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#1 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 18 June 2009 - 01:29 PM

After getting all those positive responses in that poll I made, I decided to go ahead and post the first chapter! This is a fic where Jimmy doesn't save Cindy, but it's the other way around: Cindy saving Jimmy!! Full of romance, laughs, and adventure, this fic is SURE to be a BLAST!!!


Emerging Compassions

Chapter 1: The School Project
(Jimmy's POV)


Looking back on that eventful adventure, it's hard to believe all our experiences were true. Yet, whenever I think about it, my entire being shudders out of fear of what might've been. I probably wouldn't be here if it wasn't for Cindy, saving my life & all... But I'm getting ahead of myself.

It all started one day in Lindbergh Elementary, as any normal day would. My classmates & I had just taken our seats when Miss Fowl announced, “BRRAAWK Class, the time has come for our monthly sciiiieence project!”

Some of the kids groaned when they heard her say that, but not me! I joyfully exclaimed, “Yes!! Another opportunity to conquer Vortex in my best academic subject!!!”

“Dream ON, Brain Boy, cuz MY project is SO gonna dominate yours!” Cindy challenged me.

“Not so FAAAAST, children! You're being assigned into groups in this particular project, according to your own preference, of course!” Miss Fowl informed us.

That's fine, I thought to myself, getting a disgusted look on my face, As long as I don't have to share a group with VORTEX!! With that, I leaned over to her & stuck my tongue out at her. She just stuck hers out back at me.

Then I looked over at my 2 best friends & told them, “Carl, Sheen, you're both going to be in my group!”

“Okay,” Sheen agreed, “But NOT without my Libby-licious!”

“Do WHAT??” I exclaimed, hardly believing my ears, rubbing them to make sure I heard right.

“You heard right, Jimmy! I want Libby to be in our group!!” he informed me.

“Okay, Sheen,” she agreed, “I'll be in yo' group, but ONLY if Cindy's in it, too!”

CINDY??!! Okay, my world as I knew it had officially gone crazy!! Sheen just had to include Libby in our group, which she'd only do if Cindy was in it! Had everyone gone INSANE???!!

“Fine, whatever,” I muttered under my breath. Then I firmly added, “On ONE condition!”

“What's the condition, Nerd-tron??” Cindy wanted to know.

“You let ME be in charge of our project! Otherwise, you'll have to find someone else's group to join!” I dryly informed her, my arms folded.

She gave it a few moments of thought, then snapped, “Okay, FINE!!”

Then I had a thought. Wait a minute! I thought to myself, What EXACTLY is this project supposed to be about??!

Then I raised my hand & asked, “Miss Fowl, what type of science project is this?? Astronomy? Physics?? Geology??”

“Aaaactuallyyy, it's none of those. This project is based on bioooology! Each group is to find a new or recently discovered marine species from the oceans & write a documentary on it based on what characteristics it has & how it survives its environment on a daily basis BRRAWWK,” she informed us. Then she asked, “Has everyone formed their groups?”

Each of us voiced a positive response in unison.

“Good,” Miss Fowl told us.

Then the bell that signaled the end of the day rang.

As we filed out of the classroom, she called after us, “Remember, children, this report is due 2 weeks from today BRRRAAWWK!! And if the life form is from another planet, you get extra credit!”

We acknowledged her with generally positive responses as we made our way to our lockers.

I was currently in the process of packing up my bookbag (AKA: my jetpack) when Cindy showed up & started barking at me about how she wanted to be in charge of the project by saying, “Nerd-tron, I demand to know WHY you took charge of this project instead of me!! I'm SO totally capable of being in charge, as well!!! There should be a perfectly good explanation as to why this is, so SPILL it!!!!!!”

“As a matter of fact, there IS a good explanation for that!” I sharply told her, “When I DO let you be in charge of our projects, which is RARE, you usually don't know what you're doing, often because my inventions are involved & you usually don't know HOW to use them! Then you usually cause them to malfunction, forcing me to fix them before our lives, & sometimes the entire earth, as well, are in jeopardy!! And you've NO idea how irritating that can get!”

