Jimmy Neutron Alternate Endings
#1
Posted 07 October 2012 - 05:42 AM
#2
Posted 12 January 2013 - 08:51 PM
:A Beautiful Mine:
[Jimmy, Sheen, Cindy, Libby and Carl crash land on the street and see the Neutrons]
Mrs. Neutron: "Sweetie, you're back so early?"
Mr. Neutron: "You've only been gone for three days, Jim Jam."
[Jimmy and the gang recover from the collision]
Cindy: "Neutron the fuel tank see if any of the astro rubies made it--"
[Jimmy's hands hold nothing but the remains of the rubies dust that are blown by the wind]
Cindy: "Oh..."
Jimmy: "That's OK, guys we don't need to be rich with galatic gems..."
Sheen: "Jimmy why must the good lose the rubies--"
[Mr. and Mrs. Neutron look at him of the deception and Mrs. Neutron drops the canoe]
Mrs. Neutron: "James Isaac Neutron!"
[Cut to Black]
[In the emptiness of space the three aliens flow in space endlessly they watch the Asteroids hover about the darkness of space]
[High above the asteroid where five landed was another asteroid and as it gets near it there is a red glow in a crack of the asteroid]
[Cut to credits]
#3
Posted 25 April 2013 - 12:27 AM
Just thought of one, instead of the disappointing "Lady sings the news" we have foreshadow!
[After Carl was stuck and he saw Cindy and Jimmy kiss in front of him]
[Deep in the night sky were all of the stars they were twinkling and shining there was one in particular that was rather larger in mass than the rest. It got closer and closer causing the star to change into a poof of smoke burping from the object and then it crashed into the ground that resulted in a giant canyon-like hole in the grass]
[A glow appeared and a shadow emerged from the grass]
[What we see is a person with a familiar shape]
Voice: "Good I made it in time--there's still time bef... before."
[Cue dramatic music and camera zooming in the sky and we see the round face with blue hair and electric crystal-like shapes like a humanoid]
"HAHAHAHAHAHA.... HAHAHA..."
[Numerous voices of dread are heard]
[evil cackles are heard and it cuts to black]
;D
Upcoming REAL battle of Villians v. Jimmy (no not the League of Villians episode and it's not a rip-off it's a giant duel that will end the show)
Just my alternate ending.
#4
Posted 25 April 2013 - 12:51 AM
Dude, you should totally turn this into a fanfic! I'd read it, but only if it wasn't too graphic, violent, or vulgar... If you are, then don't make it like that...PLEASE...
#5
Posted 01 May 2013 - 12:53 AM
Nah, it was what I call a short fic. I just thought of it, you wouldn't believe of my head--I pop up ideas like crazy (although, due to my classes becoming more relentless as I am nothing but a sophomore trying to cope with the education it interfer's with my writing. I haven't written anything related to Jimmy Neutron or my short stories in almost a month) and If I were to adapt into a full-length story, mainly some 30,000-59,000 words I would keep it PG-13. Or to be exact, PG-12! (Get it? My story The Shadow of Night revolves when their at the age of 12 and ... forget it.)
I have another alternative ending.... Only I have to make it where it fits a cetian episode.
Curse you Mrs. Nichols and your regulations. Can't wait until next semester, when our real professor returns. >.>
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