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#1 Katia11

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 07:12 PM

Ok. I finally decided to post this. *nervously looks around*

Just be informed that I make a lot of mistakes. I work hard to find them, but I don't always catch them. I am not perfect, nor do I claim to be. So, please go easy on me. Please no hating and no flames... Please.

Thank you for taking the time to read this. :) Love, Katie

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At the Beginning

It was a quiet summer day in Retroville and the sun was high in the sky. Cindy Vortex and her best friend Libby Folfax sat on the edge of the Vortex pool drinking lemonade. Mrs. Vortex was sitting on a chair not far from them, tanning in the sunlight.

"It is a perfect day outside today," Libby commented.

"I agree one hundred percent Libs. Nothing could spoil this afternoon."

Just then there was a loud squeal from across the street. Mrs. Vortex pulled down her sunglasses from her eyes and was staring at the people climbing out of the car across the street.

"Oh, the new neighbors are finally here!" She commented as she peeked over the fence.

"What do you mean finally?"

"The house has been sold for months. I was wondering if they were actually ever going to come. I should go make some of my famous banana bread!"
Mrs. Vortex turned to her daughter and Cindy knew what she was going to say. She opened her mouth to protest but her mother shook her head. "We're going over in half an hour, no arguments."

She sighed. "I guess I spoke too soon."

"I bet they'll be nice," Libby smiled.

Cindy shrugged as she hurried inside.

By the time she was finished changing her mother was waiting impatiently at the foot of the stairs. She gestured for her daughter to follow her out the door.
Together they walked across the street to the brown house and knocked. The old green car in the driveway was still stuffed full of things and Cindy noted that there were building materials laying in the back yard.

A woman with bright red hair opened the door.

"Hello there!" Her mother greeted. "I'm Sasha Vortex, and this is my daughter Cindy, we live just across the street from you. We baked you a little welcome gift didn't we, Cindy?" Cindy was staring at the woman; she looked frazzled and slightly dazed.

"Oh well, I don't usually allow visitors when the house is such a pit, but you can come on in! Hugh, we have visitors!" She called.

She heard a scurrying from the kitchen and then a man with chocolate brown hair and deep brown eyes came into the living room smiling from ear to ear.

"Is that pie?" He asked hopefully to the thing in her mother's hand. She shook her head no and Hugh sighed.

"Oh well, it still smells good!"

While her mother made nice with the new neighbors she studied the various things strewn across the living room. There was one box sitting at the bottom of the stairs that caught her attention.

Jimmy's stuff- DO NOT TOUCH.

"Actually we have a young son, his name is Jimmy. I think he's up in his room at the moment, but I'll call him down to meet Cindy. Would Cindy like that?"
Cindy didn't answer but her mother nodded her head.

"We would love to meet him."

"Jimmy! Come downstairs, we have guests!"

"I'm a bit busy right now! I'm mathematically calculating how big this room is."

"JAMES Isaac Neutron!" She called and then Cindy heard a bedroom door open and close upstairs. As he turned the corner and came into view, Cindy's stomach leapt into her throat.

His hair was chestnut brown like his fathers, and his eyes were sapphire blue. His head was oddly too large for his body, but Cindy found this intriguing. As he came down the stairs, her skin started tingling. She could feel the heat rising to her cheeks. But, she managed a small smile as he stopped in front of them. He returned the favor by giving her a nervous and uncertain smile.

"Jimmy," Mrs. Neutron interrupted. "This is Sasha Vortex and her daughter, Cindy."

"Hello, I'm Jimmy Neutron, boy genius," he said. When Cindy finally spoke her mouth was uncomfortably dry.

"I'm Cindy," she replied.

"Yes, I do believe your mom said that," he responded. Cindy blushed again.

"Jimmy! That was not very nice, apologize."

"Sorry," he said unconvincingly. "I just don't know why mother let a member of the female gender into the house."

Cindy blinked. This boy didn't act like the other boys she knew, he was odd. He was different. But, was different good? She could tell that she felt SOMETHING for this boy, but she was still uncertain what. She did know that this was how she felt around Nick, the buzzing of the skin and the strange feeling that her heart was leaping in her chest.

Hold that thought, did he just insult her? She shot him a glare.

"Because I'm the smartest girl in my class, and we're neighbors."

"I bet you can't even recite pie to the hundredth decimal."

Cindy's mouth fell open. "You did NOT just go there," she hissed.

He smiled and much to her disliking the weird tingly feeling had returned. "I did."

"Pie is infinite! Who on earth has time to memorize to the hundredth decimal?"