We continued to walk out the school as she snapped, “Not to mention how irritating you putting us & the world in PERIL frequently!! That's what irritates ME the most!!!!”

“Huh, well, TOUGH LUCK, Vortex!!!!” I barked at her, “Because my inventions usually malfunction before they actually WORK properly!!”

“Okay, this fightin' has GOTTA stop!!” came a familiar voice.

Surprised, we both turned around to face Libby, who'd just then walked up to us with her hands on her hips.

Then she added to Sheen who also came up to her, “Sheen, PLEASE tell those 2 to stop arguin'!!!”

“Just cut it OUT already!!!!!!” he shrieked.

Sheen's shouting attracted Carl's attention. Then he said, “Stop fighting, already!! It's gonna give me a hernia!!! Next, my RA-...!”

“Carl, don't EVEN bring that UP!!!” Sheen snapped.

“Sorry,” Carl admitted.

“Seriously,” Sheen asked, “What's got you 2 in a squabble?!”

“All I did,” I explained, “was tell her that I'D take control of our project, & she began barking at me about how she was equally capable of taking charge! Then I explained to her how, WHEN she did take charge, she'd tamper with my inventions & I'd have to fix them before they wreaked havoc on the town!! And forgive ME for them malfunctioning before they actually WORK!!!!”

“Oh, & I'M responsible for them malfunctioning!! Real smooth, Nerd-bomb!!!” she hissed at me.

“Okay, both o' y'all, just SHUT UP!!!!!!” Libby shrieked.

THAT got our attention!

“Sorry, Libby,” I muttered, then whispered, “You know, SHE started it!”

“I heard that, FrankenHead! And I did NOT!!” Cindy barked.

“Did TOO!” I shot back.

“Did NOT!!!”

“Did TOO!!”

“Okay, that's ENOUGH!!!!” Libby snapped, & grabbed both of us by our wrists & dragged us to the Candy Bar, where she sat us in a booth & laid a sheet of paper on the table. Then she handed both of us pens.

I soon found out that this was a treaty of some sort.

“Okay, you 2, sign at the bottom of the-,” she began, but was cut short by a large shock wave that shook the entire restaurant.

“Okay, now what was THAT??!!” Libby gasped, clearly freaked out.

At that moment, the shock wave that had shaken the Candy Bar threw Carl & Sheen up against the window, then they slid down onto the ground.

I lept up & ran outside to check on them. Then I shook Carl's & Sheen's shoulders & anxiously asked, “Carl, are you okay??! Sheen, can you hear me?!!”

Sheen sat up, rubbed his head, & moaned, “Oh, my head... What happened, Jimmy?”

“Ow! My scapula!!” Carl exclaimed after sitting upright, rubbing his back.

“A shock wave from an unknown source sent you guys flying into the Candy Bar window, then you slid onto the ground. Are you sure you guys are okay??” I verified, helping them to their feet.

“Ouchies, I think so. Carl, you okay?” Sheen wanted to know, rubbing his head.

“My scapula still hurts, but I think I'll be fine,” he replied.

Then Cindy & Libby came out to investigate the situation.

“You know, Neutron, Libs & I would personally like to know what caused that enormous shock wave that shook the Candy Bar!” Cindy informed me, her hands on her hips.

“Yeah!” Libby agreed, “Ya notice anything strange, King Cranium??”

I observed my surroundings & told them warily, “Not yet, but you never know who could be hiding just out of sight, just waiting to attack us with yet another shock wave or sonic boom!!!”

As if on cue, a strange figure came into view just near the sun, so we had to shade our eyes in order to see it, but it grew bigger with every second. I had a feeling that this strange shape was an alien ship of some sort, so I paged Goddard on my watch.

Almost immediately, he came bounding up to me, wiggling his body & barking a little bit.

“Goddard, Bino-Scope Mode!” I told him, & his eyes turned into binocular-looking things & a round screen showed what was fast approaching us. As I continued to observe it, I soon saw the pilot of the craft. It was the JunkMan!!!

“Oh, no!!” Carl shrieked, pointing at Goddard's screen, “It's the JunkMan!!!!”

