Posted 28 May 2009 - 04:26 AM
WOW!!!
Thanks so much guys. I REALLY didn't expect this much positive reception, especally Yoo Yee's character. I really thought I butchered his character, but you guys made me think otherwise. Although I think some can do his character better. -_-
Really, thanks so much for your positive feedback. ^_^
Now.. what you've all been waiting for...
Part 1 - The Capture
The bright, shining hot sun hangs over the City of Retroville as summer fully blooms. The kids are out of school and enjoying the free summer air and the freedom from mind-numbing dreaded school work, likewise their teachers who raced out of school just as fast to get away from their little, misbehaving, lazy school kids.
And no one seemed to enjoy his summer more than the Chosen One himself.
"Guys, guys, guys!"
A manic preteen came running towards his two friends, Jimmy Neutron and Carl Wheezer, who stood outside Retroville Park.
"Guess what I got!"
"Let me guess," Jimmy asked, "another new Ultralord action figure?"
"Man, how can you guys-"
"Believe me Sheen," interrupted Jimmy, "I think I've seen enough Ultralord dolls to know their yours."
"HEY!," answered Sheen offended, "They're not dolls, they're one of a kind action figure collectables!"
"Well, should've known," he said, rolling his eyes.
"What about Carl's lama doll collection? You never make fun of that!"
"Hey! Stop picking on my toys," Carl defended.
"Alright Mr. 'Oh look at me, I'm Carl and I play with lamas dolls, yadda, yadda, yadda!'"
"Don't even!"
The two pointlessly argued until Libby comes walking by.
"Hey guys."
"Hey Libby," the three gave their salutations.
"What ya guys doin'?," asked Libby.
"Well, I was about to dropkick Carl," Sheen answered
"And I was about to slap Sheen in the face," Carl answered back
"Hey! If anyone's doin' the slappin' around here, it's me! Got it?"
"Got it," Sheen and Carl apologized.
"Uh, Libby, where's Cindy?"
"She's getting ready to leave with her Karate class to a field trip."
"Really? Where's she going?," Jimmy asked
"Some place in the mountains. Anyways I was gonna go visit her house. She leaves in two days. Maybe you guys like to come along?"
"Whatever, Libs. But..."
Sheen scooted right next to her like a filrtious fox.
"You, my dear, are coming with me."
"Sheen, I love you but can ya please stop hugging me?"
"What about you Jim? You gonna come too?," Carl asked.
"Meh, why not?," Jimmy answered, "It's not like anything bad is gonna happen."
"Does that explain that helecopter in the sky?"
Sheen was right. Above a black helicopter flew overhead the kids as ninjas then jumped down in front of them.
"Hey, it's those ninja dudes," Sheen retorted.
Suddenly an weird but evil laugh came out of nowhere.
"That laugh. I know that laugh. It's... It's..."
The boy ninja came down in front of the gang.
"Ha, ha, ha, ha! So Chosen One, we meet again!", Yoo Yee declared.
"Oh no! NINJA!!," Carl scremed in terror.
"Stand back guys," Sheen heroicaly steps foward, "This guy's getting Ultra-whipped".
"Ah-ha! I'd be knowing you'd try a stupid, silly manuver like that which is silly and full of stupidity!"
"Huh?"
"Take THIS!"
Suddenly from his hand he takes out what looked like a gold, circle pendant, which glowed an erie bright yellow.
Sheen, Carl and Libby then froze in thier tracks and became paralyzed.
"Oh no! Guys!!!," Jimmy cried.
"Goddard..."
Before Jimmy could finish his command, from out of nowhere Yoo Yee's ninja's appeared, place small electrical charges and short-circutes Goddard, rendering him immoble.
"No! Goddard!"
"Ha, ha, ha!" Yoo Yee laughed.
"I'll show you!" Jimmy aimed his wacth but then the next second, Yoo Yee appeares right in front of him to Jimmy's great shock. In a flash of a second, Jimmy is down on the ground, dropping his wacth on the floor.
"Ha, ha, ha, ha!! You think you're dog and gadgets can stop us great and powerful fighters? HA! You make me sick like my grandma's bad chicken soup which taste like dirt!"
Jimmy tries reaching for his watch, but is crushed by Yoo Yee's foot.
His anger raised.
"Why you!"
He pointlessly charges for Yoo Yee, but is then stopped by his ninja's and beaten to a pulp.
"Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Now the shoe's foot is on the other end big-headed one with big hair."
The ninja's capture the frozen Sheen, Carl and Libby and take them to the helecopter, with Yoo Yee getting on.
"Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Face it, small legged one, you'll NEVER defeat me! Not with your sciency gadgets nor with your poor fighting skills that wrench like grandma's toenail! NOTHING!!!"
With that, his laughter and his friends fly away into the unknown sky.
The beatened Jimmy staggered to his feet.
"Gotta go to the lab and find their location"
Just as he turned around, standing in front of him, sporting a white karate uniform with a pink undershirt, pink belt and bare feet, Cindy stood shocked.