"Hmm," he added to himself as he dug out something from the box near the stairs. "Now if you'll excuse me, I have some repairs to do on my jetpack before I can start school. I miscalculated the thrust," he muttered to himself as he started back up the stairs.

Cindy was furious and Mrs. Neutron obviously could tell.

"James, apologize this moment."

He sighed and turned back to Cindy. "Sorry," he muttered quietly, as he fiddled with a button on his jet packet. "THERE! I think I finally fixed it! I'll just give it a try."

"JIMMY, NO!" His mother cried.

But, the boy genius hit a button on the jetpack and the engine started up. There was a loud POP and he burst forward, running straight into a bewildered Cindy. With a definite thud Cindy landed against the door and he landed on top of her as the engine came to a stop. His warm breath fell on her face and her brain unexpectedly felt like it had been stuffed with cotton balls.

She grunted in frustration. "You should watch where you're going big head," she hissed and his cheeks flushed a little bit realizing just how close their faces were.

"Sorry," he whispered as he outstretched his hand and helped her up. His skin was pleasantly warm. "I thought I had it right that time," he muttered and then smiled at her. She ignored the way her heart was pounding and frowned at him.

"Just watch out next time, got it big brain?"

He shrugged and walked upstairs, still concentrating intently on his jetpack. But, he turned back and shot her a smile.

"See you in class, Cindy."

Mrs. Neutron smiled nervously. "Sorry about him, he's a genius, but he's still a boy."

Cindy looked up at Jimmy's mom. Her head still felt a little funny. She nodded.

"It's all right Mrs. Neutron. But, we must be off, so thank you for letting us come in and visit with you!" Her mother spoke happily and then gently pushed her daughter out the door. Mrs. Neutron waved and then closed the door.

"Ugh! What a terrible little boy they have!" She hissed venomously. "Stay away from him Cindy, he's trouble. I can feel it."

But, Cindy was too lost in her own thoughts to pay attention to her mother. Her brain was shouting that he was an ignorant toe rag, but as those eyes came back into her brain she was made aware of a frightening possibility. If she wasn't careful she could develop a crush on him. She simply couldn't have that! Nick was totally dreamier then that stupid loser.

“Just wait, I'll show him what happens when you mess with Cindy Vortex.," she hissed venomously.

She decided that she would ignore the way her skin tingled and decided that the churning of her stomach was because he irritated her so much. Even still, she found herself smiling as she caught another glance of the house across the street.

Nothing would ever be the same in Retroville again.

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 08:13 PM

Yay, one of my favorite stories.
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#3 Katia11

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 08:15 PM

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 08:55 PM

Really cool, Kate, really cool! ^_^
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#5 Katia11

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 08:57 PM

Thanks. :) There will be more since it's all ready finished.. :D
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#6 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 09:04 PM

That's terrific news! Can't wait! Sounds like it takes place before When Pants Attack. lol
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Posted 20 May 2011 - 11:42 PM

Yay! You're posting this here! :wub:

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Posted 21 May 2011 - 05:00 AM

Oh I read this on FanFiction, but never commented. I loved this story. The last two chapters make me tear up every time I read them.
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Posted 22 May 2011 - 04:45 PM

:D Awwww... *huggles*
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Posted 22 May 2011 - 08:13 PM

Oh I read this on FanFiction, but never commented. I loved this story. The last two chapters make me tear up every time I read them.

Why is that, Aly?
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#11 Katia11

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Posted 23 May 2011 - 03:12 AM

So it's interesting that in Party at Neutron's Betty shows up and Cindy's really angry to see her, so I wondered why. P.S. this takes place during right after Party at Neutron's. I know she's out of character.. But, it's just sort of fun exploring with the secret soft side that we ALL know she has. Which a certain big brained genius brings out... ;) P.S. This is a little more angsty then originally intended, but hopefully you'll still enjoy it. Please don't think that I hate Betty, we just know that Cindy does... :)

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Betty

Cindy Vortex ripped through her blonde hair with her brush.

She hated Betty Quinlan. She hated her stinking guts. She had no brains of her own, and she was sickeningly perfect. From the moment that girl moved here, boys stood in line waiting to get a chance to get close to her. She hated that whenever she went to her locker, which was unluckily next to Betty's, she had to step around a huge pool of drool. She hated that Betty always had love notes from boys stuck to her locker.

What was so good about her anyway? Her big brown eyes and her dark brown hair weren't all that remarkable, were they? Oh, who was she kidding? The girl was beautiful and every other girl in school was aware of it. She hated that the first time Jimmy saw her, his blue eyes got really wide and he started muttering nonsense.