“C'mon, guys!” I instructed, making a break for it, “Follow me!! I have an escape plan!”

We ran from the Candy Bar parking lot to my place, where I luckily found my rocket sitting right outside my lab.

“Quick! To the rocket!!” Sheen urged.

For once, Cindy & Libby didn't complain about his crazy antics. They were obviously too concerned about escaping the JunkMan, as were the rest of us! We jumped into it, I manned the controls & started it up, & quickly sent it flying into outer space, but not without placing tiny cameras in strategic locations so I could keep an eye on the JunkMan.

About 10 minutes later, I landed my rocket in the Moon's Sea of Tranquility.

We had just gotten out of it & started to look around when I heard, “Jimmy! Oh, Jimmy!!!!

Oh, NO! I thought begrudgingly, It's Brobot!! Why, that little annoyance!!!

Then he came out of hiding & saw us, then he hurried over to us & said, “Why, hey there, big brother! Whatcha doin' here??”

“For your information, Brobot, I'm here with my friends to hide from the JunkMan, but, at the same time, keep an eye out for him by using tiny cameras placed at strategic locations on Earth to watch his actions, the videos of which I can access through Goddard,” I explained, trying to remain calm.

“Oh! Can I help?” he asked.

“Honestly, Brobot, I'm not sure if there's anything you can actually DO to help,” I informed him.

“Oh,” he said, sounding a little sad.

Then I told Goddard, “Goddard, Multi-Camera Mode!”

He barked & displayed a large, rectangular screen that showed what all my cameras on Earth were seeing.

Cindy walked up to me & asked, “Neutron, what is the JunkMan up to THIS time??!”

“It looks like he's trying to find me, but is having no success, because I'm on the Moon!” I observed, laughing at his futile efforts.

Then Goddard's screen showed him returning to his ship & blasting off, headed in our direction!

“Gas planet, he's headed straight for us!!” I gasped, then exclaimed, “Guys, get OVER here!!!”

Libby, Sheen, & Carl hurried over & looked at the screen, gasping at what they beheld before them.

“Darn you JunkMan!! Why must you torture us so??!” Sheen shrieked into space, his arms reaching towards the stars.

“Enough of your yelling, Ultra-DORK!! We gotta get outta here!!!!” Cindy snapped at him.

With that, Goddard returned to normal & hurried with the rest of us back to my rocket. I started it up & began to blast us off of the Moon.

But we didn't get far because the JunkMan beamed us up into his ship using a tractor beam.

“What do we do??!!” Carl yelled as we were beamed up.

“Hang on!!!” I hollered as we went up & into the ship.

“NOW what are we gonna do?!” Libby sighed as the JunkMan approached us once we were inside his ship.



Hope you enjoyed the first chapter! Trust me, it only gets better as it goes on!! :thumbsup:
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Posted 18 June 2009 - 02:18 PM

Dude, awesome beginning!

This is an excellent intro to a fanfic:

Looking back on that eventful adventure, it's hard to believe all our experiences were true. Yet, whenever I think about it, my entire being shudders out of fear of what might've been. I probably wouldn't be here if it wasn't for Cindy, saving my life & all... But I'm getting ahead of myself.


Makes me excited to read more!


The whole chapter was really good, and the Junkman surprised me! I wonder what he's got up his sleeve...

And LOL, Brobot. Pigquet will be happy to see him.

Great job!
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Posted 18 June 2009 - 02:22 PM

Thx, Katie!! *hugs* :hug: It'll keep getting better in each chapter, don't you worry! And trust me, there's some downright HILARIOUS parts in this fic so far, as well!! XDDDD
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Posted 19 June 2009 - 12:45 AM

Woah!!!! That was amazing Emily! I can't wait to see more
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Posted 19 June 2009 - 07:28 PM

Okay, you guys have replied SO well that I'm gonna treat ya to Chapter 2!!! Enjoy!!


Emerging Compassions

Chapter 2: Brobot on Board
(Cindy's POV)


Carl apparently saw the Junkman coming near us, because he asked him, “Mr. Junkman, sir, you're not gonna hurt us or anything, are you?!”

