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#1 xErik12

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 01:48 AM

As I mentioned in "Dreams and Goals" or whatever it was called I said I wished to complete a novel length story which I WLL. But, seeing as I may do it later on since I have not much time to myself I decided to write this. Here is the Prologue and I will not give anything away, i wrote a layout, edited it and decided to do the story, unlike my fiction this has no horror and it sticks with the Adventures of Jimmy Neutron.

 

SO...

 

here ya go mates! 

 

It is a good prologue to read with this song:

 

PROLOGUE

 

 

 Clear night skies with the occasional clouds passed by on a beautiful evening just fifteen miles from Retroville, no one had seen the light glowing a bright ghostly color they all discarded the glow as the imitation of the moon mirroring the rays made by the sun.


 A dog was barking in the night it later howled what it was looking at was not the usual cat, not the other dogs, no it was barking directly at the moon or so it appeared. The dog dropped its ears  its teeth which growled all become silent it did not move it was paralyzed and without warning it yelped like if it had come in pain, its ears rose and ran. Before it could run though, a sonic boom crashed in the way where the dog was at. The origin of the place had come from the sky, another boom occurred and erupted it was closer this time, slowly the booms all ceased a cloud of smoke all erected from the high tech vehicle.


“Geez nerdtron you think you could be more closer?!”Yelled the blonde twelve year old who was going to turn thirteen
coincidentally the following month. “It was not my fault my coordinates mislead the target to a suburban neighborhood near the précised length of my calculations!”Barked the twelve years old with sapphire blue eyes and a hair from an ice cream sundae dipped in chocolate sauce.


 The couple which they were, according to the blonde anyway, had made a compromise to cooperate and compose new ideas as a couple—they… did not cooperate well and would throw away the blasphemy they called invention. It was always the blonde who decided to set up the trap a trap the boy with a red shirt and a yellow atom insignia would gladly partake in her game of flirting with disaster. What they had decided to do with the new invention was to test out if any weapons can be fabricated with both of their brains which the boy with the chocolate sundae hairdo had a superior knowledge and used science for nearly everything. She was likewise to his philosophy, well almost
anyway, the blonde they called was Cynthia Vortex but everyone would call her Cindy. She had more of a courteous and if not gluttonous filled with pure perfection for her satisfaction for the upper hand in contention with her boyfriend named James Neutron.


 “Yo King Cranium, I think maybe you should decreased the electrical magnitude and raise the capacity to five.”


 Jimmy could not help but gasp. “Have you lost your mind Vortex?! That much usage of the Project Triadom would overrun the code I input to not only enhance the stability but the entire foundation of the Triadom’s crystal particles. Which power and keep you and I from not being drained of our energy!” 


 Cindy felt like she went a little over her boyfriend’s edge of sanity. “Then how can we increase the Triadom’s spherical generator to power an entire state, if you refuse to increase the capacity level?”She asked as she crossed her arms on her green gradient shirt which went from light to dark green.


 Her boyfriend was silent for the moment.


“Well?”


“If we can’t increase the level at that altitude then I guess…”He didn’t finish and his voice sounded like it were broken.


“…It would mean we have to forfeit our hard work, is that our only option, Jimmy?”She asked but called him by his first name which would mean that Cindy was having a moment and it also define the outburst made by a hyperactive televised addictive sugar craving boy’s line.


 Unfortunately, he was nowhere near him and his obese red haired friend or even his dark skinned braided girlfriend. They were alone this time, no one near but the tenants who lived in the suburb of Retroville. They would call it Alexander or ‘Ader’ a suburb in Retroville.


 They both removed the activated keys which were like hotel keys only they had a polygon shape at the end of the face and glowed a bright blue green aura when it was inserted in the ignition as Jimmy would call it. Cindy hesitated but took out the key she would then sit back on her seat which the Triadom had only room for two since they built it for them and was to be distributed by them and them alone. Cindy saw her reflection in the water cube behind the circular control panel and softened her eyes she had wished the project would have been a victory not inadequate she did not cry but she did get sad.


