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[Elraine]

This was a dare from Emily, from the Truth-or-Dare topic:

I TRIPLE-DOG-DARE you to compose a long poem in Jimmy's POV(aka: first person) directed at Cindy, with him revealing his DEEPEST, most HIDDEN feelings toward her in it!! Make it as fluffed as possible without overdoing it!

So please, be gentle... this is my first time... writing first person POV...

Edit: latest version posted on fanfiction.net

http://m.fanfiction....y-True-Feelings

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

ROFL!!!  Excellent work!!  I can only imagine the LOOK on Cindy's face as she read it!!  Pure and utter humiliation!!  What if Jimmy found out she'd read it?!  Ooo, that would be even MORE humiliating, I'm sure, especially for him!! XD He'd get a sock in the face for sure!! Great job, Elle, excellent work!!

[Katia11]

hahhahahah! I can imagine the look on Libby's face. Waiting until the last minute to burst into laughter.

 

 

[Elraine]

Thanks guys. I had such fun with this, but wanted to keep it short... I'm considering writing an expanded edition (which will incorporate Cindy's and Libby's reactions after the poem was read as well as some of Sheen's shenanigans as an 'enhanced' crime fighter...) or working it into "A Household I.Q. of 782"...

[Elraine]

Hey Emily, I was planning to post this on fanfiction.net. I was planning to mention your fanfiction author name and give you credit for the inspiration of this story, but figured I should get your permission before I just start using your author's name anywhere... So would that be ok with you?

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Of course, it's okay with me! Go right ahead!!

[Elraine]

Alright, so I quickly put together the references from the JN episodes used in the story, and since Emily alreadyfound 1 error (thanks a bunch, it's now corrected ), I wanted to screen the rest of them here, where I know I can count on all you die-hard fans to catch any further errors

Footnotes

(listed in order of appearance)

Defensive strategy 314159-PI - No such strategy exists, not in the real world, and not in the Jimmy Neutron canon, but it IS a reference to the mathematical constant 'PI', used for calculations of circular nature. The value is an infinitesimal decimal, but it starts off: 3.14159, hence the strategy name.

Girl-Eating plant experiment - The girl-eating plant was featured in the Jimmy Neutron movie, and was depicted chomping on a photo of Cindy Vortex, as opposed to the picture of some fellow male classmates.

Photo stash of Betty Quinlan - From the episode "League of Villains". Cindy expressed annoyance multiple times upon finding them in various locations in Jimmy's lab, and even one in his rocket.

Didn't you nearly delete ALL of MANKIND... ...the last time you tried to use science to improve your creative writing skills? - Episode "Return of the Nanobots"

I still have some vials of concentrated flavor serums from when I made the ultimate candy - Episode "Krunch Time"

Truth serum - mentioned at the end of the episode "Grumpy Young Men"

Jimmy's Mom's COOKIES! The lemon ones! - From the episode "League of Villains", when the kids are imprisoned by Zix, Travoltron, and Tee, and talking about what they'll miss most. Carl starts off by saying he'll miss Jimmy's mom, but then corrects himself when he realizes the others staring at him in horror. Sheen falls for it and agrees that Mrs. Neutron's lemon cookies are delicious.

Aphrodite - AKA the goddess of love

Love Potion 976/J - From the episode of the same name