The Junkman just chuckled to himself & replied deviously, “Of course not, little jelly-bags! The hurting will come MUCH, much later!!”

Jimmy, clearly annoyed with him, snapped, “HOW many times do I have to tell you??!! We're NOT jelly-bags, we're HUMAN BEINGS, for the love of Albert Einstein!!!”

“Yeah, except for Goddard,” Sheen pointed out, “Cuz he's a robot.”

“Just like ME!!!” came a familiar voice.

“DARN it!!!” I heard Jimmy mutter under his breath, “I thought we ditched him on the Moon!”

“Do I hear Brobot's voice, Neutron?” I asked him suspiciously.

“Yeah, you do, Vortex,” he told me. I could sense a great deal of irritation in his voice.

“But, where is it coming from??!” I demanded, frustrated.

As if on cue, Brobot popped his head up out of the seat behind the pilot's seat in Jimmy's rocket & said happily, “Here I am, big brother!”

Jimmy groaned & walked over to him, then informed him, “Brobot, do you even know where we ARE?!”

“Are we in a fun house?” he guessed.

“No, this is the Junkman's ship! You know, the bad guy who almost turned you & your parents into GravaDiscs??!” he said, clearly irritated with him.

Then some movement elsewhere caught my eye. I looked over & saw Roxy, the Junkman's dog, starting to romance Goddard! I covered my mouth as I tried ever so hard to contain my laughter, but, eventually, my amusement got the best of me & I burst out laughing at those 2! I nudged Libby, who was standing near me, & managed to say between outbursts, “Libs, check it out!!!! Roxy & Goddard are ROMANCING!!!!! How hilarious is THAT???!!”

She looked over at them & burst into a huge giggle fit, just as I was.

Sheen walked over to us & asked, “What's so funny, girls?”

She & I were laughing so hysterically that all we could do to respond was point at Roxy & Goddard, still giggling.

He took one look at them & burst out giggling like crazy!!!

Carl walked over to us & questioned, “What's so funny, guys?”

“Take a look at Goddard & Roxy!!!” Sheen managed to gasp between bouts of giggling.

Carl looked at them & he, too, burst out laughing hysterically.

Attracted by all our laughter & giggling, Jimmy walked up to us & asked, “What's got you guys so worked up?!”

My laughter had died down enough to tell him, “Take a look at your & the Junkman's DOG, Neutron!!”

But, when HE took a look at them, his reaction was quite different. “Goddard, get over here, NOW!!!” he snapped.

The Junkman saw this, too, & grabbed Roxy's collar, dragging her away from Goddard. I couldn't help but notice that she was whining a little bit as she was drug away.

As for Goddard, he just obediently but slowly slunk over to his master, but not without casting a wistful glance back at Roxy. It was almost as if he was missing her already.

“Goddard, you know better than to associate with beings outside our planet!” Jimmy scolded him. Then he turned to the Junkman & wanted to know, a suspicious look in his eyes, “What exactly IS your devious plan, Junkman?!!”



There it is! I hope you guys enjoyed it!!! The Junkman's plot will be revealed in Chapter 3, in case you were wondering... ;)
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Posted 21 June 2009 - 09:29 PM

Let's hear it for Chapter 3!!!!! WOOOOOOO!!!!!


Emerging Compassions

Chapter 3: The Junkman's Devious Plot
(Libby's POV)


“Well, puny earthlings, since you asked, I'm gonna take you to the hottest star in the universe, carbonize you to a crisp, chop you into chips, & deliver you to the Needleheads as their annual treats!!” the Junkman declared.

Jimmy gasped angrily and protested, “You WOULDN'T!!!”

“I would!!” the Junkman retorted deviously.

“Junkman!!! Why must you turn us into chips?!! Think I could have some ranch dressing to go with me??” Sheen started to growl, then asked inquisitively.

Cindy just rolled her eyes and commented, “Way to focus on the REAL problem, cheapskate!!”

Stupidly thinking this was a compliment, he thanked her, “Thanks, Cindy!”

“Whatever...,” she muttered, not really listening.

