I'm sure you're a great fanfic writer, Pigquet.
i would like to see you try to write one.
Aww, you can talk about yourself in my fic.
That's what friends are for. Lol.
See ya later, Athena.
Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius: Big Brother
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Posted 01 September 2008 - 02:34 AM
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nice chapter ^_^
nice chapter ^_^
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Posted 01 September 2008 - 02:50 AM
it would be really cool ^_^ I hope u write sth soonHaha, sure!
And, I LITTLE. I started to write a few, then got distracted, and even when I do still I get hesitent to post 'em; even though EVERYONE here says I should :rolleyes: I know it doesn't matter, so I should stop being lazy and do so. I told Katie I was considering at least trying again, so maybe.
Sorry.
Alright, I'll stop talking about myself in your fic's topic, haha.
See you later then.
B) Pigquet
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ooooh sorry for the off topic :wacko: :grr:
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Posted 02 September 2008 - 06:45 PM
Gretchen, I'm sorry about all that stuff I said to you in the Voice Actors forum.
i had no right to do that to you, and if you don't want me to reply to your story anymore, I understand.
But I just want to say that your story is great. Yay, the babies were born.
I hope you forgive me Gretchen. I'm sorry. -_-
ToKi
i had no right to do that to you, and if you don't want me to reply to your story anymore, I understand.
But I just want to say that your story is great. Yay, the babies were born.
I hope you forgive me Gretchen. I'm sorry. -_-
ToKi
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Posted 04 September 2008 - 08:43 AM
*GASP* The Babies were born!!!! YAY!
I love how it's going so far....
Daing I wait for the nxt chapter.
I'm extra happy today cause I'm no longer grounded off the computer!!! :lol: I have been suffering from withdrawal :unsure:
Hope to see nxt chappie soon!!
^Kaytron^
I love how it's going so far....
Daing I wait for the nxt chapter.
I'm extra happy today cause I'm no longer grounded off the computer!!! :lol: I have been suffering from withdrawal :unsure:
Hope to see nxt chappie soon!!
^Kaytron^
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Posted 06 September 2008 - 03:00 AM
Thanks Kaytron and Toki for replying to my story.
I'll have chpater 21 up ASAP, I am just very busy now that school is back.
I'll have chpater 21 up ASAP, I am just very busy now that school is back.
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Posted 06 September 2008 - 03:17 AM
Awesome chapter, Gretchen! can't wait to read chapter 21.
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Posted 14 September 2008 - 03:18 AM
Because I have not updated this fic in so long, I'm doing two chapters.
Here's chapter 21:
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Chapter 21 Part 1: Visiting the babies.
Jimmy was happy to finally be a big brother, and his friends were coming to see them. Cindy and Libby along with Sheen and Carl were going to see them also. They were coming over in a few minutes. "Oh I can't wait till they get here." Jimmy said. "Calm down, Jimmy. They will be here,"Judy said. Jillian and Elizabeth were now a day old. For Jimmy and his family had stayed in the hospital overnight. It was now 10:00 on a Saturday morning. Jimmy was still tired for he went to bed at 4 in the morning because the babies were born at 3:20 in the morning. Finally Carl, Sheen, Libby, and Cindy all came with their families to see the two new additions to the Neutron family. "Oh, Judy, they are absolutley adorable," Mrs. Vortex said. "Thank you, Sasha," Judy said. All of the adults congratulated Hugh and Judy, while Jimmy's friends congratulated him.
"Congratulations Jimmy. They're so cute," Libby said. "Thanks Libby." Jimmy said. "Oh, Jimmy, they're adorable." Cindy said. Jimmy smiled. "Thank you, Cindy," he said. "You're now a big brother, Jim." Carl said. "I know. It's exciting."Jimmy said. "I know," Sheen said. Then he looked at the babies. "Oh man, how am I suppose to tell them apart?" "The one in the purple hat is Jillian Margaret, the one in the pink hat is Elizabeth Katilda." Jimmy said. Everyone looked at the babies. They were very cute.
Chapter 21 Part 2:
Jimmy's friends stayed awhile, and after they had lunch, they went home. "I'll see you when you come home, Jimmy," Cindy said. Jimmy smiled. "I'll be waiting to see you Cindy. On Monday." he said. They hugged each other, and then Cindy and her family left. Later that afternoon, Jimmy tried to imagine what his sisters would be like when they got older. Would they be smart like him? Or would they be just average people. The only way he would find out was to see if they started to do things earlier than they should be. When he was little, he was told that he started walking at 7 months old because of him being a genius. If they learned that early, then he knew they would be a genius. But he didn't want to rush them growing up. After all, they had only been in the world for 1 day and a half.
