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Crouching Jimmy, Hidden Cindy
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Posted 31 October 2009 - 09:58 PM
I know! I'm trying as fast as I can! Don't worry.
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Posted 01 November 2009 - 11:37 AM
Okie-Dokie!
I wait then.
I wait then.
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Posted 01 November 2009 - 10:30 PM
You're doin' great, buddy! Just post it whenever you find the time! 
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Posted 23 January 2010 - 05:24 PM
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! After months of absolutly nada, here's the new chapter of CJHC!
Part 7: Beneith the Stars
Later, Jimmy and Cindy finally made it, at the very least close, to the top of the mountain.
“Ugh! FINALLY!,” Jimmy whined as he collapses to the ground.
“I gotta say, Neutron,” Cindy said, “I’m impressed. You managed to climb the whole way here using your short, stubby legs and your small, blistery feet.”
“We COULD lay off the taunting, Vortex!”
“Oh, alright!”
The two dropped to the ground exhausted.
“Ow! Gas Planet! I’ve never been this tired since Coach Grubbor made us run that stupid marathon race around the school!”
“Which you tripped and fell on a bug! That was classic!”
“Grrr! If I wasn’t so tired, I’d kick your butt right now!”
“Well, TOO BAD, mega head! You have a long ways to go before you can even BE a remote threat to me, let alone Yoo Yee!”
“That doesn’t mean you can pick on me all of the time!”
“Well, tough cookies, Spewtron!”
Jimmy snapped.
“That’s it! I’m SO gonna give you such a…”
His attempt to get up met with him tripping over a root, making him fall face first to the ground. This sure got Cindy giggling.
“Ugh! Why me?”
“Just get up, Nerdtron! I need you to unpack my stuff and they’re not gonna unpack themselves!”
Jimmy grumbled as he and Cindy unpack her bags.
“There!,” Cindy said patting her hands together. Her sleeping bag was pink colored with flowers and crowns.
“Hey!,” Jimmy protested, “Didn’t you bring a sleeping bag for me?”
“Oh, Neutron, you dolt! It’s in that bag over there!”
She pointed to a brown luggage, which Jimmy reached in and found…
“WHAT!!!,” he snapped, “a Hello Kitty sleeping bag?!?”
“Hey! It’s not my fault I was a huge fan of her when I was 6! Besides, that was the only other sleeping bag I got.”
Jimmy’s teeth grinded together.
“Look at the bright side, Nerdtron, at least that bag can‘t be any smaller than the size of your legs!” Cindy balled out with laughter.
“Ugh! Gas Planet! This can’t possibly get any worse!”
“Just get some shut eye, Neutron.,” said Cindy, “We’ve got a long week ahead of us and your need A LOT of work.”
He grunted as he climbs awkwardly into his Hello Kitty sleeping bag.
“Night, Neutron”
“Night, Ms. Bossy Pants,” he muttered in his breath.
“What was that, Nerdtron?!?”
“Nothing, nothing!,” he quickly.
Facially suspicious, she snuggles up as Jimmy lays on his back, watching the many stars in space.
He sighed in contempt as he takes in the akward yet enormous task ahead of him.
“Puking Pluto, what have I gotten myself into? I hope Sheen, Carl and Libby are having better luck than I am. I wonder if they’re alright?”
Part 7: Beneith the Stars
Later, Jimmy and Cindy finally made it, at the very least close, to the top of the mountain.
“Ugh! FINALLY!,” Jimmy whined as he collapses to the ground.
“I gotta say, Neutron,” Cindy said, “I’m impressed. You managed to climb the whole way here using your short, stubby legs and your small, blistery feet.”
“We COULD lay off the taunting, Vortex!”
“Oh, alright!”
The two dropped to the ground exhausted.
“Ow! Gas Planet! I’ve never been this tired since Coach Grubbor made us run that stupid marathon race around the school!”
“Which you tripped and fell on a bug! That was classic!”
“Grrr! If I wasn’t so tired, I’d kick your butt right now!”
“Well, TOO BAD, mega head! You have a long ways to go before you can even BE a remote threat to me, let alone Yoo Yee!”
“That doesn’t mean you can pick on me all of the time!”
“Well, tough cookies, Spewtron!”
Jimmy snapped.
“That’s it! I’m SO gonna give you such a…”
His attempt to get up met with him tripping over a root, making him fall face first to the ground. This sure got Cindy giggling.
