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#1 neutron X vortex

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 04:56 AM

I would like to make a disclaimer. I DON'T OWN JIMMY NEUTRON!!!!!!!!! So there. Enjoy my fanfic peoples. Please please pleeeeeaaase review! Thanks!

 

Down HE Fell and Up SHE Came

 

 

"Stupid Cindy. Why does she always do this? I mean, obviously I contribute to our fighting, but she always takes it to the next level, and it isn't my fault I have to rise to her challenge. Right Carl?"

Jimmy was once again discussing his and Cindy's relationship with Carl. Ever since he started middle school, everything in Jimmy's life had been taken up a knotch, from grades, to friendships, to, well, Cindy.

"Uh... sure Jim, but can I just go home now? Mrs. Bryant wants our essays in by tomorrow and I have not even started 'cause of my math homework... we will talk later okay Jimmy?"

"Oh. Well. Okay Carl. I'll talk to you later."

Jimmy sighed. Tomorrow was Monday, the promised start of torture. At least there were only five more days of 7th grade left. Jimmy plucked a hair from his head as he approched his lab, held it up to the scanner, and stepped inside.

"C'mere Goddard. We have an experiment to work on."

"Bark! Bark!"

"Alright, so if we adjust this, then that should work..."

Jimmy's mumblings went on for about an hour, and he exclaimed;

"FINISHED! This device will paralyze anything whether is is a robot or living."

At least he would always be awesome in robotics and chemistry, he thought to himself. He put his new invention in backpack, and got ready for the last week of school.

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Jimmy woke to the sound of his alarm clock, and only half awake, he pulled on his jeans and polo shirt.

"Another day in hell, Goddard. Wish me luck."

Jimmy trudged downstairs, and saw his mom making her famous eggs and bacon with toast. He silently grabbed his plate, and sat down at the table. Thinking about the day to come.

After awhile, his mom said "Jimmy dear, you know if there is anything troubling you, you can talk to me."

"No, Mom, I'm just thinking about..." He searched for an excuse. "My latest invention."

"Alright then. If you say so."

Jimmy grabbed his backpack, and left without another word.

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"Hey, Shit-Brain!"

Jimmy heard Cindy's voice again. Right on time.

"Hello, Cynthia. I really don't have time for this so...."

His voice was drowned out.

"Yeah? Well do you have time for this?"

She kissed him lightly, the kicked him in the crotch. He groaned.

"That's what you get for kissing me, King Ass-head!"

Jimmy got the rest of his things from his locker, with absolutely no reaction, since that kind of thing happened everyday. He saw Sheen and Libby walking toward him, and he turned to face them.

"Hey guys" He said in a monotone.

"Uh... I'm NOT a guy Jimmy." said Libby, in her regular sassy voice.

"Yeah!" said Sheen, a little too loudly. "If she was a guy, I wouldn't be dating her!"

"I completely understand." responded Jimmy, just a teeny bit jealous of him. How could a guy that stupid get a girl, and guy with an IQ of 210 just get bullied? Middle school makes no sense at all.

Jimyy gathered his things, and headed off to class.

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Jimmy sat with the usual group of Sheen, Libby, Cindy and Carl at lunch, occasionaly glancing at Cindy, as usual. Jimmy always ate his lunch in silence, since all traces of pride had been wiped away by the end of 6th grade. Cindy was talking loudly as to show off, Libby was rolling her eyes, Sheen was picking his fingernails, and Carl was staring at Cindy in confusion. Typical.

Before he knew it, Cindy was behind him. She hit both sides of his head at the same time, and then started laughing. He felt dazed, and set his face in his food: Mashed potatoes with gravy, and some kind of sausage.

"Look Libby, now he looks like shit too!" cackled Cindy, still behind him.

"He-he-he... I guess that's funny..." said Libby with obvious hesitation, but Cindy didn't notice. Cindy just walked back to her seat, and sat down in triumph.

The rest of lunch continued like that, and Jimmy became more and more miserable by each second.

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As Jimmy was walking home after school, he didn't bother talking to Carl; he knew Carl didn't want to listen. Instead, Jimmy decided to take a walk through the forest. Maybe it would clear his head.

He thought of April, way back on planet Gorlock. Maybe if she was human, things would be different. He thought of Betty, the girl dating Nick. Maybe if he was like Nick, things would be different. Finally, he thought of Cindy. Maybe if she didn't bully him, things would be different.

With all these thoughts clouding Jimmy's mind, he didn't see the gaping hole in front of him. He didn't realize he needed to stop walking. So he fell. Down, and down, until he hit solid stone. A pain jabbed him in his ankle, and he realized it was sprained.

"H-Hello?" Jimmy said, with fear in his voice, he knew without help, he could probably never get out of there. "Is anyone there?"

"I am"

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                     That is my first section of my FIRST fanfic! I hope you peoples enjoy! Chow!


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#2 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 03:34 PM

Nice work, Lily!  I'm eagerly looking forward to what happens next! :thumbsup:


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Posted 13 July 2013 - 11:19 PM

Keep up the good work :popcorn:


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#4 neutron X vortex

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 11:20 PM

Audrey! u should be more supportive than that! :mad:


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#5 oddaud

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 11:23 PM

well what you wrote reminds me of something u would like to say someone we know :grr:


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#6 neutron X vortex

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 11:25 PM

@ oddaud ---

 

            :facepalm:  :naughty:


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#7 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 11:29 PM

My name's not Audrey!  See my username?  It's also my real name, silly goose! XD Anyway, keep up the awesome work, girl!


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#8 Elraine

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Posted 14 July 2013 - 12:20 AM

Interesting take on Cindy's older self... most fics have her at either the same level of bullying, or mellowed out... Here you've done something completely new and actually UPPED her bullying. Holy crap, Cindy, don't be so mean! D: Is her bullying level inversely proportional to how much she likes Jimmy or something? How abusive... xD
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#9 neutron X vortex

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Posted 14 July 2013 - 12:44 AM

Audrey is oddaud my friend from school; she commented too. :D


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#10 neutron X vortex

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Posted 14 July 2013 - 12:47 AM

From my point of view, Cindy just got carried away. She was used to being mean, and when middle school started, she adapted to the environment. @Elraine


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#11 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 14 July 2013 - 03:14 AM

Well, that makes sense...
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Posted 21 July 2013 - 12:08 AM

Hi guys i know i haven't posted but i have been at camp, and now im writing a play. srry! ill post when i have the chance to write.  :thumbsup:


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Posted 06 October 2013 - 03:46 AM

PART 2

Once again, I DON'T OWN JIMMY NEUTRON!!! Enjoy Part TWO!

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"Who is speaking? Show yourself."

Jimmy was looking around in fright, he could not see beyond the column of light the top of the hole provided.

"My name is Morwyn Sterne. I am a criminal and a vicious being, so back off."

"Morwyn. I need to get out of here. Maybe I can give you something in return for helping me get out of here."

Jimmy then realized he didn't really have a reason to get out of there. He might as well die.

"Nevermind. I don't need to get out of here."

"Oh? Then you don't need your body I guess."

"Wait, What?"

Jimmy started backing off, the took the paralysis gun out. It was then that he heard the voice above him. How did she get there? He looked up, and he saw a wispy body, as if she was merely a hologram.

"Ha! got you now!"

Jimmy pointed the gun at her, and pulled the trigger. The ray struck perfectly on target, but had no effect on Morwyn.

"What? I swear I had it just right..."

Then Morwyn dove straight toward Jimmy, and Jimmy saw his own body climb out of the hole. He looked down at himself, and now HE looked like a hologram! Morwyn, now in Jimmy's body looked down and said;

"Get comfortable. You will be staying here for approximately...ETERNITY. Chow!"

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Yay! Part two! Sorry it's so short--- Hopefully chapter three will be longer.


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