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#1 .:!Gwen!:.

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Posted 02 September 2008 - 10:10 PM

Woohoo! Bandwagon! --jumps on--

Like I said to Ringo, I know I haven't really been in the roleplay that much, but I have in my lifetime, and I did apply, so hopefully you all still consider me a Knight.

This here's just the introduction. Part one comes later. If you can't read the font, tell me and I'll change it.



Neutron Knight Origins

Lady Gwendolyn



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My name is Lady Gwendolyn of IDOJstershire. I was raised in a town not a hundred miles from the ocean.

Talk of war was indiscriminate, thrown about like yesterday’s newspaper. The time it was close to our secluded part of the world seemed so far away, yet so prominent in minds, as a yesterday would be. My sister was killed in the war.

She had gone in stead of my father to the soldiers since he was far too old and incapable of wielding any sort of weapon. All of us viewed it best, except for my father himself. His mind was changed two weeks after hearing these plans, an unexpected stroke crippling his dominant side.

Off Katherine went, leaving her daughter and son in her twin’s care, her husband already drafted.

She was stabbed. An unexpected hit from behind. A guerrilla attack, some dagger lodging itself in the back of her skull.

The news and body were received three days later, my father heartbroken, spiraling into depression. Katherine was his first daughter, a mirror image of himself, inside and out. Her twin was hit the hardest with the news, facing uncertainty in the world without the older sibling to guide her.

And me? How did I grasp the death? At first, I didn’t believe it. Such an unholy, unruly, undignified way to go. It simply wasn’t like her to be taken this way.

Eventually, this denial bottled up inside of me turned into anger. I began to desire the hurt of my mother and two sisters, who allowed and even unthinkably conjured this plan at all. I also began to see my father for a coward, not allowing him the fairness of the situation. I would lock myself in my room, cursing the sky, my family, the war.

Then, one day, I’d had enough. I’d had enough of trying to control my outrageous emotions towards my classmates. I’d had enough of trying to downplay the outbursts directed at my father. And I’d certainly had enough of the town sending our family flowers. They were acting like we needed their help, and my philosophy is that if I don’t ask for your help, I don’t need it.

So I ran. Like a bad dream, I stole my mother’s fortune, packed a suitcase with clothing and food, then left. Simply, uneducately left.

Where was I going? I didn’t know. My age was eleven, my education was far from finished, and my soul was livid.

Traveling all day and surviving on lie-brought sympathy from strangers all night, I slowly made my way westward, away from the ocean, away from all I’d ever known.

Unfortunately, one day, I started to crave companionship. I craved it like a dog craves a bone. But what could I do? It’s not like I could trap an animal, then expect its loyalty in return.

Suddenly, with unprecedented insubordination towards fate, I stole the first pet I could find from one of those sympathetic, considerate nobodies who gave me sustenance and a warm bed during the night.

Staring at the overgrown snake in my hands, I wondered who in the world I had become.



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Posted 02 September 2008 - 10:15 PM

Ahhh, Gwen, it's awesome! Love the font, BTW. You did such an excellent job of portraying your emotions and pulling the reader into the story right away! I'm looking forward to hearing more. Go Neutron Knights! :D





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Posted 02 September 2008 - 10:17 PM

Thanks Ringo~

HUZZAH.






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Posted 03 September 2008 - 01:14 AM

Yay bandwagon!


GREAT intro, Gwen!

Well written and captivating! I really like the tone you are setting up. Can't wait for the next installment!



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Posted 03 September 2008 - 01:34 AM

Thanks Katie!

lolbandwagon. Here, you can play the banjo.






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Posted 03 September 2008 - 01:35 AM

YES!

*goes banjo-crazy*
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Posted 03 September 2008 - 01:37 AM

8D

Banjo-Playing Boy has got to be my favoritest Jimmy Neutron character EVAR.






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Posted 03 September 2008 - 01:40 AM

And his wicked awesome internet cafe... :D

I LOVE that episode.
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Posted 03 September 2008 - 01:46 AM

Ditto. XD

"IZ U TALKIN' MUSHROOMZ?"







