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[sunnstar]

**dramaticgasp** YEAH RIGHT! well, I wouldn't be too surprised, cuz A. we just agreed how smart you are :P and B. I gave one HUGE hint in the last chapter that, if it had been someone else's fic, I would have assumed it right away, just cuz I'm like that.

B.=MAJOR HINTAGE

PM your guess to me plz!

[Zeitgheist]

You're like, the queen of cliffhangers XD But that's a good thing!
It means we'll eat out of the palm of your hands for another chapter

[Beks]

Awsome! :thumbsup:

[sunnstar]

You're like, the queen of cliffhangers XD But that's a good thing!
It means we'll eat out of the palm of your hands for another chapter

LOL thanks.... queen? NAW... princess, maybe :P Queen is Mara's title!
Well, good news is, next chapter is last chapter. **sadhappysadhappy**

Awesome!  :thumbsup:

Thanks Beka!

[sunnstar]

Okay, in case anyone cares, I'm gunna post Chapter 17 on Friday, right before Shabbos, so I can expect a whole lot of replies on Saturday night!

[Beks]

Awsome!!!!

[AnDrEa]

AAAAAHHH!!! true true true best chapter yet!!! omg hint!? what hint?!?!? tell me!!! I am so dumb that I couldn't distinguish a hint even if it says => HINT <= so tell me like that please!!!! omg that countdown was the bestest I've ever read!!!! and u finish the chapter with FALLING!! where???? to the flying dutchman ship?? huh? huh? lol on FRIDAY!?!?! no way I can't wait till friday!! do it NOW....pleasy...*puppy eyes*


Besitos,
o:) Andre o:)

PS: have u seen my fic on nick.com, I can't find it! did it got deleted??? :unsure: :'(

[sunnstar]

Thanks! There was a hint, that would have made me suspicious but probably just cuz I wrote it LOL
Okay, compromise, since I love you so much Andrea! How about Wednesday after school?

[AnDrEa]

Thanks! There was a hint, that would have made me suspicious but probably just cuz I wrote it LOL
Okay, compromise, since I love you so much Andrea! How about Wednesday after school?

YAY someone finally LOVES me, I mean YAY on Wednesday!!!!! after school means 3:00? because after MY school is 1:30 :P and mmm did u see my PS in last post?



o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

This Wednesday at 12:00 my time, cuz it's the 2nd week of school. But wait till I get home first lol
Oh yeah, sorry... a ton of ppl's fics got deleted including TOSOT!!!

[sunnstar]

It's finally here!! Chapter 17! So sad, I know... This chapter is dedicated to GWEN, who is currently making me angry by abandoning my fic, but anyway... here's to you, Gwen!

Chapter 17

“Sheen—Sheen—SHEEN!” Ms. Fowl screamed.
Sheen woke up screaming. He picked his head up from his desk faster that humanly possible and, not still screaming, but breathing heavily, looked wildly around the classroom—classroom?!
Jimmy awoke second, startled.
“Where—where—where are we?” he demanded.
Carl woke up screaming, not as loud as Sheen had been but at a respectable volume nonetheless.
“Meldar!” he panted, swiveling around in his seat. “Calama—where are they?”
Libby was next, ironically the calmest of them all.
“Where—where are we?” she asked nervously.
Cindy woke up last.
“Neutron!” she yelled furiously.
“Hey!” Jimmy said defensively. “This wasn’t my fault!”
“But Meldar! And Professor Calamitous! Where are they?” Carl asked, bewildered.
The other students were looking very amused by this point.
“You—you dreamed about Calamitous too?” Sheen said, looking more confused that ever.
“And Meldar?” Libby added.
“Yeah, but—” Carl began.
“What happened to the parade?” Jimmy looked behind the annoyed Ms. Fowl, as if expecting to see a hundred Meldars in front of the chalkboard.
“So. . . we all dreamed the same thing?” Cindy asked.
“I guess,” Jimmy said uncertainly.
“It was all just a dream?” Libby said disbelievingly.
“It was all just a dream,” Carl told her happily.
“It was all just a dream,” Sheen said dazedly, like he couldn’t believe it.
“It was all just a dream,” Jimmy repeated more firmly, finally believing it when he saw that the watch on his wrist wasn’t magnetic and had no note on it.
Cindy glanced at Libby, then at the notebook on her best friend’s desk: she sighed in relief upon seeing SE+LF 4EVER doodled numerous times on the cover.
Cindy smiled.
“It was all just a dream.”

