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[JimmySpaz]

Here's the next chapter, but I warn you, it might be a while till the next chapter gets up...I have to write it and with finals and stuff it could be a prob..well, anyway, here:

.:.~*~.:. Chapter 9 ~*~ Hear the Silent.:.~*~.:.
Cindy put the pearl into her pocket saving herself from explanation. She remembered this day very well, because it was one of her very best. She knew what was to come and she was recalling every single comment and action of everyone. She knew she could mess with the future if she did something wrong, so she tried her hardest to retrace her steps correctly.
Though she knew it was unlikely, she believed that the pearl had done it, the pearl had heard her secret wish to return to this day and do it all again.
The pearl that heard the silent, felt the deepest emotion, the pearl that melted the coldest heart and softened the hardest soul, the pearl that had created tears, joys and unimaginable emotions with no set name. For Cindy, the pearl had only created questions she'd rather not be asked. But she would soon realize that pearl held her greatest adventure...and her downfall...one would come true.
Adventure or downfall?
No one knew.
Not even the pearl.



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[ShadRose17]

YAY I like it so far keep writing.

[cynthia_aurora24]

wow this is awesome... I'm hanging on the edge at the end of every chapter! :thumbsup:

[Hugh]

Whoo, keep going! It's great! And I'm not even a Cindy fan!

[Ang]

YAY!!!!!!! I finally got to read the last two chappies! They rocked!!!!! :rock: Keep going!

[cancel_me]

Wow, this is written well! ^^ If you could make the chapters longer, I would dance until I fell down face-flat on the floor. :lol: Keep up the great work!

[JimmySpaz]

*squeels in joyness* So many replies! Thanks people!

Sarah: Thankies!!! :D :bff:

Cynthia_aurora24: Really? Thanks! :) Glad to hear you like it!

Hugh: Don't worry, I've already started the next chapter...it's gonna be awesome!

Amanda: You better keep reading too! Even though you know what's gonna happen, you MUST keep reading!

Krista: You would? Well, I'm trying to make the chapters longer and eventually they'll get to be really long, once the plot picks up a little...heh heh...


Wow, I think that's the most replies I've ever had! Thanks everybody! :bff: Since that was the last chapter I had typed, you're gonna have to wait a little longer for next chapter...sorry...but I have one thing to say that should get your minds reeling:


...Pirates...


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[JimmySpaz]

.:.~*~.:. Chapter 10 ~*~ Suspicions .:.~*~.:.

As the day played out Cindy felt a constant deja vu, like a dream almost. It couldn't be real. Cindy found it almost scary being able to know others replies before she even spoke or how she knew what the future held. She wondered about the effect of the conversation with Libby.
How could one wrong move change the future?
Could it ruin everything?
Save it?

She was intimidated by what could happen and lost hold of what was. All day she was too enveloped in her fears to notice Libby's weird looks at her.
Libby was watching Cindy all day and she could swear something had changed. Since the strange incident on the bus Cindy had seemed very different. She kept to herself and seemed to be lost in her thoughts. It wasn't just that either. Whenever Libby asked Cindy what was wrong or just talked to her normally she seemed very vague and aloof. Like she didn't care. She felt that Cindy knew something she didn't. Something she wasn't telling her...

She was right.


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[Ang]

I will! Don't worry! Its really good! You keep writin and I keep readin. :P

[JimmySpaz]

Thank you, Amanda...it might be a while before I write the next chapter...I HATE YOU FINALS!!! During the summer I'll write a LOT more. Promise. *.*

[Ang]

M Kay

[JimmySpaz]

^_^

[Beks]

ooh, this is good and juicy. I don't know whether to read your fanfic, or smother it in A1 and eat it!! :lol:

[JimmySpaz]

:lol: Wow, there's a new one! :bff:

[Ang]

HAHAHAH evrytime I get on IDOJ I go strait here thinking there's a new chapter up. I guess I really wanna see what happens next. Kim it was torture for you to tell me what happens and I wanna see the detail. Its torture..........

[JimmySpaz]

Amanda, may I remind you that you were the one who persuaded me to do so? :lol:

[Lunar-Serenity]

Wow. Amazing. Brilliant. Can't wait for more. Kind of confusing, but I love your writing style. ~:]

[Ang]

Amanda, may I remind you that you were the one who persuaded me to do so? :lol:

Yeah I know. Don't you just love me?!? LOL :lol:

[Beks]

I'm hungry...I'll think I'll eat this fanfic now!...nah, it's too good to eat, like chocolate bunnies! :bunny:

[JimmySpaz]

Wow. Amazing. Brilliant. Can't wait for more. Kind of confusing, but I love your writing style. ~:]

Thanks! I haven't been able to write at all lately... me studying finals lately= :huh:
I also have 50+ stories I am working on writing/editing/rewriting/brainstroming and so on...+ a heavy finals workload from school and my sudden pirate obsession :ahoy: I have no time left to think, let alone write <_< ...life stinks... -_-