~*Emerging Compassions*~
#181
Posted 09 October 2012 - 05:22 PM
#182
Posted 30 January 2013 - 06:12 AM
Ahh, SO this is your fic you mentioned, eh?
Well... where to begin... Ah! You have outdone yourself, Em! ![]()
I adore Taylor and Marie--aww she's a genius just LIKE James Isaac Neutron. ![]()
Secondly, on to continue the fic--I do not know where but seeing as you wish to imply the time travel scene maybe
continue on how Hugh and Judy, Mr. Estavez, Mrs. Folfax, Mr. Folfax, and the Wheezer household reacts. Maybe continue
on the plot of Dr. Finbar Calamituis (if that's how you say his name) and Eddie ohh maybe you should do the battle of the Neutrons!
And add a little Sheen random quirks! ![]()
...These are just suggestions, and remember that you don't get writers block. You just can't quite digest the process on where you want
the story to unfold. ![]()
Love the fic, and please consider my advice if you are suffering from "the block" ![]()
#183
Posted 30 January 2013 - 03:40 PM
Thank you so much, and yes, I will remember your suggestions for future reference! ![]()
#184
Posted 17 May 2013 - 01:02 AM
I'm FINALLY updating!! Hope ya love it!
#185
Posted 17 May 2013 - 05:05 PM
Things aren't going so well, are they? In the past, a whole tribe wants to kill Jimmy and his friends, and in the present, the cops want to arrest him... He's screwed no matter what. Although I guess his parents at least know he couldn't have robbed the jewelry store, if he was stuck in the past...
#186
Posted 17 May 2013 - 06:57 PM
Just like anyone else, he can only focus on one problem at a time... Like fanfiction has taught us before, things tend to get worse before they can get better again. ![]()
#187
Posted 03 June 2013 - 09:57 PM
Emerging Compassions
Chapter 43: New Friend Despite Chaos
(Libby's POV)
Sensing a threat soon to be coming our way from the nearby village, I shook Jimmy's shoulder and urged, "Neutron, you're gonna have to cut that short, cuz Anya just went back to her village for reinforcements! ! She thinks we're 'the evil ones'!"
He looked over at me with fear in his eyes and agreed, "I had a feeling something like this would happen!" Then he turned to Goddard's screen again to face his parents and told them nervously, "Mom, Dad, I have to cut this short. Angry villagers are gonna be after us any moment now!"
"Be careful, sweetie! !" Mrs. Neutron warned, then Goddard cut the signal, causing the beam and wormhole above it to disappear without a trace and him returning to his wolf-like appearance.
Then Carl peeked over the bushes again and exclaimed, pointing, "Hey, it looks like Anya's coming back! And there's a lot of villagers behind her! !"
The rest of us looked where he was pointing and saw what he meant; our little group had to scram, and FAST! ! !
Then I looked at Anya leading the approaching mob and saw her stumble a bit, then trip over a medium-sized rock and slide face-down into a larger one, the impact knocking her out as the others trampled over her. I cringed as I saw it happen, telling myself, "Ooo, that's gotta hurt..."
Then I quickly suggested, "Quick, into these bushes! They won't see us that way! !"
They didn't give it a second thought as we all scrambled inside them, there being plenty of room for all of us, including Goddard.
Once the villagers reached us, one stopped and pointed out, "Hey, no one's here!"
"Well, keep looking! ! The evil ones have to be here somewhere!" another demanded to the first, and they took off running again into the distance.
As we emerged from the bushes once we knew it was safe, Jimmy breathed gratefully, "Now that was a close one!"
"I couldn't agree more," Cindy heartfully agreed, holding Marie close to her.
"Yeah," I concurred, my glance returning to Anya every minute or so, then I informed them, "Shouldn't we go see if Anya's okay?"
"Are you nuts?! She's the one who turned her whole tribe against us!" Sheen persisted.
"Yeah, but then she tripped, skidded face-first on the ground, and slammed her head into a large rock! See what I mean?!" I snapped, pointing at her, who was still knocked unconscious.
He turned to see where I was pointing and agreed with a nod, "Yeah, you're right. That looks pretty harsh! !"
"I hope she's okay...," Carl put in, clearly concerned about her well-being.
"Let's go make sure of that," Cindy strongly suggested, heading to where Anya was laying on the ground, motioning for us to follow.
