I have decided to post my story on here that I had on Nick.com.
I never finished it. I got up to chapter 22.
So I'll post it right here.
This is directly copied and pasted from Nick.com.
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Here is my story
Hey everyone! Im Gretchen and this is my first ever fanfic. It will be an exciting story because birth of a new baby is always exciting.
Here my summary for Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius, Big Brother.
Jimmy heres these two girls talking in school in the hallway. The one girl said her mom had a baby and that makes Jimmy realize how much he wants a baby brother or sister. Ever since he got rid of Bro bot he wanted a real sibling. Then one day, jimmy finds out that Judy neutron is pregnant! Jimmy is excited. What will she have? To find out, read my fic.
I must have at least 15 posts before I start the 1st chapter.
Thank you,
Gretchen
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Reply to this and then I'll post chapter 1.
Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius: Big Brother
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Posted 07 May 2008 - 11:23 PM
Thanks Pigquet3.
I am glad you read this on nick.com.
But there is alot more people on here to read it than on nick.com.
You can reread it again to refresh your memory.
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Here's chapter 1.
This was divided into two parts on nick.com because of the small posts. But here I'll post it all at once.
Enjoy.
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Chapter 1
POVS: Purple- Narrator, Blue-Jimmy, Red-Hugh, Green-Judy.
One sunny Sunday afternoon, Jimmy Neutron was in his lab. He was working on a project for history class. Ms. Fowl had assigned them one of two projects of their choice. 1. they could pick a historical event and find out about that place, or 2. choose a place and find out abouts it's history. Jimmy chose to do the 2nd project on the history of Retroville. Jimmy had found lots of information on it, and was now going to type it.He opened up Microsoft Word and began to type when he heard a loud scream from the kitchen, so loud it could be heard from the lab, and started his dog Goddard. "Leaping leptons!" Jimmy exclaimed, "what was that?" He looked at Goddard under his chair. "Don't worry boy. I'll find out what that noise was," Jimmy said.
He left the lab and went to the kitchen. There in the kitchen, was his mom, Judy Neutron, running around in a circle. On the floor where she was at was an overturned cherry pie that had splattered everywhere. "Mom, what happened?" Jimmy asked. When Judy heard his voice she looked up at him angrily. "Jame Isaac Neutron! How many times have I told you to pick up your inventions off the ground?" she asked. "What do you mean? I never left my inventions in the house. I keep them all in my lab," Jimmy said. "Oh really? Well, I just happened to be coming to take out my cherry pie to cool on the windowsill when I tripped over this (she holds up one of Jimmy's inventions) and it made me spill my cherry pie," Judy said. "I'm sorry Mom. Now let me go finish my project," Jimmy said. "Not so fast young man, you are not going anywhere until these inventions are picked up," judy said. So Jimmy was going to pick up his inventions in the other rooms when his dad, Hugh Neutron came in the room with a new duck he made. "What do you think, Jimbo? Isn't this a great duck?" Hugh asked. "Yea Dad. That's great," Jimmy said. It actually was a good looking duck with a red body and yellow beak. "Well, it is one of my best ducks. I wonder if I can sell it and get money for...," Hugh started to say. "Dad, look out!," Jimmy said. Hugh didn't see where he was going and he tripped over Jimmy's invention on the floor and his duck went out of his hands and crashed on the floor. "Noooooooooo!!!!!!!!" Hugh screamed. "My beautiful duck." James Isaac Neutron!" Judy screamed. "Yes, Mom. I'll go pick them up," Jimmy said. Then he went and picked up all his inventions, then went back to his lab to finish his project, driving all the craziness of the afternoon out of his head.
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Thanks for reading. Give me your feedback please.
Gretchen
I am glad you read this on nick.com.
But there is alot more people on here to read it than on nick.com.
You can reread it again to refresh your memory.
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Here's chapter 1.
This was divided into two parts on nick.com because of the small posts. But here I'll post it all at once.
Enjoy.
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Chapter 1
POVS: Purple- Narrator, Blue-Jimmy, Red-Hugh, Green-Judy.