"Why must the good die young?"-Sheen Estavez
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Enjoy this chapter.
And reply.
Here's chapter 21:
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Chapter 21 Part 1: Visiting the babies.
Jimmy was happy to finally be a big brother, and his friends were coming to see them. Cindy and Libby along with Sheen and Carl were going to see them also. They were coming over in a few minutes. "Oh I can't wait till they get here." Jimmy said. "Calm down, Jimmy. They will be here,"Judy said. Jillian and Elizabeth were now a day old. For Jimmy and his family had stayed in the hospital overnight. It was now 10:00 on a Saturday morning. Jimmy was still tired for he went to bed at 4 in the morning because the babies were born at 3:20 in the morning. Finally Carl, Sheen, Libby, and Cindy all came with their families to see the two new additions to the Neutron family. "Oh, Judy, they are absolutley adorable," Mrs. Vortex said. "Thank you, Sasha," Judy said. All of the adults congratulated Hugh and Judy, while Jimmy's friends congratulated him.
"Congratulations Jimmy. They're so cute," Libby said. "Thanks Libby." Jimmy said. "Oh, Jimmy, they're adorable." Cindy said. Jimmy smiled. "Thank you, Cindy," he said. "You're now a big brother, Jim." Carl said. "I know. It's exciting."Jimmy said. "I know," Sheen said. Then he looked at the babies. "Oh man, how am I suppose to tell them apart?" "The one in the purple hat is Jillian Margaret, the one in the pink hat is Elizabeth Katilda." Jimmy said. Everyone looked at the babies. They were very cute.
Chapter 21 Part 2:
Jimmy's friends stayed awhile, and after they had lunch, they went home. "I'll see you when you come home, Jimmy," Cindy said. Jimmy smiled. "I'll be waiting to see you Cindy. On Monday." he said. They hugged each other, and then Cindy and her family left. Later that afternoon, Jimmy tried to imagine what his sisters would be like when they got older. Would they be smart like him? Or would they be just average people. The only way he would find out was to see if they started to do things earlier than they should be. When he was little, he was told that he started walking at 7 months old because of him being a genius. If they learned that early, then he knew they would be a genius. But he didn't want to rush them growing up. After all, they had only been in the world for 1 day and a half.
"Why must the good die young?"-Sheen Estavez
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Enjoy this chapter.
And reply.
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Posted 14 September 2008 - 03:37 AM
Cool chapters, Gretchen! They were so sweet! I can just picture how adorable Jimmy's new sisters must be. =D
~Rachel~
~Rachel~
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Posted 14 September 2008 - 05:09 AM
Wow Gretchen that was so wonderful ^_^
:kawaii: Don't forget to update when you can ok??
Bye bye ^_^
:kawaii: Don't forget to update when you can ok??
Bye bye ^_^
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Posted 14 September 2008 - 03:04 PM
Nice chapter Gretchen. I already know which baby is the genius like Jimmy, but I won't say.
Post again soon, BB,
Celeste
Post again soon, BB,
Celeste
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Posted 14 September 2008 - 03:56 PM
Hey Rachel and Celeste, thanks for replying. You too Noemi.
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Posted 19 September 2008 - 11:05 PM
Wow Gretchen, that chapter was amazing!
I can't wait to read more!
Post soon.
ToKi
I can't wait to read more!
Post soon.
ToKi
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Posted 20 September 2008 - 11:24 PM
Thanks for replying Toki.
I'll have chapter 22 up soon!
I'll have chapter 22 up soon!
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Posted 21 September 2008 - 01:59 AM
Alright, I'm going to post chapter 22.
This is where I stopped writing this story on nick.com, but don't worry, I will continue it on here.
But I won't be copying and pasting anymore, I'll actually have to write that chapters now.
So enjoy chapter 22.
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Chapter 22 Part 1:
The next day, we were able to go home from the hospital. Now that the babies were 2 days old. I couldn't wait to give them the rattles I made for them, but they were still to young to play with them. They were still only newborns. When we got home, Elizabeth started to cry. "WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" she cried. "Mooooooooooooommm!" I exclaimed. "Why is Elizabeth crying?" "Hmm. I don't know," Mom said. Dad came in the room with Jillian, she too was crying. "Oh, that one too is crying? What do they want Sugar Booger?" Dad asked. "I don't know." Mom said. "Let me try holding one," I said. Mom gave me Elizabeth. She screamed right in my ear. "Owwwwwwwww!" I screamed. Then Elizabeth and Jillian cried louder. "P.U. I smell something. Uhh maybe they need a change, "Hugh said. "That's why their crying," Mom said. She changed each of their diapers. And they stopped crying. I sighed. I know I wanted to be a big brother. It was my dream, but now that there would be a lot of crying, things would be much different at our house. And it would be harder for Mom and Dad too, because now they had to take care of two babies now instead of one like they did eleven years ago to me. Mom had told me on the way home that I would need to help too. So I wouldn't have much time in the lab anymore, but I'm sure I'll get use to it.
