough to be his. In fact, she thought hopefully, it looks sort of like—
“Nick!” she breathed.
Cindy quickly decoded the illegible writing into actual words, so it read
Hey Cindy, do you want to go out with me?
She fumbled through her pencil box, dropping a calligraphy pen twice before getting a solid grip on it. With pink nails, she shakily responded
Sure! Saturday’s good for me, what time? 555-1246.
By the end of class, Nick had replied by saying that he’d pick her up around six-thirty-ish and take her to Café Caribe (a casual but elegant restaurant), Jimmy had made a 3% progression in fixing his invention, and Ms. Fowl had introduced four more types of cheese. All in all, not a bad day. Cindy wished she could say the same about that night.
“Okay. . . okay. . . sounds great! I can’t wait. . . okay, see you then. Bye—oh no. . . what? Oh, never mind. . . I’m fine—yeah I’m sure . . . thanks—” giggle—“okay. . . ‘kay. See you soon! Bye.”
This was what Cindy’s side of her conversation with Nick sounded like. He had called at 6:58 PM; Cindy’s uh-oh had occurred at exactly seven—precisely 24 hours after Jimmy had zapped her with the Rainbow 5000. As soon as the hour changed, her toenails had turned the same color as her fingernails—pink: excitement. Plus, after hanging up and looking in the mirror, Cindy realized that the strand of “dyed” hair had mirrored itself on the other side of her head.
Angrily and red, she called Jimmy.
“Neutron!” she moaned.
“What?”
“It’s getting worse!”
“What?”
“Now more hair is colored, and my toenails too!”
“Wait, this started when?” asked Jimmy worriedly.
“Exactly seven o’clock,” she informed him.
“Just as I suspected. Every 24 hours, your condition gets 5% worse.”
“Well what can I do?” Cindy asked, nails turning yellow.
“I don’t know,” Jimmy apologized. “I mean, I’m working as hard as I can to find the antidote, but in the meantime, there seems to be nothing to do.”
It took every scrap of Cindy’s willpower not to throw her phone at the wall.
“Fine. Bye.”
Jimmy couldn’t blame her for being angry, although technically it was her fault. Cindy, however, had a different opinion.
“Stupid Neutron,” she muttered. “He just had to zap me with his ray. Of course. Why is everything always his fault?” her grumblings subsided enough that she was no longer audible.
The next night (Saturday night) at 6:25, Cindy was frantically waiting for Nick to pick her up, while Libby was nitpicking at her makeup. (“This eye shadow will look good with whatever color your hair turns!” Libby promised.)
“Libby, what if he gets all weirded-out by this?” Cindy worried.
“Well, if he notices, just explain your situation and hopefully he’ll understand. And if not, then girl, he ain’t smart enough for you anyway!”
Cindy didn’t look too reassured by this, although the corners of her lips turned up slightly.
“Just remember, Cindy, you’re going on a date with Nick!” Libby squealed.
Suddenly, a car horn honked from outside her house. Cindy screamed.
“Cindy, calm down!” Libby shouted. Eyeing the green color of her nails, she added, “Besides, this isn’t all about you. Nick has other things to think about.”
Cindy glared at her and left.
Meanwhile, as usual, Jimmy was working in the lab on the Rainbow 5000. After concluding that the Undo button officially didn’t work, he had to start almost from the beginning. Jimmy wiped his brow, and then looked up in alarm. He had rigged VOX to beep if there was movement outside the clubhouse so he wouldn’t accidentally let his dad in (or, more recently, a vicious squirrel). He pushed a blue button and studied the screen: a mini-van was driving past his house, with the back window open—and Cindy was in it.
Jimmy frowned: that wasn’t the Vortex’s car! But right before it drove around the corner, Jimmy caught sight of the license plate: DEAN FMLY. Dean family? Cindy was on a date with Nick?
Jimmy was fuming. He made aggressive changes to his invention, violently taking out parts and slamming them on his desk in fury. I’m in here fixing the invention for her and she’s going out with Nick? Oh, that’s just fantastic. . .
The machine abruptly blew a fuse, and a firey-yellow spark flew above Jimmy’s head. Calm down, Jimmy. . .
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Posted 07 September 2007 - 04:29 AM
what!?!? no way! oh I'm so excited!!!! I NEED to read more!!! this is getting more interesting with every word!!!!!!!! can't wait"!!!! really !! wow nice chapter!!! but I really need to learn the colours, I forgot, so I had to review them lol, but I think I have most of them :P so don't worry!! wow, could jimmy possibly become human mood ring too? :D I'd love to see him in white lol ;) wow u love sliffies don't u? well I love them too! :D
o:) Andre o:)
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Posted 07 September 2007 - 04:31 AM
what!?!? no way! oh I'm so excited!!!! I NEED to read more!!! this is getting more interesting with every word!!!!!!!! can't wait"!!!! really !! wow nice chapter!!! but I really need to learn the colours, I forgot, so I had to review them lol, but I think I have most of them :P so don't worry!! wow, could jimmy possibly become human mood ring too? :D I'd love to see him in white lol ;) wow u love sliffies don't u? well I love them too! :D
o:) Andre o:)
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Posted 07 September 2007 - 04:51 AM
*faints* Oh wow, I LOVED this chapter!!!!!! You did a great job with it, Rachel!!!
*sings tauntingly* Sombody's jealous!! :P
GASP!!!! Another cliffhanger!! *swoons dramatically*
*sings tauntingly* Sombody's jealous!! :P
GASP!!!! Another cliffhanger!! *swoons dramatically*
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Posted 07 September 2007 - 04:53 AM
*faints* Oh wow, I LOVED this chapter!!!!!! You did a great job with it, Rachel!!!
*sings tauntingly* Sombody's jealous!! :P
GASP!!!! Another cliffhanger!! *swoons dramatically*
-@Chica: Awwww, thanks!!
HEHEHEEHEHE
Cliffies rule!
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