One sunny Sunday afternoon, Jimmy Neutron was in his lab. He was working on a project for history class. Ms. Fowl had assigned them one of two projects of their choice. 1. they could pick a historical event and find out about that place, or 2. choose a place and find out abouts it's history. Jimmy chose to do the 2nd project on the history of Retroville. Jimmy had found lots of information on it, and was now going to type it.He opened up Microsoft Word and began to type when he heard a loud scream from the kitchen, so loud it could be heard from the lab, and started his dog Goddard. "Leaping leptons!" Jimmy exclaimed, "what was that?" He looked at Goddard under his chair. "Don't worry boy. I'll find out what that noise was," Jimmy said.
He left the lab and went to the kitchen. There in the kitchen, was his mom, Judy Neutron, running around in a circle. On the floor where she was at was an overturned cherry pie that had splattered everywhere. "Mom, what happened?" Jimmy asked. When Judy heard his voice she looked up at him angrily. "Jame Isaac Neutron! How many times have I told you to pick up your inventions off the ground?" she asked. "What do you mean? I never left my inventions in the house. I keep them all in my lab," Jimmy said. "Oh really? Well, I just happened to be coming to take out my cherry pie to cool on the windowsill when I tripped over this (she holds up one of Jimmy's inventions) and it made me spill my cherry pie," Judy said. "I'm sorry Mom. Now let me go finish my project," Jimmy said. "Not so fast young man, you are not going anywhere until these inventions are picked up," judy said. So Jimmy was going to pick up his inventions in the other rooms when his dad, Hugh Neutron came in the room with a new duck he made. "What do you think, Jimbo? Isn't this a great duck?" Hugh asked. "Yea Dad. That's great," Jimmy said. It actually was a good looking duck with a red body and yellow beak. "Well, it is one of my best ducks. I wonder if I can sell it and get money for...," Hugh started to say. "Dad, look out!," Jimmy said. Hugh didn't see where he was going and he tripped over Jimmy's invention on the floor and his duck went out of his hands and crashed on the floor. "Noooooooooo!!!!!!!!" Hugh screamed. "My beautiful duck." James Isaac Neutron!" Judy screamed. "Yes, Mom. I'll go pick them up," Jimmy said. Then he went and picked up all his inventions, then went back to his lab to finish his project, driving all the craziness of the afternoon out of his head.
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Thanks for reading. Give me your feedback please.
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Posted 12 May 2008 - 07:21 PM
Well since no one is replying to my fic, I might as well talk to myself.
Hey Gretchen how are you?
Hey Gretchen how are you?
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Posted 12 May 2008 - 07:22 PM
Oh I'm fine Gretchen.
Thanks for asking.
How was your weekend?
Thanks for asking.
How was your weekend?
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Posted 12 May 2008 - 07:25 PM
Yay I can't wait.
But wait I have a question, why are you talking to yourself?
But wait I have a question, why are you talking to yourself?
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Posted 12 May 2008 - 07:26 PM
BECUASE NO ONE IS REPLYING TO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
S0 IM TALKING TO MYSELF!
S0 IM TALKING TO MYSELF!
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Posted 12 May 2008 - 07:29 PM
Well, okay just for you Gretchen I'll put chapter 2.
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The next day I walked into school feeling happy that I finished my report for History. Ms. Fowl had given us a week to do it, but being the genius that I am I finished it in one weekend. I was feeling really happy when I got to my locker. Then I saw these two girls that are in the other 5th grade classes. Their names are Julie Anna Richardson and Zoey Davidson. They are really nice. They were talking near my locker. I didn't mean to eavedrop on their conversation, but I just did. "Oh my gosh, Zoey. Guess what happened to me last night at 7:15 pm?" Julie Anna asked. "What?" Zoey asked. "My mom had my baby brother!" Julie Anna exclaimed. "Omg! She finally had it?' Zoey asked excitedly. "Yep, his name is Jacob Nelly Richardson." Julie Anna said. "Wow, when he comes out of the hospital can I see him?" Zoey asked. "Sure, he's so cute. I am going to love being a big sister!" Julie Anna exclaimed. Then the bell rang for class. "Oh, I better get to class, Zoey. Mrs. Sippi hates it when we're late to class," Julie Anna said. "Yeah, Ms. Zouri hates it too when we're late. So I better go too. Bye Julie Anna," Zoey said. "Bye Zoey," Julie Anna said. Then they went to class. Hearing that conversation made me realize how much I wanted to a big brother. Ever since I got rid of Bro Bot, I've been longing to have a real sibling. If I had a baby brother or sister, I would no longer be Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius. I would be Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius, Big Brother. I sighed then walked into Ms. Fowls room just in time because the late bell rang as soon as I came in.