“Jimmy….”Her voice had dissipated.


 Jimmy turned to her after he set the controls to autopilot he raised the lever and unbuckled his seatbelt. “I know… Cindy I, too had wished our little project was more successful than it had been. But, in all we gave it but we had lacked one last principal…”Even his voice turned to a whisper.


 They sat next to each other by then Cindy felt defeated and laid her down on her boyfriend’s shoulders. He kept pondering and modifying his mind to adapt a new missing ingredient to add to their Triadom generator with the volts and magnitude to convert the very water to electrize the small cells and form it into lightning. Thus would power any electronical devices.


 Well, this is a first, Cindy and I both had a wonderful and if not beneficial to mankind ideal… only for it to be beheaded
from its position and drown in our surreal thought. But…. Why did it not function correctly? It worked during my prototype and it also made sense when I added the formula of gravity, I did not forget about the electrical circuits they were present. So why was my—no, why was our invention not impeccable?


His mind would not be at ease he had to come with an exposition to their invention. Jimmy’s eyes drowned out the voice inside his head to give up, he would not give up incidentally though, the boy genius felt his mind break down.

 

I… don’t know why… why had it not officiate?


 The couple made it back to their street they both did not leave the Triadom vehicle which was a triangular shape with a water cube installed in the ‘control’ square that linked the water to the engine of four hundred water dams. The color was painted by Cindy she chose an emerald green. The glass shell that covered the control was like a fire jet only it had no weapons, well then again if you called the sonic booms and lightning strings as Jimmy would call weapons. In the exterior you could see the many rods hover above the ground they were more than seven feet in width they operated only when the ignition had been turned on by the
keys in the controls.


 “Jimmy, I don’t know what to say I guess… we we—“


“Yeah I know what to you mean Cin, maybe we were wrong.”Finished Jimmy before opening the gate to exit the Triadom.


What she had on her mind was not the invention but another daring topic. Cindy walked over to her pink painted house she walked up the steps and stopped. She glanced back with her head to catch a glimpse of him with his head down walking to his house and stopping to glance at her. She would withdraw and enter her house and falling to the floor with her knees to
her chest.


 She then sighed. And Jimmy would walk to his room he went to his bedroom and close the door shut. 


 Both houses had turned their lights off, there were no more noises the booms and the glow had stopped. High above in the sky glowed a bright if not blinding light the light had been glowing in the same place as where you would see the moon but, no one had recognized it as a light glowing repeatedly glowing brighter at every glow.


It soon faded into the night and all was left was the moon.


 Above the skies far from the revolving planet was a looming danger, the most deadly if not as it was moving slowly in space it was no spaceship, no it was a cloud of smoke a gas as people may say but it was no gas it was something more darker. It was a shadow in the darkness of the cold space it, though was no alien nor any alien connection. It floated in the dark waiting, waiting and waiting for
the signal to return.


 Morning had just arrived in the town of Retroville, Texas, a bright sun ascended as the birds all chirped of the new day. Jimmy Neutron blinked his eyes he had just woken up when he made it to his lab he had noticed something out of the ordinary there was already a message coming from one of his two best friends.

 

 “Vox, open the incoming call!”He commanded.

 

Incoming Call received.


 The message had contained his friend like he was looking at his mailbox or something since his head was visible his red curly hair and the many freckles of his skin. You could hear that there was something trying to get in the view of the camera since the boy kept tugging his face was pushed aside.


“Jimmy, come quick—“Was all the red headed boy with glasses could say.


“—Jimmy you gotta come quick—this is an emergency!”


 The message went to the screen to the channel where the snowy lines all had jumped and blurred out the supposed network or program.


 Jimmy raced over to where they were and when he got there he had no words to describe the sight—he saw that his friends were there. Libby Folfax, Carl Wheezer, Sheen Estavez all had been waiting for him they had shooken their heads even Sheen had a frown.


 “G-Guys, what’s going on, why is everyone sad?”He asked but he already knew why.


