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What do you dislike in a fan fiction?

Started by SheWolf , Dec 03 2011 09:01 AM

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#161 SheWolf

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Posted 03 December 2021 - 11:35 PM

I don't mind there being errors, no one's perfect, but if it's like every sentence, I'm out. Haha


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#162 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 04 December 2021 - 12:01 AM

Have you seen the most recent new fanfic/oneshot listed? Ugh, I read the summary and it disgusts me to the point that it almost literally makes me sick... >.<
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#163 Dr.~Zodiac~Phantom

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Posted 04 December 2021 - 12:03 AM

What was the plot to it? 

 

Also, I really hope you guys will like my fic. Like I said, it's a J/C one but it will be a little different. There will be some depressing parts in it but it will be mixed in with humor so as to not have it too sad or too happy. Just right.

 

I just have a huge fear that people won't like what I write and that's one of the reasons why I have left every story I have ever written private and to myself. But I know I can trust you guys in reading mine.

 

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#164 SheWolf

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Posted 04 December 2021 - 12:04 AM

Have you seen the most recent new fanfic/oneshot listed? Ugh, I read the summary and it disgusts me to the point that it almost literally makes me sick... >.<

No, not sure which you're referring to.


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#165 Katia11

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Posted 04 December 2021 - 09:12 PM

I have a suspicion to which you are referring, but that doesn’t ultimately matter. Because everyone likes different things. Besides, calling someone else’s work disgusting or sick isn’t really going to change anything about it.

So, my best advice is to just ignore it and don’t read it! :)
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#166 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 04 December 2021 - 11:03 PM

It's called Double Solution by Major144... You'll see what I'm talking about when you read the summary... :onfire:
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#167 Katia11

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Posted 04 December 2021 - 11:55 PM

Yes, I was pretty sure that's the one you were referring to. However, my original suggestion still stands, Em. Just don't read it. :)


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#168 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 05 December 2021 - 12:04 AM

No, I don't plan to, ever... I just CAN'T understand how a story with vore(violence and gore!!) in it is rated K+, not T or M... It's got the wrong rating... <_<
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#169 Katia11

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Posted 05 December 2021 - 12:36 AM

Well, unless you read it, don't think it deserves a R rating because there is violence/gore. There's some pretty weird stuff in the show too. 


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#170 SweeneyxxTodd

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Posted 05 December 2021 - 12:39 AM

No, I don't plan to, ever... I just CAN'T understand how a story with vore(violence and gore!!) in it is rated K+, not T or M... It's got the wrong rating... <_<


lol that's not what vore means, Emily. Vore is a sexual fetish, not a combination of the words violence and gore. Just FYI.
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#171 Katia11

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Posted 05 December 2021 - 12:48 AM

lol that's not what vore means, Emily. Vore is a sexual fetish, not a combination of the words violence and gore. Just FYI.


I didn’t know that either!
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#172 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 05 December 2021 - 12:58 AM

lol that's not what vore means, Emily. Vore is a sexual fetish, not a combination of the words violence and gore. Just FYI.


Oh, whoops! Gas planet... Still, that word combination would still make sense... But anyway, well, if it's something of that nature, it should be at least rated T, cuz that kinda content isn't meant for kids, nor is it deserving of the K+ rating... Seriously... That was not good judgement on the author(ess)'s part... <_< :facepalm:
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Posted 05 December 2021 - 01:14 AM

I just found the one shot and read it. I'm not entirely sure if the author knows what vore is either, but it was sorta related? But also definitely super tame. K+ was an appropriate rating for it.
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#174 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 05 December 2021 - 01:38 AM

Oh, okay, that makes sense, then... Still don't think I'll read it, though... :blink2:
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Posted 05 December 2021 - 03:51 AM

I mean, fair. It wasn't exactly good quality writing.
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#176 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 05 December 2021 - 04:04 AM

I'll take your word for it. ;) ^^;
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Posted 27 January 2022 - 09:38 PM

Length, too much dialogue, teen versions of characters


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#178 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 27 April 2022 - 10:43 PM

Now, I'm guilty of making the characters teens in most of my fics, but I always make sure that they are in character... I think I know the JN characters well enough by now to make sure of that... ;) It's just when they're OOC that it irks me to no end... <_<
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