Chapter 22 Part 2:
I mean how hard could it be taking care of two babies? They don't stay babies for long. Once they get potty trained it's okay, but then all the temper tantrums come. Ican see my little sisters are okay now, and maybe when I'm around them, I should talk normal, because if I talk like a genius, they won't understand what I'm saying. So that's what I decided to do. If they do turn out to be geniuses, then they will know what I'm saying. But until then, I would justhave to talk normal. I am now Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius, Big Brother, If Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius did cool things, let's just see what Jimmy Neutron, Boy Genius Big Brother can do.
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That's it! That's where I stopped on nick.com, but don't worry, I will continue this.
I'll have chapter 23 up soon. I should have this story finished before this year is done, then I will start another one.
So enjoy this chapter. Chapter 23 will be up soon!
Thanks,
This is where I stopped writing this story on nick.com, but don't worry, I will continue it on here.
But I won't be copying and pasting anymore, I'll actually have to write that chapters now.
So enjoy chapter 22.
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Chapter 22 Part 1:
The next day, we were able to go home from the hospital. Now that the babies were 2 days old. I couldn't wait to give them the rattles I made for them, but they were still to young to play with them. They were still only newborns. When we got home, Elizabeth started to cry. "WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" she cried. "Mooooooooooooommm!" I exclaimed. "Why is Elizabeth crying?" "Hmm. I don't know," Mom said. Dad came in the room with Jillian, she too was crying. "Oh, that one too is crying? What do they want Sugar Booger?" Dad asked. "I don't know." Mom said. "Let me try holding one," I said. Mom gave me Elizabeth. She screamed right in my ear. "Owwwwwwwww!" I screamed. Then Elizabeth and Jillian cried louder. "P.U. I smell something. Uhh maybe they need a change, "Hugh said. "That's why their crying," Mom said. She changed each of their diapers. And they stopped crying. I sighed. I know I wanted to be a big brother. It was my dream, but now that there would be a lot of crying, things would be much different at our house. And it would be harder for Mom and Dad too, because now they had to take care of two babies now instead of one like they did eleven years ago to me. Mom had told me on the way home that I would need to help too. So I wouldn't have much time in the lab anymore, but I'm sure I'll get use to it.
Chapter 22 Part 2:
I mean how hard could it be taking care of two babies? They don't stay babies for long. Once they get potty trained it's okay, but then all the temper tantrums come. Ican see my little sisters are okay now, and maybe when I'm around them, I should talk normal, because if I talk like a genius, they won't understand what I'm saying. So that's what I decided to do. If they do turn out to be geniuses, then they will know what I'm saying. But until then, I would justhave to talk normal. I am now Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius, Big Brother, If Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius did cool things, let's just see what Jimmy Neutron, Boy Genius Big Brother can do.
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That's it! That's where I stopped on nick.com, but don't worry, I will continue this.
I'll have chapter 23 up soon. I should have this story finished before this year is done, then I will start another one.
So enjoy this chapter. Chapter 23 will be up soon!
Thanks,
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Posted 21 September 2008 - 02:07 AM
Aw! Jimmy's gonna help out with taking care of his baby sisters now. This should be really cute; he's been so excited. He's going to get tired at times, but I think he's going to make a great big brother. ^_^
This is sweet. =)
~Rachel~
This is sweet. =)
~Rachel~
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Posted 21 September 2008 - 06:30 PM
Nice new chapter, Gretchen.
Can't wait to read more.
Your best friend,
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Can't wait to read more.
Your best friend,
Celeste
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Posted 22 September 2008 - 02:02 AM
Aww, so cute!
I have twin sisters, actually. They're very important to me, and I know if Jimmy had little sisters, he'd feel that way too.
Good job, Gretchen! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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I have twin sisters, actually. They're very important to me, and I know if Jimmy had little sisters, he'd feel that way too.
Good job, Gretchen! Can't wait for the next chapter!
.:!Gwen!:.
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Posted 22 September 2008 - 05:12 AM
Awesome chapter Gretch!
I loved it!
It must be nice to have little twin sisters :D
I wonder what'll happen in chap 23.
^Kaytron^ :ph43r:
I loved it!
It must be nice to have little twin sisters :D
I wonder what'll happen in chap 23.
^Kaytron^ :ph43r:
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