 There in front of him was the moving truck, she was already packed her face had pure sadness she had known already but wanted one last night with him—even if it meant that she couldn’t have a perfect night almost like a date. Cindy looked at her friends (Yes she counts Carl and even Sheen as her ‘friends’) she had dread in her voice she was heartbroken it was only a week that she had her first kiss with Jimmy. And a few days since she had a crazy adventure into another universe with her friends and it would only be a few months before they start Junior High.


 Jimmy’s heart stopped beating when he saw the horrible sign placed on the lawn of the Vortexes.


He read it… FOR SALE


 The Vortex family all got in the vehicle of Mr. Vortex which was a four door Chevy. All of the three had already said their goodbyes only Jimmy remained but why was it his heart could not give itself more courage and tell her. The brown car was not very new but it was still part of the year 2009 already had her father bought a new automobile since his old one had been completely old they had the seats a soft touch. But even the touch of the soft seats and the air conditioned car could not convince Cindy to exit the vehicle and proclaim her feelings for her ‘hunk muffin’.



 No. She could not expose her true romantic feelings for him and like Cindy, Jimmy too had no tenacity. No, he could not tell her either. Tell her that he really loved her, too.


 Why can’t I move my legs, why… why does my hands feel numb, and why can’t I tell my mom and dad that I didn’t say goodbye to my hunk muffin?!


 Cindy heard her father start the engine.


 “You ready there, princess?”He asked as he saw her reflection through the mirror.


 “Of course she is, dear, we’ve been planning since the start of January. Right, Cynthia?”


 She did not respond she only nodded solemnly her heart began to beat again it was faster this time.


 Is it over…? Are we breaking up, a-are we done as boyfriend and girlfriend, after all w-we… Jimmy for once in his life did not think about science or a way to decode this scenario.


 Just tell him… tell him already! Cindy wanted to tell him but she did not have sufficient amount of fortitude.


 Outside Libby viewed his reaction;Jimmy had froze she saw his eyes, they were so cold and not in a
bad way but a heart shattered kind of way.


Oh man, just when she and Jimmy had just started datin, too!


 Even Sheen could not look at Libby—his Ultra Queen as he would call her that or the controversial “Libby-licious”.


 Carl took a glance at Cindy in the car, he then looked at his best friend.


Gee, now Jim’s got no girlfriend, I dunno what I’d if I learned that Elke and I had to break up.


 It wasn't until the moving truck had drove away and gave Mr. Vortex enough room for him to back it up and move the wheel to the left lane for him to drive to a new town, a new town called Apple Wells.


“You guys ready for Apple Wells?”


“Let us go, now, to start a new!”She proclaimed.


 As the Chevy had backed it up Cindy took a short glance at Jimmy and for those five seconds her heart had stopped she could feel her hands getting colder her entire body had just lost all of the warmth, despite it being almost eighty degrees and it was only ten in the morning.


JUST TELL HIM…

 

...Tell…


…Tell…


…Tell her…


….Tell him…


The car slowly drove away…. And as it did, Cindy could not hold in all of the pain and all of the memories… They both could not do anything but watch despondently.


Edited by xErik12, 24 February 2013 - 09:56 PM.

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 02:22 AM

Omg...  Cindy moving away?!  I can't believe it-  But, it can't be-...!  I just-!  I-  I need a moment... :(

 

Excellent start!  Just a friendly note, though.  You might wanna work on your sentence structure and wording a bit.  It's still awesome, though!  Keep up the good work!! :thumbsup:


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Posted 24 February 2013 - 02:51 AM

Great job, but everything sounds kind of vague. That could be on purpose but I am not sure. Also, if you have a recommended song to listen to during the chapter, but it at the beginning. I read it first and then noticed the song.
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Posted 24 February 2013 - 10:07 PM

Again, I dearly apologize as I stated previously in my 'status' that I have no creativity whatsoever when it came to his genre. THAT and my first draft had maybe 2,500 words which I had to break down since I didn't want the prologue to be a chapter length (according to my works and R.L. Stine, a chapter for me is about maybe 2,399 or 'round 2,400 words or so when it came to the first chapter maybe 3,000 or 4,000 I wrote in Hearts in the Water 4,125 words and then I wrote in the chapter section of 2,300-3,800 words. Wow I bored you already, didn't I? ^^; )

