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[J/C AVA]

The Introduction

*Life In Technicolor begins*

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[The screen shows a stretched stream of white light from left to right, as incoming stars rush through the screen]

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I Dream Of Jimmy Presents

A Jimmy Neutron production

A Pedro Mendoza Fic

Starring:

[As it gets closer, the light becomes brighter as the screen is sucked in a cominatcha, sucked through it in an accelerated pace until...]

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[The universe is shown in all it's vast intricateness, the sea of stars, the openness of it's beauty]

Jimmy Neutron

Cindy Vortex

Sheen Estevez

Libby Folfax

Carl Wheezer

In...

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The Comet Catalyst

*Valkyrie Missle Begins*

Silent...

Deep Silent Space...

Through the sea of space and time, a lone star, a burning ball of light sways like a leaf on a riptide through the water of stars. Away from pains death-like arms, on and on it had been journeying, through dimensions existence and the sea of escape. To find somewhere, anywhere, a semblance of living life, aimlessly through time's boundless tides.

[Spoken transmissions:]
Do you hear me out there I can hear you.
I got you I can hear you, over?
This is so strange,
I want to wish for something new,
This is the scariest thing I've ever done in my life,
Who do we think we are?
Angels and Airwaves?
Just hold on I got you.
I can see the sun coming up on the horizon.

[Asleep, she rests within her comet of solitude, along with dreams of being happy. Being happy, with happy people, in a happy world, in a happy family is all she ever wanted. And it's all she's been unknowingly searching for.]

[Anywhere, anyplace and anyone, was better than the gut-wrenching, horrible pain that lied behind her trail.]

Verse 1:
Everyone, everyone will listen
Even if it hurts sometimes
If you will come and hear the message
Everyone must learn to love again
Open up and come alive
And you will, can you hear my message
Leave your pain on the bedroom floor again
Bring a smile to survive
And do you think that you have it in you
If you're here and you're all alone tonight
Then I'll give you a free ride
Take a chance cause I know you want to

Chorus:
If only
You'll hold on
Just hold on
I'm here and
I'm with you
I'm here to
I feel you
We'll get through
I know this
I've seen it
A hundred times
A thousand times
Just one more time
With you and I
I'll pull you close
And then we'll say goodbye

[Engraved in her dreams, the screaming, the yelling, the cries and moans outside her city walls, the people dying, men, women, children, no longer walking but limp and crippled. The many, many faces, the many places, the many dreams she's seen crushed, buried and burned, underneath deaths soil.]

Verse 2:
Got alot oh heck to say
Even if it hurts sometimes
And if you will come and hear the message
And everyone will hope and pray
That the best will sure survive
And if it's true then you'll feel the message
A perfect life for a perfect brand new day
And you're the next in line
And do you think that you have it in you
So if you're here and your curious tonight
Then I'll give you a free ride
Take a chance cause I know you want to

Chorus:
If only
You'll hold on
Just hold on
I'm here and
I'm with you
I'm here to
I feel you
We'll get through
I know this
I've seen it
A hundred times
A thousand times
Just one more time
With you and I
I'll pull you close
And then we'll say goodbye

[Across the once-known planet, now called dwarf Pluto, past Jupiter, Mars, and the moon, the comet flies.]

[Spoken transmissions:]

[As it enters the Earth's atmosphere, it speeds downward, into the lives of five unlikely people...]

This is it
Who would've thought it would've turned out this way?
This is the closest thing to a mission I've known
I've never seen anything out here like this
Alright, I'm coming back around
It feels like we're moving faster...
The thresholds about to give...
We'll leave after the explosion
Who do we think we are?
We're Angels and Airwaves.

[Yes. This little bright ball of light and grace, will change everything...]

[J/C AVA]

Phase 1: From Beyond the Stars...

Part 1: The Mood Machine

[2 Days earlier - February 12th]

It’s a beautiful spring day in Retroville with the birds chirping, flowers blooming, and the sun shining brightly. In the classroom of Lindinburg Elementary during show and tell, Cindy Vortex finishes a self-written poem about a loving couple.

Cindy: And they lived happily ever after. The End.”

*A 10-second silence filled the air, then broken by an eruption of yelling and cheering*

Ms. Fowl: That was beautiful Cindy. How selfless of that prince to throw himself in that dark hole for his one true love.”

*She pats her teary eye with a handkerchief*

*Cindy bows before the class*

Cindy: Thank you. Thank you very much.

*As she walks past by Jimmy…*

Cindy: Top that, Neutron.

Ms. Fowl: Up next, Jimmy! Show us what non-threatening, non-lethal, and non-deathly invention you’ve concocted for us today, BWARK!

Jimmy: Ladies and gentlemen, allow me to present my 300th greatest invention ever made: The Neutronic Mood Machine!

*Out he showed in his hand a hand-sized remote made of an outer sleek and silvery-white metal with a small red knob in it’s center and what looked like a meter and at the very end an antenna. The class stared in amazement.*

Ms. Fowl: Very interesting Jimmy. What does it do?

Jimmy: The Mood Machine can change a person’s mood using energy found on any human brainwaves. And it acts like a radio where you can change the person’s mood by frequencies and airwaves like on any old radio. Like this!

*He points it towards Sheen, presses the button and out orange-like waves come out on Sheen*

Jimmy: Now, let’s see… *He observes the meter* Let’s try… sad!

*He turns the knob to sad, and right before the students eyes, Sheen starts crying hysterically.*

Sheen: WHY?! WHY?! WHY DID THEY CANCEL ULTRA LORD!!! THE WORLD… SO… CRUEL!