[Chica_Andromeda]

OMG, I certainly wasn't expecting that!!

Great ending!! I loved how Libby had "SE+LF 4EVER" on her notebook. ^_^ You did an awesome job!!! :bff:

[sunnstar]

I LOVE looking at the online list and seeing someone reply =D

I told you! Dang, it's been hard keeping that to myself.
Thanks, and thanks again! So much!

[Zeitgheist]

Awww the ending was so cute <3 (I mean, the thing on the notebook)... but yeah unexpected XD You did a great job though!

Now, start writing on a new fic to keep us entertained! :lol:

[Beks]

Whoa :blink: I was totally not expecting that! Great job! This was an awsome fic!

[sunnstar]

Awww the ending was so cute <3 (I mean, the thing on the notebook)... but yeah unexpected XD You did a great job though!

Now, start writing on a new fic to keep us entertained! :lol:

Aww, thanks Zeit! Why does everyone love the notebook part? LOL. anyway, thanks soo much! I thought the part where the clock skips ahead like 40 minutes totally gave it away, but I guess not.

I'm posting TC (MDWN) [you'll finally find out what that stands for! ;)] on Friday, probably, so you all can reply over Friday night and Saturday.

Whoa  I was totally not expecting that! Great job! This was an awsome fic!

Thanks and Thanksx2, Beka!!


Random note:: I was dying--dying--to put "Sheen--Sheen--SHEEN!" at the end of Chapter 16, just to drive you all crazy LOL =D

[Ang]

**drags self to topic, fall flat on face, and reads**

:o What the? A DREAM?! RACHEL YOU CLIFFHANGER RUINNERRR...


LOL. Wow, I managed to drag myself over here and reply. AREN'T YOU PROUD?!

Anywho! it was great, Rach. It was....wow, um, ern...Sorry I can't think of these awesome words...

Oh yes I can!(For this fic anyways. ;) )

It was great, awesome, wonderful, creative, best thing in the entire world, makes me speechless, makes me call dibs on your writing ability, cliffhanger-ness, and makes me speechless. *.*

Seriously. Rachel, that is the best thing I've read in a longggg time! Well since TOSOT and Chica's fic.(LOL. I'm so lazy I forgot the name. Isn't that bad?)

I love how you made Sheen. Explained the detail and everything. GWEN'S SO LUCKY. >:( And the clues...they made me ponder. I actually had to think to guess at some of them. :dance:

Can't beleive its over though. I hate that, seriously hate it. But, on the other hand, I'm glad I seen the ending!

Sunny, you rock out loud. Nuff' said.


(Ha! I told you I'd reply! And what a reply it was!)

[sunnstar]

AWWWWWWWW, thank you!! (Chica's fic is No Time Like to Present, btw =D)

Yup, a dream! MWAHAHAHAA....

Thanks! Yeah, well, Gwen's abandoned my fic. URG.

DIBS ON MY TALENT?!?! Wow. Now that's a serious compliment. GWEN, LEARN FROM HER!

Thanks soooo much! You are AWESOME! **huggleyhuggle**

[sunnstar]

OMZG, you know I was gunna dedicate Chapter 17 to Ally but didn't, because I thought she disappeared for good?
SHE'S ON RIGHT NOW!!

[cancel_me]

Wow, great ending! I was NOT expecting it, though. A dream... IT'S THE WIZARD OF OZ ALL OVER AGAIN. A DREAM.

Or was it? :ph43r: Anyway, GREAT story, Sunny! I'm not one to be capable of writing a whole fic. like that. I always forget. D: So I'm proud that you finished it, and that it was so amazing. Thanks for the entertainment and good writing! Keep it up.

P.S. Just to annoy you all, I know what TC (MDWN) is about, and what the title stands for. XDD