 

Anyways, thanks for the feed guys! And just 'cuz I been editing the draft I'll see if I can post the first chapter maybe next week. Of course, y'all know what I mean? I am referring to digging in the Jimmy Neutron universe and will do research on the characters, set up the plot which will progress slowly now I will not give anything away just that in the next post of The Shadow of Night  I will go to Jimmy and how he'll take it over his girl's departure and yes he won't take it easily... I may want to add more abstract moments with Sheen. Carl's easy he's not very brave or bold, Libby, too will have a breakdown on her best friend's absence and you will see how I mentioned on the enemy. I'll give you a hint: It is not anyone from the league of villans--well, kinda but no. The villian's not from the future, it's from the world of Jimmy Neutron. Sorry, I made you guys read this lame-O post. Heh.

 

Part 1 will be posted by Mar 2 , or Mar 4. :D


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Posted 25 February 2013 - 02:56 AM

Let me guess...  Evil Jimmy?! :evillaugh:


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Posted 27 February 2013 - 10:06 PM

....Surprisingly no. Apparently I have a dark mind and Evil Jimmy's not the main antagonist...

 

Anyways, currently the chapter will be long. Be prepared for Saturday, right now at the moment I plan on writing for maybe 3,600-3,900 or somewhere under the 4,000 word limit. Heh. :lol:


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Posted 02 March 2013 - 07:08 PM

This chapter goes with this here track.

PART 1

 

 

Chapter 1: Morning After


 Nothing could be said by the boy genius named Jimmy. His actual name was James Isaac Neutron but everyone called him Jimmy he had a whippy dip hairdo and his sapphire eyes were saddened he could not get over the departure of his girlfriend yes she had left without a word. It struck him the most since Libby had said her farewell before Jimmy arrived in a hurry, he did not know that his project partner was going to leave, he felt almost betrayed.

 

Stupid…. Stupid Vortex, why didn’t you tell me that you were going to be relocated indefinitely to another town? Why did you
have me work with your delicate warm hands and emerald green shimmering eyes only to stab my heart with a stake and not begetting a word to me… I thought I was your boyfriend—so why?! Why did you play… play…
Jimmy’s heart was beating slowly now he felt his heart beating abnormally than most
days.


 The boy genius was in his room which had the wallpaper of space satellites he had a board of the periodic table of elements, an alien toy-you-would-use-to-punch, he had a chalk board that would face the bed he would do many of his calculations on various experiments. Next to the chalk board was a telescope no bigger than Jimmy’s hair, it was facing the window to gaze into the stars. Jimmy was not in the mood to invent or inadvertently create a seemingly harmless
gadget only for it to be backfiring and cause a total meltdown that would endanger the whole city and possibly the world.

 

He had not been dressed yet and still had on his shorts with no shirt on since that was what he would wear to go to sleep. High on the wall he had a poster of an alien with the words in Spanish EL FUTURO which meant the future or just future in Spanish. His robot canine had woken up he felt his master feeling unwell then most days why would he not? He lost the girl of his dreams not to mention she did not say one word or even a hug or proper goodbye!

 

 Goddard leaped into Jimmy’s lap he lifted his head and lowered his ears he licked his face but even that was not enough to move him. Jimmy was not sleepy, he had no energy, he was stuck in his room then he finally got out of his bed and went to
change.

 

 His mechanical canine opened a compartment in his stomach to talk to him. “Is master so unwell?”Was what he would do if you were Jimmy Neutron. What he really did was bark later lower his head on the floor.

 

“Yes Goddard I’m not at my full dexterity to play at the moment.”

 

 Goddard barked again he yelped repeatedly and put his mechanical paws on Jimmy’s legs.

 

“No boy, I can’t right now I-I just can’t, I need to be alone right now.”Jimmy left his room full dressed in his red shirt with the yellow atom insignia and his blue jeans he went to the bathroom. While he was brushing his teeth he could not even think one word all he could do was picture her. Jimmy took a glance at himself in the mirror when he did he saw Cindy’s face reflected in the mirror Jimmy’s eyes light up he quickly turned around but there was no one behind him it was just his heart mourning her withdrawal.

 

 Why did you do this to me… why did you make me fall in love with you. I have befallen in deep romantic feelings with you and I-I despise myself for that… we were supposed to hate each other and so how is it possible pertinent that I can’t erase and blockade the crushing rocks ofour times together… 

 

“How can this world be so cold hearted, separating, dividing, wars after wars, word after word and disregarding after all those
times we had while in danger, when we saved the Earth from the alien named Meldar Prime. We rescued our parents back from the Yolkains, I saved the world multitudinous times, so why… why has the world given me a cold shoulder and take away my adorable little—my adorable little angel!”Jimmy felt his voice crack when he mentioned Cindy he could feel the butterflies in his stomach his heart was beating irritably he was sweating? “I have done research plot the lines together. What in the name of Albert Einstein has happened? She—she stole my heart and I let her… I let her steal mine.”Jimmy put the toothbrush down he clicked a button for his hair to be fixed with many engineered robotic hands with cosmetic utilities. A small tornado was made by the revolving robotic hands fixing Jimmy’s hair. 

 

Goddard walked outside, he straight off sensed something out of the ordinary he pointed at the sky what he pointed was where the moon was at last night he began to bark until his barks were heard from Jimmy’s parents who rushed to what he was barking.

 

“What is it Goddard have you found something in the sky?”Asked the woman with a fifties hair style and green dress.

 

“Now butterbiscuit what could he possibly find there’s nothing but the puffy clouds, oh and maybe the passing planes coming
from the airport then again—there is an army base not far from town.” 


“I know that Hugh but why is Goddard barking at the sky? He must’ve discovered a parlous object since we clearly can’t find anything.”She kept her eyes in the sky only to find a bird passing by land near a tree in the backyard.

 

“Oh! See it was just a—“ 

 

 Goddard escaped the grasp of Mrs. Neutron he activated his ears to fly about in the sky. 

 

 A block away in a gray painted house in a room with posters of Graystar, with many makeup kits on the counter near her bed. Inside her room was painted a light blue near the window with the curtains she was sitting in her desk with her head down. The girl with the black braids wearing a pink top with the colors fading light to dark her long sleeves were dark pink, she had on her blue jeans and brown shoes. Her brown eyes were covered by grief sure she had her boyfriend and her friends but she had just lost her best friend after she met her since back in kindergarten. She was inside all day while listening Graystar tracks in full volume. 

 

 Libby Folfax was now thirteen her friends were only a year younger than her but she still hanged with them she and her friends had many times being in dangerous adventures, she recalled when she and her friends had helped an older version of Cynthia. That was about maybe no longer than a week with the day over four days after the day turned to night. (When it turns to nightfall it will be a week and four days since they came back from the disastrous odyssey) She admit that she had been curious as to why had the meglomanium was even created by Jimmy if it had threaten anyone who took a whiff of to a highly menacing full powerful human being.

 

 Cin we have known each other since kindergarten girl when are you gonna express yo’ feelings for Jimmy he and you have been datin’ since you tricked me inta belivin’ you guys were aliens in the news by Corky Shimatzu. What’s more is that after I argued with her to just tell him she just neglected my advice an’ now here we are… Girl why did you have to leave me so mad? It’s infuriating that you were too ignorant and stubborn to just tell him already after more than twelve years! Cin you should’ve listened to me when I said “He’ll be heartbroken ya know, not only that but Jimmy will be a shallow shell of himself if you don’t at least face him!” Libby stopped her track of Graystar coincidentally she was listening to a goodbye song titled: “Let’s Not Say Goodbye (Let’s Say Hello)”, her tears were coming back again. 

 

Cin’ why did you leave and make me mad?