*He rests on Carl, looking rather uncomfortable*

Jimmy: Or let’s try… happy!

*He turns the knob again to happy, and instantly, his mood changes*

Sheen: CARL!! MY BEST FRIEND IN THE WHOLE WORLD!!

*He hugs Carl tight, nearly strangling him*

Carl: Ack! Sheen!

Jimmy: Uh oh! *He turns off the machine, returning Sheen back to his normal self*

Jimmy: Uhh, Sheen? How do you feel?

Sheen: Kinda dizzy… *holding his head* AWESOME!!

*Just then Principal Willoughby walks into the classroom*

Principal Willoughby: Hello Children!

*At that moment, the machine twitches with small sparks and is turned on at Willoughby in “angry” mode. Suddenly he starts prancing around like an ape*

Jimmy: What?! What’s going on?

*He looks at his machine to find it shaking*

Jimmy: Oh no! It’s malfunctioned!

*The kids rush in a panic to the other side of the room. Willoughby stomps around and beats his chest, then seeing Jimmy, prepares to attack*

Jimmy: Oh no!! C’mon, shut off already!!

*He hastily pushes buttons and right when Willoughby’s hands touch his neck ready to strangle him, the machine turns off, returning Willoughby back to normal. The kids breathed a sigh of relief. Standing dazed and dizzy, Willoughby staggers to stay up.*

Willoughby: Oh. What happened?

Jimmy: And that concludes my presentation thank you!

*He hastily walks back to his chair*

Willoughby: James Neutron!! You’re VERY lucky I’m in a good mood today. And do you know why?

Carl: ‘Cause you’re mommy packed your favorite lunch in your bag?

Sheen: Carl! Please, his mom doesn’t pack his own lunch for him. His butler probably does it for him.

Carl: Well, then does your butler make your food with lots of love…

Willoughby: OH BE QUIET!!!! -sigh- No. The reason why I’m in a good mood is because the school’s first annual Valentine’s Day dance is coming up soon.

Jimmy: Valentine’s Day dance?

Willoughby: That’s right. Think of it as your early glimpse of your future high school proms. Ha ha ha.

*The class falls indifferent to his joke*

Ms. Fowl: Oh that’s right! Valentine’s Day is coming up. How exciting!

Willoughby: Oh, tell me about it. Anyways, their’s also gonna be a couple contest as well and only the best and the brightest couple can win the very prestige honor of being Valentine couple of the hour!!

*The whole class simply mumbled in disinterest*

Willoughby: Did I mention that the winning couple also gets an exclusive, VIP access to the new and improved Retroland with the new Ultralord atomic rollercoaster, Lama love ranch AND an improved Tunnel of Love?

*And just like that all the kids faces light up amid cheers of celebration*

*The school bell rings*

Willoughby: Bye kids. Oh! And don’t forget that the dance starts at 8 PM sharp! So don’t be late.

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*Not long after, Jimmy, Sheen and Carl are on the way out of the school…*

Sheen: Man, me and Libs are gonna totally take the floor in this contest! Everyone’s so Ultra-whipped!!

Carl: Yeah. And Elke is coming to Retroville today for two weeks. She’s visiting her relatives so she can come to the contest with me.

Sheen: What about you dude? Who are you going to the contest with?

Jimmy: *He became very hesitant to answer*

Carl: Aw, c’mon. We all know you’re going with Betty Quinlan, Jimmy…

Jimmy: Actually guys, I’m NOT going with anyone this year.

*In disbelief, Carl and Sheen gasped*

Jimmy: I dunno. I mean I like girls and all but I just don’t buy the whole Valentine, Love thing. Y’know.

Carl: Then why you always blush whenever you see Betty Quinlan walk by?

Jimmy: I do NOT!!

Sheen: And why did you go all ga-ga-e seeing Cindy in her spacesuit when we were on mars?

Jimmy: GUYS!!

S & C: Sorry

Jimmy: -sigh- If you ask me, I think Valentine’s Day is just a stupid excuse to get kids to go goo-goo eyed at each other and call each other weird, lovely dovey names. Valentine’s Day dance? *Pfft!* It’s so silly, so stupid, so idiotic, so…

*He turns around to find none other than Betty Quinlan herself walking towards them.*

Jimmy: So… romantically… enchanting…

Betty: *In her usual seductive tone* Hey Jimmy. Are you going to the Valentine’s Day Contest?

Jimmy: *Twiddles with his fingers* Well, uh… I, ah… You see… I…

Betty: I’m going. Cause I sure love ‘ta dance! Tee Hee.

Jimmy: Oh! He he. That’s… great.

Betty: So, who’re going out to the dance with, Jimmy?

Jimmy: I, ah… I… I don’t have one… yet.

Betty: Aww. That’s too bad. I’m sure you’ll find one.

*Her cell phone rings*

Betty: Hello? Hi! Really? I’d love too! Where? Alright! See ya there! Bye!

Jimmy: Who was that?

Betty: Oh! That was Nick.

*At the instant mention of that name, Jimmy’s blood began to boil, although Betty was oblivious to it*

Betty: We’ve arranged a little get together thing for the dance.

Carl: What are you guys doing?

Betty: We’re helping Principal Willoughby arrange and plan the whole dance to make sure it’s all prepared for the big night. Besides, he asked us both personally.

*Jimmy couldn’t help but stare at the ground, his teeth grinding and his fists tightened hard*

Betty: Well, I gotta go. See you guys later. Oh! And Jimmy?