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Posted 03 September 2008 - 01:58 AM

Are you shoooooooooooor you ain't talkin' mushrooms?
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Posted 03 September 2008 - 11:36 AM

It's not like I have anything better to do, so here's part one, written about half an hour ago.


Neutron Knight Origins

Lady Gwendolyn



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Smash!

“Gwendolyn, don’t think before you dodge!”

The sixteen year old wiped blood off her lip. The katana’s helm had ungracefully slammed her when she rolled to the side. She quickly got to her feet to jump over the Sensei’s slash.

“Good!”

He forwarded at her. She held her katana skillfully to block it. They connected with great force, but neither moved because of it. Gwendolyn moved her two hands to the upper right, then down and drove her teacher away.

“Good!” said the Sensei again, defending away her forward attacks. “Don’t think! Muscle memory, Gwen.”

She hesitated, caught off guard by the use of a nickname. He seized the opportunity, turning the blade flat-ways and running at her, so as to drive her into the wall.

At the last moment, Gwendolyn bent backwards to allow the blade’s edge to narrowly miss her. She followed up with the dodge and spun around, punting the Sensei against the wall and trapping him with her blade like he intended to do moments before. She took a certain stance to kick his legs out from under him if he tried to escape.

“Very well done. Never lose your guard, my pupil. Enemies know more about you than you or they let on.”

She nodded, letting him free from the wall.

“Now, I don’t know about you, but a glass of white papaya tea sounds marvelous.”

Gwendolyn cringed. She was never fond of tea, even in her childhood. “Arigato, Sensei, but I need to get to my quarters.”

“The early bird does, in fact, catch the spider,” said the Sensei, his mind too focused on tea. He started to walk towards the tea house.

His student scratched her arm. “Worm, Sensei.”

“Oh no thank you. No warm milk for me, it’s much too untimely.”

She nearly laughed at his one track mind, but thought better of it, shook her head, and walked in the opposite direction toward her room.

A sort of terrible pang went through her at that description.

One track.

It was too much like someone she knew before. Someone else never had their mind right, but damn it all if she could think who.

The serving maid bowed as Gwendolyn entered her quarters. She took off her dirty kimono and handed it to the maid.

It was too much to think about. She had terrible flashbacks of her childhood, and even carried some of the mannerisms she had picked up back then, but for the life of her, Gwendolyn couldn’t remember who housed her. Who was her father? Who was her mother? She was certain there were other children, but didn’t know if they were her parent’s sons, daughters, nieces, nephews, foster children, or even just guests.

“Something bothering you, mistress?” asked the serving maid, helping Gwendolyn into her nightgown.

“Hmm? Oh, no. It’s nothing.” She feigned a smile.



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Posted 03 September 2008 - 03:06 PM

Awesome, Gwen! I love your descriptions. And your Sensei, LOL. This is just getting better and better... =D





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Posted 03 September 2008 - 03:13 PM

Thaaanks. 8D

I can tell I'm gonna have lots of fun writing for this Sensei guy.







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Posted 03 September 2008 - 03:17 PM

Uh, yeah, great! I feel like I'm reading some old interesting book about adventures. You have a sophisticated style.
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Posted 03 September 2008 - 03:23 PM

Thanks, Flank!

Sophisticated, eh? Well, I suppose at least SOME area in my life deserves it.

But this would be the only one.





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Posted 03 September 2008 - 03:30 PM

For me lady Gwendolyn always is sophisticated.
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Posted 03 September 2008 - 03:41 PM

--bows, trips over hem of skirt, falls face down on the floor--






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Posted 03 September 2008 - 03:43 PM

That was a very.... graceful fall?
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Posted 03 September 2008 - 03:49 PM

--muffled-- Fanks.





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Posted 03 September 2008 - 03:52 PM

Nice, Gwen! I really love your sensei. He's awesome.

I can tell, this story is going to be a pretty amazing tale. I'm already sucked in!
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