I followed close behind her, then the rest of them followed suit a few moments later. I stooped down to her level to get a closer look, then noticed her facial muscles begin to twitch a bit. "Hey, she's wakin' up!" I observed, immediately rising to my feet again.
She groaned a bit, rubbed her head, and sat up, the rest of us staring down at her. "Anya, are you feeling alright? ?" Jimmy wanted to know.
"Ow, my head...," she moaned, rubbing her head some, then looked up and told us, "I don't know any Anya. My name's Erika Carthos, and I'm from Athens, Greece. What the hell am I doing in the Neolithic Era?! And why am I dressed like this?! !"
"You don't remember?! I thought you were- Oh...," Cindy gasped, appalled at her apparent memory loss.
"If you're from Greece, and this time period is new to you, then you must've experienced some type of amnesia up until now. That knock on your head must've kicked you out of it," Jimmy concluded, a thoughtful look in his eyes.
"Knock on my head? Is that why it's hurting so much?" Erika wanted to know, rubbing her forehead as she rose to her feet.
"Yeah," Cindy added, "You apparently thought you were from this time period, and were running after us cuz we insulted your 'beliefs' somehow... A throng of native people were following you in hot pursuit, so we hid as they passed us by. That was when we saw you trip, fall, and slide into a rock, hitting your head hard."
"That explains it!" she exclaimed, then paused, thinking for a few moments, then commented, "Now that I think about it, I remember how I got here in the first place...! I was designing a universal teleportation doorway, during a freak thunderstorm which was clearly a bad idea, and it was nearly finished when lightning zapped it and sent me hurdling through a wormhole. When I exited, I landed on a large rock and lost consciousness. I don't remember what happened after that, up until now, that is..."
"So, it was amnesia you had!" I clarified with a snap of my fingers, "Someone must've found you and brought you to their tribe, cleaning you up and teaching you their ways, even giving you a new name!"
"That explains why you were running after us before you tripped and fell," Carl interjected helpfully.
"You're right! It all makes sense now!" Erika realized, "I must've befriended you while I was amnesic, then I was somehow threatened and called for backup! But now that I'm myself again, I don't know who any of you are..."
Before we could introduce ourselves, however, we heard the mob from beforehand returning. "There they are!" yelled the first tribesman as they ran towards us.
"Hey," demanded a second, "Why is Anya with them?! She's not talking like us!"
"She must be one of the evil ones! Get them! !" the first shrieked, leading the mob even closer to us.
"Let's get outta here! !" I shrieked, making a break for it with Taylor in my baby sling, the others following close behind me.
As we were running from the mob on the shoreline of the Tigris, Jimmy managed to say, "Usually I'm the one who leads the group to safety and away from danger!"
"That doesn't matter right now, Jimmy!" Cindy snapped, breathing heavily while holding Marie carefully, "We need to find somewhere to take cover from all these tribesmen!"
Just then, Marie suddenly pointed to our right at an area a few hundred feet away from us, pointing out, "There! Cave good!" We stopped for a moment and looked to our right, and just as Marie said, there was a vacant cave available for us to take cover in.
Immediately afterwords, we heard the tribesmen rapidly approaching us, so Cindy urged frantically, "Quick! Everyone, get in there! !" We didn't waste one single moment as we scrambled into the cave, then hid behind some large boulders. At that moment, the tribesmen tore past us, completely unaware that they'd just passed us by. I noticed that Jimmy had used a hologram on his watch to disguise the cave's entrance as completely empty.
"Phew! Nice going with the hologram-thingy, Jimmy!" Sheen breathed with a sigh of relief.
"Thanks, Sheen, but we're not safe yet... Those tribesmen are bound to return the way they came and hopefully head back to their tribe. Until then, we need to stay put where we are," Jimmy cautioned us, placing the hologram-projecting portion of his watch on top of the boulder for our safety. We could see through it from our side, but anyone outside it couldn't, kind of a one-way-mirror type of thing, only more advanced.
We remained crouched down with only our eyes peeking over the boulders, watching for the mob to return to their homes. Sure enough, after an angsty ten minutes had passed, they passed us by again headed in the opposite direction toward their village. Once they'd passed and we could hear them no longer, we finally emerged from our hiding spots and Jimmy deactivated his cloaking device, putting it back in his watch.