*He instantly woke from his angered moment*

Betty: Don’t worry, you’ll find a partner for the dance.

*At that moment, her face lit up in a glowing aura under the sunlight. Jimmy’s mouth instantly drops, seeing her radiant beauty past his eyes like a dove free from it‘s cage. And with that, she walks away*

Jimmy: Hmph! Call me Mr. doubtful but I’m not buying her thing with Nick one bit!

Carl: Aw. Cheer up Jimmy. I’m sure someone’s gonna ask you out to the dance.

Sheen: Yeah. Until then, you can borrow my extra large Ultralady action figure with plasma ray action and 1,000,1 girly phrases!

*Jimmy stares at Sheen*

Sheen: What?

Jimmy: Pfft! Like that’ll ever happen.

*He walks past Carl and Sheen, as he quietly mumbles to himself*

Jimmy: I wish Betty was my Valentine.

Sheen: Gee. He’s been very touchy lately!

Carl: Yeah. I hope he doesn’t get too down in the dumps.

Sheen: Hey! Maybe Ultralord is on!

Carl: Yeah! Let’s go, I’m starving.

*And with that, the two left to Sheen’s house…*

[J/C AVA]

Part 2: Jimmy Neutron - The American Idiot

*As Jimmy turns a corner towards the Candy bar, he suddenly stops. In front of him at a distance, Betty and Nick Dean stand in front of the Candy Bar doors*

Nick: Well, uh, since Willoughby assigned us as partners, I was kinda thinking of asking you..

Betty: Yeah?

*And to his fear, Jimmy's body fell cold at the incoming words..*

Nick: Will you be my Valentine at the dance?

*Even more so at Betty's response, for 5 long seconds until..*

Betty: Yes! I will.

*The two then hugged. Jimmy's heart sank, his face silently nodding as if he said No, no, no, no, no... . Without even confronting them, he runs away, tears dropping from his eyes.

Jimmy: Why!? Why me!? Why NICK?!? WHY!!?

*After running for 20 whole minutes, he finally slows down. Wiping the tears from his eyes, he simply walks around, contemplating over what he's seen and heard. His sadness turned into anger and disdain towards Nick.*

Jimmy: Hmph! Nick thinks he could just sweep Betty off her feet like that? He thinks he's so cool!

*He then catches Butch bullying Bolbi and then tossing him into a dumpster*

Jimmy: They all think they're so cool, bullying the weak kids around.

*As he walks all over Retroville, he notices all sorts of bullying and unjust treatment of nerds and kids like himself: Next to the Candy Bar, two bikers play around with a kids dollor, laughing at his helplessness, behind a dumpster, another bully beats up a kid where no one sees or hear his cries for help, two thugs push a kid on a wheelchair down the stairs laughing at his misery, another kid gets a wedgie as the rest all laugh around him. All this to his immense horror only interrupted by a nearby electronic store, with TVs displayed on it's window. An image of a macho jock comes on: "Hey babe, wanna see my muscles?" And behind him, a nerd sits all by himself all alone. Taken completely by bewilderment, confusion and anger, he asks himself...*

Jimmy: Am I gonna end up like that? A victim of that... misconfabulation? An American Idiot?

[American Idiot begins]

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[He immediately finds himself in a dark room, suddenly TVs appear, showing nerds and the like being victimized, looking on to his horror]

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Don't wanna be an American idiot
Don't want a nation under the new media
And can you hear the sound of hysteria
The subliminal mind stuck America

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[The rows of TVs suddenly shoot upwards overtaking Jimmy, as the victims sing the chorus]

Welcome to a new kind of tension
All across the alien nation
Where everything isn't meant to be okay
Television dreams of tomorrow
We're not the ones who are meant to follow
For that's enough to argue

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[He tries running to get away, but is then stopped by the TVs]

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Well maybe I am the faggot America
[Then the TVs start growing arms and legs]
I'm not a part of a redneck agenda
[And starts dancing around]
Now everybody do the propaganda
[As they all dance around Jimmy]
And sing along to the age of paranoia

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[The victims sing again]
Welcome to a new kind of tension
All across the alien nation
Everything isn't meant to be okay
Television dreams of tomorrow
We're not the ones who are meant to follow
For that's enough to argue

(1:37 - 1:47)
[A hole suddenly appears under Jimmy as he falls down a seemingly bottomless pit, all around him images of kids constantly being picked, beaten and misuderstood surround him]

(1:47 - 2:05)
[He reaches the bottom, only to be met by big, jocky shadows coming after him. He runs away in terror of them but the shadows appear all around him. Then the walking TVs appear again, ready to engulf him. They all surround him in a whirlwind of darkness]

(2:05 - 2:20)
[Jimmy covers himself in complete fear, but then upon seeing those victimized, he starts thinking]
Don't want to be an American idiot
One nation controlled by the media
Information age of hysteria
[He grabs a nearby bat]
It's going out to idiot America

(2:20 - 2:40)
[In sheer anger, he begins destroying the TVs in a fit of rage]
Welcome to a new kind of tension
All across the alien nation
Everything isn't meant to be okay
[Then out of nowhere, other kids appear and join in Jimmy's destruction]
Television dreams of tomorrow
We're not the ones who are meant to follow
For that's enough to argue


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[As the kids destroy all the TVs and the entire room, Jimmy climbs ontop the biggest one, beats it to pieces and just as he's about to deal the final blow...]

[American Idiot ends]

Cindy: NEUTRON!!!!!!

