OOOH! Love the fic so far! Keep writing! :dance:
True Colors (My Date With Nick)
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 04:10 AM
OOOH! Love the fic so far! Keep writing! :dance:
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 06:03 AM
OMG, that was amazing! Cliffie, grrr! You have Cindy down so perfectly, I can visualize her every movement. You write her brilliantly. Heck, you write everyone brilliantly! This is the first JN fic I've read in a LONG time, and I'm SO glad it was, because it's awesome! You go, girl! Can't wait for more!
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 12:59 PM
Oh, wow. This fanfic is amazing! A cliffhanger already? I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 03:51 PM
Wow, lotsa new readers with this fic! It rules!
-@Ally: OMG, thanks Ally! Wow, what an awesome compliment! You could really visualize her ever move? **is honored** :dance:
Thanks so much again! And you can't wait for more? ... then I guess you'll just have to come on more often! :P
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OMG, that was amazing! Cliffie, grrr! You have Cindy down so perfectly, I can visualize her every movement. You write her brilliantly. Heck, you write everyone brilliantly! This is the first JN fic I've read in a LONG time, and I'm SO glad it was, because it's awesome! You go, girl! Can't wait for more!
~Ally
-@Ally: OMG, thanks Ally! Wow, what an awesome compliment! You could really visualize her ever move? **is honored** :dance:
Thanks so much again! And you can't wait for more? ... then I guess you'll just have to come on more often! :P
Oh, wow. This fanfic is amazing! A cliffhanger already? I can't wait to read the next chapter!
-@JimmySpaz: (I think you're name is Isaac?) Thanks! Cliffies rule! :D Thanks again!
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 04:03 PM
Erm, actually, my name is Kim. :P You're very welcome. You definitely deserve MEGA-praise for your writing.-@JimmySpaz: (I think you're name is Isaac?) Thanks! Cliffies rule! :D Thanks again!
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 04:10 PM
Really? Oh, nevermind, I know who I'm confusing you with, lol.
The end was originally gunna be like, Chapter 5 or something.
After the zap of color ended (and it had been much longer than Carl’s), the mist evaporated (that hadn’t happened to Carl either) Cindy “examined herself for weirdness,” as she put it.
“Well, lucky for you, Ned-tron, nothing seems to be wrong with me,” Cindy said, relieved. A feeling of anti-climax washed over her.
“You mean, other than what was wrong with you before?” Jimmy sneered, high-fiving Sheen.
Cindy glowered at him. “You’re lucky, Neutron—oh my gosh!”
“What?” asked Carl, alarmed.
“My nail polish!” she gasped. Everyone else sighed with relief and glared at her. “No, guys, I’m serious! When I put it on, it was clear. Now it’s red—ah! And now it’s yellow!”
Interested, Jimmy came over. He put on some sort of goggles and picked up her hand, x-raying it.
Oh my gosh, he’s actually holding my hand, Cindy thought, and her nails turned white.
“Interesting,” said Jimmy thoughtfully.
“What?” Back to yellow.
“There seems to be nothing wrong with the bone structure of your hand; even when the nails are changing color the phalanges stay in place. I’ll be right back.” Jimmy left the lab for a few minutes and Cindy sighed. Then, “Libby, are you done with my braid?” Her nails turned green, and this time they noticed that so did—
“Your hair!” Libby asked. “Cindy! The braid turned green!”
“What?!” Cindy exclaimed, pulling out a mirror.
“It went back to norm—it’s green again!” Carl shrieked.
“Man, this is so cool!” Sheen marveled. “It’s just like the first UltraLord TV movie: Attack of the Green People That Turned Yellow!”
Cindy calmed down long enough to insult Sheen and when she did, her nails and hair turned purple. “Sheen, what kind of idiotic name is that? I can’t believe you watch that garbage! Well, actually, I can.”
Sheen smacked his head. “You’re right! It was called Attack of the Green People That Turned Purple!” he recalled. “Turned yellow. . . pfff, that is idiotic.”
“Hey, this purple looks good on me. I think I’ll keep it. . . oh, ugh, never mind. I’m green again.” Then Cindy had an idea. “I’ve got it! This problem was caused by nail polish, right? So if I just cover it up, you won’t be able to tell!”
“Cindy, I don’t think that’ll work. . .” Libby began.
Too late. Cindy was already rummaging through Jimmy’s drawers.
“Come on, he must have some paint in here somewhere. . . Oh, I don’t believe it!” Cindy’s strand of hair turned a blue so bright that it was almost blinding.
“What?” the boys said together.
“I found a picture of Betty Quinlan in here!” Cindy exclaimed.
Libby groaned. “Focus girl, focus!”
