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[Beks]

tell me about it... :rolleyes:

[sunnstar]

OHNOES A MOOD ALTERNATOR-ER!!

Please allow me to DUN DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN.

But that was a great chapter, better than usual! (I mean, like, your chapters are usually 8-9. This chapter was a 10. :thumbsup:) KEEPITUP!

Hey why does Beka get chapters before us NOT FAIR :'( Besides you get chapters of MY fic before everyone else! TEAR

[CraazyOne]

Yeah, it took a while for the suspense to build up, eh? Glad my chapter was promoted to a 10. Wow...that's a good rating! :D

Oh, I'm not picking on anyone, Sunny. It's just I started posting on ff.net first so I have the intro all the way to chapter 7 on there. So Beks read 'em before you... Don't worry, more is on the way. I wasn't picking on you! *hands Sunny a box of tissues*

~Rach~

[sunnstar]

OHHHHHHHHHH OKAY GOTCHA. ;) =)

[Beks]

I've read Rach's on ff.net, and she's read mine, so we knew each other on there, and then she came here! Isn't that right, Rach?

[CraazyOne]

*nods head* Yea, verily.

~Rach~

[Justine<3]

Oh cool!

We're almost where I left off! (Yeah I know, I haven't been replying much...SORRY!)

POST SOON RACHY! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


~*(+Justine+)*~

[CraazyOne]

Yeah, I know, I'm getting close now!

It's OK, it's hard to reply reguarly to a bunch of chapters you've already read. :D

I have to keep up the suspense a leeetle bit, Justine. :lol: But, don't worry, it shouldn't be too long now.

~Rach~

[Beks]

*drums fingers on the table* waiting, still waiting...

[loopin]

FOR THE LOVE OF ULTRALORD, WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!
:onfire: :onfire:

Okay, but seriously, FANTASTIC! Bada ba ba ba, I'm lovin' it!

[CraazyOne]

:blink: Justine... Beks... Loopin...

:onfire: AHHHH! THEY'RE ALL DEMANDING CHAPTERS...RIGHT NOW!

*runs away before they form an angry mob* :o

*clears throat* But, uh, seriously, it won't be long! THANKS a ton! I'm glad you like my fic that much. ^_^

*continues running to save herself*

~Rach~

[sunnstar]

AHEM.

I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER TOO!!

[loopin]

Then join us in our cause! WE WANT CHAPTERS, WE WANT CHAPTERS!


C'mon people! Chant with me here!!!

[Beks]

Writer Woman doesn't chant...Writer Woman writes! *flies up to the sky, drawing WE WANT CHAPTERS in the sky in cursive*

[CraazyOne]

Well, do to Justine's and Sunny's begging, loopin's mob-like chanting, and Writer Woman's lovely handwriting, I've decided to post the next chapter. You should be immensely proud of yourselves!


-------------------------------Chapter 6: No One Else-----------------------------------

"Yeah," Sheen answered Cindy, glancing at the Mood Alternator, "we were going to use it to make ourselves popular."

"When you point it at someone," Carl explained, "it changes their feelings toward the person they’re looking at."

A smile formed on Cindy’s face and Libby, reading her thoughts, stared at her. "Girl..." she began, but her friend ignored her.

"Could I see it?" Cindy asked Sheen.

"It doesn’t work," Carl informed her.

"But it still shoots a cool looking beam-thing!" Sheen added excitedly.

Cindy grabbed the invention from Sheen and studied the buttons covering its surface. Carl and Sheen may have said that it didn’t work, but Cindy knew better. She had felt the effects of the Mood Alternator herself just a few hours ago.

She looked up at Betty again, sitting there with that disgusting smile all the boys found so entrancing. He’s all yours, Betty had said. Liar. There Betty was now, trying to steal her Jimmy. Cindy ground her teeth. It was she who had survived countless dangers with Jimmy, she who had spent those blissful days with Jimmy on the island, and she who had always understood Jimmy better than any other girl. Betty could only stand aside, staring and listening in wonder as Jimmy worked with an invention or rattled off a scientific theory. Only Cindy could aid Jimmy in his adventures with her own intelligence and courage. No one else.

Cindy glanced down at the Mood Alternator, found the right button, and moved her thumb toward it. She hated Betty with a passion, and if this invention did backfire and hurt her—well, it served her right! As Libby stared wide-eyed, Carl watched uncertainly, and Sheen looked on in delight, Cindy pointed the invention at Betty…and pressed the button. Immediately, Betty froze in place, staring blankly at Jimmy.

"Betty? What’s going on?" Jimmy asked anxiously. The pain that swept over his face almost made Cindy want to reverse the effects. Almost.

"Cool!" Sheen shouted.

Jimmy whipped around, saw Cindy holding the Mood Alternator, and glared at her. "Cindy, what did you do?!" he yelled.

Cindy smiled smugly. "I was just testing your invention for you."

At that moment Betty snapped out of her trance and looked around, baffled.

"Betty!" Jimmy cried eagerly. "Are you all right?!"

Betty’s gaze fell on him...and a frown of disgust twisted her face. "Why am I sitting here? I’ve gotta go." She stood and began walking to the doors.

Jimmy jumped up from his seat and followed her. "Betty! Wait!"

Betty stopped to frown at him once more. "Don’t you have some of your silly little inventions to play with?" she sneered.

Jimmy was too dumbfounded to speak. Not wanting to wait any longer for an answer, Betty turned away and exited the Candy Bar, leaving Jimmy to stare after her.

"Hey, Jimmy, your invention does work!" Sheen burst out in excitement.

"I have to reverse the effects!" Jimmy exclaimed urgently.

At that moment, a figure dressed in black leapt out from around the corner of the Candy Bar and stopped Betty outside. Betty watched the man contemptuously, but Jimmy and the gang looked on in shock.

"Ahh! A ninja!" Carl shouted, horrified.

Jimmy was still gazing through the glass doors worriedly. "He looks like one of Yoo-Yee’s ninjas!" he cried. As he darted outside, Carl, Sheen, Libby, and Cindy followed.

"Betty," the ninja was saying, "come with me and we will train you in our arts! You shall become a great warrior!"

Betty simply stared at him. "Why would I want to become a great warrior?" she asked skeptically.

Jimmy ran up behind her. "Get back, Betty!" he warned. "He’s extremely dangerous!"

Betty glanced back at him contemptuously. "What do you know?"

"Ignore the one with the tall head!" the ninja commanded Betty. "Come quickly!"

"No, Betty!" Jimmy cried desperately. "Don’t go with him!"

Again, Betty turned back to him in disgust. "Why would I listen to you?"

A helicopter was hovering overhead with a long rope dangling from its open door. Wordlessly, the ninja extended a gloved hand to Betty. With a smirk at Jimmy, she deliberately ignored his warnings and reached for the ninja, who immediately snatched her hand. Swiftly and skillfully, he clambered up the rope with Betty in his grasp and disappeared into the helicopter. As it rose into the air and started for its destination, Jimmy and his friends were left standing outside the Candy Bar, staring speechlessly after its retreating form.

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Wow. Yeah, Cindy was having a few issues there. LOL! Reply and I will reward you with...chocolate...

~Rach~

[Beks]

no need, I was eating chocolate while I was reading it.

*flies up, and writes THANK YOU in the sky, underlining it three times*

[rumorgirl1983]

Well, do to Justine's and Sunny's begging, loopin's mob-like chanting, and Writer Woman's lovely handwriting, I've decided to post the next chapter. You should be immensely proud of yourselves!


-------------------------------Chapter 6: No One Else-----------------------------------

"Yeah," Sheen answered Cindy, glancing at the Mood Alternator, "we were going to use it to make ourselves popular."

"When you point it at someone," Carl explained, "it changes their feelings toward the person they’re looking at."

A smile formed on Cindy’s face and Libby, reading her thoughts, stared at her. "Girl..." she began, but her friend ignored her.

"Could I see it?" Cindy asked Sheen.

"It doesn’t work," Carl informed her.

"But it still shoots a cool looking beam-thing!" Sheen added excitedly.

Cindy grabbed the invention from Sheen and studied the buttons covering its surface. Carl and Sheen may have said that it didn’t work, but Cindy knew better. She had felt the effects of the Mood Alternator herself just a few hours ago.

She looked up at Betty again, sitting there with that disgusting smile all the boys found so entrancing. He’s all yours, Betty had said. Liar. There Betty was now, trying to steal her Jimmy. Cindy ground her teeth. It was she who had survived countless dangers with Jimmy, she who had spent those blissful days with Jimmy on the island, and she who had always understood Jimmy better than any other girl. Betty could only stand aside, staring and listening in wonder as Jimmy worked with an invention or rattled off a scientific theory. Only Cindy could aid Jimmy in his adventures with her own intelligence and courage. No one else.

Cindy glanced down at the Mood Alternator, found the right button, and moved her thumb toward it. She hated Betty with a passion, and if this invention did backfire and hurt her—well, it served her right! As Libby stared wide-eyed, Carl watched uncertainly, and Sheen looked on in delight, Cindy pointed the invention at Betty…and pressed the button. Immediately, Betty froze in place, staring blankly at Jimmy.

"Betty? What’s going on?" Jimmy asked anxiously. The pain that swept over his face almost made Cindy want to reverse the effects. Almost.

"Cool!" Sheen shouted.

Jimmy whipped around, saw Cindy holding the Mood Alternator, and glared at her. "Cindy, what did you do?!" he yelled.

Cindy smiled smugly. "I was just testing your invention for you."

At that moment Betty snapped out of her trance and looked around, baffled.

"Betty!" Jimmy cried eagerly. "Are you all right?!"

Betty’s gaze fell on him...and a frown of disgust twisted her face. "Why am I sitting here? I’ve gotta go." She stood and began walking to the doors.

Jimmy jumped up from his seat and followed her. "Betty! Wait!"

Betty stopped to frown at him once more. "Don’t you have some of your silly little inventions to play with?" she sneered.

Jimmy was too dumbfounded to speak. Not wanting to wait any longer for an answer, Betty turned away and exited the Candy Bar, leaving Jimmy to stare after her.

"Hey, Jimmy, your invention does work!" Sheen burst out in excitement.

"I have to reverse the effects!" Jimmy exclaimed urgently.

At that moment, a figure dressed in black leapt out from around the corner of the Candy Bar and stopped Betty outside! Betty watched the man contemptuously, but Jimmy and the gang looked on in shock.

"Ahh! A ninja!" Carl shouted, horrified.

Jimmy was still gazing through the glass doors worriedly. "He looks like one of Yoo-Yee’s ninjas!" he cried. As he darted outside, Carl, Sheen, Libby, and Cindy followed.

"Betty," the ninja was saying, "come with me and we will train you in our arts! You shall become a great warrior!"

Betty simply stared at him. "Why would I want to become a great warrior?" she asked skeptically.

Jimmy ran up behind her. "Get back, Betty!" he warned. "He’s extremely dangerous!"

Betty glanced back at him contemptuously. "What do you know?"

"Ignore the one with the tall head!" the ninja commanded Betty. "Come quickly!"

"No, Betty!" Jimmy cried desperately. "Don’t go with him!"

Again, Betty turned back to him in disgust. "Why would I listen to you?"

A helicopter was hovering overhead with a long rope dangling from its open door. Wordlessly, the ninja extended a gloved hand to Betty. With a smirk at Jimmy, she deliberately ignored his warnings and reached for the ninja, who immediately snatched her hand. Swiftly and skillfully, he clambered up the rope with Betty in his grasp and disappeared into the helicopter. As it rose into the air and started for its destination, Jimmy and his friends were left standing outside the Candy Bar, staring speechlessly after its retreating form.

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Wow. Yeah, Cindy was having a few issues there. LOL! Reply and I will reward you with...chocolate...

~Rach~

I've been keeping up with this on ff.net too. Nice job. :D It's progressed very nicely!

[Justine<3]

ALRIGHT!

Next chapter, I haven't read! I CANT WAIT!

I mean uh, great chappie Rachy! Good job!
































































NOW POST THE NEXT CHAPTER....please?


~*(+Justine+)*~

[sunnstar]

WOOOOOOOOOOOT, very very nice!! Just one smaaall suggestion-- "At that moment, a figure dressed in black leapt out from around the corner of the Candy Bar and stopped Betty outside!" I think you should take out the exclamation mark and put in a period. But JUST SAYING.

You rule x3540!

[CraazyOne]

no need, I was eating chocolate while I was reading it.

*flies up, and writes THANK YOU in the sky, underlining it three times*

@BEKS--Ah, that is the best way to read! With chocolate! And your welcome! ^_^

I've been keeping up with this on ff.net too. Nice job.  It's progressed very nicely!

@RUMORGIRL--You have? Why, thanks! :D And thanks again! Although it still has much more progressing to do...

ALRIGHT!

Next chapter, I haven't read! I CANT WAIT!

I mean uh, great chappie Rachy! Good job!

NOW POST THE NEXT CHAPTER....please?

@JUSTINE-- :blink: Eager much? :lol: Don't worry...it'll be up purdy soon...Not sure when, but soon...

WOOOOOOOOOOOT, very very nice!! Just one smaaall suggestion-- "At that moment, a figure dressed in black leapt out from around the corner of the Candy Bar and stopped Betty outside!" I think you should take out the exclamation mark and put in a period. But JUST SAYING.

You rule x3540!

@SUNNY--Thanks! And I like that suggestion... I used to NEVER use exclamation marks, and then my best friend kinda encouraged me to. Now I think I might be overdoing them at times... It makes the sentence a bit awkward. T'ank you fer pointin' it out! :D

~Rach~