The Junkman just growled & ordered to some robots, “Take these good-for-nothings to the dungeon, pronto!!”

With that, those robots grabbed a hold of us, Brobot, & Goddard & dragged us mercilessly to a dungeon. They threw us inside, slid the door shut loudly, and locked it.

“Great. What do we do NOW, Nerd-tron?!” Cindy snapped, her hands on her hips.

“My big brother Jimmy can do anything, cuz he's a GENIUS!!” Brobot boasted proudly.

“We know, we know!” we all except Jimmy complained.

“So, what's the plan, Neutron?” I asked him nervously.

“Uh, guys?” Carl pointed out, looking out the round dungeon window & pointing, “Did we just pass Jupiter, cuz we're sure going pretty fast out of our Solar System!!”

We all joined him and gasped, seeing that he was right! The Junkman WAS taking us away! But which star was the hottest in the universe was the fact that was puzzling me. I had no idea which one was, cuz there's billions upon billions of stars in the entire universe!

So I turned yet again to Jimmy & wanted to know, “Neutron, which star in the universe is the hottest??! And HOW are we gonna escape the Junkman without him noticing?!!”

“Luckily, I brought my hypercube with me, equipped with anything we'll need to escape & survive for a time!” he announced, pulling it out of his pocket.

“So, how are we gonna escape, Freak-tron?” Cindy snapped rudely.

I just rolled my eyes & shook my head in disgust, thinking, Cindy, WHEN will ya learn to stop tormenting Neutron?! And for Pete's sake, WHY won't ya admit ya like him??! That's drivin' me NUTS!!

She apparently noticed my disgusted look & asked, “What's on your mind, Libs? Why the disgusted look?”

I took her aside & questioned suspiciously, slapping my forehead in disgust, “Girl, why won'tcha admit yo' PASSION fo' him up front to him?! Ya act this way EVERY time you're around him! Girl, this is drivin' me berserk!!!”

“It's just that- uh, well, heh-heh... Um, I'm just not, um, comfortable with that yet, Libby! Why must ya be so PRYING about that issue?! Besides, I don't think he'd like me back if I admitted it to him...,” she told me, looking down at her shoes.

“You don't know that, Cin!” I replied fervently, “All ya gotta do is go up to him, look him STRAIGHT in the eye, & admit it! How hard can it BE, girl?!”

“Libby, you don't even know how HARD it is to be me! Having a mother that always expects perfection out of me is VERY hard on me! She always wants me to win! THAT'S why I don't just go up to him & admit it, cuz I'm afraid of failure & him not liking me back!! Ya see???” she explained to me.

Unfortunately, Sheen had heard every word out of Cindy's mouth just then, cuz he asked her, “So, when are ya gonna admit ya like Jimmy?!”

Cindy grabbed him by the front of his shirt collar & hissed, “Never, Ultra-FREAK!! HOW many times do I have to tell you this??!”

“One hundred thousand times oughtta do it,” I heard Carl mutter.

She marched right up to him & snarled, “WHAT did you just say, Llama-Boy?!!”

He tried to push her away as he said, “Cindy, stop it!! You're giving me a migrane!!!”

Jimmy saw this & snapped at her, “Vortex, you better watch your mouth, cuz I'm tempted to leave you behind with the Junkman as the rest of us escape!!!”

That ticked me OFF!! I leaned over to him & sneered, “Neutron, there is NO way you're leavin' Cindy behind! I am not about to let that happen!!”

Sheen piped up & reminded him, “Are we gonna escape or what??!!”

“Duh! C'mere, guys!” Jimmy ordered, motioning us to him.

We huddled up & Brobot asked, “What's your plan, big brother??”

“This!” he exclaimed quietly, & shrunk us down to the size of a grain of sand with his shrink ray he'd brought with him. I saw that he'd also shrunk his rocket. Then he whispered additionally, leading us out between the bars of the cell, “Now, c'mon! We're too small for the heat & motion sensors to detect us, so we should be able to escape fairly easily. Now, get in my rocket, quickly!!”

We did as he asked, then he managed to find an opening small enough for us to slip through & leave the Junkman's ship behind. Then he returned us back to normal size again.