I had trouble concentrating on my work that day because I kept thinking about how lucky Julie Anna was to have a baby brother. I really wanted to become a big brother. Later that day at lunch, I was at my table with Carl and Sheen, my friends. I wanted to tell them about how I was feeling. I was feeling herendously upset and unhappy. "Hey Jimmy, what's wrong with yu today? asked Sheen. "Yeah, you are so unhappy what's wrong, Jim?" asked Carl. "Yeah I am," I said. "Why?" asked Sheen. "Well you know those two girls Julie Anna richardson and Zoey Davidson, right?" Ia sked. Carl and Sheen nodded. "well this morning I heard that Julie Anna became a big sister and I just realized I want to be a big brother," I said. "But Jimmy, you already have Brobot remember?" Sheen asked. "Yeah but I invented him. I want a sibling that is real and alive like we are." I said. "well, dont worry jim, I'm sure your mom will have one someday," Carl said. "Yeah, I'm sure she will, Jimmy" Sheen said. "I hope so," I said. "I hope if it's a girl she'll look like cute sweet Judy," Carl said to himself. "What?" I asked. "Uhh... nothing,"Carl said. Then he shoved some mashed potatoes in his mouth to keep himself to saying anything more.
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There, Gretchen, there's your chapter. Happy now?
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The next day I walked into school feeling happy that I finished my report for History. Ms. Fowl had given us a week to do it, but being the genius that I am I finished it in one weekend. I was feeling really happy when I got to my locker. Then I saw these two girls that are in the other 5th grade classes. Their names are Julie Anna Richardson and Zoey Davidson. They are really nice. They were talking near my locker. I didn't mean to eavedrop on their conversation, but I just did. "Oh my gosh, Zoey. Guess what happened to me last night at 7:15 pm?" Julie Anna asked. "What?" Zoey asked. "My mom had my baby brother!" Julie Anna exclaimed. "Omg! She finally had it?' Zoey asked excitedly. "Yep, his name is Jacob Nelly Richardson." Julie Anna said. "Wow, when he comes out of the hospital can I see him?" Zoey asked. "Sure, he's so cute. I am going to love being a big sister!" Julie Anna exclaimed. Then the bell rang for class. "Oh, I better get to class, Zoey. Mrs. Sippi hates it when we're late to class," Julie Anna said. "Yeah, Ms. Zouri hates it too when we're late. So I better go too. Bye Julie Anna," Zoey said. "Bye Zoey," Julie Anna said. Then they went to class. Hearing that conversation made me realize how much I wanted to a big brother. Ever since I got rid of Bro Bot, I've been longing to have a real sibling. If I had a baby brother or sister, I would no longer be Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius. I would be Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius, Big Brother. I sighed then walked into Ms. Fowls room just in time because the late bell rang as soon as I came in.
I had trouble concentrating on my work that day because I kept thinking about how lucky Julie Anna was to have a baby brother. I really wanted to become a big brother. Later that day at lunch, I was at my table with Carl and Sheen, my friends. I wanted to tell them about how I was feeling. I was feeling herendously upset and unhappy. "Hey Jimmy, what's wrong with yu today? asked Sheen. "Yeah, you are so unhappy what's wrong, Jim?" asked Carl. "Yeah I am," I said. "Why?" asked Sheen. "Well you know those two girls Julie Anna richardson and Zoey Davidson, right?" Ia sked. Carl and Sheen nodded. "well this morning I heard that Julie Anna became a big sister and I just realized I want to be a big brother," I said. "But Jimmy, you already have Brobot remember?" Sheen asked. "Yeah but I invented him. I want a sibling that is real and alive like we are." I said. "well, dont worry jim, I'm sure your mom will have one someday," Carl said. "Yeah, I'm sure she will, Jimmy" Sheen said. "I hope so," I said. "I hope if it's a girl she'll look like cute sweet Judy," Carl said to himself. "What?" I asked. "Uhh... nothing,"Carl said. Then he shoved some mashed potatoes in his mouth to keep himself to saying anything more.
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There, Gretchen, there's your chapter. Happy now?
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Posted 12 May 2008 - 07:30 PM
You're welcome, Gretchen.
Now I'm going to go.
I'll talk to you later.
Now I'm going to go.
I'll talk to you later.
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Posted 12 May 2008 - 07:34 PM
Yeah come back anytime, Gretchen.
AND THE REST OF YOU REPLY TO THIS OR I WILL NEVER EVER COME ON THIS SITE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!
NO I'M JUST KIDDING. BUT PLEASE REPLY. I DON'T WANT TO KEEP TALKING TO MYSELF FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks, Gretchen
AND THE REST OF YOU REPLY TO THIS OR I WILL NEVER EVER COME ON THIS SITE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!
NO I'M JUST KIDDING. BUT PLEASE REPLY. I DON'T WANT TO KEEP TALKING TO MYSELF FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks, Gretchen
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Posted 12 May 2008 - 08:50 PM
wow, I don't wan't you to get sent into the loony bin, so I'll reply to your story. ^_^
It's great! I can't wait to see if he's gonna get a baby sibling! ^_^
It's great! I can't wait to see if he's gonna get a baby sibling! ^_^
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 09:59 PM
Woa, Gretchen what the heck's gotten into you?
You don't need to go talking to yourself, and yelling you'll never come on here anymore.
Just chill out okay?
Just chill.
I'll reply to this whenever there's a new chapter.
I already read this on nick.com, but I'll read it here, too.
Great job so far and post chapter 3 soon.
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Don't make me drive up there to Allentown PA where you live and give you a piece of my mind.
Just chill the heck out already!
You don't need to go talking to yourself, and yelling you'll never come on here anymore.
Just chill out okay?
Just chill.
I'll reply to this whenever there's a new chapter.
I already read this on nick.com, but I'll read it here, too.
Great job so far and post chapter 3 soon.
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ToKi
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Don't make me drive up there to Allentown PA where you live and give you a piece of my mind.
Just chill the heck out already!
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Posted 18 May 2008 - 07:26 PM
Thanks for replying, Toki.
Here's chapter 3.
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That night, I was helping Judy make dinner. She was making pork chops, stuffing, and peas which are my favorite. And for dessert she was making my favorite thing, strawberry pie. Jimbo was in his room doing his homework, so I decided now would be a good time to talk to Judy about what happened at the doctors appointment today. "Butter buiscuit, I think we should tell Jimmy the news," I said. "No, Hugh. I don't know if Jimmy is going to like the news, let's wait another day or two," Judy said. "Okay," I said. I carried the plates to the table, along with the glasses and silverware. I guess it wouldn't hurt to keep the news a secret from Jim Jam a little longer. I had to polish my duck collection tonight any way. Then Judy said, "Hugh, call Jimmy down . It's time for dinner," Judy said. I went to the stairs and called up "Jimbo, time to eat!" Then went back to the kitchen. "Remember Hugh, not a word to Jimmy,"Judy said. "Right," I said. Then Jimmy came in the kitchen with Goddard. He looked very upset. He sat down and put food on his plate, but didn't eat anything. "Jimmy, why aren't you eating?" Judy asked. Jimbo looked at Judy and I. "Mom, I can't eat to night. I'm very depressed," Jimmy said. "Why?" I asked. Jimmy sighed then looked up. "Mom, Dad. This has been agrivating me all day and I need to say it now. I heard these girls in school today talking and the one girl's mom had a baby,"Jim Jam paused, then continued, "Mom, Dad. I want to be a big brother." Judy and I exchanged glances. "Well, Jimbo, there's actually something your mother and I wanted to tell you," I said.
Judy looked at me. "No, Hugh, you promised me you wouldn't tell him," Judy said. "Yeah, but Sugar Booger, I really wanted Jim Jam to know now," I said. "No Hugh, we're not tellling him," Judy said. Jimmy looked at us. "Can you please just tell me what it is you want to tell me? You guys don't have to keep a secret from me. I'm your son. This fighting over a secret is unecessary,"Jimmy said. "Okay, we'll tell you," Judy said. She took a deep breath. "Well, you know for the past 4 months, I've been feeling sick and gaining weight and I didn't know what is was from?" Judy asked. "Yeah," Jimbo said. "Well, Jimbo, when we went to the doctors today the doctor told your mom something really exciting,"I said. "Well, what was it?" Jimmy asked impatiently. "Jimmy, the reason why I've been feeling sick for 4 months and gaining weight is because..."Judy took another deep breath and looked nervous to say it. I think it's beacause she wasn't ready to tell Jim Jam yet. "What is the reason?" Jimmy asked."Tell me. I really want to know" "You tell him Hugh," Judy said. "Okay, honey if you're nervous then I'll tell him," I said. I looked Jimmy straight in the eyes. "Jimmy, your mother is pregnant."
Thanks, Gretchen
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Quote from chapter 3: "Carl is pregnant?"-Sheen Estavez
Here's chapter 3.
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That night, I was helping Judy make dinner. She was making pork chops, stuffing, and peas which are my favorite. And for dessert she was making my favorite thing, strawberry pie. Jimbo was in his room doing his homework, so I decided now would be a good time to talk to Judy about what happened at the doctors appointment today. "Butter buiscuit, I think we should tell Jimmy the news," I said. "No, Hugh. I don't know if Jimmy is going to like the news, let's wait another day or two," Judy said. "Okay," I said. I carried the plates to the table, along with the glasses and silverware. I guess it wouldn't hurt to keep the news a secret from Jim Jam a little longer. I had to polish my duck collection tonight any way. Then Judy said, "Hugh, call Jimmy down . It's time for dinner," Judy said. I went to the stairs and called up "Jimbo, time to eat!" Then went back to the kitchen. "Remember Hugh, not a word to Jimmy,"Judy said. "Right," I said. Then Jimmy came in the kitchen with Goddard. He looked very upset. He sat down and put food on his plate, but didn't eat anything. "Jimmy, why aren't you eating?" Judy asked. Jimbo looked at Judy and I. "Mom, I can't eat to night. I'm very depressed," Jimmy said. "Why?" I asked. Jimmy sighed then looked up. "Mom, Dad. This has been agrivating me all day and I need to say it now. I heard these girls in school today talking and the one girl's mom had a baby,"Jim Jam paused, then continued, "Mom, Dad. I want to be a big brother." Judy and I exchanged glances. "Well, Jimbo, there's actually something your mother and I wanted to tell you," I said.
Judy looked at me. "No, Hugh, you promised me you wouldn't tell him," Judy said. "Yeah, but Sugar Booger, I really wanted Jim Jam to know now," I said. "No Hugh, we're not tellling him," Judy said. Jimmy looked at us. "Can you please just tell me what it is you want to tell me? You guys don't have to keep a secret from me. I'm your son. This fighting over a secret is unecessary,"Jimmy said. "Okay, we'll tell you," Judy said. She took a deep breath. "Well, you know for the past 4 months, I've been feeling sick and gaining weight and I didn't know what is was from?" Judy asked. "Yeah," Jimbo said. "Well, Jimbo, when we went to the doctors today the doctor told your mom something really exciting,"I said. "Well, what was it?" Jimmy asked impatiently. "Jimmy, the reason why I've been feeling sick for 4 months and gaining weight is because..."Judy took another deep breath and looked nervous to say it. I think it's beacause she wasn't ready to tell Jim Jam yet. "What is the reason?" Jimmy asked."Tell me. I really want to know" "You tell him Hugh," Judy said. "Okay, honey if you're nervous then I'll tell him," I said. I looked Jimmy straight in the eyes. "Jimmy, your mother is pregnant."
Thanks, Gretchen
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Quote from chapter 3: "Carl is pregnant?"-Sheen Estavez
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Posted 18 May 2008 - 09:12 PM
Jimmy's getting a baby sibling! :dance:
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