“Okay, okay. . . here’s some paint!” Cindy dipped the brush into the bottle and did a quick coat. “Ta-da!”
Libby examined her hand and laughed.
“I hate to break it to you, Cin, but look!”
Cindy fearfully looked at her fingers: the red paint was being melted away by yellow!
Jimmy fell into the lab before Cindy could freak out too much.
“Neutron, what’s happening?”
“You probably won’t like it, but I did some quick researching scans of the x-ray—” he showed Cindy and the others the papers he was holding; Cindy managed to read XYXFOAZXXRTSTSBBXIMCXYXXJCCSL before she got too dizzy—“and I’ve concluded based on this that you have become some sort of human mood ring.”
“You turned me into a mood ring?!” Cindy shrieked, furious.
“Well, I’m trying to find the antidote. . . in the meantime, I’ve printed out the colors and what they mean. . . read it. . .”
Cindy tuned him out. Wow, she thought, he really looks good in a lab coat, doesn’t he? Though not as good as he did in a tux at Jet Fusion’s wedding. . .
“And white is for, um, love,” Jimmy finished, blushing when Cindy’s braid had turned white. Of course, once she realized this, it turned brown.
“Uh, thanks, Spew-tron,” Cindy said, trying to act like she heard everything he said.
“Well, um, here’s the list. . . we should probably get upstairs, my mom called all of your moms, so they’ll be here soon. . .” still embarrassed, Jimmy led them to his house.
As she was walking, Cindy looked over the page Jimmy had printed out.
RED-anger
ORANGE-disgust
YELLOW-fear/worry
GREEN-vanity
BLUE-jealousy
PURPLE-unkindness
GOLD-denial
SILVER-untruthfulness
BROWN-embarrassment
BLACK-hatred
GRAY-boredom
PINK-excitement
WHITE-love
So. . . I’m in love with Neutron? Cindy thought. Nah. . .
But somehow, without even looking down, she knew that her nails had just turned gold. . .
The end was originally gunna be like, Chapter 5 or something.
After the zap of color ended (and it had been much longer than Carl’s), the mist evaporated (that hadn’t happened to Carl either) Cindy “examined herself for weirdness,” as she put it.
“Well, lucky for you, Ned-tron, nothing seems to be wrong with me,” Cindy said, relieved. A feeling of anti-climax washed over her.
“You mean, other than what was wrong with you before?” Jimmy sneered, high-fiving Sheen.
Cindy glowered at him. “You’re lucky, Neutron—oh my gosh!”
“What?” asked Carl, alarmed.
“My nail polish!” she gasped. Everyone else sighed with relief and glared at her. “No, guys, I’m serious! When I put it on, it was clear. Now it’s red—ah! And now it’s yellow!”
Interested, Jimmy came over. He put on some sort of goggles and picked up her hand, x-raying it.
Oh my gosh, he’s actually holding my hand, Cindy thought, and her nails turned white.
“Interesting,” said Jimmy thoughtfully.
“What?” Back to yellow.
“There seems to be nothing wrong with the bone structure of your hand; even when the nails are changing color the phalanges stay in place. I’ll be right back.” Jimmy left the lab for a few minutes and Cindy sighed. Then, “Libby, are you done with my braid?” Her nails turned green, and this time they noticed that so did—
“Your hair!” Libby asked. “Cindy! The braid turned green!”
“What?!” Cindy exclaimed, pulling out a mirror.
“It went back to norm—it’s green again!” Carl shrieked.
“Man, this is so cool!” Sheen marveled. “It’s just like the first UltraLord TV movie: Attack of the Green People That Turned Yellow!”
Cindy calmed down long enough to insult Sheen and when she did, her nails and hair turned purple. “Sheen, what kind of idiotic name is that? I can’t believe you watch that garbage! Well, actually, I can.”
Sheen smacked his head. “You’re right! It was called Attack of the Green People That Turned Purple!” he recalled. “Turned yellow. . . pfff, that is idiotic.”
“Hey, this purple looks good on me. I think I’ll keep it. . . oh, ugh, never mind. I’m green again.” Then Cindy had an idea. “I’ve got it! This problem was caused by nail polish, right? So if I just cover it up, you won’t be able to tell!”
“Cindy, I don’t think that’ll work. . .” Libby began.
Too late. Cindy was already rummaging through Jimmy’s drawers.
“Come on, he must have some paint in here somewhere. . . Oh, I don’t believe it!” Cindy’s strand of hair turned a blue so bright that it was almost blinding.
“What?” the boys said together.
“I found a picture of Betty Quinlan in here!” Cindy exclaimed.
Libby groaned. “Focus girl, focus!”
“Okay, okay. . . here’s some paint!” Cindy dipped the brush into the bottle and did a quick coat. “Ta-da!”
Libby examined her hand and laughed.
“I hate to break it to you, Cin, but look!”
Cindy fearfully looked at her fingers: the red paint was being melted away by yellow!
Jimmy fell into the lab before Cindy could freak out too much.
“Neutron, what’s happening?”
“You probably won’t like it, but I did some quick researching scans of the x-ray—” he showed Cindy and the others the papers he was holding; Cindy managed to read XYXFOAZXXRTSTSBBXIMCXYXXJCCSL before she got too dizzy—“and I’ve concluded based on this that you have become some sort of human mood ring.”
“You turned me into a mood ring?!” Cindy shrieked, furious.
“Well, I’m trying to find the antidote. . . in the meantime, I’ve printed out the colors and what they mean. . . read it. . .”
Cindy tuned him out. Wow, she thought, he really looks good in a lab coat, doesn’t he? Though not as good as he did in a tux at Jet Fusion’s wedding. . .
“And white is for, um, love,” Jimmy finished, blushing when Cindy’s braid had turned white. Of course, once she realized this, it turned brown.
“Uh, thanks, Spew-tron,” Cindy said, trying to act like she heard everything he said.
“Well, um, here’s the list. . . we should probably get upstairs, my mom called all of your moms, so they’ll be here soon. . .” still embarrassed, Jimmy led them to his house.
As she was walking, Cindy looked over the page Jimmy had printed out.
RED-anger
ORANGE-disgust
YELLOW-fear/worry
GREEN-vanity
BLUE-jealousy
PURPLE-unkindness
GOLD-denial
SILVER-untruthfulness
BROWN-embarrassment
BLACK-hatred
GRAY-boredom
PINK-excitement
WHITE-love
So. . . I’m in love with Neutron? Cindy thought. Nah. . .
But somehow, without even looking down, she knew that her nails had just turned gold. . .
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 04:22 PM
OMG, if you could see me, I'd be smiling so big!!!
I LOVED this chapter!!! You did a terrific job!!!! ^_^ ^_^ :D
I LOVED this chapter!!! You did a terrific job!!!! ^_^ ^_^ :D
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 04:25 PM
Oh! This is great! Super writing, Sunnstar. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 04:28 PM
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Same as Chica here. Seriously the ending part on it was truthful! I LOVE this! Its so awesome, Sunny! Could your awesomeness be any more awesomer?(Eh, I think I just killed the english language there.) Anywho, totally write more soon! PLEASE. I'll surely die if you don't. And you don't want your Mandie dead do ya?
Heehee! I can't WAIT for the next chapter. it feels like if its not posted int he next fifteen minutes, I'll blow! Lolz.
Btw, I have a question, again. Um, why is Cindy so self centered? That doesn't seem like her at all. :o Did I skim something?! --is about to mentally kick self--
-Amanda :)
Same as Chica here. Seriously the ending part on it was truthful! I LOVE this! Its so awesome, Sunny! Could your awesomeness be any more awesomer?(Eh, I think I just killed the english language there.) Anywho, totally write more soon! PLEASE. I'll surely die if you don't. And you don't want your Mandie dead do ya?
Heehee! I can't WAIT for the next chapter. it feels like if its not posted int he next fifteen minutes, I'll blow! Lolz.
Btw, I have a question, again. Um, why is Cindy so self centered? That doesn't seem like her at all. :o Did I skim something?! --is about to mentally kick self--
-Amanda :)
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 04:34 PM
OMG, if you could see me, I'd be smiling so big!!!
I LOVED this chapter!!! You did a terrific job!!!! ^_^ ^_^ :D
-@Chica: LOL Thanks!
I'm glad you loved it! Thanks again! :P
Oh! This is great! Super writing, Sunnstar. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
-@JimmySpaz: Thanks Kim!!
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Same as Chica here. Seriously the ending part on it was truthful! I LOVE this! Its so awesome, Sunny! Could your awesomeness be any more awesomer?(Eh, I think I just killed the english language there.) Anywho, totally write more soon! PLEASE. I'll surely die if you don't. And you don't want your Mandie dead do ya?
Heehee! I can't WAIT for the next chapter. it feels like if its not posted int he next fifteen minutes, I'll blow! Lolz.
Btw, I have a question, again. Um, why is Cindy so self centered? That doesn't seem like her at all. :o Did I skim something?! --is about to mentally kick self--
-Amanda :)
-@Amanda: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, thanks, Mandie!! :bff: No, I definitely don't want you to die, so it'll be soon.
Don't blow, either! :D
It's a fanfic. That's the point. =D And in some episodes, she IS self-centered.
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 04:38 PM
Oh.
--mentally kicks self--
-Amanda :)
--mentally kicks self--
-Amanda :)
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 04:39 PM
Great fanfic Sunny!
-You've really captured the characters, especially Sheen.
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-You've really captured the characters, especially Sheen.
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 04:48 PM
Oh.
--mentally kicks self--
-Amanda :)
-@Amanda: LOL.
Great fanfic Sunny!
-You've really captured the characters, especially Sheen.
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 05:33 PM
(I edited Chapter I's picture again)
Edit:: And Chapter II's
Edit:: And Chapter II's
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 05:43 PM
ok let's imagine I'm Cindy this would have been my colours ( I added some I needed more :P :
gold
aqua (amusement)
gold
sky blue (flatered)
pink
fuchsia (expecting)
red
lime (surprise)
blue
fuchsia
brown
now why:
I was gold when I saw u posted this, so I decided to come to read it, and I turned aqua when I was reading the intro (btw I love ur intros!! :kawaii: ) until I arrived to my drum roll!!! I turned gold again and then totally sky blue!!!!!! I couldn't believe it! such an honor it is! and with that thought I turned pink I was so happy and looking forward to chapter one, that's when I turned fuchsia, until I got to chappie one but when I finished I turned red how could u leave us with a cliffy!! and when I changed the page I was lime! u have already posted chapter 2!! and when I finished reading it I totally turned blue how could anyone write SO good and now I'm fuchsia, because I can't wait for chapter 3 and right now I just changed to brown for no having replied earlier! :D hope u liked it!
oh u read it! I curse that online list lol :P hope u had enjoyed this better than my last post :P
besitos! :bff:
o:) Andre o:)
edit yes sorry for the delay :P oh and nice pics and in chapter 2 orange is yellow and yellow is orange
gold
aqua (amusement)
gold
sky blue (flatered)
pink
fuchsia (expecting)
red
lime (surprise)
blue
fuchsia
brown
now why:
I was gold when I saw u posted this, so I decided to come to read it, and I turned aqua when I was reading the intro (btw I love ur intros!! :kawaii: ) until I arrived to my drum roll!!! I turned gold again and then totally sky blue!!!!!! I couldn't believe it! such an honor it is! and with that thought I turned pink I was so happy and looking forward to chapter one, that's when I turned fuchsia, until I got to chappie one but when I finished I turned red how could u leave us with a cliffy!! and when I changed the page I was lime! u have already posted chapter 2!! and when I finished reading it I totally turned blue how could anyone write SO good and now I'm fuchsia, because I can't wait for chapter 3 and right now I just changed to brown for no having replied earlier! :D hope u liked it!
oh u read it! I curse that online list lol :P hope u had enjoyed this better than my last post :P
besitos! :bff:
o:) Andre o:)
edit yes sorry for the delay :P oh and nice pics and in chapter 2 orange is yellow and yellow is orange
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 05:47 PM
DON?T READ THIS YET!!!!!
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ok let's imagine I'm Cindy this would have been my colours:
turquois amusement
gold
pink
sky blue flatered
fuchsia expecting
lime surprise
-@Andrea: ...okay...
Sorry, too late, I already read it before you put in the "don't read this" thingy.
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 06:01 PM
Um, no offense, Andre, but are you gunna comment on either of the chapters?
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 06:46 PM
Ooh, nice job with Chapter 2... even though I've already read it. XD I lol'd when she went to gold. Cindy's so full of denial, that if she tried to eat it, she'd coke on it. ;] Denialdenialdenial... that reminds me of my super-old JN fanfiction. Sorry LOL.
Anyway, again, great job! I can't wait to see what you have in store next, cause I can't remember if I've read Chapter 3 or not. :P My memory's fuzzy. Post it soon or we'll start a MOB! :angrymob:
Love,
Krista :lol:
Anyway, again, great job! I can't wait to see what you have in store next, cause I can't remember if I've read Chapter 3 or not. :P My memory's fuzzy. Post it soon or we'll start a MOB! :angrymob:
Love,
Krista :lol:
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Posted 03 September 2007 - 06:58 PM
Ooh, nice job with Chapter 2... even though I've already read it. XD I lol'd when she went to gold. Cindy's so full of denial, that if she tried to eat it, she'd coke on it. ;] Denialdenialdenial... that reminds me of my super-old JN fanfiction. Sorry LOL.
Anyway, again, great job! I can't wait to see what you have in store next, cause I can't remember if I've read Chapter 3 or not. :P My memory's fuzzy. Post it soon or we'll start a MOB! :angrymob:
Love,
Krista :lol:
-@Krista: Thanks! EVEN THOUGH you've already read it ;) Yes, she is full of denial, which is fun to write, lol
You did, I think you read until 5.
Thanks again!
Love,
Rachel :lol: (<<you're right, signing your name IS fun!)
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