Unfortunately, as we returned to Earth in the rocket, it was unknowingly out of fuel, so it plummeted down towards the ocean, but landed nose-first into an island's beach. This island's beach looked familiar, but I couldn't put my finger on how it was as I looked around with the rest of them. Then, it hit me! This was the same island that Cindy & Jimmy were once stranded on!!! This is NOT lookin' good at all... I thought begrudgingly to myself.



There it is! Hope ya like it!!! ^_^
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Posted 22 June 2009 - 05:21 AM

I really love this story! I can't wait til the next chapter
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Posted 22 June 2009 - 07:14 PM

Poor Goddard and Roxy. *sniffle*

But I'm glad they escaped! Even if they did just end up in even more trouble, haha.

“Junkman!!! Why must you turn us into chips?!! Think I could have some ranch dressing to go with me??”


This line cracked me up.


Great job! Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted 22 June 2009 - 08:40 PM

*giggles* I'm glad you both liked it! Trust me, the chapters get even more exciting as they go on! In fact, I think I'll just post Chapter 4 right now! Yay!!!!


Emerging Compassions

Chapter 4: Stranded... Again!
(Sheen's POV)


“UGH!!! I don't BELIEVE it! Stranded again!!” Cindy groaned, “Only with all 5 of us on the island together!”

“Why??” I asked her, bumping Libby flirtatiously with my hip, “What's so bad about it? I kinda like it, in fact!!”

She just glared at me and muttered, “Cut it out, Sheen...”

“Sorry,” I admitted. Then I thought, Hey, we're on a beach!! Let's have some fun here!!! “I know what! Let's bury eachother in the sand!” I exclaimed.

But Jimmy didn't think so, cuz he said sharply, “Sheen, focus!! We have to find a way off this island!”

“Oh, yeah...,” I realized aloud.

“So, until we find a way off the island, shall we start exploring fo' food now??” Libby wanted to know.

“Good idea, Libby!” Jimmy complimented her, then instructed us, “Everyone, split up! Guys and girls, now go!”

With that, both our groups headed in opposite directions. We hadn't gone far when I noticed something written on a palm tree trunk. That interested me, so I ran over to get a closer look. “J and C forever,” I read aloud, then I called Jimmy over, saying, “Hey, Jimmy! Get a load of this!!”

“What is it, Sheen? Have you found any food yet?” he asked, walking over to me.

“No, but look at what's written on this tree!!” I exclaimed, barely able to contain my excitement, pointing at it.

He stared at it with a serious look for a few moments, then his eyes lit up and his cheeks turned bright red. “Hey!” he realized aloud, “MY name starts with a 'J'!! Who exactly wrote this?! And WHOSE name starts with a 'C'?!!”

“Well,” I said helpfully, hopefully, “The only people who were here last were you and Cindy, and you didn't write it, did ya?”

“NO, of course not, Sheen!! So, if I didn't, that means that...,” he said hesitantly.

“That...?” I questioned him, Carl soon joining me.

“...That SHE wrote it!!!” Jimmy exclaimed with a stupefied look, staring at the written message and pointing at it, his mouth agape.

“Dude, you really DO have issues with her,” I told him, wide-eyed.

“Yeah!” Carl agreed, “What have you GOT against Cindy, Jimmy?!”

“What have I got- What have I got against HER?!! She's snotty; she's bratty; she's rude; she's-!” he began, but was interrupted by a familiar voice.

“I'm what, Spew-tron?!?” Cindy demanded, walking up to us with Libby at her side.

“Never mind that! What did you girls find to eat?” Jimmy asked the 2 girls.

“Actually, Neutron, we haven't started lookin' yet...,” Libby informed him.

“Yeah, so, um, WHAT exactly did you say I was, Brain Boy?” Cindy suspiciously questioned him.

“Um, nothing! I said nothing!” he stammered, blushing hard.

