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[ssj4majuub]

Origin:Isaac. Part 1.
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It was a wonderful parade. Flowers and Candy littered the streets as children rushed to collect some for themselves. But not Isaac.
At age 6, Isaac was a mechanical genius. As his friends Played tag and Hide-and-seek, Isaac spent time building his first steam engine.
He watched the carts filled with Neutron Knights go slowly by in the street, waving and smiling and laughing. But one man didn't.
He sat in the back, eyes rolled and arms crossed, a tight frown across his face. Isaac looked at him with interest. Now what was an unhappy man doing amongst all these smiles? He would have to find out for himself.

Isaac slipped out of the crowds lining the streets, and hit behind the cart, untill he found a hold. He climbed up, and wriggled next to the man.
"Scuse me sir, why are you mad?"
The frowning man looked down, only slightly surprised.
"I'll tell you why, Kid. You see this cart we're on? I built this. The plane we use, the boat, the simulators, the guns for chris'sakes. I build it! And when do I get thanked? I don't."
Isaac frowned, thinking.
"But sir, you're a Knight! Everyone loves the Knights."
"Well, not everyone, or we wouldn't be here."
Isaac looked up at the man, with thoughtful eyes.
"Whats you're name, sir?"
"Its William."
"Sir William, can I help you build something sometime?"
Sir William laughed heartily, and ruffled Isaac's hair.
"What makes you think you'd be up to the job, kid?"
Isaac grinned. Showtime!
"Watch!"

Isaac lifted his watch, and pointed it at a building. a bright green beam shot out of it, and Isaac moved it up and down until the words "Go Knights!" were etched into the side of the building with laser.

"And you built that, did you?"
Isaac nodded, as happy as if it were christmas and he finally got that hudson nail set.
"Yes sir, all by myself!"
William smiled, for the first time in a long time.He took off the atom symbol pin from his shirt, and pinned it to Isaac's.
"Whats you're name, kid?"
"Isaac!"
"You keep that safe, kid. You may need it someday."
Isaac laughed, and gave the man a hug.

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How was it?

[RocksmySocks]

Cool, Isaac!!!

B) I really like it. Is there more coming? I hope so! I want to see how you become a Knight yourself!


Man, between you and Khalid I REALLY want to write an intro story for Rat Lady now...

*dashes off to brainstorm*


-Rat Lady :ahoy:

[Beks]

Nice, Issac! I should totally do one! ^_^

[ssj4majuub]

You guys should.
I'll have Part 2 up sometime tonight.

[Jimmygang 005]

Really nice Isacce :thumbsup:

And Rat Lady go with it :rock:, by the way Bek I wrote my first part of Neutron Knight origin story here and since you are writer woman I would love to know your opinion about it (and I could use some advise).

:) Khalid :)

[CraazyOne]

Oh, great job, Isaac!

Looking forward to your next part! ^_^






~Rachel~

[ssj4majuub]

Origin:Isaac. Part:2. Time lapse from previous Section: 3 years.

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Isaac sat on his bed, the sound from his DS filling the large room. At only 9, Isaac already had patents on different types of things, from laser pointers to cameras to engines. The game was one of his own, a first-person shooter designed after Serious Sam console series, made to be almost impossible to complete single-handedly.He sighed, and shut the DS, flicking off the game. Maybe he had made the game too well, and it should have been more for single-player. But if he had some friends, he could likely beat it.
He was reaching for his headphones to drown out the rest of the world, when he heard the door slam shut downstairs. Luckily, decades of living had withered the floors and walls so he could clearly hear what was going on.He heard a familiar voice say.
"Ma'am, I need to speak to you're son."
The queen! What did she need?
"Y-yes ,yes of course. Come in.He's upstairs, most likely building or playing a game."
He pretended not to have heard, and put the headphones in. The queen slowly opened the door, and asked him to come from his bunk bed.
"Something has happened. We need you."
Isaac reluctantly came down, and followed the queen out.
"We will bring you're son back as soon as possible."
Isaac's mother nodded, and opened the door.

In the limosine, the queen sat directly in front of Isaac, examining him.
"I understand you talked to Sir William, correct?"
Isaac only nodded, unwilling to talk until he knew where he was going.

"Sir William is dead."

Isaac looked up, his eyes wide, and tears slowly forming at the edges.
"How...?"

The queen looked into Isaac's eyes.
"He was killed by Eustace Strych, on a mission to intercept and sabotage Strych's technology.We recieved only his body, with a bullet in each arm and a sword wound starting beneath his rib cage, and slicing upwards, shattering his right ribs."
Isaac held his head in his hands, tears flowing free.He did not sob, but it was difficult.

"Do you want to know why he was on the mission, Isaac?"The queen asked. Her voice was soft, as if she knew what the small child was going through.
Isaac nodded, unable to speak for fear his voice would crack.

"He had to save you."
Isaac hit his back against the seat, sobbing openly.He didn't care who heard, he couldn't believe it. Was she saying it was his fault?
"Don't beat yourself up. He volunteered. Eustace heard about you, you're mechanical genius, and you're fencing skills as well. He wanted to recruit you.When William heard this, he was first to volunteer, and left not an hour after briefing.That is why we need you."

Isaac looked at the queen. He stared into her eyes with his, as if daring her to blink. In a sudden, emboldened voice, he said.

"Where will I be working?"

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Origin:Isaac.Part:2.Section:2

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The queen took Isaac through the headquarters, where Isac was astounded by what he saw. There was a girl with a rat on her shoulder, and one with an outfit on that was similiar to a cartoon super hero's. He looked at the machines that his hero had built, the ones he would need to familiarize himself with.He followed the queen steadily, into Williams old workshop, where a number of tools and devices lined the shelves.
"William loved this place."
The voice was not his, or the queens.Isaac looked back, to see a man standing there with a black coat on, with twin swords and a pistol at his side.
"The black Knight!"Isaac whispered, awed.
The black Knight nodded, and shook his head.
"Terrible Shame. Put this place to good use, kid. I have no doubt you can do it."
Isaac walked up, and held out his hand.
"My name is Isaac. And I swear upon the grave of my hero, I will Kill Eustace Strych.
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How was it?

[RocksmySocks]

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude.

Excellent job, Isaac!!!

[CraazyOne]

EXCELLENT.

Yaaay for Isaac!!!!







~Rachel~

[ssj4majuub]

@Katie:Thank you.
Wasn't very long, but still, it was fun to make.
@Rach;lolxD

[Mara=^.^=]

Awesome story!


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Kaytron]

LOVE IT ISAAC!!

^Kaytron^ :ph43r: