Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius: Big Brother
#241
Posted 31 January 2009 - 01:35 AM
Chapter 27 is coming at you!
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Chapter 27: Narrated by Hugh
It was now the month of June. The babies were two months old. They were starting to play a little. Babies don't do much when they're little.
But I tried to help as much as I could.
The rest of the time I spent making ducks in my workshop.
I was in my workshop when Judy came in.
"Hugh, are you going to spend all day with your duck collection?"
"I'm making new ones," I said.
"You should be helping me with the babies.
"I am helping you with the babies, Sugar Booger. I'm making them ducks to play with."
"Hugh, they're growing babies. They don't want to play with their own toys, not with ducks."
"Aww, Judy. They're sleeping right? I can make them."
"Well, do it quietly," Judy said.
She left and I got to work on making my ducks.
I had nothing else to do.
The babies were sleeping, Jimbo was making a plan to get that scientist back, so I had to do something.
I worked in my workshop for a good while, making all kinds of neat ducks, and giving them all names.
Then I set them neatly down on the table to dry.
Then I went to see what was happening with Jimbo, Judy, the twins.
Part 2: I walked into the living room.
"Well, it's about time you came out, Hugh," said Judy.
"Where's Jimbo?" I asked.
"He went into his lab to make that invention he wanted to make. I really just hope he is careful when he gets him back."
"Aww, don't worry, Judy. I had my share of getting people back for things they did to me."
"Well, were you ever caught?"
"Only once. By my mom, and I got grounded. But Jimmy's smart, he won't get caught," I told her.
"I hope so," said Judy.
Finally, Jimmy came out of his lab when it was dinner time.
"Mom, Dad, I finished my invention," he said.
He held it up to show us.
"Great Jimbo. Can you tell us about it?"
"No, it's a secret. But I'll tell you about it if it works," Jimmy said.
"Well, just be careful when you do it, Jimmy," Judy said.
"Don't worry, Mom, I have my ways of doing things," Jimbo said.
"See Judy? I told you Jimbo would have a way of doing it."
Then we sat down to dinner and enjoyed our meal.
"Hugh, you feed Lizzie and Jillie this time," Judy said.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I hope you enjoy this. Chapter 28 coming soon, stay tuned.
#242
Posted 31 January 2009 - 01:43 AM
Now that Jimmy's invention is finished, I can't wait to see what he'll do with it!
And the babies are playing together! Aww :wub:
^Kaytron^ :ph43r:
Awesome :thumbsup:
#243
Posted 31 January 2009 - 01:44 AM
Oh you'll love how Jimmy gets the scientist back.
#244
Posted 31 January 2009 - 02:05 AM
#245
Posted 31 January 2009 - 02:06 AM
So you have another chapter before you find out.
Thanks for replying Amelia.
I replied to yours too.
#246
Posted 31 January 2009 - 10:41 PM
I want to give people a chance to reply to this chapter first.
#247
Posted 31 January 2009 - 11:21 PM
#248
Posted 31 January 2009 - 11:45 PM
I hope not though.
#249
Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:51 AM
I read your next chapter. It's great!
Your sister,
Claudia
#250
Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:51 AM
#251
Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:52 AM
Claudia
#252
Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:53 AM
If you want to be on here so much, sign up!
#253
Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:54 AM
If you change it, I'll still find out.
And no! I don't want to make an account.
Claudia
#254
Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:54 AM
#255
Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:55 AM
Good-bye!
Claudia
#256
Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:55 AM
Now anyone else besides Claudia, reply.
#257
Posted 01 February 2009 - 01:55 AM
I'm sorry I haven't replied to this for awhile.
I'll have to go back and reread them to see where I left off, but your story is good, and I can't wait to read more!
#258
Posted 01 February 2009 - 04:15 AM
It's very unique that you include Hugh as a promenant character for at least a chapter, even written in the form of a diray entry. He should be shown in fics more often.
I really like it Gretchen. Careful details and diolouge that closely resembles the show.
Keep it up. I'm looking forward to it. ^_^
#259
Posted 01 February 2009 - 11:55 PM
#260
Posted 02 February 2009 - 12:45 AM
My computer is acting weird tonight.
I think I might have a virus.
I can't use my laptop because the chapter is saved on my computer that is in my room.
I like having my own computer in my room, then I can have peace and quiet when I'm online on the internet.
I never use the downstairs one that much. That's for my sisters to play on.
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