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[Band_Geek923]

Hello, Hello, I'm Sheen Estevez. I'm here to tell you my story now!

Me: Not yet, Sheen. I have to tell them the summary.

Sheen: Well hurry up marchy band girl.

Me: Okay. Okay. Geez.

Summary: A new girl moved to Retroville. Her name is Victoria Amber Hutchinson. She has a mom, a dad, and a brother named Morris.
She loves Ultralord, and when Sheen finds that out they fall in love, but other things get in the way too, 'cause Cindy likes Victoria's twin brother, Morris, and Libby also likes him. Carl and Jimmy like Sheen's girlfriend also. What's gonna happen. Who's going to date who? Will some friendships get destroyed over this relationship problem? Find out when I post Chapter 1 sometime soon.

Sheen: You mean I can't start my story yet?

Me: No Sheen.

Sheen: But I'm the narrator, I have to tell the story.

Me: Not now I said. *whispers* This kid doesn't listen.

Sheen: I heard that.

Me: Good.

See you all later,
Millicent

P.S. Note from Sheen: Reply I tell you. I want people to hear my story. Reply so marchy band girl can post Chapter 1 of my wonderfully told story!

Me: Okay, Sheen. Shut up now.

Sheen: Okay.

[Beks]

Cute! ^_^ Can't wait for more! :thumbsup:

[Kaytron]

Sounds Great!

Can't wait. ^_^

^Kaytron^ :ph43r:

[NekoGirl]

Aww, sweet! & with Sheen, its bound to be hilarious too! I'll read it!

Surely with a Sheen-central fiction, I wouldn't imagine there to be that much J/C on Jimmy's side of things. :P

S/L love forever in my heart, but I will still gladly read this! ^_^

[Band_Geek923]

Here's chapter 1 you guys. I'm posting this from my lap top on the bus. We're coming home from our football game now.

Chapter 1:
I was sitting at my house, watching Ultralord as usual. There was a marathon on today. They were showing epsiodes 20-25. I get to see 5 episodes of Ultralord in a row! That's awesome.

I wish Libby was with me right now. My princess always likes to watch this with me, sometimes, but then again, she doesn't like Ultralord like I do. She's also not as addicted to sugar as I am.

But it was a commercial break, and I was bored during the break. I heard noises outside my window. I looked out. Wow a moving truck! There was a moving truck outside! Someone was moving in, or moving out. But I think moving in 'cause people are taking things into the house.

That is when I saw the most beautifulest girl in the world come out of the house. Ultralord came back on, but I didn't care. This girl had my attention now.

She had wavy brown hair, and she was dressed in black leather pants with a red leather shirt, she made my eyes pop out of my head. I had to go meet that girl.

My father took me across the street to meet the new neighbors.

"Hello, I am Mr. Estevez. This is my son, Sheen. We live across from you," said my father.

A man came over to us. "I'm Mr. Walter Hutchinson. This is my wife Chloe Hutchinson, and these are my two twin children. Their names are Victoria Amber and Morris Fletcher."

They all said "Hi" to us. Then Victoria's beautiful bright blue eyes looked at mine. "You're kind of cute."

"Hey I thought the same about you." I said.

"When we get settled, would you like to come and see some of my prized collections?"

"Sure." I said.

"Come on, Sheen. We must let the new neighbors unpack and get settled before we make acquaintance with them." Dad said.

So we started to walk across the street.

"Hey Mom, be careful with my Ultralord dolls." Victoria said.

I stopped in my tracks. Did she say Ultralord collection?


That's it for now. I'm on my lap top on the bus ride home remember.
Read and reply to this please.

Millicent

[curiochibi]

COOL!
Can't wait for more.

-Jessi

[andy]

kuul more please :kawaii:

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Hey, there! Your story's great!!! Keep it up! *under breath* Sheen's real stupid to fall for a girl w/ an UltraLord doll collection!!

:Sheen: Hey! I heard that, & he's not a doll; he's an action figure; there's a DIFFERENCE!!!!!!! *starts chasing me*

Me: Oops! Gotta go!!! *runs off to try to avoid Sheen*
Yours Truly,

[Band_Geek923]

This is chapter 2. It's a really short chapter. I haven't had a chance to write much. Band keeps me busy.

Chapter 2:

She did say Ultralord collection. I know she did. I thought to myself as I stared out the window at the new neighbors unpacking their things.

I knew I would become friends with her as soon as I told her I liked Ultralord too.

She would get to like me, and I would get to like her.

Her name is just so pretty. Victoria.

Victoria Amber Hutchinson. Such a beautiful name for such a beautiful woman.

I wanted to run out there right now and yell "I like Ultralord too." to her, but I wanted her to get settled in her house before I talked to her like Dad said.

As soon as she was done, I would go right over and talk to her.

I needed to know how many episodes of Ultralord she's seen, and if she's ever seen the Ultralord movie.

But I could wait.

I was sure we'd become friends, maybe even boyfriend and girlfriend.
But then I remembered someone.

Libby. What would I do about Libby? What would I tell her.

It was simple. I would just tell her she's a new girl who came to Retroville, who moved in across from me, and is very nice.

I would keep the Ultralord thing secret. That is the part I would know about her, and no one else.





That's it, hope you enjoy it.

Millicent

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Wow!!! Not as spicy as the first, but I love it just the same!!!!! Keep writing, girl!! ;)

Yours Truly,

[Band_Geek923]

Oh yeah I have to update this.

Well I will soon, okay Gretchen?

When you update your story, I'll do mine.

See ya,
:bff:
Millicent

[Band_Geek923]

Chapter 3:

All afternoon I waited for Victoria to finish unpacking so I could go see her.

I had to see how many Ultralord's she had in her collection.

I needed to know everything about her.

It seemed to take forever, because I must have fell asleep, and I only fall asleep when things take forever. Like school.

Just then, I got woken up by my father.

"Sheen, the new girl is here to see you," he said.

I looked behind him, and there in the doorway was Victoria.

She looked so beautiful standing there, the sunlight shining off of her hair, and making it sparkle, and also making her eyes sparkle too. She was absolutley gorgeous, and my type of girl.

She will be better than Libby, because this girl likes Ultralord.

"Wow, Victoria. You look beautiful," I said.

She smiled. "Well, you look rather handsome yourself."

"I'll leave you alone then," Dad said.

When Dad left, she looked around my room.

"Wow, you really like Ultralord don't you?"

''Yes, he's my favorite superhero of all time!"

"Wow, because... well, I like Ultralord too."

"I know," I said.

"How?" she asked.

"I heard you telling your mom to be careful with your Ultralord collection," I said.

"Yes, I do have an Ultralord collection, I see you do too. I have seen all the episodes and the movie. I'm guessing you did too."

"You betcha I did!" I said.

Victoria smiled at me. "I think I'm going to like you, Sheen. We both like Ultralord, and we both think each other are cute, we might become friends, or maybe...boyfriend and girlfriend."

"Well, I would like for you to meet my other friends first before we become a couple, but.. we can be friends to start out," I told her.

"I would love that, and I would love to meet your friends," Victoria said.

"Well, why don't we go now? They're probably at the Candy Bar. Come with me, we can get lunch or something. You'll love their ice cream.!" I exclaimed.

"I can see you are a hyperactive little dude. A hyperactive cutie. Okay, let's go," she said.

"Yes!" I yelled.

We told my Dad where we were going, then we told Victoria's parents.

Then we set off to the Candy Bar.






That's the chapter.

Millicent

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

It's awesome!!! I can't wait for more!!

Yours Truly,

[andy]

keep it up!!!!!! :dance: keep it up!!!!!!! :dance: :lol: