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[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Cat's Got Her Tongue

Chapter 1: Libby's Accident

It was a bright, beautiful, summer day in Retroville. Cindy Vortex & her pal Libby Folfax were tanning while laying on their towels beside Cindy's pool.
"Isn't it a beautiful day, Libs?" Cindy sighed, adjusting her pink sunglasses, "For once, we're not on one of Nerd-bomb's crazy adventures!"
"I totally agree, girl! A fabulous summer day; refreshing lemonade; kickin' summer music! Nothin' could possibly ruin this day!" Libby agreed, tapping her foot to the beat of the Beach Boys' song "Little Deuce Coupe."
Then a crash next door in Sheen's house caused Libby to sit up & turn her head in the direction of his house. "Oh, brother! What's Ultra-Freak up to this time?"
"I don't know, Libby, but I want to find out," Cindy replied, getting up & marching over to the fence that separated her house from Sheen's. Then she demanded, "Ultra-Dork, what is making all that racket?!"
"What? I'm trying to teach my UltraLord action figure how to fly!"
Cindy had to laugh at that one. "Teach it how to fly?! Sheen, please! Your stupid doll can't fly! It can't even move on its own!" she exclaimed, giggling.
"ACTION FIGURE!!" Sheen yelled, & stormed away.
Cindy walked back over to Libby & rolled up her towel, saying, "Sheen was trying to teach his doll how to fly! That's such a stupid idea!"
Libby laughed, then noticed that Cindy was putting away her towel. "What are you doing that for?" she asked, getting up & following Cindy's example.
"If Sheen's gonna be that noisy, there's no way we're gonna get any peace & quiet. So I thought, why even bother with this? Let's go bug Neutron instead," Cindy explained, heading inside to change with Libby.
A few minutes later, they emerged out the front door wearing their normal attire. They walked across the street & saw that Jimmy was tinkering with yet another invention of his. Carl was watching him a couple feet away. Jimmy was working on improving his hover car so it would have the ability to function underwater, as well as on land.
"Hey, Neutron! What are you up to this time? Turning your hovercar into a howling monkey?" Cindy cracked, she & Libby bursting into a fit of giggles.
Disgusted by their mockery yet again, he said with an edge to his voice, "If you don't shut up, I'll turn you INTO a howling monkey!!! For your information, Vortex, I am not doing that to my hovercar! I am bestowing upon it the ability to function underwater!"
"In case you haven't noticed, Nerd-tron, none of us can breathe underwater!" Cindy pointed out, her arms crossed.
"I figured you would say that! That's why I am equipping it with an automatic transparent hemispherical shield. It can withstand enormous water pressure & give us enough air to breathe for weeks," he calmly explained, "It can go down to a depth of 80,000 fathoms."
"Eighty thousand fathoms?!" Sheen exclaimed, running up to the rest of the gang, "That's more than... 50,000 fathoms!"
Then Jimmy started to walk away.
"Hey, Jimmy! Where are you goin'?" Sheen wanted to know, running up to him.
"I'm headed to my lab to monitor my latest invention: the Radioactive Ray," he told him.
"How does it work?" Carl wanted to know.
"Come with me, & I'll show both of you!" Jimmy invited, motioning for them to follow him.
"Hold it, Neutron! Libs & I are coming, too!" Cindy stated, walking up to the 3 boys with Libby at her side.
"Why?" Jimmy wanted to know.
"Because if your little experiment involves Llama-boy or Ultra-Freak turning into a vegetable of some sort, we want to watch! Right, Libs?" Cindy explained.
"Yeah!" Libby agreed.
"Whatever. Be my guests!" he muttered, leading them into his lab.
"So, Neutron, what exactly does this Radioactive Ray of yours do?" Cindy wanted to know a few minutes later
"Basically," Jimmy explained, "What it does is it makes every atom of the object you're pointing the device at become radioactive. However, it can only be used on non-living items or plants. If it were to be used on, let's say, a person, the place on the person's body you pointed the device at would cease to funtion. For example, if you pointed the Radioactive Ray at a person's eyes, that person would become immediately blind. So, in conclusion, it isn't to be used on animals or people, only on non-living objects or plants. If it was used on an animal or a person, the results would be catastrophic!"
Sheen, obviously, hadn't been listening to a word Jimmy was saying. He was too busy picking at a scab on his elbow.
Then he said, "Could I see that thing, Jimmy?"
"Alright, Sheen," Jimmy said hesitantly, handing the device to him, "Just don't point it at-"
But he was cut short because Sheen had already pointed the device at Libby & pressed a button. A red beam left the device's tip & hit Libby in the throat. The last sound that escaped her throat was an ear-piercing scream. Then she lost consciousness for about an hour.
Jimmy cringed & finished what he was telling Sheen: "-people or animals..." He smacked his forehead & shook his head with disgust. "What are the consequences of what Sheen's just done?" he thought with a feeling of remorse.