Jimmy: Wha.. WHAT?!?

*Instantly woken up from his daydream, Jimmy looks around absent mindly: The bullies he saw before were gone. And right to his left, Cindy Vortex is standing, her hands hidden behind her. Like he didn't have enough bullies in his life already*

Cindy: Uh.. hi.

Jimmy: Can you NOT pick on me today, Vortex? I'm not in the... wait! Are you here to ask me something?

Cindy: Uh.. why?

Jimmy: Cause it's not like you to just come out of nowhere and act all nice.

Cindy: Well.. I was just.. uh.. hoping to ask you... since you know that the dance is coming up soon... would you... I dunno... go out with me?

*Like a bomb drop, his face froze. Cindy asking him out wasn't unusuall. What IS unusuall is that for once, Cindy is acting all nice about it. Not that she hadn't before, but this time she seemed more... begging for Jimmy to say yes. She hasn't been this determined before*

Jimmy: Uh... well.. I.. ah...

*Then Betty's remark came to him: Don't worry, you'll find a partner for the dance... Was it possible that she's talking about Cindy?*

Cindy: Neutron.. ?

*Her patience wears thin*

Jimmy: Uh.. I.. don't know...

Cindy: ...

Jimmy: YET! Um, how about I call you later tonight. I can tell you then.

Cindy: NEUTRON!! Do you want to go out with me or not?!?

Jimmy: Well, THAT didn't last long, Vortex.

Cindy: Ugh! You always do this, Neutron! I try to give you my kindness and you ignore my contribution!

Jimmy: Gee, Vortex. I wonder why? Maybe it's because your mouth is as big as your ego!

Cindy: Speak for yourself, King "I don't buy the whole Valentine's Day thing" Cranium!

Jimmy: What!?

Cindy: Oh, don't act dumb! I heard what you said to Carl and Sheen.

*Jimmy tries walking away, only to have Cindy follow*

Cindy: Why can't you accept that there's more to life than just logic and proof, huh? Are you THAT brain-dead mega head?

Jimmy: I'll believe what I want to believe! And what was up with your poem, Vortex? Has your brain run out of ideas?

Cindy: I happen to believe in True Love, freak-tron!

Jimmy: Hmph! How can love be true, huh? Why are there such a high rate of divorced marriges in this country? Why are there a huge number of teens commiting suicide because they lost thier loved one? Why are familes all over the country falling apart because of their overly-worried mothers and drunken fathers? Why do we have abusive parents? HUH?

*Cindy just couldn't respond. The questions he asked were too personal and hard to answer back*

Jimmy: You can't answer me, can you?

*She wanted to talk, but her mouth just wouldn't open*

Jimmy: You know what, Vortex? With THAT attitude of yours, it's no wonder why you don't get a single guy with you even if you try! That proves it! There's no such thing..

*And with that, he storms away, leaving a shocked, angered but hurt Cindy behind... *

...as true love!

[J/C AVA]

Part 3: In the Blue Veil of the Night

*Later that night, laying down on his bed in his house, Jimmy observes the painted stars and galaxy on his ceiling. Sitting next to him is his robotic pet dog Goddard, leaning it’s head on his master’s belly. In his hand he holds the Mood Machine, slightly busted up from malfunctioning.*

Jimmy: Hey boy.

Goddard: Bark, bark!

Jimmy: -sigh- Who do you think I should go to the dance with, boy?

Goddard: *Shrugs*

Jimmy: Ha, my thoughts exactly.

*He looks at the machine*

Jimmy: Still, how could the Mood Machine go haywire? Especially after we found a useable power source?

*He ponders*

Jimmy: Goddard, screwdriver!

Goddard: Bark, bark!

*Out from it’s back popped up a screwdriver with a green handle, landing right onto Jimmy’s palm. With it he opens the machine to find…*

Jimmy: The power source! It’s turned to ash! But how?

*Goddard moaned*

Jimmy: Ugh, gas planet! Now I have to find another source to power the machine. But how do I find such a source?

*He jumps from his bed and paced back and forth the room*

Jimmy: I could get a sample from the sun but it’s intense heat could melt the whole device, not to mention us if we took the rocket with us.

*Goddard shivered at the thought*

Jimmy: There’s also that source from Mars but without the proper cover I could risk a Martian invasion of the Earth.

*An idea came instantly to him*

Jimmy: Wait! The moon has fossilized crystals that harbor energy! I could go to the moon and…

*An image of his little brother Brobot appeared in his head*:

Brobot: Hi Jimmy! Did you miss me? I missed you! He, he, he! You wanna play moon raiders? Oh, oh, oh, how about hide and go seek? Or maybe spin the bottle? You wanna play Jimmy? Do ya? Do ya? Do ya? Do…

*He shivered at the random thought of Brobot*

Jimmy: Uhhh… Maybe not.

*Goddard shrugged in agreement.*

Jimmy: Maybe a nice walk around the house and a purple flurp might give me ideas. C’mon boy.

*Goddard barked in agreement and followed his master downstairs to the family living room, where he finds Hugh and Judy Neutron watching TV*

Jimmy: Hi, mom. Hi, dad.

Judy: Oh, hi sweetie.

Hugh: Hey Jimbo, good son of mine!

*Jimmy spots something in his dad’s hand*

Jimmy: Uh, dad? What’s that your holding?

Hugh: Oh this? This is the new duck remote I found at the Retrovile mall. It has over five hundred features and…

Judy: And it has all our grocery money spent on it.

Hugh: But sugar booger, it was on sale for half price. You don’t come across by these things everyday, honey.