“Ugh! Why me?”
“Just get up, Nerdtron! I need you to unpack my stuff and they’re not gonna unpack themselves!”
Jimmy grumbled as he and Cindy unpack her bags.
“There!,” Cindy said patting her hands together. Her sleeping bag was pink colored with flowers and crowns.
“Hey!,” Jimmy protested, “Didn’t you bring a sleeping bag for me?”
“Oh, Neutron, you dolt! It’s in that bag over there!”
She pointed to a brown luggage, which Jimmy reached in and found…
“WHAT!!!,” he snapped, “a Hello Kitty sleeping bag?!?”
“Hey! It’s not my fault I was a huge fan of her when I was 6! Besides, that was the only other sleeping bag I got.”
Jimmy’s teeth grinded together.
“Look at the bright side, Nerdtron, at least that bag can‘t be any smaller than the size of your legs!” Cindy balled out with laughter.
“Ugh! Gas Planet! This can’t possibly get any worse!”
“Just get some shut eye, Neutron.,” said Cindy, “We’ve got a long week ahead of us and your need A LOT of work.”
He grunted as he climbs awkwardly into his Hello Kitty sleeping bag.
“Night, Neutron”
“Night, Ms. Bossy Pants,” he muttered in his breath.
“What was that, Nerdtron?!?”
“Nothing, nothing!,” he quickly.
Facially suspicious, she snuggles up as Jimmy lays on his back, watching the many stars in space.
He sighed in contempt as he takes in the akward yet enormous task ahead of him.
“Puking Pluto, what have I gotten myself into? I hope Sheen, Carl and Libby are having better luck than I am. I wonder if they’re alright?”
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Posted 23 January 2010 - 07:04 PM
Yaay! First reply to new chapter!! 
Good Lord, I waited for this and I forgot. Thanks for posting the new chapter. I don't want this topic to sink down to the bottom of the sea.
And now, my review on the long-awaited chapter!
It was unbelievably in character. Cindy teasing Jimmy's legs was SOOOO funny, and her being a fan of Hello Kitty made me LOL even more! You did an amazing job, Pedro! Only, I wonder what Jimmy was going to say here...
AWESOMEMAZBLEJOBPEDRO!!!
Good Lord, I waited for this and I forgot. Thanks for posting the new chapter. I don't want this topic to sink down to the bottom of the sea.
And now, my review on the long-awaited chapter!
It was unbelievably in character. Cindy teasing Jimmy's legs was SOOOO funny, and her being a fan of Hello Kitty made me LOL even more! You did an amazing job, Pedro! Only, I wonder what Jimmy was going to say here...
“Uh, Cindy?,” the boy genius asked, “Are you all…”
AWESOMEMAZBLEJOBPEDRO!!!
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Posted 23 January 2010 - 08:04 PM
Agree with Sadi :3
I'm so waiting to see what happens next!
BTW, Sadi, I love your Raven's avatar >w<
-Ely :3
I'm so waiting to see what happens next!
BTW, Sadi, I love your Raven's avatar >w<
-Ely :3
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Posted 24 January 2010 - 12:39 AM
FIIIII-NALEY!!! I loved the new chapter Pedro. LmAO@ the hello kitty sleeping bag.
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Posted 24 January 2010 - 12:48 AM
OMG, yah, that was my FAVE part with the Hello Kitty sleeping bag! DROP-DEAD HILARIOUS!!!
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Posted 24 January 2010 - 04:20 AM
Yaay! First reply to new chapter!!
Good Lord, I waited for this and I forgot. Thanks for posting the new chapter. I don't want this topic to sink down to the bottom of the sea.
And now, my review on the long-awaited chapter!
It was unbelievably in character. Cindy teasing Jimmy's legs was SOOOO funny, and her being a fan of Hello Kitty made me LOL even more! You did an amazing job, Pedro! Only, I wonder what Jimmy was going to say here...
AWESOMEMAZBLEJOBPEDRO!!!
Yeah, sorry the wait was so long. Holidays, New Year's Semester planing, and all that jazz kept me from writing anything original til I finally said "Screw it, I'll post what I got for now". Thanks alot though.
Agree with Sadi :3
I'm so waiting to see what happens next!
Awww. Thanks. I'll try not to delay as long.
FIIIII-NALEY!!! I loved the new chapter Pedro. LmAO@ the hello kitty sleeping bag.
LOL! Thanks, Zoey.
OMG, yah, that was my FAVE part with the Hello Kitty sleeping bag! DROP-DEAD HILARIOUS!!!
Hahahaha! Just wanted to put Jimmy in the embarassing situations again. Boy, he's gonna kill me.
Thanks alot you guys. It means alot.
I promise the next one isn't gonna take as long.
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Posted 24 January 2010 - 09:11 AM
FINALLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!! I've been waiting for this a long time now!
As for the new chappie...
I didn't like it...
I LOVE IT!
LOL! The Hello Kitty bag was sooooo hilarious! Also, I'm VERY curious of what he was going to say here:
I love it when something goes like this!
Again, GOOD JOB, Perdo!
As for the new chappie...
I didn't like it...
I LOVE IT!
LOL! The Hello Kitty bag was sooooo hilarious! Also, I'm VERY curious of what he was going to say here:
“Uh, Cindy?,” the boy genius asked, “Are you all…”
I love it when something goes like this!
Again, GOOD JOB, Perdo!
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Posted 24 January 2010 - 08:35 PM
I LOVE IT!
LOL! The Hello Kitty bag was sooooo hilarious! Also, I'm VERY curious of what he was going to say here:
I love it when something goes like this!
Again, GOOD JOB, Perdo!
Whoa!
You almost got me there! Glad you enjoyed it, Gabbs.
As for those who asked me about this:“Uh, Cindy?,” the boy genius asked, “Are you all…”
It's Jimmy basically asking Cindy "Are you alright?" Which I just realized I spelled it wrong.
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Posted 24 January 2010 - 08:38 PM
Great new chapter, Pedro! Lol at all the arguing between Cindy and Jimmy. They'll never learn. And eep! Leaving us with a cliffhanger!
Can't wait to see the next part!
Can't wait to see the next part!
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Posted 24 January 2010 - 08:54 PM
YAY!!! Rat Lady has spoken!!!
Or so you think... :rollseyes:
*PMs you*
Lol at all the arguing between Cindy and Jimmy. They'll never learn.
Or so you think... :rollseyes:
*PMs you*
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Posted 21 October 2010 - 10:09 PM
ATTENTION!!
Brand new chapter of CJHC coming soon... real soon... like by between later this week / early next week soon!!
Brand new chapter of CJHC coming soon... real soon... like by between later this week / early next week soon!!
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Posted 11 November 2010 - 10:47 PM
*UBER HAPPINESS.*
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Posted 15 November 2010 - 12:17 AM
I really, really like this!
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Posted 18 November 2010 - 05:17 AM
@Said and Katia 11: Thank You, very much!
Good news: It took a while (apart for college stuff and all) but I've FINALLY managed to finish the new chapter - and it features the anticipated rematch between Yoo Yee and Sheen!!
Also, I've decided to cut out the ending of Part 7 and remake the ending and change the title. It just seemed unpractical to me to end the chapter on a suspensful note and go to another chapter with MORE suspense. Plus I thought the suspense ending might go better for a future chapter, so I'll see what goes on with that. Since that's happening, the number of chapters might shorten considerably, but oh well.
For now, I'll post the new ending to Part 7 and see what you guys think. Then hopefully by the end of this weekend (if I'm not too busy) I'll post the new chapter in all it's glowing Sheen-y glory.
Good news: It took a while (apart for college stuff and all) but I've FINALLY managed to finish the new chapter - and it features the anticipated rematch between Yoo Yee and Sheen!!
Also, I've decided to cut out the ending of Part 7 and remake the ending and change the title. It just seemed unpractical to me to end the chapter on a suspensful note and go to another chapter with MORE suspense. Plus I thought the suspense ending might go better for a future chapter, so I'll see what goes on with that. Since that's happening, the number of chapters might shorten considerably, but oh well.
For now, I'll post the new ending to Part 7 and see what you guys think. Then hopefully by the end of this weekend (if I'm not too busy) I'll post the new chapter in all it's glowing Sheen-y glory.
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Posted 18 November 2010 - 01:04 PM
And if it makes Katie feel better, the next chapter is for you. 
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Posted 18 November 2010 - 03:04 PM
Awww!!! That is so SWEET of you, Pedro!
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