I wasn't too sure if Erika, if that was her real name, was telling the truth, so I walked up to her and asked, "Okay, why are you REALLY here, girl?"
"I told you, lightning struck my teleportation doorway, I was sucked through the wormhole it caused, and exited it violently, knocking my head on a rock when I landed! That gave me amnesia, and we figured out that the tribe adopted me, my alternate personality met you, and you somehow angered me and I had sent the entire mob after you! Tripping and knocking my head on another rock snapped me out of my amnesia, as you may recall, and we retreated here to hide from the mob. But, I've still yet to know your names or anything else!" Erika persisted, who seemed to be quite annoyed that I didn't believe she was who she was.
"Okay, okay! !" Cindy gave in after apparently overhearing all that was said, "We believe you! Now, for our introductions... I'm Cindy, and this is Jimmy, and this little one I'm holding is our daughter Marie. And these are our friends Sheen and Libby, and their daughter Taylor in the baby sling, and there's Carl, who's petting Goddard, Jimmy's robotic dog."
"He actually looks like a real one, to me, like a miniature wolf," our new friend commented, looking a bit confused.
"Goddard, if you will? ?" Jimmy instructed his dog, and he transformed back into his regular self again.
"Yay! Neat trick, doggy!" Marie squealed, giggling and clapping her tiny hands.
"Whoa! I didn't know your daughter could talk, Jimmy! How old exactly IS she?! She looks really young!" Erika gasped in awe.
"Same age as Taylor, three months old, except her mind is much more advanced than Taylor's," he gladly explained to her.
Cindy giggled and added, "Just like her to take after her daddy! I'm absolutely positive that we've got a little genius here!"
"I'm very impressed!" she complimented the young parents, then she seemed to go deep into thought for a few moments. A few moments later, her mind seemed to click as she exclaimed, "That would explain Goddard! He's obviously been created by a brilliant scientist, who's among us as we speak and would be none other than Jimmy! Exactly how smart are you?!"
He just smirked with a light chuckle as he informed Erika, "My IQ happens to be 212, to be exact. I've earned a great respect among the citizens in my hometown regarding my intelligence!"
I just rolled my eyes sarcastically and thought to myself, Sheesh! What a braggart! !
"You should see his lab!" Carl boasted excitedly, "It's got all KINDS of neat stuff in it!"
"Including the machine that accidentally warped us here," I remarked with a smirk.
"Oh, yeah, I forgot to mention that!" Jimmy put in, "My daughter is just learning to walk, and with the help of a stool, climbed up and pressed lots of buttons and levers on the machine, accidentally warping us here... We've yet to find a way to get back to our own time, though..."
"Hey," I interjected, "Since we're hidin' in this cave, we might as well remove these disguise-wristbands, or whatever they're called."
"Good idea, Libby!" Cindy complimented me, slipping hers and Marie's off and instantly returning to their modern outfits and hairstyles.
"Excellent point," Jimmy agreed, and slipped his off, as well. The rest of us soon followed suit and slipped ours off. "Slip them into my hypercube, in case we need them again," he told us as he brought out his hypercube and passed it around to each of us. When removed, the wristbands took on a metallic, futuristic appearance, which was quite clever in my opinion.
No sooner had we put them in it and had he put away his hypercube when an alert on his watch resounded. He activated it, and Goddard quickly transformed back into his tachyon-transmission mode, an image of his parents soon appearing on his screen. As I looked at them, I could tell they were very worried about their son, because their glances kept returning to the television in the background.
"Okay, Mom, Dad... What exactly is going on in our time?!" Jimmy questioned them, clearly more than just concerned; he was worried.
"We're out of pie!" Hugh started to say, but Judy stopped him and snapped, "Hugh, this isn't the time to be worried about that!"
Jimmy just rolled his eyes sarcastically and persisted, "So, what's the REAL problem?!"
Judy temporarily stepped away from the receiving end of the camera, then the view on their end was turned to face their television. She stepped back into view and pointed out, pointing at the television, "See for yourself, Jimmy! !"
It looked as if a news report was being televised live in our time, and we soon found out what exactly was being reported: a crime had been committed in an attempt to frame one of us! But which of us was the one being framed?! That was what we found out next...
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