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Summary: Fifty years ago, Jimmy Neutron was murdered and sentenced to heck. Now he's given a second chance. His mission: to make one girl (Cindy) truly happy. The catch: he can't fall in love. Official story pairing: JC. JB hints.

This is going to be my first chapter story I'll be working on (besides Bittersweet, which was only two chapters and has an epilogue soon-to-come). The prologue to this was kind of rushed, so just read and tell me what you think:

heck's Angel

Advice: Don't read if you do not enjoy violence. The prologue has a bit of it.

[Estrella]

Omg. -bows down to the holiness of Krista's writing-

[Mara=^.^=]

Oooh, this is Good. When you're done I'd LOVE to put it on the site.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[.:!Gwen!:.]

Wow, -Krista. His Word says that heck is worse than anyone can ever dare to imagine and then some. If people were afraid of THAT, when they're actually down there.... -whistles- ooooh, boy. I think you portrayed it very nicely (well, you get what I mean) however, and the way you write is magnificent. I really hope to see this progress. =]



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[Koopa Testudo]

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MORE, PLEASE!

[scarletcougar]

could you help poor scarlet? i'm blocked from fanfic... (long story, but i was on it 24/7)... could you put it somewhere else? or e-mail me? maybe? please? :'( *sobbing* I NEED TO READ IT! :onfire:

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Well, it took me awhile, buuut...I finally got the first chapter up! Thanks for your nice comments, guys!

Mara- Sure! As soon as it IS finished (and who knows when that will be!). :lol:"
Without further ado, here's my first chapter:

Bloody Nightmares and an Angel's Omen

I expect lots of constructive advice about my writing. And that includes you, Gwen. :P

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Good god. I just looked back at my chapters and literally did a double take. They're TERRIBLE. D': Okay, that settles it. I am re-writing the prologue and first chapter (not to mention re-naming the first chapter. *Shudder* What WAS I thinking?).

Oh, and I'm updating this story. YOU HEARD ME. >:D Yes, the second chapter is finally up. Thank bologna with a slice of swiss cheese. :lol:

Here's Chapter 2: A Message Through the Window

I'm sorry I haven't updated in a long time. >_______<; At least I have the whole summer to dedicate to my writing now, lol.

[girlgenius123]

Hey, I can't see it. :unsure:

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You kind of have to refresh it a few times. Heh. o_o

[girlgenius123]

Got it.

You have a site for your story? Since I'm not a member on fanfiction.net, can I see it?

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Yes, I have a site for my story. It's not much of anything right now, but if you'd like to see it I'll gladly PM you with the link. Or you could respond to my topic about it LOL (in the fansites section). :lol:

[girlgenius123]

*coughIDIDcough*

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LOL I saw. Thanks for replying.

Btw, sorry if my story is too depressing... or cheesy, if that's the case. XD

[Hugh]

For some reason, the Prologue and first chapter worked fine, but the second chapter's giving me problems. I click it and the top toolbar thingy loads, and then it says the page cannot be displayed, no matter how many time I refresh it or restart it! *hits Fanfiction.net with a stick*

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Err. That's weird. I usually refresh it about twice and then it shows up. O_o; Hold on, let me work with the link... XD

[JimmySpaz]

Ohmigosh, Krista! That was sooo good!!! :kawaii: Please write more soon!!!

[~~Megan~~]

I kept rereading this story, wondering when in the mahecky you were going to update. And now you have!!! *huggles Krista*


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You did? Seriously?? Cause I thought everyone had forgotten about HA. :wacko: I'm glad you didn't forget, though. That makes me feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside... enough to get another update running soon. :lol:

*GIGANTIC BEAR HUG*

[~~Megan~~]

*GIGANTIC BEAR HUG BACK* Yay!!!! It's just, your story is so interesting, and there's so much we don't know. I HAD to keep checking.



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