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Off to a good start so far! I know this could turn out to be an awesome fic. ^.^ The only thing I'd say you have to work on is your description. When authors write, they paint pictures with their words. It's not just ALL about diologue, lol. :lol:

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Off to a good start so far! I know this could turn out to be an awesome fic. ^.^ The only thing I'd say you have to work on is your description. When authors write, they paint pictures with their words. It's not just ALL about diologue, lol.  :lol:

I know, but this is one of my more "dialougy" fics. :) I'm starting another fic too (unnamed at the moment) and that one (at least until I edit it) is "paint-a-picture-with-your-words" enough for me. B) But thanks, so far you're the only one who has actually bothered to give me constructive critisism. (I think.)

Edit:: Wow, was the chapter really that small? It seemed a lot longer when I wrote it. But then again, I cut it into two (I think.). That was too short for me. The next chapter is about that length too, so now I'm putting them together. One second...

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You're welcome. I just really want to help as much as possible. :bff: I hope you don't hate meh. o_0 ... Lol? Maybe?

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Anyway, keep up the good writing. ^_^ I admire dedicated authors (I am one inside, it just takes me a looong time to update. I guess that's my advice to myself: UPDATE MORE, YOU FOOL!

Can't wait for the next chapter in your story. Thanks for strumming those two together. Now I get a little MORE to read. Cha-chow! xD

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No problem about the last thing.... and I totally don't hate you at all (but in the forum where you tell stuff about yourself I said I might want to be maybe a writer (but Krista doesn't think so) lol... no offense about that even tho I don't know why you'd be offended) I'm glad you'll keep on reading!
My writing (to me) is good ideas, okay descriptions. And I'm twelve, for Pete's Sake. (and a half...)

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PS to BekBoo20... I am totally in love with your siggy! (GO HP!! H/G ALL THE WAY!)

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Hey, it's all cool. I'm thirteen (and one quarter), but I still write. If you want an example of my style just read the story I'm currently working on. I'm not saying you have to at ALL, but I'm like you: I love getting nice comments about my story, especially after putting all of my heart and soul into writing and devoting time to typing/scribbling in my notebook lengthy chapters.

That's why I review as many stories as possible: to let authors know that they have encouragement every step of the way (at least from me). ^_^

Sorry, waaaay off topic. I'm still loving where your story is going and I'd enjoy seeing more, if that's cool with you. ;)

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cool job Rachel!!! thanks for posting a longer chapter. HECKA hard core!!!!

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Hey, thankz! ^_^ I love HP! Ok, love the new chapter! Keep it up!!

I myself am 16 years old, and I have two fanfics on here. The first one is UltraMom, and it's all done, and the other one, Temper Tantrum, is a work in progress. You can check them out in the fanficion section.

Ok, back on topic...Can't wait for the next chapter!!

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Thanks Krista! I'd LOVE to read your fanfics, you strike me as a fabulous writer. Um, this is really stupid, but is your name really Krista?

BekBoo20, Temper Tantrum sounds really fabulous, of course I'll read it! And UltraMom sounds equally fabulous, just not my style (totally no offense!!), so I'll read the first few chapters to see if I like it. (totally totally totally no offense if I don't. Heck, what do I know!?)

CAMI! Thanks so much! and lol about the length... lol

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Really? Sa-weet. I don't even know if I'm that great of a writer. :lol: But if you want to tell me what I think, here's my fanfiction.net profile. The further you go down, the worse the stories get. D: My older writing. *Shudderx2*

P.S. LOL. Yes, my real name is Krista. ^_^

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LOL ok, my dad's kicking me off in like a minute, so I'll read it another time, but yeah, you sound like a great writer.

PS. ok, cuz if not, that would be really confusing. :D

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LOL! Well, sounds like a plan to me. Thank. I know for a fact that you're a great writer as well. ^_^

P.S. Yes. Yes it would. xD

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Aaaaaaaw! Thank you!

PS. That was actually really funny. I started laughing and snorting out loud and my dad's like, "is something funny?"

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:lol: You ish welcome. *Giantbearhug*

My dad would've just been like "... Question mark."

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LOL

seeing all these replies makes me want to post another chapter... TOO BAD!! lol JK... hm, let's see... I think maybe on Wednesday? IDK. Well, yeah, probably Wednesday.


ATTENTION PEOPLE!!

All plot ideas are welcome and wanted!

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XD

You're so cruel.

Uuh, as for plot ideas, you could make Corky want to add romance into his movie about Jimmy? :P And if Cindy quits, she'll be replaced by Betty Quinlan for the romance scenes!! :o

But please, no extreme Betty bashing. .-.

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Check your inbox. Somewhat spoiler there.

Krista: You are so cruel.
Me: I know. ;)

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Hmmm. Interesting.

Now you make me await with very much interest. How dare you? D': *Waits for next chapter*

*Waits some more*

--Hairisgray--

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LOL I know. the last two chapters (or at least the last) will, in my opinion, be very evil. but really good. trust me.

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Ooh, I believe you. ;-; Don't scare me. You make it sound worse than anything I've ever written. And believe me, that's something. :wacko: