New fic: Cat's Got Her Tongue!!
#21
Posted 03 November 2008 - 11:38 PM
Keep it up!
#22
Posted 20 November 2008 - 08:31 PM
Yours Truly,
#23
Posted 20 November 2008 - 11:47 PM
Me more than most it seems
#24
Posted 21 November 2008 - 05:27 PM
Yours Truly,
#25
Posted 03 December 2008 - 11:58 PM
Cya!
#26
Posted 04 December 2008 - 12:37 AM
Here's a trick to get people to reply: It's a bit time consuming, but what you do is send a PM to every single person who's replied to the fanfic telling them there's a new chapter, that way, they know that it's being updated, and it draws their attention. I've used for ALL my fanfics! :rolleyes:
Just make sure you don't send more than one PM to each person. ^_^
#27
Posted 05 December 2008 - 05:21 PM
Cya!
#28
Posted 15 December 2008 - 01:41 AM
Here's Chapter 5(finally!)!
Cat's Got Her Tongue
Chapter 5: Trouble in Namibia
On the way to Namibia, Sheen groaned & complained, "How LONG is this gonna take??! I'm bored outta my MIND!!!!!"
"It's only been 30 minutes, Sheen!" Libby pointed out, concerned.
"Feels like an eternity to me!!!!!" he sighed.
"That's only cuz ya have a short attention span Ultra-DWEEB!!" Cindy snapped, highly annoyed.
"Hey, Jim?" Carl asked, "What's the name of that African country again?"
"Namibia," Jimmy calmly informed him.
"Oh, okay. Just checking!" he told him.
After another 30 minutes had gone by, Sheen looked up from the UltraLord game he'd decided to play & exclaimed, "FINALLY!!!!"
Jimmy soon landed the rocket & everyone got out to look around.
Hisssssssss!!!!
"Oh, no!!" Carl shrieked, "Venomous snake! Venomous snake!!!!" Then he ran behind Jimmy for protection & shook nervously, pointing at the viper.
"It's okay, Carl. If we don't bother it, it won't bother us!" he reassured him.
"I don't think ya could say the same thing about the guards guardin' that hi-tech-lookin' building!!" Libby interjected, pointing to what looked like a hi-tech security building behind him.
Jimmy took one look at it & exclaimed, "Leapin' LEPTONS!!! That must be what's causing the electricity shortages!! C'mon, guys! Follow me!!"
"Nuh-UH!!!! I'm not goin' into some buildin' that looks like a sure-fire death trap!!" Libby protested.
"Just C'MON!!!" Cindy insisted, grabbing her hand & pulling her with the rest of the group.
When they tried to get past the guards, one of them stopped the group with his hand & barked, "Nice try, PUNK! Authorized personnel ONLY!!! Now, get OUTTA here!!!!!"
They moved about 50 feet away from them, then Carl asked Jimmy, "So, how are we gonna get past them & find Calamitous??"
"That's where man's best friend comes in!" he informed him, paging Goddard from his watch & sending him bounding out of the rocket & to his master.
"Pffft. YEAH!" Cindy remarked under her breath, "Best friend that looks like a blender!!!!" With that, she & Libby burst out giggling. Luckily, Libby could laugh normally without the help of the device Jimmy made her.
Jimmy just glared at them, then instructed Goddard, "Spray the guards with sleeping gas, boy!"
Goddard barked & did as he was told.
Soon, the guards had fallen asleep at their posts, laying on the ground.
"Good boy! Now, everyone, grab hands! There's an opening in the top of the building we can climb into! Goddard, 'chopper mode'!" he told them.
Everyone grabbed hands & Jimmy held on to Goddard, who took the kids to the opening in the roof of the security building. After helping eachother inside, they found out it was a heating duct, so they crawled along the pipes until they could hear Calamitous' voice. "There!" Jimmy quietly exclaimed, pointing to the vent in front of him.
Goddard welded it open & they climbed out onto a towering stack of boxes that acted like stairs, then made their way down them & behind an odd-looking machine.
Unfortunately, Calamitous saw them try to hide & ordered, "Get out here where I can see you, Neutron & friends!!"
Reluctantly, they obeyed & stepped into his view.
"Just what do you think you're DOING, Professor Finbarr Calamitous??!" Jimmy snapped, arms folded sternly.
"Here's what I've been up to, Neutron...," Calamitous began evilly.
Am I good at these cliffies or WHAT?? :onfire: I'll try to update soon! ;)
Cya!
#29
Posted 18 December 2008 - 08:10 AM
Loving it so far!
glad that writer's block is coming off... we all hate it don't we...
^Kaytron^ :ph43r:
#30
Posted 18 December 2008 - 08:11 AM
Cya!
#31
Posted 18 December 2008 - 08:13 AM
it's great so far!!!
I wonder what Calamitous is up to this time?? ;)
^Kaytron^ :ph43r:
#32
Posted 18 December 2008 - 08:14 AM
Thanks, I'm glad u like it!
Cya!
#33
Posted 18 December 2008 - 08:17 AM
goodie!! :dance:
^Kaytron^ :ph43r:
#34
Posted 07 February 2009 - 04:01 AM
Maybe Jimmy should make me one of those devices so people can hear my thoughts instead of me writing on paper all the time.
You're an awesome writer, and please update soon!
-Lexi
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Posted 07 February 2009 - 07:07 PM
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#37
Posted 07 February 2009 - 07:53 PM
Don't worry, Amelia.
:bff:
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