*Judy’s rolled her eyes *

Judy: So, you haven’t told us how was your day, sweetie.

Hugh: Yeah son of mine. I hear that Valentine’s Day dance is coming up soon.

Judy: Ew yes. How exciting.

*Like Jimmy really wanted to hear that again…

“Will you be my Valentine at the dance?

Yes! I will.”

He cringed at the thought*

Judy: *In concerned tone* Are you alright sweetie?

Jimmy: Huh? Oh! Yeah, I’m fine.

Judy: James Issac Neutron!

Jimmy: *In a defeated expression* Ok, it is about the Valentine’s Day dance, mom. See there’s this girl…

Judy: You mean Betty Quinlan?

Jimmy: Uh… yeah.

Judy: Well, what happened?

Jimmy: Well, she… uh… she… kinda… dumped me.

Judy: Oh really? Aw, sweetie, I’m so sorry.

Hugh: Now, now Jimbo it’s not the end of the world. Why, I’ve been rejected by a lot of girls when I was your age. Oh, yes. In fact I remember this one time when I was 7, I gave this girl a duck bouquet and all the works but she threw a pie at my face and that… of course… changed my life.

Judy: Hugh, that was an old lady that threw a pie in your face.

Hugh: Oh! Yeah.. Right. Um, the point is son is that she’s not the only fish in the sea. There’s plenty more girls where that came from.

Judy: He’s right Jimmy. You’ll find one in time for the dance. Don’t worry.

Jimmy: -sigh- I guess.

Judy: Oh! Which reminds me! Isn’t there some other girl in your school? Uhh… Cindy Vortex?

Jimmy: *He cringed just hearing her name*

Judy: Maybe you can take her to the dance.

*Suddenly, like an interior shout against his constitution…*

Jimmy: *His face shows shock* WHAT!?!

Hugh: Oh yeah! That cute little Cindy Vortex. I remember she gave us candy and even sang that song for us:

*Tries to imitate Cindy but does so poorly*

“So, if you buy some candy
You’ll feel oh so dandy
So buy some candy today”

*He jumps to do a leg split in mid-air but lands on his “mid-part”…*

Hugh: ACK!!

*And drops to the floor*

Judy: Oh no, not again. Can you give us a moment sweetie?

*Judy drags a twitching Hugh out of the living room by his legs*

Judy: Hugh Neutron! I told you not to try your leg splits again!

Hugh: Ow! But sugar booger… Ow! Be careful, that’s my driving leg, that hurts!

*The two leaves both Jimmy and Goddard alone*

Jimmy: -sigh- I swear Goddard. My dad is very strange.

Goddard: Bark, bark!

*The two walked into the kitchen.*

Jimmy: -sigh- Sometimes a scientists love life can be a difficult one Goddard. First Betty Quinlan walks out of my life and now mom and dad are convinced that I should go to the dance with Cindy!

*Jimmy opens his refrigerator and takes out a can of Purple Flurp*

Jimmy: I mean what do people see in her? Hmph! All I see is a mean-spirited, egotistical, vapid, aggressive know it all! She’s always mean to me! Even the whole world for that matter.

*As he heads out the back door leading to the clubhouse/lab, he opens the tip of the can up and starts drinking it.*

Jimmy: -sigh- Betty is never like that, Goddard. I mean, when you think about it, she’s probably everything Cindy should be: Nice, caring, considerate, sweet. But no! Everyone has to pin me with Cindy of all people! If there was only someway I could get Betty back from stupid Nick Dean. I could…

*And just like a light bulb turned on, he’s struck with an idea*

Jimmy: Hey. That’s it! I know exactly how to do that! I’ll…

*But before he could finish declaring his inspiration, he looked up in the sky and spotted a white tail from outer space*

Jimmy: Goddard look! It’s a Comet.

*Jimmy ponders*

Jimmy: But that’s strange. Comets don’t usually come down this time of year.

*He’s hit with a stunning realization*

Jimmy: *Gasps* Unless… *As he looks closer towards the comet* the comet is COMING CLOSER TOWARDS EARTH!!! C’mon boy, we’ve gotta stop it!

*Goddard barks as he follows Jimmy to his lab*

[J/C AVA]

Part 4: Girl Talk

*Across Jimmy's house is the Vortex residence. We then take a look into Cindy's room: Decorated in pink wallpaper, a normal-sized mirror, a desktop computer on one corner, a wide closet on the opposite side, a TV, and a medium-sized bed with a crown on top. Cindy sat cross-legged on her bed as she talked on her phone, with her best friend Libby Folfax on the other end*

Cindy: So yeah, that's what happened.

*She twirled the phone cord around her finger, her mind in absent thinking.*

Libby: *Voiced muffed* So that's it? That's what he said?

Cindy: Yeah. *sigh*

Libby: Whoa, Cin. How can you take all that, girl?

Cindy: I dunno, Libs. What's worse is that I saw him with Ms. Betty Boring!

Libby: Uh oh. Did you hear what they said?

Cindy: Yeah. Apparently, she and Nick got together and somehow broke Neutron's heart.

Libby: Ouch! How did you see that?

Cindy: Sure did, Libs. If I'm not mistaken, I think I might've seen Neutron running and crying to the other end of the street.

Libby: He DID?!?

Cindy: Yeah

Libby: Well, after seeing that.. wait, did you see what made him cry?

Cindy: I'm not sure. But I know it has to do with Betty Boring!

*Libby stops at her insult*

Cindy: I mean, what does Neutron see in her? If you ask me, she's all too soft for his own good! Ugh! She disgusts me!

*Libby swayed from Cindy's scorn of Betty*

Libby: *sigh* Look, I agree with you on Betty bein' Miss "I'm so beautiful and perfect" thang, but you can REALLY be very difficult to get close too cause you don't open your feelings much to anyone, let alone Jimmy.

Cindy: What are you saying?!

Libby: I'm sayin' that maybe instead of getting all freaky and isolate from Jimmy, why don't you show your true feelings for 'em?

Cindy: And WHY should I do that?

Libby: Cause maybe he could be more than how we see 'em. He can change, right?

Cindy: Oh, please! Remember what he said in the lab before the League of Villains captured him? *Does a mocking imitation of Jimmy* People don't change! Your personality is imprinted in your brain from birth! I swear Libs, scientists are just so.. so..

*She clenches her fist tightly and almost breaks the phone in half*

Cindy: Hopelessly Static!!! Why can't Nerdtron just accept that people can change? He drives me crazy!! Scientists like him drive me crazy!

Libby: Well if he can't change, then why can't you?

*The magnitude of the question stopped Cindy cold. Suddenly she remembered the small yet emotional plea she made to �Hulk Jimmy:

"You don't deserve to have me make fun of you. You're a great guy. You're smart and talented..
I know I'm always mean to you but I do it so you won't notice my real feelings.."

*Her body shivered a bit at the thought. Just thinking about herself differently was hard enough. But in front of Jimmy? It seemed impossible!*

Libby: Hey Cin? Cin?

*She instantly snapped out of her daydream*

Cindy: Wha..!

Libby: Calm down, girl! You sound like had a bad dream!

Cindy: Sorry, Libs.

Libby: Since when are you sorry 'bout anything?

Cindy: I.. uh.. Oh whatever! Who asked you?!

Libby:

Cindy: *sighing and breathing hard but not exhausted* Well, where ever this is going there's no doubt that Neutron is gonna invent "something" to get Betty to fall for him like a rat chasing down rotten cheese in a dumpster.

Libby: *In a suspicious tone* Girl, are you thinking what I'm thinking? As fun as it sounds, you're not planning on messing up Jimmy's invention again like that last time and almost made Betty disappear forever, are you?

Cindy: What if I am?

Libby: *Whispering to herself and shaking her head* Girl, when you gonna learn?

Cindy: What was that?!

*But before she could talk any further..*

Cindy's mom: Cynthia?! The toilet is clogged again! Help your mother by getting her plunger!

Cindy: Ugh. I gotta go Libs. I bet you�re coming tomorrow with Sheen to the contest, right?

Libby: Yeah. He tried insisting me to wear the dress of deadly beauty from Ultralord episode sumpin'.

Cindy: What did you say?

Libby: I said I'll do it, IF he promised to shop to buy clothes with me for the contest. I've been wearing the same pink-stripped shirt for how long?

Cindy's mom: CYNTHIA?!

Cindy: Shoot! Gotta go. Later Libs.

Libby: Later Cin'.

*Cindy hangs up the phone and races downstairs. Then with the screen looking upward toward the vastness of space, there it appears, nearing the Earth's atmosphere.*

[J/C AVA]

Part 5: The Comet

*Riding the Strato XL rocket, Jimmy and Goddard took to the skies. As they approached the incoming white comet, Jimmy's amazement is touched*

Jimmy: Whoa. Look at that, boy.

*The Comet colors blurred together in a beautiful display of white, blue and violet. Jimmy stared in awe of it's beauty but he shook his head and focused*

Jimmy: I'm gonna try to stop it with my Plasma Ray.

*The rocket flies straight towards the falling comet almost in kamikaze form*

Jimmy: Fire!

*Jimmy activates the ray and fires at the comet to revert it away from the Earth. But as the beam hit's the comet, it's absorbed into it.*

Jimmy: What?! But... but how? It's not working. Goddard, try hitting it with your Eon Beam!

*A big, machine gun pops up Goddard's back and fires a fast barrage of green beams, but it doesn't do a thing to the comet.*

Jimmy: Oh no! Nothing! Goddard, try anything else you got!

*5 whole minutes of plasma blasting, matter disintegrating, and laser hitting still doesn't budge the comet an inch.*

Jimmy: Oh no! Whatever weapon I throw at it, it only just absorbs it, and...

*He suddenly sees the comet expanding*

Jimmy: Puking Pluto! No wonder nothing works! The comet's outer energy field is absorbing the power in my weapons. We're only making it stronger! This surely isn't any ordinary comet, boy!

*Thinking quickly...*

Jimmy: Only one way, boy! I'll fire my Tractor beam at it so I can harmlessly revert it away from Retroville. I hope this works.

Jimmy: Ready? FIRE!!

*The beam hits against the comet. He turns up the juice to the max but still the comet proved too much for the tractor beam.*

Jimmy: Oh no! The comet's too strong! And we're losing power!

*He franticly looks around until he spots the mountains ahead them*

Jimmy: That's it! We have to redirect it towards the mountains! We'll be lucky if it doesn't cause an avalanche and bury all of Retroville alive while everyone's asleep.

*He turns the rocket towards his left as he struggles to push the comet sideways*

Jimmy: C'mon! Almost there...

*Finally as the beam failed, the comet reverts sideways, avoiding the unsuspecting town completely.*

Jimmy: Phew. That was close. A few more seconds and we might've...