 

 Libby Folfax’s real name was Liberty Folfax but she according to the times people called her by her real name, detested and preferred ‘Libby’ as Carl, Cindy and Jimmy had liked their names not spoken often. (Their real names that was) She was thinking about her best friend and all of the times she caught Jimmy and Cindy flirting by substituting their true romantic feelings by arguing constantly with meaningless if not rhetorical theories by debunking each other’s opinions. Like the time Jimmy and Cindy were stranded on a deserted island when Cindy had challenged Jimmy’s intellect about the Equator if it were even visible to the naked eye alone. She chuckled a little to the flashback.

 

“Girl you sure loved to… flirt with disaster.”Libby got up and went to her closet in her closet were upon hundreds of hundreds of
tank tops, tops, shoes, nail polish, eye mascara, belts, and even a couple of dresses. “Ah here it is!”She said and held the pink suit which connected a circle with the hole where your head would be. 

 

“It was almost yesterday when we were in Nav’s junk of a ship and on our way to help out Jimmy’s evil older version.”She put the
pink space suit and hanged it next to her former wardrobe of a green dress. She sighed and went to go lay down on her bed.

 

 Libby did not cry anymore she just wished that things were not as complex as they were Jimmy and Cindy both liked each other, more than like why not say they loved each other for some time now! And it not only caused Libby to become tiresome of their lack of effort to tell each other’s true feelings even if they liked only flirting and giving each other hints. Those hints made her even more furious. She wanted to think about this and accumulate not a solution but some sort of plan to fix the scar marked by their arrogant short lived rivalry.

 

 Libby could just picture Jimmy and Cindy kissing each other while still in their nightly news attire in her head she was relived only for that night that the epic rivalry could be at east from now on. Boy was she ever off the mile. 

 

“Cindy you know you are going to break his heart if you don’t tell him!”

 

“Chill Libs, I know that. Beside  Neutron’s not going to take it easy if I just waltz over to his house after we kissed and our
little relationship suddenly stopped and I say ‘Hey Nerdtron our relationship has to come to a halt because hey guess what? I’m…’”Cindy stopped her words from causing more esoterically dire hammers nailing on the nails that were metaphorically being nailed in her head with every breath.

 

“Cin, girl do you really want him to miss you to death you want him to grieve and mourn of the death of your relationship status?! Pleeease Cin’ this is gettin’ out of control we all know you guys have strong feelings for each other so why not just proclaim your love for him before you—“But Libby was interrupted when Cindy sunk her head down and the eyes were no longer human but vacuous she had shadows blocking her very face. 

 

“Libs please stop, tomorrow’s gonna be my last day I want it—I want it to be a perfect day, a perfect day with Jimmy is all I want. I admit it will not be a hundred percent unblemished but the very least as my last resort is to give him a day he’ll never forget…”Cindy lifted her head she wiped away the drops coming from her eyes.

 

Libby understood. She did not say it since Cindy held Libby tight she began to weep again all of the tears shed on the shoulders of Libby, this made her softhearted she felt like she should not have criticized her of her little charade to burn out the pain.

 

“OK, Cin but please don’t go with Jimmy and cause another misadventure I can’t take another episode when you and Jimmy start with the arguing shouting at each other and dragging me, Sheen and Carl.”Libby giggled. Although… Sheen does love when you guys make a sudden movement to the hovercar.” 

 

Cindy sniffed she tried to crack a smile but she could not formulate the energy. “Thanks Libs, I’m sorry I had to yell at you.”

 

 Libby remembered her talk with her but even then she lied she could not take them arguing every time they were given the opportunity she just wished that both of them would stop their mouths and tell each other how they felt. Their true feelings were more stronger than they thought yes, much stronger indeed.

 

 Back in Jimmy’s Lab, he could not help but move even his fingers to type all he could think was why he was casted aside and abandoned. Jimmy was in his Lab which was located underground where the Neutron’s once had a basement but with hard work and many hours working with equations and doing the calculations James Isaac Neutron built a Lab for him to work. However, Jimmy was absolutely out of even the single idea, his mind was clouded by the image of Cindy and her warm smile her eyes that were a favorite green. And oh how he loved it when she claimed she was watching him he always thought that she was a feisty one that was one of the reasons why he had fallen for her—her constant resistance. He was in his lab on the computer he was only sitting in the chair with his lab coat on as he was a man of science without anyone to share his philosophical ideas and theories. He did have Carl and Sheen but they weren’t in the same brain
wavelength as his was he did not socialize much with Libby but they were still good friends.