"Who, who, who is that?" Were the only words she could comprehend.

"That is Betty Quinlan," she responded.

He had just blinked stupidly and her heart began to pound angrily against her rib cage. How did she turn a genius into a big pile of goo? It was disgusting! She hated that when Betty walked into Neutron's party, Cindy knew exactly why she was there. Could it be more obvious that Neutron was gaga for the dark haired girl?

She narrowed her eyes.

"Who invited Miss I'm So Beautiful and perfect?"

Cindy's mouth went lax as Betty pulled him onto the table. GROSS, she did not need to see that.

"Why would anyone ever want to dance with Nerdtron? I wouldn't dance with him if he was the last kid on earth," she had hissed as the two danced on the table.

"Me thinks the lady doth protest too much," Sheen smiled smartly. Her heart had leapt into her throat, but then she thought of a clever retort.

"Me thinks you'd better your yap before I button it for you!" She hissed.

He blinked and then literally buttoned his lips tightly. Sheen would never say anything like that again, Cindy was quite certain of it.

Even so, there was one truth that she had to face. When she saw Betty dancing with Jimmy it had hurt. When she accidentally saw her kissing Jimmy's cheek, her stomach jolted like she had tripped going down a flight of stairs.

To make things worse, Jimmy got that love-sick look on his cute, ahem, disgusting face. Even the thought of that face made her furious.

Cindy slammed her brush down on her dresser and noticed that the back of the brush had cracked with the force of the impact.

"I really HATE you, Betty Quinlan," she hissed venomously to no one as one lonely tear slid down her cheek.

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Posted 24 May 2011 - 01:58 PM

:thumbsup: Thank you for posting this here, it's a challenge finding decent JN fics set in the present!
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Posted 24 May 2011 - 03:44 PM

*huggles* thank you for taking the time to read it and post!! :D
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Posted 25 May 2011 - 01:55 AM

Oooh, great fic! More, please!! =)
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Posted 25 May 2011 - 04:44 AM

This takes place during Beach Party Mummy when Cindy and Libby start becoming regular staples in Jimmy's adventures. Please, if you like these let me know.

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Convergence

Cindy Vortex was babbling about something or other in the backseat of the hover car. Her face was animated and it obvious that she was telling the dark skinned girl sitting next to her a dramatic story.

When her eyes met his he turned away. It was strange that a year ago he would've rather been caught DEAD then before willingly going anywhere near her. However, to his great displeasure, it seemed that he had gotten used to Cindy's presence.

He had even found himself ENJOYING her from time to time.

He shuddered. This was Cindy Vortex he was talking about here. She was the annoying, loud, big mouthed girl from across the street that always poked fun at him. She was always in his face and making sure he was well aware of his failures. She PRETENDED to know what she was talking about when she really didn't have a clue.

She was the girl who told him she didn't want to be within ten feet of him, yet she often found a way to stand right next to him. It gave him the feeling that she wanted to be around him.

Was that normal for a girl who supposedly hated you?

Then again, she had never been normal. She was always saying one thing and DOING another. The time in the cell on Yolkus should've been his first clue. How she said that she hated his guts, and yet she was the only one willing to show how much she really believed in him. How much she cared. He had thought it was a fluke, a lapse in judgment. But, from then on she would send small encouraging smiles at him when she thought no one was looking.

He again glanced back at the blonde.

No matter how he fought it, he had to admit that something was happening here. The dreaded word that he'd been avoiding for months now rose into his mind. It was convergence. Defined as something coming together from different directions, a uniting or merging of groups or tendencies that were originally opposed or very different.

Almost without warning she had quietly slipped into his life. Now they were something like friends. The scariest part of this was that he didn't really mind all that much.
As she smiled at him he promised himself that wouldn't let her know that.

Not yet anyway.

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Posted 25 May 2011 - 11:24 AM

I liked it!

It would be great if you wrote a fic under Jimmy's perspective about the episode when they met Eustace Strych and about King of Mars! (Stranded also would be awesome! Ok, ok, no more suggestions! :P)
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Posted 25 May 2011 - 11:37 AM

:-) thanks for the suggestions! I always listen to what my readers have to say. :( But, this story has all ready been written. I'm just uploading it here so my IDOJ friends who don't go to fanfiction.net can read it. :)
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Posted 25 May 2011 - 12:28 PM

Oh, ok :)

Well, I'm looking forward for more :thumbsup:
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Posted 25 May 2011 - 12:36 PM

:D Glad you are readig it. At least someone is. :D
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Posted 25 May 2011 - 12:50 PM

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