[Zoey <3]

Oh i like it! please write more soon. ^_^

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Oh i like it! please write more soon. ^_^

Thanks! I'll post the next chapter(I already have it written down) in about an hour or 2. Glad you like it! Keep replying! ;) :dance:
Yours Truly,

[Ang]

Awesome job so far, Ameila!


I have one piece of crit, Libby was a little OOC(Out of character). She called Sheen, "Ultra-Freak", that's Cind's job. ;)


Besides that, amazing job! Keep up the great work!


Wait, what? This isn't your first? O_O


.....Where's the others?! :blink:

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I think the other one is on nick.com, but I'm sure it's deleted by the moderator by now... It's been on that site for almost a year! The chapters are typed on another pc, which I never can seem to get ahold of & save them on a disc so I could post them here... It's called Cindy Vortex, Girl Genius. I have several others written down, but not posted. Hope that explains it! :thumbsup: Oh, & sorry about Libby being out of character... It's been a while since I last saw a JN episode, &, to tell you the truth, I've forgotten a couple things such as that! :huh:
Yours Truly,

[Sabbie1000]

It's starting out good! I cannot wait to see what the results of Sheen's 'antics' are. <_< He always seems to not to listen to whats going on!



... I didn't even know you were allowed to post fan fiction on Nick.com!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I promised another chapter, & here it is!!!

Cat's Got Her Tongue

Chapter 2: Voiceless Libby

When Libby awoke, she found herself laying on the grass in Jimmy's backyard. Carl, Sheen, Cindy, & Jimmy stood around her.
"Libs, are you okay?! Say something!" Cindy exclaimed.
Libby opened her mouth to speak, but no words came out.
"Just as I feared," Jimmy said, "She can't speak."
Then Libby remembered what Sheen did to her. She got up on her feet & slapped him on his face.
Sheen was, as usual, clueless. "What did you do that for?" he asked.
Cindy replied, "She obviously remembered what you did to her in Jimmy's lab!"
Libby nodded with an angry expression on her face & her hands on her hips in agreement. "And you better not do it again!" she hissed in her mind, even though Sheen couldn't hear her, sticking her tongue out at him.
Then she made motions that she needed to write something down.
"Goddard, 'secretarial mode,' please!" Jimmy instructed, & Goddard handed Libby a digital scratch pad & a digital pencil out of his back hatch.
"Oh, yeah!" Sheen said, then shrugged & added, "I don't get it."
Libby just glared at him & wrote something down. She tapped Cindy's shoulder & showed her what she'd written, which was, "He's so immature." Cindy nodded in agreement, rolling her eyes.
Then Libby cleared the message to make room for the next one later on. An idea sprung to her mind. "If Jimmy could invent something that would make my thoughts known, it would suffice until he figured out a way to get my voice back!" she thought excitedly.
She wrote something on the digital pad about her idea & showed it to Jimmy.
"I think I can arrange that!" he noted thoughtfully after reading the note. He then led everyone back into his lab.

Ooh, kind of a cliff-hanger, isn't it??? I'll write the next one as soon as I can!
Yours Truly,

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

No prob!
Yours Truly,

[Sabbie1000]

Thanks for the new segment of the story!

Maybe thoughts arn't such a good idea though! :blink: What if she thinks something about someone or something that she doesn't want them to know about! Ah, I don't know. :D Great chapter!

[Beks]

Ooo, I like this already! Keep up the good writing!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I would be posting another chapter right now, but I have the fic written down & the journal it's in is at a friend's house, which I'm not currently in at the moment... But, I assure you all that I will get right on it when I go over to her house, which should be this coming Saturday! ;) I promise!
Yours Truly,

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Look, guys... I'm SO sorry it's been so long. I have a feeling that I might've lost some of your trust, but don't worry! ;) I'll get to my friend's house asap, & when I do, I'll post Chappie 3 & start working on writing Chappie 4 while I'm at it! I know what you're thinking: "Why should we even reply to someone who hardly gets a chance to post on this site??!" *holds out hand like a cop* Woah!! *imitates an angry buzzer* I saw that! Don't you leave that computer chair & start an angry mob!!!! :angrymob: My time on this site is limited, so bear w/ me, ok? Thanks!
Yours Truly,
*.* Amelia
P.S. Does anybody have a clue why, whenever I think about this show & its main character, I get butterflies in my stomach??? Am I crushing <3, or am I simply crazy :rock: ????? I NEED an answer!!!! Thank you.
Yours Truly,

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Sorry I haven't posted here in soooooooo long, but I've had a lack of inspiration. But that's not the case today!!!! Pigquet, here's Chapter 3!!!!!!

Chapter 3: The Invention

Once inside, Sheen, as usual, got bored really fast. At first he asked, "What now, Jimmy?" Then he waited for about 30 seconds, then said, "Okay, I'm bored."
But Jimmy wasn't paying attention. He was too concentrated on fixing the invention for Libby so she could speak her mind(literally! :lol: ). Then, when he was almost finished, he turned his head in Sheen's direction & questioned, "What was that, Sheen?"
"What are you inventing for my Libby-licious?? I gotta know!" he wanted to know.
When she heard him say that, she marched over to him & elbowed him sharply in his side with a glare on her face.
"OW!! Libby, don't do that! That hurts!!" he protested, rubbing his side.
She just stuck her tongue out at him in retaliation.
Cindy added to what Libby did by saying, "She hates it when you call her that, Ultra-Dork!!"
"Well, sor-RY for my not knowing that!!!" he snapped.
"She's told you that MANY times when she could still speak, but you never listen!!!!" Cindy practically yelled.
"JUST STOP IT!!!! I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE YELL AT EACHOTHER!!!!!!!!!" Carl shrieked.
Everyone looked at him like he was crazy.
"I saw that in a soap opera once," he admitted.
"To answer Sheen's question, I'm inventing something that Libby can wear to let everyone around her hear her thoughts, but only when she wants them to be known. If she thinks something she doesn't want people to hear, the device won't read her thoughts out loud. Do you get it, Sheen?" Jimmy calmly explained.
"Yeah, I think so," he replied, scratching his head.
Then, a few minutes later, the device was finished. He brought it over to Libby & placed it behind her ear. Then he instructed, "Libby, say something in your mind."
"I don't know, Neutron. What do you want me to say?" Libby wanted to know, then gasped. "It works!!!!!" she thought excitedly.
"Excellent!! Now, all we have to do is-" Jimmy began, but was interrupted by an alarm on VOX's screen. He hurried over to VOX & typed some things on his keyboard. Then he exclaimed out of shock, "Jumpin' Jupiter!! That fiend is at it again!!!!"

OOO! Cliffhanger! What's gonna happen next???? Muahahahahahahahaha!!!!! I'm so evil!!!!!!! :onfire:
JK!!! I'll post the next chappie soon, k? Cya!
Yours Truly,

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

C'mon, guys, I KNOW you can do better than that for replyin'!!!!!!!!!!!! Pigquet, wherever you are, please keep replyin', cuz if you keep replyin', I'll keep postin'!!!! Please, anyone,












































































REPLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That is all...
Yours Truly,

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Oops! I posted that twice!! My bad!

Yours Truly,

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I don't know what is W/ people these days, but I do know that I'm practically the ONLY one posting on this topic!!!!! Anyhoo...

Here's Chapter 4!!!

Chapter 4: The Evil Endangering Plot :unsure:

When Cindy heard him say that, she rolled her eyes & questioned, "Who is it THIS time, Freak Brain?! And what are they up to????"
After typing some more on his keyboard, Jimmy replied out of shock, "According to this, the reception of radios, TV's, & anything electronic that isn't powered by batteries is short-circutting & refusing to function!! And this is the work of none other than Professor Finbarr Calamitous!!!"
"That's bad, right?" Sheen asked dim-wittedly.
"Duh! Of COURSE it is, Sheen! Sheesh!!!" Libby mentally groaned, slapping her forehead in disgust.
Then Cindy had a thought. "Libs, when you're saying something with that device, could you move your mouth so it seems like you're actually speaking??" she wanted to know.
"Sure thing, girl!" Libby replied.
"What I want to know is where he is. We won't have to walk far, will we? Cuz if I do, I get a rash in a place I don't want to mention," Carl put in, blushing.
"Dude, how many times do I hafta tell ya not to bring that up???!!!" Sheen protested, annoyed.
"Sorry, but it's true," he apologized.
"He's located underground in Namibia, Africa," Jimmy informed the group.
"Oh, brother," Cindy muttered, "He's gonna say it. He wouldn't be Ultra-Dork if he didn't say it..."
"To the rocket!!!" Sheen proclaimed, punching upwards into the air.
I KNEW it!!! Cindy thought begrudgingly, & followed everyone else to Jimmy's rocket. He started it up, & soon, the gang was on their way to Namibia.

Okay, I posted another chappie! Happy?! JK!!!!!! Just reply, for Einstein's sake, GOSH!!!

Yours Truly,

[Beks]

haha! "To the ROCKET!" Classic Sheen! ^_^

[Kaz]

Am really enjoying it Amelia, please keep it up!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I'm experiencing writer's block at the moment, but I promise to post as soon as I get the inspiration! Grrr! Evil writer's block!!! :grr:

(off topic: If my laptop at home got internet, I'd be able to post the several other fics I have saved on it!!!! I just have NO service where I live!!!! :mad:)

Okay, back on topic! lol Just keep replying, okay?? Thx! ;)

Yours Truly,

[marioarp]

nice so far