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Posted 31 January 2009 - 01:35 AM

Well, here's what you've been waiting for guys!

Chapter 27 is coming at you!
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Chapter 27: Narrated by Hugh

It was now the month of June. The babies were two months old. They were starting to play a little. Babies don't do much when they're little.
But I tried to help as much as I could.
The rest of the time I spent making ducks in my workshop.

I was in my workshop when Judy came in.
"Hugh, are you going to spend all day with your duck collection?"
"I'm making new ones," I said.
"You should be helping me with the babies.
"I am helping you with the babies, Sugar Booger. I'm making them ducks to play with."
"Hugh, they're growing babies. They don't want to play with their own toys, not with ducks."
"Aww, Judy. They're sleeping right? I can make them."
"Well, do it quietly," Judy said.

She left and I got to work on making my ducks.
I had nothing else to do.
The babies were sleeping, Jimbo was making a plan to get that scientist back, so I had to do something.

I worked in my workshop for a good while, making all kinds of neat ducks, and giving them all names.
Then I set them neatly down on the table to dry.
Then I went to see what was happening with Jimbo, Judy, the twins.

Part 2: I walked into the living room.

"Well, it's about time you came out, Hugh," said Judy.
"Where's Jimbo?" I asked.
"He went into his lab to make that invention he wanted to make. I really just hope he is careful when he gets him back."
"Aww, don't worry, Judy. I had my share of getting people back for things they did to me."
"Well, were you ever caught?"
"Only once. By my mom, and I got grounded. But Jimmy's smart, he won't get caught," I told her.
"I hope so," said Judy.

Finally, Jimmy came out of his lab when it was dinner time.

"Mom, Dad, I finished my invention," he said.

He held it up to show us.

"Great Jimbo. Can you tell us about it?"
"No, it's a secret. But I'll tell you about it if it works," Jimmy said.
"Well, just be careful when you do it, Jimmy," Judy said.
"Don't worry, Mom, I have my ways of doing things," Jimbo said.
"See Judy? I told you Jimbo would have a way of doing it."

Then we sat down to dinner and enjoyed our meal.
"Hugh, you feed Lizzie and Jillie this time," Judy said.
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I hope you enjoy this. Chapter 28 coming soon, stay tuned.
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#242 Kaytron

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Posted 31 January 2009 - 01:43 AM

nice chapter, Gretchen! ^_^

Now that Jimmy's invention is finished, I can't wait to see what he'll do with it!

And the babies are playing together! Aww :wub:

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Awesome :thumbsup:
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Posted 31 January 2009 - 01:44 AM

Thanks for replying Kaytron.

Oh you'll love how Jimmy gets the scientist back.
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#244 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 31 January 2009 - 02:05 AM

I can't wait, either! Hope it's soon! :thumbsup:
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Posted 31 January 2009 - 02:06 AM

It comes in chapter 29.

So you have another chapter before you find out.

Thanks for replying Amelia.
I replied to yours too.
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Posted 31 January 2009 - 10:41 PM

I have Chapter 28 written. I'll put that up tomorrow though.

I want to give people a chance to reply to this chapter first.
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#247 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 31 January 2009 - 11:21 PM

Sounds like a good idea! ;)
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Posted 31 January 2009 - 11:45 PM

I can't make no promises though. I might actually take a long time to do it.

I hope not though.
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#249

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:51 AM

Hi Gretchen.

I read your next chapter. It's great!

Your sister,
Claudia
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#250

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:51 AM

I thought I told you not to post under my name.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:52 AM

Well I did! So deal with it.

Claudia
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:53 AM

I'm going to change my password so you can't come on under here!

If you want to be on here so much, sign up!
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#253

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:54 AM

No. I like coming under your name.

If you change it, I'll still find out.


And no! I don't want to make an account.

Claudia
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:54 AM

Well then quit posting under my name then.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:55 AM

Okay I will!

Good-bye!

Claudia
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:55 AM

Good she's gone.

Now anyone else besides Claudia, reply.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 01:55 AM

Hey Gretchen,

I'm sorry I haven't replied to this for awhile.

I'll have to go back and reread them to see where I left off, but your story is good, and I can't wait to read more!
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#258 J/C AVA

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 04:15 AM

Wow.

It's very unique that you include Hugh as a promenant character for at least a chapter, even written in the form of a diray entry. He should be shown in fics more often.

I really like it Gretchen. Careful details and diolouge that closely resembles the show.

Keep it up. I'm looking forward to it. ^_^
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 11:55 PM

Thanks for replying Athena and Pedro!
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Posted 02 February 2009 - 12:45 AM

I was supposed to put Chapter 28 up tonight, but I'll do it tomorrow.

My computer is acting weird tonight.

I think I might have a virus.

I can't use my laptop because the chapter is saved on my computer that is in my room.

I like having my own computer in my room, then I can have peace and quiet when I'm online on the internet.

I never use the downstairs one that much. That's for my sisters to play on.
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