 

 Oh why did I have to… have to be alone. WHY can’t I even think of a prime number, or write out my birthday with the combination of the equivalent of pi, how could I forget that she was more than just a crush… more than a friend more than… than even. Is it possible that my feelings for her were more attractive to Cindy than even Betty Quinlan.

 

Jimmy quickly began typing on the keyboard and when he did a bunch of scientific equations with other worldly theories beyond man’s knowledge were shown on the popped on the green screen. He did not stop until he was solving for the missing link between the equation for Cindy and his feelings than Betty’s and his whom he had an unpretentious crush.

 

 Gas planets, it’s true!

 

 “I had not only fallen in love with Cindy but I had more STRONG emotions for her than Betty!”

 

 Outside the lab and next door was a redheaded obese twelve years old he was outside his backyard he was looking into space which was something unfamiliar for the people who thought they knew him which they clearly did not. Carlton Wheezer had many, if not infinite allergies. Surprisingly he was not playing with any of his llama related toys then again he did turn twelve and was not entirely mature even though he and Sheen had exposed their lives when they revealed to Mr. and Mrs. Neutron. That they had no lives without Jimmy’s crazy brain and his inventions and would just wait for something big and exciting to happen.

 

I wonder if Jim has gotten over the fact that he did not get to say a word to Cindy when she left without even looking at him. No, probably not, Jimmy mourned the death of his alternative Goddard once, when he did not harm the poor guy back on planet… Oh man, I forgot the name was it planet 5083-B? Or was it planet  589? Huh whatever. Carl Wheezer had already applied his allergy pills they were more effective than when he was eleven.

 

“I hate to see Jimmy all down because he did not tell her how he felt. Like when he saw Betty and Cindy argue in that other dimension when he wanted to impress her but Cindy did something that sucked us in a weird realm. I wonder if he still likes Betty after he kissed Cindy.”Carl was sitting down in the floor the redheaded was wearing a striped orange shirt with green slacks and brown shoes.

 

 Carl got up when he saw the backdoor open and saw Jimmy come from the tree house. He felt like he needed to help him but what could he do? What is it that Carl Wheezer the boy of hundreds of allergies could do to help his genius best friend who lost his not only girlfriend but the love of his life at such a young age? He already knew the answer to that.

 

 Nothing.

 

 A few houses away was the hyperactive fourteen years old. He was in his room he had a cup of Purple Flurp next to his bed on the nightstand he had a bowl of sugary candy sweets. His room had many toys with the logos of Ultra Lord he had a bunch of the action figures above his bed in fact, his bed too had a face of the protagonist of the television program.

 

 Sheen Estavez had turned fourteen, he, despite his age still had a high sugar addiction and would still consume unhealthy amount of portions when he went to bed and when he got out of bed. He still had his blue green shirt with Ultra Lord blasting away nothing his shirt had the Ultra Lord logo as well. Sheen worn his black pants with his blue green shoes the Mexican hyperactive adolescent had short spiky hair and brown eyes.

 

“Nothin’ like a bowl of sugar and candy to start out the day!”He said and yet the clock read it was already past noon.

 Sheen grabbed a candy and unwrapped it he reached for the cup of Purple Flurp and chugged it while chewing the sweet candy. He later burped loudly Sheen wiped his mouth with his right hand and jumped out of bed.

 

“I wonder if Jimmy’s still upset about yesterday, dude had cold feet and didn’t even got to tell Cindy goodbye…. And—I’m bored. I’m a go see what Libby’s doing.”He said and left his room. Closing the door with a small slam!

 

 Libby just closed the door when she heard a familiar voice call her.

 

“Hey babe, where you going?”