But I don't think Cindy believed him, cuz she started marching towards him, making him back up into a tree and snapped, “Listen, bub, I know you said something, cuz I heard ya loud and CLEAR! You think I'm snotty, bratty, rude, and some other stuff!!! You better WATCH it, cuz I know karate, ju-jitsu, tai-chi, tai-kwon-do, and judo and I ain't afraid to use 'em!! Do you HEAR me, Nerd-tron?!!”

“Y-Yes, I hear ya loud and CLEAR, Vortex!” Jimmy stammered nervously.

“Good!” she told him curtly, backing up so he could step away from the tree he was leaning against. Then, in a gentler tone, she added, “Let's go find some roughage, shall we?”

“Good idea, girl!” Libby said approvingly, walking with the rest of us into the jungle on the island.

“Just remember the wildlife here is quite dangerous! I had to rescue Cindy several times while she and I were stranded from it! Keep an eye out for pythons and giant spiders, got it, guys??” Jimmy warned them.

“Got it!” we told him in unison. Little did we know how wrong we were...



'Kay! There it is! Enjoy!
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Posted 22 June 2009 - 11:15 PM

Love it! I guess Jimmy will think twice before he says things like that about Cindy
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Posted 23 June 2009 - 04:16 PM

You BETCHA he will!!! XD Here's Chapter 5!!


Emerging Compassions

Chapter 5: A Trap Door
(Carl's POV)


“Okay, Neutron, how are we gonna know what's edible and what's not?!” Cindy snapped, arms folded as we ventured ever deeper into the island jungle.

Jimmy simply pulled something out of his hypercube and responded calmly, “With this! When I aim it at something, it'll display on its screen whether what it's aimed at is edible or not! It can also show who likes what! In order to do that, I'll need a DNA sample from each of you. I've already added mine to the database, so I just need the rest of you to cooperate with me and give me a strand of your hair, please.”

Libby, Sheen, and I readily gave him a sample for him to put into that gadget of his, but Cindy wasn't so willing, it seemed, because when he leaned over to her to get a sample, she slapped his hand away and ran a few feet away from him.

“Nerd-tron, you are NOT touching a hair on my head! Just get away from me with that thing, Freak Brain!!” she protested.

“Vortex, this is the only way you'll find food easily! I just need your DNA in order to do so!! Fine. If you want to do it the hard way, then be my guest!” he told her matter-of-factly. With that, he led us away further into the jungle, Cindy lagging behind a short distance away, dragging her feet ever so slowly.

Suddenly, we heard a snap of a twig being broken behind us, as if it was stepped on, then the sound of a leaf covering giving way and Cindy screaming as she fell into a hole.

We ran over to where she fell and looked into the hole. We saw that it was made of dirt for about 20 feet, then turned into a metal tunnel that led to who knows where. We could still hear her screaming, but it got fainter as she got deeper into the tunnel until we couldn't hear her anymore. Jimmy seemed the most concerned, because he stepped all the way to the edge and stooped over to get a better look into it. He was apparently too close to the edge, because his foot slipped on the loose vegetation on the jungle floor and fell in feet-first on his back, screaming the whole time as well. Then the ground crumbled beneath the rest of us and Libby, Sheen, Goddard, and I fell in, too, screaming at the top of our lungs the whole time.

We slid down the tunnel for about 20 seconds, then exited it and landed on a heavily-padded floor, which was covered in pillows. Cindy landed first, soon to be followed by Jimmy, who landed right on top of her, which I'm pretty sure she hated with a passion. Then the rest of us fell out and landed in random places all over the pillow-covered floor, thankful we weren't hurt or anything by our fall. But, there was one problem: we couldn't see anything. It was darker than a dark cellar at midnight with someone putting black wool gloves over one's eyes and their eyes being shut. But we did hear a deep voice calling out to us from who knows where, saying, “Agent Neutron, I've been expecting you...”

“I know that voice!” I heard Jimmy exclaim. Then, right behind us, a howling noise followed by 2 lit-up eyes came up behind us. It was Goddard! He landed from out of the tunnel right next to his master and licked him 'till he pushed him down gently. Then he added, “I'd recognize that voice anywhere! It's...!”



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Posted 23 June 2009 - 07:49 PM

*claps* This is going great, Emily! So exciting!