*Suddenly Jimmy heard some weeping. It surely didn't come from Goddard. The Comet flew passed them and just as it came next to Jimmy, he heard the weeping again.

Jimmy: *To himself* What? That weeping... is coming from that... comet.

[Bass Trap Begins]

[00:00-]

*What? Where am I? Why am I under a tree?

*Looks around*

What is this place?

*Finds himself on a wide grassplain with pink leaves falling all around*

Wow! This place is beautiful. Huh?

*Finds someone sitting on a log*

Who's that?

*Slowley walks towards the person on the log. He then hears a familar weeping*

Wait! That crying. It's...

[At 1:42, press pause, Bass Trap Ends]

Goddard: BARK!!

Jimmy: Oh! Uhh.. sorry about that boy.

*Goddard licks Jimmy's cheek*

Jimmy: Now lets go and examine it, boy.

*At the mountain Jimmy and Goddard examines the crater and the comet in it. As Goddard's center screen scans the comet, he grew amazed at the info that it picked up*

Jimmy: Amazing, it like my hypercube but smaller. And from the data that's coming in it's energy is almost infinite. I wonder what's inside?

*He then stumbled on aura-like waves displayed on his dog's screen*

Jimmy: Wait, those waves, they look like...

*He quickly displayed his invention blueprints from his watch and examined them thoroughly*

Jimmy: Hey, they look just like human brainwaves. And their frequencies are the same as what I need for the device! We did it, boy! We've found our energy source!

*Jimmy jumped joyfully at his discovery*

Jimmy: Now let's get this thing back to the lab and...

*Just as he turned around, the comet wasn't glowing anymore*

Jimmy: Huh? The comet! It stopped glowing. Goddard, scan it.

*Goddard scanned the ray on the comet.*

Jimmy: Gas planet! It's just a cold, lifeless rock, now. But how?

*Pondering about it didn't help*

Jimmy: In any case we can't leave this rock here by itself. If the military finds it by any chance, it's just gonna turn into another media upheaval. We have to take this back to the lab anyways, boy. Maybe we can find some evidence as to where it came from.

Goddard: Bark, Bark!

*Getting his hypercube, he shrinks the comet inside and climbs back inside with Goddard. Unbeknownst to them both, the Mood Machine, which he took with them unknowingly, started glowing an eerie, comet glow as weeping sounded from it.

She's now trapped inside cold, hard metal...*

[J/C AVA]

Part 6: A Living Thing?

*Back in the lab, Jimmy and Goddard inspect the now cold comet further.*

Jimmy: Hmm, judging by the molecular matter this comet is surrounded with, it must've traveled from somewhere very far and for very long. But what I don't get is why did it stop glowing and how does it have the same frequencies as human brainwaves? It SURELY isn't a living thing.. isn't it?

Goddard: Bark, bark!

Jimmy: To be on the safe side, let's scan it again, boy, so we know it's safe to transfer it to the Mood Machine.

Goddard: Bark!

*Pulling a lever, a streamline of sky-blue appears underneath the comet. Moving back and forth, it scans the large piece of rock as it's statistics appears on VOX's screen.*

Jimmy: It's still dormant, nothing at all.

*Then the image of the weeping came to mind.*

Jimmy: *Mumbling to himself* Then what was that crying I heard from the comet earlier? It didn't seem alien. Just sounded like any other person crying and.. *face froze* wait. No! It couldn't be.. could it?

*Just then VOX's screen switched from the scanning to Judy, who was in Jimmy's bedroom*

Judy: James Issac Neutron! How many times must I tell you to go to your bed and NOT your android that says nice things!?

Jimmy Android: Hi, mom. I love you very much! You're the best!

*Screen goes black*

Jimmy: Gosh, Goddard. Who in this wacky universe made moms so smart?

*Goddard shrugs*

Jimmy: Lucky for us this won't be long. Since this comet has frequencies similar to ours, all I have to do is get a sample of the comets matter with this.

*He takes out a needle and slowly pinches it into the comet. Then..*

Jimmy: Huh?

*He turns his back fast.*

Jimmy: Who's there?!?

*Looking around the lab, he finds nothing.*

Jimmy: Strange. I thought I heard some cry- Wait!

*He turns around again to find nothing again.*

Jimmy: Wow! I've been down here too long! *He takes out the needle, now filled with a thick, blue secretion.* I got the DNA. I better put this in the machine before my tiredness gets the better of me.

*After a few minutes of transfer..*

Jimmy: There! Fit and ready to go! Now we'll see if Nick can handle Betty once I'm done with him!

*As he leaves the lab, unbeknownst to him, the secretion from the machine, bleeds a bright, glowing sadness..*

[J/C AVA]

Part 7: Preparations

*It’s the night of the Valentine’s Day Dance and everything is already underway. Lindenberg Elementary is buzzing with activity, making the last preparations to the big event, both in and out the school.*

*Jimmy stands in front of the entrance, dressed in his tuxedo and his long, swirl hair slicked backwards. In his tuxedo’s inner pocket was the Mood Machine, hidden from view. Tucking it in, he nervously awaits Betty and Nick to arrive.*

*Meanwhile, Carl, Sheen and Libby ride in Libby’s mom’s car to the school.*

Carl: Gee, Ms. Folfax. We never rode in your car before.

Sheen: Yeah. I mean, it looks like the red hot rod of death from Ultralord episode 316 - Attack of the Lava Acrobats!

Ms. Folfax: Aw, you boys crack me up.

*She had the sane as Libby. But her daughter didn’t share in her amusement as she rolled her eyes in annoyence.*

Ms. Folfax: Say, who are you two boys going to the dance contest with? Got any dates?

Carl: Elke’s coming all the way from Sweeden and she says she’s gonna be here soon.

Sheen: And I’M with my sweet pelecano.

Libby: Sheen, did you just call me a pelican?

Sheen: Uhhhh… maybe.

*Ms. Folfax laughed*

Libby: *Whispering to Sheen and Carl* Guys, stop embarrassing me in front of my mom.

Carl: Why?

*Suddenly Libby’s pink cell phone rings up*

Libby: Hello? Talk to me. Hey Cin! Nah, I’m fine. I’m in the car with my mom, Sheen and Carl. By the way, where are ya, girl? You’re where? Well, ya better hurry up. The dance starts in less than an hour. You want us pick you up? You sure? -sighs concerned- Alright. See ya, ‘Cin.

Ms. Folfax: Who was that, sweetie?

Libby: That was Cindy. She’s at the beauty salon doing some last minute touch ups on her looks. I offered her a ride to the school but she says she can make it herself.

Ms. Folfax: Oh my! Are you sure we can’t pick her up or anything?

Libby: Trust me, mom. When my girl, Cin’ sets her mind on something’, there’s no stopping her. -whispers to herself- Absolutely no stopping’ that stubborn…

Ms. Folfax: What was that?

Libby: Uhh, nothing’!

Sheen: Whatever! Hey Carl! Wanna play Ultralord vs. Robofeind again?

Carl: Do I ever!

Libby: Oh boy.

[J/C AVA]

Part 8: The Visit

*Inside his office, Principal Willoughby is merrily putting things in his bag when he hears a knock on his door*

Willoughby: *Opens the door* Yes? Who is it?

*Two police officers are standing right in front of the door. He instantly becomes nervous*

Willoughby: Oh! Uhh… Hehe.. hi. Wha-what can I do for you nice officers today?

Voice: It’s not those officers you’re helping today…

*Out of the officers shadow walks up a grown man, neatly dressed and looking rather stern*

Grown Man: …it’s ME you’re helping.

Willoughby: OH! Mr. Mayor, sir! Uh, what a surprise! I didn’t expect to see you here. Can I get you a-

Mayor: Sit down, Willoughby! This is rather urgent!

*The Mayor sits across from Willoughby, twiddling his fingers nervously at his sudden visit. Too tense to speak, he sees his bowl of mint candy*

Willoughby: Uhh… would you like some candy, Mr. Mayor. Sir?

Mayor: Spare me the details, Willoughby!

Willoughby: Oh! Uhh… alright. Uhhh… what business are you here for Si-

Mayor: Mr. Willoughby! Do you know exactly how many letters I get on a regular basis?

Willoughby: Uhh… afraid not, sir I-

Mayor: QUIET! That was a rhetorical question! I get about 250 letters every week concerning the people of this town. Can you tell me how many letters of complaints I’ve received in this year alone, Mr. Willoughby?

*The air around the room grew more thin and the mood tense*

Willoughby: Well… hehehe, I don’t suppose you get many considering you…

*The Mayor’s scathing whisper turns into an angry shout*

Mayor: I’VE RECEIVED 65,000 COMPLAINTS FROM ALL OF THE RESIDENTS OF RETROVILLE AND BILLONS OF DOLLARS IN DAMAGES TO OUR PROPERTY! AND DO YOU KNOW WHY?!?

Willoughby: N-N-No! I don’t know why!

Mayor: I’ll give you a hint! It concerns a certain “student” of yours whose also a -ahem- “boy genius”

*Like a smack in the face, he instantly knew who.*

Willoughby: J-J-J-James Ne-Ne-Neutron?

Mayor: William Willoughby! James Issac Neutron has been nothing but a BIG, COMPLETE NUISANCE to the people of this town! Time and time again, I’ve ORDERED you to keep him on a leash and restrain him from causing further damages and pile ups to our tax burdens! WHY MUST YOU BE SO LENIENT!!

*Willoughby struggled to gather his words together under blistering pressure from the Mayor*

Willoughby: Whoa! Whoa! Uhh… let’s back up a minute here. I mean…uhh think about it. Without Jimmy’s fancy gadgets and smarts, then uhhh… I’d doubt any of us would even be here right now.

*The Mayor’s anger only grew more*

Willoughby: Y’know, I’m sure there’s MANY people in the world, let alone Retroville that really depend on Jimmy’s heroism and I think I feel that…

*The Mayor’s top blows off*

Mayor: EEEENNOOOOUGH!!!!!!!!!! This is LAST straw, Willoughby!! You’re WEAK and GUTLESS! I have HAD IT with that idiotic, destructive, big-headed freak of a menace you call a student!

*He leans threatingly towards Willoughby’s face*

Mayor: If I hear or see one more, ONE MORE, report, sighting or mess-up that… that that boy genius does to ruin MY reputation, MY political status or MY financial gains, THEN… YOU’RE… FIRED!

*Willoughby falls back from his chair, sweating uncontrollably and cowering in fear of the mayors brash and brutal onslaught. The mayor breathes in hard as his hands wipe over his hair, returning him to his calm, sinister demeanor*

Mayor: Good day.

*And with that he and the two officers walk out of the office, leaving a grief-stricken Willoughby wallowing at the shock of it all.

[J/C AVA]

[Part 9 coming soon]

IDOJers: It better!!

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[Part 9 coming soon]

IDOJers: It better!!

Aww.. it was just gettin' good!

 

Porque paraste, Pedro?