 

All Libby wanted was to forget about yesterday she was caught in a deep thought regarding her friends both Cindy and Jimmy, when Sheen her boyfriend had came she was a lot more cheerful than earlier. Libby turned around to see the hyperactive if not abstract Mexican adolescent she could tell that he was already over Cindy’s egression this made her bend a smile. “Nothin’ I was just gonna go fo’ a walk you wanna come with?”

 

“You bet, babe!”He almost yelled he was without doubt hyper. Libby could not help but blush and then they were off to go for a walk around town maybe they were going to go to the Candy Bar or maybe they were going to stroll around the park. Either way, so as long as she was with him she would go just about anywhere that wasn’t in her home cogitating over her best friend.

 

 Going back to the Neutron household it was already past four ‘o clock. It was around this time that Hugh Neutron returned home to his wife Mrs. Judith Neutron or Sugar Bear as he would call by the abundant of nick names to his wife. Jimmy was now in the living room he had his hands on a device he somehow operated the energy to invent a gadget.

 

“Say Jim Jam, what’cha got there?”

 

“This, it’s just my modified Global Extracting Satellite Ray 6000 it can extract the missing object misplaced and surrogate
the absence of one’s unfinished thought and even the concept itself metaphorically and physically!”

 

His father was not the brightest egg in the nest so he got lost in his son’s words his eyes almost spinning to another direction he later would pop desultory sentences. “Global—hey that reminds me of the time when NASA had asked me to pilot a space prototype and y’know what I said? I said ‘Commanding Officer It will be my pleasure!’ And that’s why we have automatic cash registers.”

 

 Hugh’s words would regularly alter him to go show it off to his friends, on the other hand, Jimmy just found out his girlfriend had left Retroville which not only left a huge hole to fit, the void itself would only grow bigger less he invent something.This dejected his enthusiasm he put the gadget which was of a rectangular shape. It had a screen with the planetary alignment by the coordinates it had a small icon of a silhouette person you would see on the web in a social media if you had no image. The device was about the same size as his shrink ray only it had no buttons and it had two crescent shapes coming out of the ends it glowed when activated which he did to strike an idea. The idea had an image of all of his inventions, there was a compilation of all the times he and Cindy had together all stacked up like pieces of papers, like if it were a brain blast he did find a missing link to the puzzle.

 

Jimmy alone could see all of these holograms, just like when he first had his first brain blast back when he decided to invent

Goddard.

 

 Unfortunately, this drained part of his energy leaving him dehydrated, mildly will cause a headache, and he would remain tired for the rest of the seven hours. “Why have I not worked out the bugs yet? Now I’ll be in no shape to see Carl and Sheen, no matter I must take this time to monitor the new prototype… the same one me and—no stop thinking about her she’s gone already, yes I-I have come to recognition of her absence. Why can I not think straight I know I have been bewildered by her charming, sweet, golden ye—Ahh! Snap out of it, why can I not think about anything… anything… think.. think… of—Retro Land, no, no I can’t! Oh my precious angel why have you left me.”Jimmy could not fight the very six feet elephant in the room it was there black in white, he could not avoid the very problem he missed her more than he had known.

 

 Cindy… Dork-tex… my precious angel… why have you left me and made me not only fallen in love with you but made me miss you. Cindy wherever you are I miss you and I hope that you don’t miss me too much. I… I…

 

…I hope to see you…Jimmy…

 

 “Here we are gang. Apple Wells, Texas it’s even better than I told you!”

 

 The chevy passed a green sign near the vast green grass it read: WELCOME TO APPLE WELLS POPULATION 43,865

 

 Cindy and her family barely arrived from the seventy mile drive from Retroville. While there she was not bored she was not excited, no it was clear to her that she missed home. But this was going to be her home: her new home.


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    I'D forgive you, FJ... <3<3

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Posted 02 March 2013 - 08:36 PM

Man, this first chapter was really powerful, dude...  Well done!  You almost made me cry!  I hope Jimmy and Cindy are reunited soon, somehow, somewhere, sometime...  I'm a huge J/Cer, after all!


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