...Why am I thinking, "BTSO"?
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Posted 23 June 2009 - 08:10 PM

You might be... You just have to keep reading to find out what happens next! This next chapter's gonna be HILARIOUS!!!!


Emerging Compassions

Chapter 6: A Minor, Embarrassing Setback...
(Jimmy's POV)


“...Commander Baker!!” I exclaimed, hardly believing my ears.

“Yes, Agent Neutron, it is I...,” came his calm reply, and with that, he flicked the lights on.

I saw that we were in a large room with, as I'd previously suspected, the floor covered in a blanket of pillows to cushion our fall.

“Where are we?” Carl wanted to know.

“You and your friends are in the Pacific headquarters of BTSO,” Commander Baker informed us.

“Oh, well, that makes logical sense...,” I muttered, rising to my feet. But I couldn't help but notice that Baker was trying extremely hard to keep a straight face while staring at me. It sounded like he was trying hard not to laugh, so it came out as a snorting noise while he covered his mouth. “Commander Baker, may I ask what is making you sound like that?” I politely asked him.

He just kept covering his mouth as he rushed to a far off location, probably to try not to embarrass one of us by laughing at him/her.

I watched him run off in confusion, pondering aloud and shrugging my shoulders, “What's gotten into him?!”

Then I noticed that my companions were trying not to laugh, as well, as they stared at me with wide eyes and their mouths covered.

Finally, Cindy couldn't seem to hold it in any longer, and burst out laughing while pointing at me for some reason. After she calmed down enough, she roared, “Neutron, isn't it OBVIOUS why he was trying not to laugh??! Just LOOK at yourself!!!”

I looked down and saw that, aside from my t-shirt, socks, and shoes, I wasn't wearing anything! “YAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!” I shrieked, picking up one of the pillows and covering myself up with it, extremely embarrassed. I plopped down onto the other pillows and covered myself up as best I could, feeling my face turn bright red out of embarrassment.

Then my embarrassment turned to fury as I glared at Cindy and snarled, “Vortex, did you have anything to do with this humiliating situation I'm in?!!”

“WHY would I do something like this, Freak-tron??!” she protested, pointing upward, “Something clearly happened as you were sliding down that tunnel up there!”

Hmmm... I thought to myself, She must be right, because I don't see my garments anywhere! I do remember getting caught on something as I was sliding down, forcing me from sliding on my back to on my stomach... Then I felt a strange breeze on me the rest of the way. Oh..., NO!! I've GOTTA send Goddard back up there so I can properly cover myself up! That way, Commander Baker can focus and tell me what exactly he was expecting me for! Then I ordered Goddard, “Goddard, head back up the tunnel, find my garments in it, and bring them back to me, please!”

He barked his reply and headed back up the tunnel a fair distance. Then he returned with them in his mouth a minute or two later.

I took them from him and put them back on, a sigh of relief escaping my mouth as I felt my embarrassment leave me.

“Wow, Jimmy!” Sheen commented, “I'm surprised that it didn't happen to the rest of us!”

Getting up after I'd dressed myself, I noted, trying hard not to laugh, “I wouldn't say that, Sheen!! Or the rest of you guys!!!”



OMG!!! WHO knows what's gonna happen NEXT??!! XDDDDDDDDD Keep an eye out for the next chapter to find out!! :lol:
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#14 Zoey <3

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Posted 23 June 2009 - 08:11 PM

Great Job once again.
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Posted 23 June 2009 - 08:12 PM

Pfffffffffft, isn't it HILARIOUS????!!! ROFLMAO!!!!!!!
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Posted 23 June 2009 - 08:14 PM

Yes it is! I think this is my favorite story of yours so far
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Posted 23 June 2009 - 08:26 PM

Yesh, I think it's MINE, too! XDDDDDDD Poor Jimmy! How embarrassing for him!!
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Posted 23 June 2009 - 08:27 PM

Haha Yeah I know. Poor Jimmy
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Posted 23 June 2009 - 08:28 PM

(btw, why don't you sign onto AIM?)
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Posted 23 June 2009 - 08:42 PM

^_^ I'll sign in right now
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